I would suggest reading this book, I’m personally looking forward to the second book because I am hooked to a certain budding romance and need more. I wish I’d have gotten more in this book BUT I’m hoping book two finally let’s things unfold. Before I go into detail I want to say that I think the author took a common scenario and added her own fresh, unique ideas to it to make it a fun read. I enjoyed the plot and the story line. I received this as an ARC from Goodgirlspr.
I’m going to talk about what I liked and what I didn’t like
WHAT I LIKED: (without too much detail because I don’t want to spoil).
The story the author built is very diverse, with people of varying ethnicities, sexual orientations, and personalities.
I was nervous when I first started reading because the FMC was cold, like so cold I didn’t think she’d be relatable. That didn’t last long as things started to unfold and I actually came to enjoy that cold contrast at the beginning. Like a mini character arc of sorts.
There were a lot of quotes that I saved and highlighted, for the sake of not spoiling too much I’m going to share two.
“Civilization needed the arts to ground themselves in humanity.”
“Prescott, leader of this place, had told me from day one to always pay attention to brave women. They shape history.”
This book is post apocalyptic and usually those stories are just about surviving, combat, etc. While this book has those elements, it also puts emphasis on culture and empathy. There was a lot of people retaining their individuality and doing what they love, while of course doing what was required to be safe. And it wasn’t the naive sort of like carefree be happy with imminent danger, there was an appropriate mix of realism in survival while also letting people live. I liked that.
I also liked the twist you get that the end. You find something out about someone, I won’t spoil it but I didn’t guess it and I liked it even though it was a little devastating.
WHAT I DIDNT LIKE:
I want to say I think this author is a first time author who had to put her own effort and money into this so I’m not being judgmental and it’s also why I debated docking stars for it.
This book, in my opinion, does need some editing. There are a lot of spelling errors and issues with sentence structuring. I know to some people, that doesn’t even matter. But for me and people like me, having to stop and read a couple of sentences a few times over to understand it, it pulls me out of the story.
I’m not sure if the author was going for a more casual type of vibe with the language, I think so, but I personally didn’t like it. Also, about halfway through the book the characters start using a lot of slang. I didn’t enjoy it, it felt like a weird switch.
I think if someone went through and fixed a lot of the spelling errors, the fragmented sentences, and the over use of slang, I’d be happier to give it five stars.
(I don’t qualify my personal opinion on the romance as a negative because everyone wants something different when it comes to romance and who and I to tell the author how things between her characters should go? As a romance lover this was just my thought)
On another note, I wanted to talk about the romance. I signed up for this ARC having seen “one bed / forced proximity, slow burn, enemies to lovers, and slow burn. It’s definitely a slow burn as in romantically, almost nothing happens. I won’t say that I don’t understand why the romance had to go slow there are reasons, but I was begging for a little crumb, just a little morsel of real romance. There’s a little bit, a VERY TINY bit, and to be fair the author has the plot set up to be a good enemies to lovers, slow burn, but I think with this first book it kinda fell flat. We needed more. Hoping that in book two there is more. So I guess my point is if you’re thinking about reading this book, don’t read one bed forced proximity and think you’re going to see some action finally breaking between two enemies because that does not happen.
Overall, read this book!