Worst volume so far
Let’s start with continuity errors:
In the last volume, it was clearly explained that “Bro” is Cedric’s nickname for Yohan. In this volume, Cedric referred to Lance as “Bro” four times. Maybe it was a translation error, but if not, then someone should have caught it.
Chapter 2: “Cedric was already holding a blade from who-knew-where,” It’s emphasized in this chapter that Cedric never studied the sword and, in fact, had never even held a blade. But earlier…
Chapter 1: “Cedric gripped his sword as he observed us all.” *face palm*
The Commander told everyone to not let their guards down. Then two pages later, Eric says, “I told you not to let your guard down, Arthur!” Well, no, you hadn’t said anything of the kind, Eric. I double checked.
Then there are a couple of examples related to blocking (i.e., how characters are positioned within the scene). Is Arthur on the opposite side of the bed from Tiara and Stale or are they standing next to him? Make up your mind. Cedric was sitting, he was sitting, nope he’s suddenly standing.
I only found one line edit, so it was mostly continuity errors that drove me nuts here. Still, it smacks of bad editing that those weren’t caught before publication.
Now, regarding the actual story:
*sigh* Physics doesn’t work like that. No, you can’t dodge bullets and the odds of being able to cut a row of bullets out of the air with a sword are so astronomical….I can’t even.
The author KNOWS this is B.S. You can tell because the other knights asked Arthur to remind them what is special power was. If his special power was some kind of physical prowess, then I would be like, “Oh, magic. Disbelief successfully suspended.” But his power is “Making plants grow better”, so….NO! Disbelief is fully in place and ain’t goin’ nowhere. *sigh*
Then there’s that reckless move Pride pulled. It was crucial to the rest of the story, but made zero sense. She’s smarter than that. I thought of multiple ways that she could have handled that situation better. But most importantly, she doesn’t have the physical strength to have actually been of use in that situation. So putting herself in danger made NO SENSE! I’m incredibly irritated by this move which dumbs down a smart character purely as a plot device.
Finally, the action sequences weren’t gripping. I found it hard to understand what was happening. The descriptions of the terrain didn’t make sense to me. A picture would have been great. But also, the superhuman abilities of all the knights got to be a bit much. It became clear early on that none of the knights would be in mortal danger. Even from bombs falling out of the clear sky. That really lessened the tension for me and made things rather boring from that point.
If I hadn’t already bought the whole series, I might stop here. However, I’m hopeful that things will improve now that we’re moving away from battle sequences and back to palace politics. *crossing fingers while knocking on wood*