Open Consequences

by Jack Ryder

Jack was shocked when, a week after their twin daughters left for college, his wife announced that she wanted to have an open relationship. after 20 years of marriage. Grace knew that she could have any man she wanted but a 45 year old husband would have a lot more difficulty finding hookup partners. She did not count on Jack hitting the gym. She did not count on Jack meeting a beautiful rich woman who would change Jack's life.

32 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 31, 2023

Reviews

[Steve Naylor · Rating 3 out of 5]

Rating 3.0 stars

I am not sure how to describe this author's work. He describes things that I know could happen but I don't believe they would ever happen the way he has it written. Guy has been married for 20 years and after his twin daughters go to school the wife decides she wants an open marriage. He can either deal with it or get divorced. This happened about a year ago and they husband is not happy. He gets his sexual needs filled with prostitutes. The reason I don't think this is realistic is because of how the husband was written. He is a very successful, wealthy author with multiple best sellers. He gets in great shape during this period and was 6'2 and 220 pounds of muscle. He ends up meeting a woman at a charity event who is also a writer. He tells her his story and she is immediately interested in him. They go back to her place to have sex. Turns out he also has a 9 inch c**k. This doesn't seem like the kind of man that a woman would want to try and lose. The wife treats him like crap as well. Not just ignoring him but actually putting him down. Calling him a limp dick that nobody would want. Making fun of him because he pays for sex. He gets with this other woman and she tells him she wants to be with him. He decides to divorce his wife while she is away at a swingers event with her boss in Jamaica. When she comes home she finds the divorce papers and his wedding ring. Then she starts to realize what she has done. She was just planning to spend the next 10 years having fun before she quit and then live happily with her husband. What? She expected to treat him like crap and then be happy with him later? There were to many things that didn't add up with the way this was presented. What did the daughters think about the arrangement? How did the wife think this was going to play out long term? Did she really think she could treat him like crap for 10 years and then they would live happily ever after?

[Royce Watson · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book

This book is like his others, some errors in word usage. If there is a proof reader involved he, or she, needs to pay more attention to what they are reading. Still an interesting story.

[Timothy Herda · Rating 1 out of 5]

Poorly written

With characters that had no depth and acted inconsistent. The author skipped over important scenes and what dialog he used was stilted and awkward. Luckily the story was short so I didn't feel like I had wasted to much time.

[Charles N · Rating 5 out of 5]

loved it.

loved it. kinda felt sorry for the husband, cute fun story. As good as I expect Mr Ryder. Way to go