I didn't gel with this. I didn't see the chemistry, I didn't understand the battle and I didn't understand the relationship's with secondary characters. There is a trans character that has a very brief walk on role.
I did get some lines I liked, and I did persevere but certainly speed reading to get through, rather than reading fast to find out what happens next.
The sex scene I didn’t enjoy and I certainly didn’t enjoy the aftermath because it didn't ring true. I don’t know if it’s just because I haven’t gelled with the mains, or really their relationship, but this novel, so far, is not for me.
Over half way through there is a reminder sentence at the end of one chapter why something about one main mustn't be found out by the other. The next chapter it's found out. The lack of subtlety irritated me. The break up arc normally brings tension. It didn't, it brought irritation to me.
There is a sudden thawing, then a totally inauthentic meeting with the ex. Many novels use the “standing up to the nasty ex for your love interest” as a plot mechanism, this was clunky tho.
Now, one of the unusual things about this book isn’t the fact one main is bisexual but we see her “with” the man, no graphic details but they are obviously consensually together. Normally either we are told they are bisexual or we see them in an unsatisfactory relationship with a man. This isn’t something that affected me one way or another but it was unusual in my experience.
Also about 65% in, the mains start getting on, and so do I with the book! I think because I didn’t buy in to them not getting on, I wasn’t sold on each of their barriers, it didn’t work. Once they start getting on, because the, to me, unnatural barrier is gone, so is my irritation. However it briefly returned in a chapter where just the two mains interact, and it is all “I” and “she” and I cannot remember whose is the point of view, this to me means the voices aren't clear enough. It also returned with the following sentence….. “The minutes crawled by as if they were trying to light a fire under the anxiety already burning in my gut.” If that phrase appeals you may love this book.
I've been quite detailed on why this book isn't working for me, so others can decide, if it's me not the book. This has happened a couple of times recently and I've said it's me, and upped the book from a 2.5 on personal taste to a 3. I can't do that with this. Not when I've not enjoyed it and actually been irritated by it. It is a 2.5, but have to round down.