This relatively short gothic romance feels longer than it is -- partly because of tiny typeface, & partly because the pacing is off. It starts with a bang & then putters around, kicks into higher gear before idling in neutral, & then sets off the fireworks with a pair of great climaxes, but splutters between said explosions with a long, LONG reveal of the villainy herein. It also lacks sufficient follow-through on Fiona's 'sight'; while the opening lays groundwork for her discomfort with this unwanted perception (& given the era, her worries are legit re: shabby single ladies who flaunt their specialness), her burden is barely mentioned during her time on the island except for a very brief scene.
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As for the hero, Fergus... *facepalm* His actions in the finale are too extra for belief. My jaw dropped, because not two chapters after literally throwing the secondary hero away from Fiona's cot when he tried to WIPE FEVERED SWEAT OFF HER FOREHEAD during a hurricane while everyone was trapped in the same room, Fergus suddenly runs into a burning building full of murderous, rampaging slaves to rescue the cheating, bitchy villainess after she screws everyone over...& did I mention he used to sleep with this woman? All after proclaiming Fiona his salvation from said villainess leading him around by his dick, because now Fiona herself has the direct line to said appendage?! But nope. He dies while trying to save his bitch ex who didn't deserve squat. *headdesk* If you ask me, Fiona's better off with the other dude.
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...Anyway. I did enjoy it, despite my gripes. The setting -- historical island plantations -- is a favorite of mine. Something about sticky, oppressive tropical life lends itself to gothic fiction. :D Despite Fergus' failings, I cottoned to other characters like Andrew, Charity, & Samuel, & also liked that the touches of paranormal (Fiona's sight, Juanita's voodoo) weren't just explained away. And while consistent suspense is lacking, there's still a thick haze of tension that permeates the story as a whole.
4 stars for atmosphere, strongly written setting, & overall concept.