⭐⭐.5 - Plot, Characters, Pacing
🌶️🌶️🌶️ - Spice quality/quantity, execution
🥵🥵 - Chemistry, HEA potential
“I’ll gladly take your soul, if you promise to care for mine.” - Feed the Birds by Dakota Wilde
Marigold Peppins is like no other governess you’ll meet. With darkness in her heart and abilities beyond mortal comprehension, she decides to take a job at Blackford Manor, where the dreary Mr. Barrett Blackford mourns the death of his wife. But there’s something about Marigold that awakens something in him and craves for more. Will Barrett and Marigold be able to live their deserved happinesses? Or will phantoms from the past put an end to it before it can begin?
Retelling the story of Mary Poppins with dark and erotic new elements, “Feed the Birds” is a supernatural gothic romance that explores two souls tainted by betrayal and tragedy finding each other. Today’s entry holds a lot of promise with twists and turns that will have you wanting to know more, though by the end, I can’t say that I loved the final execution by the time I finished.
But first, let’s talk about the positives; the set-up for Marigold’s historic London was great, with Ms. Wilde’s writing perfectly establishes a gothic atmosphere that nods to the original story while being its own unique entry to dark story writing with an air of mystery. You don’t completely know what Marigold, her family, and her friends are, other than something more than human with magic and relationships that are both enchanting and haunting. I would love to read more about their world and society, as it was definitely the strongest element in the novella.
On the other hand, our romance between Marigold and Barrett was sadly the weakest, as their relationship (as well as the spice) feels rushed and needed some more pages to explore their attraction and build-up before getting to those three important words.
The ending also felt very rushed, with scenes between our heroine and antagonists never fully explained or given little time to let the severity of the situation settle in the story before it’s time to say goodbye to our characters. Along with some grammatical errors, “Feed the Birds” has the potential for a fantastic gothic romance story, but sadly didn’t enchant me as much as I had hoped.
Final Smut Archive assessment: More sugar makes the spice all the more sweet.