2.5 stars
First off, I am not rating this in terms of how well it follows the story of Emma, because if I were doing that, I would have given this one star. I was really annoyed that she chose Ryan instead of the Mr Knightly character, Brandon. I’m an Austen purist, so I wanted her to end up with Brandon from the moment he was introduced, and second of all, I thought she had better chemistry with Brandon. He wasn’t afraid to call her out on things, whereas Ryan was never able to. Also, Laurie didn’t seem comfortable with Ryan. She was constantly nervous around him, even after they had been dating for 2 years. You’d think after that much time, she wouldn’t be afraid to be herself. She also seemed almost wistful when thinking about Brandon married to her best friend too. Ryan didn’t seem that comfortable with Laurie either - it took him almost 2 years to say I love you to her!
I was not happy with the “mismatch” that Laurie made with Florence and the totally unrealistic Cousin Dave. What was the point of that? Just to show that Laurie was not perfect at matchmaking? If so, too little, too late. It didn’t add anything to the plot, and I actually liked Florence, who seemed to be the only character NOT fawning all over Laurie. After the botched match, Florence just disappeared from the story, which I thought was a shame because almost all the characters had virtually identical personalities, and she was different, so she stood out to me.
Also, the portrayal of buying a house was NOT REMOTELY realistic. Laurie and Ryan saw the house (which conveniently happened to be 5 minutes away from all their family and friends), and somehow closed on it like a week later. Um, it is A LOT more complicated than that to buy a house. Not to mention, where did they get the money for the down payment? Laurie never wanted to work more than part time - and even made her boss hire someone else so she could work less hours! She’s 24 years old and only works part time, so buying a house didn’t really seem like a feasible option for them.
I did round up to 3 because Laurie did seem a little more mature in this one. Now if she could just get a full time job and cook her own food, she might be almost independent! I am curious about books 4 and 5, where Laurie is not the narrator, so I will probably check those out soon.
Overall, these first three books were decent, but not my favorites by Erynn. She’s still great though!