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A Clockwork Fairytale
A rags to riches fairytale full of danger and romance about a lost princess and a maverick young spymaster who foil the plans of an evil magician bent on stealing her throne.
Suitable for adults and teenagers.
Suitable for adults and teenagers.
255 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 24, 2011
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Helen Scott Taylor
55 books242 followersUSA Today bestselling author, Helen Scott Taylor, had her first book released in 2009. The Magic Knot, won the American Title contest, was a Golden Heart® finalist, and was chosen as one of Booklist's top ten romances of 2009. Since then, she has published other novels, novellas, and short stories in both the UK and USA.
Helen lives in South West England near Exeter in Devon. As well as her wonderful long-suffering husband, she shares her home with a Westie and a birman cat. She believes that deep within everyone there's a little magic.
Helen lives in South West England near Exeter in Devon. As well as her wonderful long-suffering husband, she shares her home with a Westie and a birman cat. She believes that deep within everyone there's a little magic.
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December 13, 2014
! Minor spoilers ahead !
Today I am just too lousy to avoid them, so please be careful and don't read if you don't want to know anything about the story. They are not big, but be aware that they are there.
"The heart is heaviest when it’s empty
and lightest when it’s full"
So..
Once in a while I like to read a fairy-tale.
No, I don't think they are meant for kids, in fact they are meant for everyone - they give us hope, they make us dream, they make us believe.
They remind me of the time when I was a little girl and I used to curl up in a bed listening to never-ending stories.. It's somehow comforting. And when the characters are as innocent and sweet as these ones, it makes me feel all warm and bubbly inside.
The thing is I liked Mel, and I liked Master Turk - they were so different but also alike: tough in a way (he - a spymaster, she - a little thief), but soft and innocent in the another (mostly when it comes to each other). They had chemistry, they were funny, they made a good pair and I loved them together.
Mel is really enjoyable. She is a thief as I said, but also she is a lost princess (not really a spoiler here), she was raised by a commoner (which makes her lack some manners) and she is always doubting the intentions of the people around. That was a great thing to do, as I didn't trust them either.
"Men got all seamed up over their funny little floppy bits
as if they were something special"
Master Turk is a spy master, a good one as they say, and *wait for it* a monk! - which will only bring some drama on our plate, but I must confess that a little girl trying to seduce a monk it's a funny thing to watch. *big smile*
"A man can not use his heart and
his head at the same time."
Every time they were together I had this silly grin on my face, and I enjoyed seeing them cross the border from stranger to (somehow) friends and then to lovers. Not to mention all those situations they got into that made me laugh so many times.
Usually you would think that fairytales are predictable (I would think that as well), but after reaching not even 50% of the story and realizing that at that point the story was not going to end as I've predicted (thanks God I'm not a fortune teller because I'm doing a pretty lousy job at it), I just decided to let it surprise me. And it did.
Now, I will split this book in 2 as I really, really enjoyed the first half, and just not as much the second one. Don't get me wrong, there was a lot of action and pleasant moments in the second one, but somehow it felt like running into circles and it gave me the impression of deja vu, but not resembling other stories... I will explain in a while.
The love story is great in the first half and that's because in that part Mel and Turk have more time together, to win each other's trust, to flirt in an innocent way, to enjoy each other's company, to make me laugh, to conquer my heart.
Still, I wish I didn't know about the bad guy, or not so early (as he was narrating his own chapters). As I knew about him and it didn't take long for the other to catch up, it felt just too easy. I wanted some more mystery. Ok, you are right, in all fairytales you know who the evil is, but still there was something missing, or so I felt.
Now the thing that I didn't like at all, and had to cut a star from the rating was the fact the second half of the book was all about running.
Running away and being caught, and then running away and - guess what? - being caught, and then, some more running just to be caught again (damn it!).. And the ending felt abrupt, I mean why did they need so many confrontations if they were able to get rid of him so easily in the ending? I'll never know.
To end in a good note, I LOVED the flutterbys.
"The're called butterflies, Melba."
"Master Maddox said they was flutterbys because they never stay, they flutter by."
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November 6, 2017
I had such high hopes for this story, but I found it rather forced and boring. There was no world building done, so everything was rather confusing. The steampunk aspect felt tacked on, and the romance had no chemistry whatsoever. The plot was uninspired and felt like it was repeating stories that had already been done before. Not sure I would read the author again.
March 2, 2017
This is an interesting fairytale about a girl brought up as a boy thief, with spies and monks, and a plot to take over the throne. There's a mix of steampunkish gadgets and a sort of magic involving the spark inside of things that can be brought out and manipulated.
There is plenty here to entertain, and the romance is sweet, although it jumps up rather than building slowly. I do feel that it could have used some more polishing in some places, and I have a couple unanswered questions (maybe there will be a sequel?), but all-in-all it was a quick, fascinating read. I wouldn't mind reading a follow-up story.
There is plenty here to entertain, and the romance is sweet, although it jumps up rather than building slowly. I do feel that it could have used some more polishing in some places, and I have a couple unanswered questions (maybe there will be a sequel?), but all-in-all it was a quick, fascinating read. I wouldn't mind reading a follow-up story.
September 12, 2012
This book is a tween book not a young adult book. I felt that the romance story was rushed and the magic system in this book was just put there so it could be called a fantasy. It took me days to read this book because I was just not into the story. I also felt that the dialog was very juvenile. I don't recommend reading this book.
May 25, 2018
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I really, really liked both Melba and Turk and really, really hated Vittorio.
Princess Melba was stolen as a child and hidden away until she was of age to be of use to the villain who is determined to wrest the kingdom from the king. Once found by Master Turk, we begin our "My Fair Lady" adventure of turning a young street urchin into a princess. I liked everything about this book (except Vittorio, of course) and wish it was a series book as there are other elements that could be continued on...such as Dante's story. (hint, hint).
I've enjoyed other books by Ms. Taylor and grabbed onto this one because of the beautiful cover.
Princess Melba was stolen as a child and hidden away until she was of age to be of use to the villain who is determined to wrest the kingdom from the king. Once found by Master Turk, we begin our "My Fair Lady" adventure of turning a young street urchin into a princess. I liked everything about this book (except Vittorio, of course) and wish it was a series book as there are other elements that could be continued on...such as Dante's story. (hint, hint).
I've enjoyed other books by Ms. Taylor and grabbed onto this one because of the beautiful cover.
January 16, 2013
I loved this book! A Clockwork Fairytale is such an amazing read filled with mystery, adventure, magic, romance and so much more. It had my attention from beginning to end. Helen Scott Taylor is a wonderful author and her writing style is not only gripping but it has an easy flow to it that makes the story simple to follow. However the storyline is not boring because of her writing style, it’s actually fast paced and fascinating.
The Story is of a young girl named Melba who from an early age has been disguised as a boy and has been raised to be a pick pocket and messenger for her master (Maddox). One night Melba finds herself in trouble and is rescued by a mysterious stranger. The stranger turns out to be a renowned spymaster, the legendary master Turk himself. Melba had heard stories about him but no one she knew ever saw him or knew his true identity. She ends up pledging herself to Turk so that he will teach her how to become a spy. Turk sees the young lad and feels that there is something special about him so he agrees to take Mel with him. Things get complicated when it is discovered Melba is a 17 yr. old girl. Turk knows there is more to her though and Melba’s mysterious past is about to force her into an uncertain future that she never dreamed of.
The characters in this book are wonderful. Both the female and male lead characters are strong with wholesome characteristics. And when I say wholesome do not interpret that for boring because they are anything but boring. The side characters are even well developed and add a lot to the story.
Finding this book was like finding a hidden gem. I had never heard of it and wasn’t sure what to expect but from the time I started reading to the time I finished the book, I was grateful that I had found this. I hope more people read it because it is very much worth the time.
The Story is of a young girl named Melba who from an early age has been disguised as a boy and has been raised to be a pick pocket and messenger for her master (Maddox). One night Melba finds herself in trouble and is rescued by a mysterious stranger. The stranger turns out to be a renowned spymaster, the legendary master Turk himself. Melba had heard stories about him but no one she knew ever saw him or knew his true identity. She ends up pledging herself to Turk so that he will teach her how to become a spy. Turk sees the young lad and feels that there is something special about him so he agrees to take Mel with him. Things get complicated when it is discovered Melba is a 17 yr. old girl. Turk knows there is more to her though and Melba’s mysterious past is about to force her into an uncertain future that she never dreamed of.
The characters in this book are wonderful. Both the female and male lead characters are strong with wholesome characteristics. And when I say wholesome do not interpret that for boring because they are anything but boring. The side characters are even well developed and add a lot to the story.
Finding this book was like finding a hidden gem. I had never heard of it and wasn’t sure what to expect but from the time I started reading to the time I finished the book, I was grateful that I had found this. I hope more people read it because it is very much worth the time.
September 12, 2012
I really enjoyed reading this story. A riches to rags to riches story, complete with romance and her own Aladdin, she herself an Eliza Doolittle. I really was enchanted by the flower jinn and would love to see more stories in this world. I'm new to Ms. Taylor with this book do perhaps there are more in this world? I look forward to finding out!
November 16, 2015
This book had everything I liked in a story, as you can tell by the 5 stars I gave it. Loved everything about it, characters, story liner and a good ending! Can't wait to read more books by her.
September 7, 2011
I became a fan of Helen Scott Taylor with her first book, The Magic Knot. Her lyrical writing and amazing imagination give you characters you’ll remember for a long time, along with stories that take you away into a land of magic that dazzles with danger and romance. Her new book, A Clockwork Fairytale, is no exception. The fact that it’s a young adult book makes it that much more endearing, watching a young love blossom in the face of fear and a hunger never felt before.
Melba is running around the city picking pockets and filching food and whatever else is needed to survive — all disguised as a boy. She’s been in the care of Master Maddox her entire life, never knowing her parents or where she comes from. One night she’s in the wrong place at the wrong time, and her life dramatically changes. Opportunity has given her the chance to spy for Master Turk, the best in the business, and she’s determined not to waste this moment. Even at 17 she has high aspirations in the spy game, along with a will to get her where she wants to go. This night Turk is her savior, so maybe her luck has already started to change.
Deciding at the last minute to take Mel under his wing, Turk exchanges pledges with the lad and they head toward Mel’s new home, one supplied to Turk by the Shining Brotherhood. It’s not long, however, before things begin to unravel and Turk discovers he’s harboring a girl - who is also the long-lost Princess Melbaline, no longer the abducted child but a young woman now on the cusp of a new life. Knowing his duty is to return Melba to her father, Turk, with the blessing of his master with the Brotherhood, begins to teach her how to be a lady and a princess and also how to bring forth her magic.
Once Melba’s gender is no longer an issue and she’s no longer a candidate for a spy, she begins to see the world differently - first the luxury of Turk’s home and all that comes with it and then Turk himself. Her feelings and emotions are just blossoming and Turk is her knight in shining armor. What she doesn’t know yet is who she is. There are those who would still do what it takes to keep her from the palace, so Turk trains her in secrecy. Their attraction grows over the course of the weeks they’re together, but Turk knows Melba can never be his. Aside from the fact she’s royalty, he’s also never told her he’s a monk with the Brotherhood.
When she learns what Turk has in store for her, Melba wants none of it, only desiring to stay with Turk. But her father awaits and the day comes when Melba returns home at last. And then the trouble truly begins. While she’s known the fear and angst of living from hand to mouth, Melba has never known true fear at the hands of another. Being at the mercy of a man using magic for his own evil gains slowly turns into a nightmare for both Turk and Melba. But love prevails as they work together to right the wrongs that have hung over the royal house for so many years.
In and among this beautiful historical story is Earth magic, the raising of Jinns, a type of earth spirit, that are mostly used for good, but there’s also someone who uses them for ill. Turk is thrown into confusion at the attitude of his master toward his need and want of Melba. Melba is just as confused as to why Turk would rather give her away to duty than stay with her. They take to the rooftops and the underments of the city to race against time and danger. There are inter-related characters who all take on very different personas throughout, quirky to crazy, and they’re all quite interesting. Dante the Trash King is one I especially like.
If you’ve yet to read to Helen Scott Taylor’s Magic Knot Fairies books, don’t bypass the beginning of this new series. Helen Scott Taylor will become a favorite of yours too.
See my complete review at http://www.goodbadandunread.com
Melba is running around the city picking pockets and filching food and whatever else is needed to survive — all disguised as a boy. She’s been in the care of Master Maddox her entire life, never knowing her parents or where she comes from. One night she’s in the wrong place at the wrong time, and her life dramatically changes. Opportunity has given her the chance to spy for Master Turk, the best in the business, and she’s determined not to waste this moment. Even at 17 she has high aspirations in the spy game, along with a will to get her where she wants to go. This night Turk is her savior, so maybe her luck has already started to change.
Deciding at the last minute to take Mel under his wing, Turk exchanges pledges with the lad and they head toward Mel’s new home, one supplied to Turk by the Shining Brotherhood. It’s not long, however, before things begin to unravel and Turk discovers he’s harboring a girl - who is also the long-lost Princess Melbaline, no longer the abducted child but a young woman now on the cusp of a new life. Knowing his duty is to return Melba to her father, Turk, with the blessing of his master with the Brotherhood, begins to teach her how to be a lady and a princess and also how to bring forth her magic.
Once Melba’s gender is no longer an issue and she’s no longer a candidate for a spy, she begins to see the world differently - first the luxury of Turk’s home and all that comes with it and then Turk himself. Her feelings and emotions are just blossoming and Turk is her knight in shining armor. What she doesn’t know yet is who she is. There are those who would still do what it takes to keep her from the palace, so Turk trains her in secrecy. Their attraction grows over the course of the weeks they’re together, but Turk knows Melba can never be his. Aside from the fact she’s royalty, he’s also never told her he’s a monk with the Brotherhood.
When she learns what Turk has in store for her, Melba wants none of it, only desiring to stay with Turk. But her father awaits and the day comes when Melba returns home at last. And then the trouble truly begins. While she’s known the fear and angst of living from hand to mouth, Melba has never known true fear at the hands of another. Being at the mercy of a man using magic for his own evil gains slowly turns into a nightmare for both Turk and Melba. But love prevails as they work together to right the wrongs that have hung over the royal house for so many years.
In and among this beautiful historical story is Earth magic, the raising of Jinns, a type of earth spirit, that are mostly used for good, but there’s also someone who uses them for ill. Turk is thrown into confusion at the attitude of his master toward his need and want of Melba. Melba is just as confused as to why Turk would rather give her away to duty than stay with her. They take to the rooftops and the underments of the city to race against time and danger. There are inter-related characters who all take on very different personas throughout, quirky to crazy, and they’re all quite interesting. Dante the Trash King is one I especially like.
If you’ve yet to read to Helen Scott Taylor’s Magic Knot Fairies books, don’t bypass the beginning of this new series. Helen Scott Taylor will become a favorite of yours too.
See my complete review at http://www.goodbadandunread.com
January 15, 2012
Melba was dropped off at the baker's house when she was only three years old. Maddox has raised her best he can, but raises her as one of the boys. So, Melba dressed like a boy, acts like a boy, and is very intelligent and one of the best thieves and pickpockets in the area.
When she is cornered one evening, her savior comes in the form of Turk, a man known as a master spymaster. Melba knows an opportunity when she sees it and asks Turk to pledge her and teach her how to be a master spy. He agrees, but once she takes a bath, he realizes it won't work. First, she is a girl and there are no female spies. Second, she has twelve toes and there is only one family he knows with that deformity, the Royal family. He does some research and is sure she is the missing princess.
Turk is a monk and he discusses Melba with his on master. They decide to teach Melba how to act and dress like a lady before they present her to her father, the king, and reap the rich reward. But there is something about Melba that enchants Turk and he tries really hard to be true to his vows.
Vittorio feels he was robbed of the throne. His father never claimed him as a son, and his father, the older brother of the king, never wanted the throne, so his younger brother, Melba's dad, took it. Now, he will do whatever it takes to acquire his seat at the throne, even if it means finding and marrying the princess.
Turk and Melba fall in love but Turk never tells her that he is a monk. He makes sure not to touch her person at all. When Melba learns she is the princess, she pleads for Turk to marry her. Then, they will never be apart, but Turk rejects her offer. First, he never told her he was a monk and second, her father would never allow it. Turk is not a prince. When she finds out he is a monk and was using her, she never wants to see him again.
However, Vittorio won't leave Melba's side and she isn't feeling well lately. Her father is dying and Vittorio wants Turk dead. Melba secretly meets with Turk and she forgives him but vows she will not marry Vittorio, no matter what. But Vittorio controls very powerful, dark and twisted magic and he will use it to his every advantage, even if it cost lives.
A Clockwork Fairytale is a refreshing romance with a twist of supernatural. Melba is a delightful character, Turk is dark and handsome and will make the girls swoon and Vittorio is dastardly. Helen builds each character carefully and cleverly, with the story spinning at a splendid rate, keeping this reader entranced. A satisfactory ending but alluding to another installment in the adventures of Melba and Turk that I can't wait to read! If you love fairytale romances with a splash of the supernatural, an evil spurned illegitimate child and the blush of first love, you won't want to miss A Clockwork Fairytale!!
When she is cornered one evening, her savior comes in the form of Turk, a man known as a master spymaster. Melba knows an opportunity when she sees it and asks Turk to pledge her and teach her how to be a master spy. He agrees, but once she takes a bath, he realizes it won't work. First, she is a girl and there are no female spies. Second, she has twelve toes and there is only one family he knows with that deformity, the Royal family. He does some research and is sure she is the missing princess.
Turk is a monk and he discusses Melba with his on master. They decide to teach Melba how to act and dress like a lady before they present her to her father, the king, and reap the rich reward. But there is something about Melba that enchants Turk and he tries really hard to be true to his vows.
Vittorio feels he was robbed of the throne. His father never claimed him as a son, and his father, the older brother of the king, never wanted the throne, so his younger brother, Melba's dad, took it. Now, he will do whatever it takes to acquire his seat at the throne, even if it means finding and marrying the princess.
Turk and Melba fall in love but Turk never tells her that he is a monk. He makes sure not to touch her person at all. When Melba learns she is the princess, she pleads for Turk to marry her. Then, they will never be apart, but Turk rejects her offer. First, he never told her he was a monk and second, her father would never allow it. Turk is not a prince. When she finds out he is a monk and was using her, she never wants to see him again.
However, Vittorio won't leave Melba's side and she isn't feeling well lately. Her father is dying and Vittorio wants Turk dead. Melba secretly meets with Turk and she forgives him but vows she will not marry Vittorio, no matter what. But Vittorio controls very powerful, dark and twisted magic and he will use it to his every advantage, even if it cost lives.
A Clockwork Fairytale is a refreshing romance with a twist of supernatural. Melba is a delightful character, Turk is dark and handsome and will make the girls swoon and Vittorio is dastardly. Helen builds each character carefully and cleverly, with the story spinning at a splendid rate, keeping this reader entranced. A satisfactory ending but alluding to another installment in the adventures of Melba and Turk that I can't wait to read! If you love fairytale romances with a splash of the supernatural, an evil spurned illegitimate child and the blush of first love, you won't want to miss A Clockwork Fairytale!!
October 2, 2011
Originally posted athttp://longandshortreviews.blogspot.c...
Melba is a perfect Cinderella-type character. Stolen as a child and hidden in poverty, she’s been raised as a pick-pocket and told to pretend she’s a boy. She’s cunning yet innocent, pretty (though camouflaged with dirt), resilient, and completely unaware that she’s a princess. She is easy to root for. Once her basic needs are taken care of and she’s able to accept her femininity, her focus naturally turns to matters of the heart. She doesn’t care about being Royal. People are what matter. She’d happily give up everything for love.
Master Turk is at once Spy Master and apprentice. He’s handsome, resourceful, magically gifted and bright, but not always wise. Those he’s most loyal to are not necessarily deserving of that loyalty. He’s been raised to be obedient while breaking the law. He’s a monk attracted to the thief he’s charged with transforming into the Royal Princess. So, what does a monk do when he’s falling in love? Why give up love for the greater good, of course. But what, exactly, is the greater good? And will that greater good keep Melba safe?
Vittorio, the Royal Victualler, lusts for power. Denied a father’s love as a child, he can’t seem to stop desperately seeking his father’s recognition as an adult. The past has taught him the being good doesn’t work, so now he embraces evil. There are moments when Vittorio seems almost human, but mostly he’s been corrupted by the dark powers he tries to harness to achieve recognition, power and glory. However, the respect and adulation he strives for continues to remain just out of his grasp.
The world Helen Scott Taylor created is rich and fascinating. It’s a world of Garbage Kings, the Shining Brotherhood, Foul Jinns, and clockwork creatures animated by apple spirits. I was drawn in almost immediately. Melba and Turk are engaging characters and Turk’s conflict is compelling.
My only real complaint? The prologue is a bit of a spoiler. It makes the story too predictable and isn’t necessary. I’d recommend reading it at the end or not at all.
Despite that, A Clockwork Fairytale is a sweet, fast, fun read perfect for the YA market. I’d give this book to my twelve-year-old daughter without hesitation, knowing she’d love it.
Melba is a perfect Cinderella-type character. Stolen as a child and hidden in poverty, she’s been raised as a pick-pocket and told to pretend she’s a boy. She’s cunning yet innocent, pretty (though camouflaged with dirt), resilient, and completely unaware that she’s a princess. She is easy to root for. Once her basic needs are taken care of and she’s able to accept her femininity, her focus naturally turns to matters of the heart. She doesn’t care about being Royal. People are what matter. She’d happily give up everything for love.
Master Turk is at once Spy Master and apprentice. He’s handsome, resourceful, magically gifted and bright, but not always wise. Those he’s most loyal to are not necessarily deserving of that loyalty. He’s been raised to be obedient while breaking the law. He’s a monk attracted to the thief he’s charged with transforming into the Royal Princess. So, what does a monk do when he’s falling in love? Why give up love for the greater good, of course. But what, exactly, is the greater good? And will that greater good keep Melba safe?
Vittorio, the Royal Victualler, lusts for power. Denied a father’s love as a child, he can’t seem to stop desperately seeking his father’s recognition as an adult. The past has taught him the being good doesn’t work, so now he embraces evil. There are moments when Vittorio seems almost human, but mostly he’s been corrupted by the dark powers he tries to harness to achieve recognition, power and glory. However, the respect and adulation he strives for continues to remain just out of his grasp.
The world Helen Scott Taylor created is rich and fascinating. It’s a world of Garbage Kings, the Shining Brotherhood, Foul Jinns, and clockwork creatures animated by apple spirits. I was drawn in almost immediately. Melba and Turk are engaging characters and Turk’s conflict is compelling.
My only real complaint? The prologue is a bit of a spoiler. It makes the story too predictable and isn’t necessary. I’d recommend reading it at the end or not at all.
Despite that, A Clockwork Fairytale is a sweet, fast, fun read perfect for the YA market. I’d give this book to my twelve-year-old daughter without hesitation, knowing she’d love it.
June 21, 2019
I'm often asked two questions: why do you keep reading indies (or self-published) books and what are your favorites.
I keep reading indie books because of authors like Helen Scott Taylor. I'll admit the title of this book made me a bit trepidatious, but once I read more than a couple chapters, I was hooked.
A Clockwork Fairytale is the wrong title for this book, because unlike its title suggests, there is no element of traditional fairytale to be seen when you read it. It doesn't allude to one specific story either. Instead, it is a wonderful fantasy tale that reminded me in style of Tamora Pierce.
The main character, Melba, is deliciously sassy, charming, and strong. She isn't afraid to ask for help, but when she makes a decision, she sticks with it.
Turk is also a great character, although he was a little too on the fatherly side for me. I understand why that patriarchal feeling would come about, given the character's initial meeting, but I kept forgetting that Turk was only a few years older than Melba, instead of the 10 or so that it seemed like.
This world was engrossing, imaginative and thoroughly delightful. The prose was complete without being heavy-handed.
I will say that the beginning and ending of the book were a little hurried for me, but they did nothing to detract from my overall enjoyment. If you like Tamora Pierce and you like descriptive fantasy, this is a great book!
I keep reading indie books because of authors like Helen Scott Taylor. I'll admit the title of this book made me a bit trepidatious, but once I read more than a couple chapters, I was hooked.
A Clockwork Fairytale is the wrong title for this book, because unlike its title suggests, there is no element of traditional fairytale to be seen when you read it. It doesn't allude to one specific story either. Instead, it is a wonderful fantasy tale that reminded me in style of Tamora Pierce.
The main character, Melba, is deliciously sassy, charming, and strong. She isn't afraid to ask for help, but when she makes a decision, she sticks with it.
Turk is also a great character, although he was a little too on the fatherly side for me. I understand why that patriarchal feeling would come about, given the character's initial meeting, but I kept forgetting that Turk was only a few years older than Melba, instead of the 10 or so that it seemed like.
This world was engrossing, imaginative and thoroughly delightful. The prose was complete without being heavy-handed.
I will say that the beginning and ending of the book were a little hurried for me, but they did nothing to detract from my overall enjoyment. If you like Tamora Pierce and you like descriptive fantasy, this is a great book!
January 3, 2013
This fantasy tale was a nice mix of magic, a little gadgetry and a touch of romance. Melba encounters Spymaster Turk, the undercover monk who accepts her pledge and agrees to train her as a spy, not knowing that the scrawny young lad Mel is really a young lady of 17. When he discovers that she is a girl, it is also revealed that she is the missing princess that everyone has been searching for since she was abducted 14 years ago. Turk is tasked with teaching her to read and write as well as turning her into a young lady, so he can reunite her with her father, the King. While trying to accomplish her makeover and bring her to her father, they must deal with a malevolent cousin who is going to great lengths to gain the throne for himself, an uncle who is the Primate of a monastic order, and another cousin Dante, who is the Trash King, all with their own agenda. This is all while Turk fights the attraction between them, as he doesn’t want to break his monastic vows despite Melba’s declaration that she wishes to marry him and no other. I enjoyed the story and the inventive world the author described, and I’d love to read a follow up story to answer the questions of Turk’s origins and see what happens to them in the future.
April 1, 2013
I have always been a fairy tale lover and this story didn't disappoint in that respect. The story contained elements of the fantasy surrounding Anastasia and the classic tale of Cinderella, but it doesn't follow either tale completely. The fairy tale elements of romance, magical elements, evil villain using magic, and a happily ever after ending. The prose engaged me and kept me reading. I enjoyed the world building and the character development.
However, I have reservations about recommending it to my friends. The romance between the two main unmarried characters included laying in a bed together, an incident of nakedness, and some discussions of harlots and other sexual topics. Although the incidents were consistent with the characters' backgrounds and culture, they concerned me.
There also was the worship of the "Earth Jinn" by both the villain and the heroes. This deity is credited as source of the magic in the fantasy world of the book. Although the heroes tend to attribute some sovereign powers to the deity, he does not appear to take an active part in the plot of the story.
However, I have reservations about recommending it to my friends. The romance between the two main unmarried characters included laying in a bed together, an incident of nakedness, and some discussions of harlots and other sexual topics. Although the incidents were consistent with the characters' backgrounds and culture, they concerned me.
There also was the worship of the "Earth Jinn" by both the villain and the heroes. This deity is credited as source of the magic in the fantasy world of the book. Although the heroes tend to attribute some sovereign powers to the deity, he does not appear to take an active part in the plot of the story.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 21, 2013
This freebie is awesome because it combines two amazing things, steampunk and fairy tales! Melba is a girl who was raised away from her royal roots and given to a pledge Master for safe keeping. Maddox (said master) has raised her as a boy, a runner, and a thief … everything princesses are not. When a spymaster rescues her and discovers her toes, of all things (the royal princess has 12), she must learn to become a lady. This story is fraught with gadgets, magic, tales and villains. If you're in the mood for fun action and adventure pick up your goggles and bowler hat and feed your e-reader!
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January 2, 2013
This was a fun read. Fast paced and I really liked the two protags, Melba and Turk. I'd probably slot this as a YA book because the H/H seemed young to me even though Melba was 17 and Turk around 20. My only nitpicks are it could have used a spot more editing. Things like word repetition stood out on occasion. And Melba's gutter 'accent' wasn't consistent throughout the book. Plus, Taylor had Melba speaking what sounded sort of like modern Cockney and this is a fantasy historical romance.
I would definitely read more of Taylor's books. Glad I found her through an Amazon "freebie" read.
I would definitely read more of Taylor's books. Glad I found her through an Amazon "freebie" read.
September 9, 2012
A Clockwork Fairytale was a quick, cute and enjoyable read. That said, the 'clockwork' aspect was a little lacking. This book was not quite the steampunk I imagined it to be. However, the author has filled this story with intriguing characters (I would learn more if The Trash King!).
In short, this fluffy little read is great for putting a smile on your face!
In short, this fluffy little read is great for putting a smile on your face!
December 12, 2011
3.5-4*
It was nice story and I like HST's writing style. I don't like the way it ended. I expected this to be an only novel, not part of a series.
It was nice story and I like HST's writing style. I don't like the way it ended. I expected this to be an only novel, not part of a series.
March 4, 2017
What do I love about it? The story's twists and turns that had me breathless. The endearing Melba, Turk, Gwinnie and Dante. The quirks of each character. The magical kingdom with its inner and outer circles, although ideally everyone is equal, right? The funny moments and quips.
But... the ending. There must be something more... I didn't want it to end. There were unanswered questions. At least for me.
But... the ending. There must be something more... I didn't want it to end. There were unanswered questions. At least for me.
December 11, 2021
One of my favorites
This steampunk world she created is vivid and enthralling! Turk is a dreamy hero, the romance is sweet and heartfelt, and the storyline a complete original! My only complaint is there are no companion novels to keep me posted on the characters!! More, please!!
This steampunk world she created is vivid and enthralling! Turk is a dreamy hero, the romance is sweet and heartfelt, and the storyline a complete original! My only complaint is there are no companion novels to keep me posted on the characters!! More, please!!
January 28, 2026
The World building was confused and the characters were undeveloped. I just couldn't compel myself to read on past 40%.
December 27, 2011
4 1/2 stars
Raised as a boy, seventeen year old Melba is one of the best pick pockets on Royal Malverne Isle but she yearns to move up in the ranks and become a spy. Her dreams come true when she and spymaster Turk run across each other’s paths and he accepts her pledge to join his gang. Not realizing Melba is a girl, Turk takes her to his castle to feed and clean up where he makes more than one startling discovery, not only is she a girl but she just might be royalty. Turk’s master insists he turn Melba into a young lady and return her to the home she was taken from long ago. Neither Turk or Melba are who they seem to be and begin a journey of discovery, wonder and even love as Turk teaches Melba earth magic, manners and how to be who she was destined to become, along the way running from bad Jinns, good monks and creating flutterflies.
A Clockwork Fairytale is an enjoyable mixture of steampunk, Victorian romance and fantasy. Melba is a contradiction of streetwise urchin and naïve young lady. She can pick a pocket, find her way through the sewer system and fight with the best of them, yet she loves the smell of flowers and is delighted by butterflies (which she calls flutterflies). Molding this little urchin into a lady is a challenge, one she doesn’t want and fights the entire way. I loved her spunk, she sees no problems with who she is, thank you very much, she believes in good yet knows there is truly evil out there. She distrusts Monks, the well to do and baths.
Turk is only nineteen years old but has reached the standing of spymaster and is pledged to the highest monk in the Shining Brotherhood. What a contradiction he is, he is a monk and a spy, he dresses in the best clothes, lives in a castle eats fine food and associates with gentry. Turk began his life on Malverne Isle as one of the trash kids, was taken in by the Primate of the Shining Brotherhood, lived and trained as a monk then set up as a spy for the Shining Brotherhood. With his shining golden hair, tall lithe body and good looks, no one suspects he is not what he seems, which makes him the best spy around. Turk is confused by his feelings for Melba, Melba is sure about her feelings for Turk and everyone else has an agenda of their own.
There are some great secondary characters, Gwinnie, Turk’s housekeeper gives us more than one moment of laughter and make the perfect foil for Melba’s street smarts. Vittorio, the Royal Victualler is a truly nasty piece of work, we know from the beginning that we aren’t going to like him and we don’t. Gregorio, the Primate of the Shining Brotherhood is completely dedicated to his calling and can be, at times, difficult to like. I’m still not sure if he is a good guy, a bad guy or just an old fashioned monk.
This is my first foray into steampunk, it’s not that I don’t or can’t read it; it’s just that I haven’t. I’m not a huge fan of fantasy or sci-fi so I always shy away from any book that might lean that way, I’ll admit that might have been a mistake. The steampunk and fantasy aspects of this book were not hard to follow and gave the story twists that made it more fun to read. The story is most definitely geared toward the young adult, no bad language, no explicit love scenes, no needless violence, just a good story. While this is a love story, that is not all there is to it, there are a few action scenes, a few comedy scenes, some light romance and some dark moments. The only thing that kept this from being five stars for me was the Prologue was a bit clunky and the ending sucked. I won’t give any spoilers but anyone who has read any of my reviews probably can guess what it was. I would most definitely recommend this to anyone, young or old, who enjoys a good clean love story, a little steampunk, a little fantasy and a few pretty flutterflies floating over head.
Reviewed as a Member of the Paranormal Romance Guild Review Team
Raised as a boy, seventeen year old Melba is one of the best pick pockets on Royal Malverne Isle but she yearns to move up in the ranks and become a spy. Her dreams come true when she and spymaster Turk run across each other’s paths and he accepts her pledge to join his gang. Not realizing Melba is a girl, Turk takes her to his castle to feed and clean up where he makes more than one startling discovery, not only is she a girl but she just might be royalty. Turk’s master insists he turn Melba into a young lady and return her to the home she was taken from long ago. Neither Turk or Melba are who they seem to be and begin a journey of discovery, wonder and even love as Turk teaches Melba earth magic, manners and how to be who she was destined to become, along the way running from bad Jinns, good monks and creating flutterflies.
A Clockwork Fairytale is an enjoyable mixture of steampunk, Victorian romance and fantasy. Melba is a contradiction of streetwise urchin and naïve young lady. She can pick a pocket, find her way through the sewer system and fight with the best of them, yet she loves the smell of flowers and is delighted by butterflies (which she calls flutterflies). Molding this little urchin into a lady is a challenge, one she doesn’t want and fights the entire way. I loved her spunk, she sees no problems with who she is, thank you very much, she believes in good yet knows there is truly evil out there. She distrusts Monks, the well to do and baths.
Turk is only nineteen years old but has reached the standing of spymaster and is pledged to the highest monk in the Shining Brotherhood. What a contradiction he is, he is a monk and a spy, he dresses in the best clothes, lives in a castle eats fine food and associates with gentry. Turk began his life on Malverne Isle as one of the trash kids, was taken in by the Primate of the Shining Brotherhood, lived and trained as a monk then set up as a spy for the Shining Brotherhood. With his shining golden hair, tall lithe body and good looks, no one suspects he is not what he seems, which makes him the best spy around. Turk is confused by his feelings for Melba, Melba is sure about her feelings for Turk and everyone else has an agenda of their own.
There are some great secondary characters, Gwinnie, Turk’s housekeeper gives us more than one moment of laughter and make the perfect foil for Melba’s street smarts. Vittorio, the Royal Victualler is a truly nasty piece of work, we know from the beginning that we aren’t going to like him and we don’t. Gregorio, the Primate of the Shining Brotherhood is completely dedicated to his calling and can be, at times, difficult to like. I’m still not sure if he is a good guy, a bad guy or just an old fashioned monk.
This is my first foray into steampunk, it’s not that I don’t or can’t read it; it’s just that I haven’t. I’m not a huge fan of fantasy or sci-fi so I always shy away from any book that might lean that way, I’ll admit that might have been a mistake. The steampunk and fantasy aspects of this book were not hard to follow and gave the story twists that made it more fun to read. The story is most definitely geared toward the young adult, no bad language, no explicit love scenes, no needless violence, just a good story. While this is a love story, that is not all there is to it, there are a few action scenes, a few comedy scenes, some light romance and some dark moments. The only thing that kept this from being five stars for me was the Prologue was a bit clunky and the ending sucked. I won’t give any spoilers but anyone who has read any of my reviews probably can guess what it was. I would most definitely recommend this to anyone, young or old, who enjoys a good clean love story, a little steampunk, a little fantasy and a few pretty flutterflies floating over head.
Reviewed as a Member of the Paranormal Romance Guild Review Team
March 18, 2014
A Clockwork Fairytale reminds me just why I loved fairytales so much as a little girl. It's like a Disney movie in book form - packed with charm, imagination and romance with its spunky and brave lost princess, a devoted hero and a healthy dose of magic. It's the sort of tale that readers young and old would enjoy; sweet, warm and feel-good. (I should note, however, that despite the "clockwork" in the title, this is really not steampunk. Readers expecting steampunk will be disappointed. There are gadgets, but it plays little to no part in the story.)
I adored Melba, our young street-urchin-turned-princess, who is endearingly innocent and approaches new discoveries with wide-eyed curiosity, but also hilariously practical and bluntly spoken when it comes to topics even Turk would blush to speak about. What I loved most about her was her strong will and resilience (YA heroines out there, take note) - when life kicks her to the curb and even love seems to have deserted her, what decision does she make?
And even when she discovers what wrongs had been done against her, she remains delightfully sensible and I wanted to hug her for it:
Master Turk, for all his learning and reputation as a master spy, finds himself constantly thrown off balance by Melba's energy - it's exactly makes their budding friendship (and later romance) so sweet. The side characters were well-developed and alternatively likeable (Dante!) and despicable (Vittorio), but never one-note. Even the villain is layered; his desperation for acknowledgement and success corrupts him, but not without fighting attacks of the conscience and very human emotions.
With the author's flowing writing style, it was incredibly easy to immerse oneself in the world that she'd created, with its magic, jinns and palaces. I wanted more of the world and it was actually a shame that the hints we received regarding Turk's background remained only hints. That also leads me to one of my only real complaint about the book, which is the fact that the ending (though sweet) is only "satisfying enough," since it is rather abrupt. I actually reached the last page and flipped to the next, expecting at least another chapter or an epilogue, only to realize that it was the end. There are definitely questions left unanswered, and considering this is a fairytale in every sense, I expected something 100% satisfying and "aww"-inducing.
But that's a mere quibble considering how lovely the whole story was. Recommended, particularly for those with a soft spot for the Pygmalion-type rags-to-riches romantic tales.
I adored Melba, our young street-urchin-turned-princess, who is endearingly innocent and approaches new discoveries with wide-eyed curiosity, but also hilariously practical and bluntly spoken when it comes to topics even Turk would blush to speak about. What I loved most about her was her strong will and resilience (YA heroines out there, take note) - when life kicks her to the curb and even love seems to have deserted her, what decision does she make?
"...there was no point in harping on about it. She had to be strong and look out for herself."
And even when she discovers what wrongs had been done against her, she remains delightfully sensible and I wanted to hug her for it:
Master Turk, for all his learning and reputation as a master spy, finds himself constantly thrown off balance by Melba's energy - it's exactly makes their budding friendship (and later romance) so sweet. The side characters were well-developed and alternatively likeable (Dante!) and despicable (Vittorio), but never one-note. Even the villain is layered; his desperation for acknowledgement and success corrupts him, but not without fighting attacks of the conscience and very human emotions.
With the author's flowing writing style, it was incredibly easy to immerse oneself in the world that she'd created, with its magic, jinns and palaces. I wanted more of the world and it was actually a shame that the hints we received regarding Turk's background remained only hints. That also leads me to one of my only real complaint about the book, which is the fact that the ending (though sweet) is only "satisfying enough," since it is rather abrupt. I actually reached the last page and flipped to the next, expecting at least another chapter or an epilogue, only to realize that it was the end. There are definitely questions left unanswered, and considering this is a fairytale in every sense, I expected something 100% satisfying and "aww"-inducing.
But that's a mere quibble considering how lovely the whole story was. Recommended, particularly for those with a soft spot for the Pygmalion-type rags-to-riches romantic tales.
April 14, 2015
Loved it!!!
The love interests Turk and Malba were perfect for each other—both grew up on the streets, have similar 'jobs' and have good chemistry together. I liked how their relationship developed gradually—it made it seem more real.
Malba was quirky while still retaining some of her innocence, even after growing up on the street.
"Men got all steamed up over their funny little floppy bits as if they were something special." —Malba
While Master Turk seems a little stiff at first, you soon see a different side of him.
"Turk combed his fingers through his sweaty hair and his hand unconsciously paused on the long hair curling against his neck. Secret curls, Melba had called them. Everytime he thought of her..." (have to read the book for more }:)
The setting was enjoyable but it took me a while to figure out what Great Earth Jinn meant.
I really liked all the quotes under each chapter #...it foreshadowed what was to come and helped to keep my interest.
What I Didn't Like...
Didn't love the second half of the book, it seemed rushed, and abruptly ends. Most of the loose ends get wrapped up, but it still feels like the book just suddenly ends.
The evil guy was too obvious, you quickly know who he is and his master plan. It could have been a better book if there was some mystery surrounding the bad guy (<—Trying to not make anymore obvious than it already is, so I'm not gonna name names). Instead of a mysterious evil mastermind we get his narrative through a couple of chapters, in which he basically outlines his 'perfect' plan.
Final Thoughts:
I would recommend this Fairytale book for a fun, enjoyable read. And I'm going to go one step further and say I would definitely buy a sequel if there was one.
"'They're called butterflies, Melba.' 'Master Maddox said they was flutterbys because they never stay they flutter by.' Turk laughed and this time his eyes sparkled and crinkled at the corners." —one of my favorite quotes from the book.
The love interests Turk and Malba were perfect for each other—both grew up on the streets, have similar 'jobs' and have good chemistry together. I liked how their relationship developed gradually—it made it seem more real.
Malba was quirky while still retaining some of her innocence, even after growing up on the street.
"Men got all steamed up over their funny little floppy bits as if they were something special." —Malba
While Master Turk seems a little stiff at first, you soon see a different side of him.
"Turk combed his fingers through his sweaty hair and his hand unconsciously paused on the long hair curling against his neck. Secret curls, Melba had called them. Everytime he thought of her..." (have to read the book for more }:)
The setting was enjoyable but it took me a while to figure out what Great Earth Jinn meant.
I really liked all the quotes under each chapter #...it foreshadowed what was to come and helped to keep my interest.
What I Didn't Like...
Didn't love the second half of the book, it seemed rushed, and abruptly ends. Most of the loose ends get wrapped up, but it still feels like the book just suddenly ends.
The evil guy was too obvious, you quickly know who he is and his master plan. It could have been a better book if there was some mystery surrounding the bad guy (<—Trying to not make anymore obvious than it already is, so I'm not gonna name names). Instead of a mysterious evil mastermind we get his narrative through a couple of chapters, in which he basically outlines his 'perfect' plan.
Final Thoughts:
I would recommend this Fairytale book for a fun, enjoyable read. And I'm going to go one step further and say I would definitely buy a sequel if there was one.
"'They're called butterflies, Melba.' 'Master Maddox said they was flutterbys because they never stay they flutter by.' Turk laughed and this time his eyes sparkled and crinkled at the corners." —one of my favorite quotes from the book.
September 6, 2016
This is a sweet story, there's no sex so if that's something you require, I would suggest that you don't read this book. And the ending is very abrupt, almost as if to leave it open for a sequel.
Melba is a thief & message runner who is rescued when she's almost press-ganged by some sailors. She realizes the man who's rescued her is Master Turk, a master spy. She's hoping to better herself so she convinces Master Turk to let her pledge to him. Once they're at his home, she's outed as a girl. And Turk realizes as soon as he sees her feet, just what girl she is. She's the lost princess who was kidnapped many years ago.
Turk is given the task by the Shining Brotherhood (a group of monks) of making her into a lady so that he can return her to her rightful place in the palace. As he's teaching her, the pair become friends & Melba's feelings soon turn to love. She asks Turk to marry her so that they don't have to part, but Turk is a Monk & can't break his vow of chastity.
Melba is returned to the palace & the Grand Victualler starts to court her, hoping for an easy way to gain the throne once her father dies, which he's been working on hastening. Vitorrio begins to make Melba sick as well, wanting her to turn to him for aid. But Vitorrio's brother, Dante the Trash King, senses Melba's illness & gets Turk involved with a way to rescue Melba.
Melba is a thief & message runner who is rescued when she's almost press-ganged by some sailors. She realizes the man who's rescued her is Master Turk, a master spy. She's hoping to better herself so she convinces Master Turk to let her pledge to him. Once they're at his home, she's outed as a girl. And Turk realizes as soon as he sees her feet, just what girl she is. She's the lost princess who was kidnapped many years ago.
Turk is given the task by the Shining Brotherhood (a group of monks) of making her into a lady so that he can return her to her rightful place in the palace. As he's teaching her, the pair become friends & Melba's feelings soon turn to love. She asks Turk to marry her so that they don't have to part, but Turk is a Monk & can't break his vow of chastity.
Melba is returned to the palace & the Grand Victualler starts to court her, hoping for an easy way to gain the throne once her father dies, which he's been working on hastening. Vitorrio begins to make Melba sick as well, wanting her to turn to him for aid. But Vitorrio's brother, Dante the Trash King, senses Melba's illness & gets Turk involved with a way to rescue Melba.
July 1, 2016
Meh. I don't think I'm the right market for this. Some YA reads well to adults and some just doesn't. This is fairly juvenile and very clean (minus a couple of "I wonder what it'd be like to lay in bed with him?" moments).
It has decent bones...the kidnapped princess found hidden in the slums by a spymaster, the slowly dying king, someone angling for the throne, a forbidden romance. But this thing is chock-full of "look there's a dilemma" and next paragraph "look I have the answer!" moments. There isn't developement and smooth process, it is really all just Problem. Solve. Problem. Solve. Problem. Solve.
If you're thinking clearly the plot will also make you strain your eyes from all the rolling. It absolutely makes ZERO sense for the person who kidnapped her to leave her in the slums. Zero. Especially considering this person's aversion to anything poor.
If you're 12 and under, or a parent looking for a shallow, hollow, clean, caper this is for you!
It has decent bones...the kidnapped princess found hidden in the slums by a spymaster, the slowly dying king, someone angling for the throne, a forbidden romance. But this thing is chock-full of "look there's a dilemma" and next paragraph "look I have the answer!" moments. There isn't developement and smooth process, it is really all just Problem. Solve. Problem. Solve. Problem. Solve.
If you're thinking clearly the plot will also make you strain your eyes from all the rolling. It absolutely makes ZERO sense for the person who kidnapped her to leave her in the slums. Zero. Especially considering this person's aversion to anything poor.
If you're 12 and under, or a parent looking for a shallow, hollow, clean, caper this is for you!
December 24, 2013
From the start, you are submerged in a world full of steampunk, fantasy, and spirits. When you are thrown into this world, you hit the ground running, and the pace never slows. It is a combination of Pygmalion, Princess Bride, Romeo & Juliet, and Anastasia, all seamlessly combined. I felt compassion for the characters and it made an excellent movie in my head. Appropriate for Y/A and above, but do not let that turn you off to the story. The writing was not over-simplified at all and I am definitely looking forward to future books in this enchanting world.
Soundtrack suggestion? I was listening to Dead Can Dance while reading this and it provided deeper immersion into this fantastical world.
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Soundtrack suggestion? I was listening to Dead Can Dance while reading this and it provided deeper immersion into this fantastical world.
- See more at: http://paranormalromancejunkies.blogs...
December 24, 2013
From the start, you are submerged in a world full of steampunk, fantasy, and spirits. When you are thrown into this world, you hit the ground running, and the pace never slows. It is a combination of Pygmalion, Princess Bride, Romeo & Juliet, and Anastasia, all seamlessly combined. I felt compassion for the characters and it made an excellent movie in my head. Appropriate for Y/A and above, but do not let that turn you off to the story. The writing was not over-simplified at all and I am definitely looking forward to future books in this enchanting world.
Soundtrack suggestion? I was listening to Dead Can Dance while reading this and it provided deeper immersion into this fantastical world.
- See more at: http://paranormalromancejunkies.blogs...
Soundtrack suggestion? I was listening to Dead Can Dance while reading this and it provided deeper immersion into this fantastical world.
- See more at: http://paranormalromancejunkies.blogs...
February 10, 2015
This was a brilliant adventure story with interesting characters and a beautiful plot. I found the cover extremely deceiving. I'd picked it up based on the excellent reviews I'd seen on Amazon. I would not classify this as a romance but that is certainly what the cover implies.
This is a rags to riches adventure tale. The characters are wonderfully round and complex. The plot is interesting and I just really liked the story.
My only criticism is that for a thieving street urchin, Melba loses a bit of her street smarts once she is taken under Turk's wing.
There is plenty of potential for a follow up book centered on Turk discovering his history or Dante. I hope such a thin comes about. The author built a very interesting world and characters. There are more independently wonderful tales to be had there.
This is a rags to riches adventure tale. The characters are wonderfully round and complex. The plot is interesting and I just really liked the story.
My only criticism is that for a thieving street urchin, Melba loses a bit of her street smarts once she is taken under Turk's wing.
There is plenty of potential for a follow up book centered on Turk discovering his history or Dante. I hope such a thin comes about. The author built a very interesting world and characters. There are more independently wonderful tales to be had there.
September 21, 2011
Helen Scott-Taylor weaves suspense, magic, and emotion in a lovely fairytale with endearing characters. Melba is an intrepid down-to-earth urchin, who turns into a lovely young woman, and later into an inexperienced yet noble princess. Turk, the charming spymaster who can’t resist her appeal, is trying to discover his past, assess his present and choose his future. The evil Royal Victualler, Vittorio, with his foul magic, the mysterious Gregorio, Shining Brotherhood’s Primate, and the plain-spoken Gwinnie, are some of the colorful secondary characters that make the little world of Malvern Isle come alive. Taylor’s inimitable style will have you smile, laugh, cry and bite your nails, as you turn the pages to reach the end of this unique story.
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