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Hey There, Hop Stuff #2
The Bunny Blues
I’m a bunny on the run.
Forced to bond with a fluffle of rabbit shifters who care only for my ability to provide offspring, I’ve spent the last several months tucked away in a burrow. My matched wouldn’t disrespect our elders by publicly rejecting me, but privately, they made their lack of feelings clear by refusing to bond with me. The only time they remembered we were paired, was when I went into heat… and became fertile.
After being betrayed and hurt yet again by the men who were supposed to be my matched, I ran from the burrows. I didn’t think there was anyone who would be willing to help me until I watched a viral video of a raven-haired bunny who’d been claimed by the Alpha of the most powerful pack of wolf shifters on earth. Monroe had faced down the elders of her burrow and offered sanctuary to any bunny who needed it among her wolf pack.
Gathering my courage, I decided to travel across the country and take her up on the offer. Making the journey to Monroe’s pack isn’t the hard part. No, the far more difficult challenge is trying to convince three very persistent wolf shifters that it is impossible for me to be their mate… no matter how much I wished things were different.
But what if the elders are wrong?
What if the rejection I’d suffered from the butthole rabbit shifters means the bond can be broken?
Please read the sensitivity note inside the book for more specifics about possible triggers!
The female in this book does experience bullying and is cheated on by the rabbit shifter males. She is not bullied by her wolf mates. Her wolves are ready to destroy anything that threatens their bunny.
Forced to bond with a fluffle of rabbit shifters who care only for my ability to provide offspring, I’ve spent the last several months tucked away in a burrow. My matched wouldn’t disrespect our elders by publicly rejecting me, but privately, they made their lack of feelings clear by refusing to bond with me. The only time they remembered we were paired, was when I went into heat… and became fertile.
After being betrayed and hurt yet again by the men who were supposed to be my matched, I ran from the burrows. I didn’t think there was anyone who would be willing to help me until I watched a viral video of a raven-haired bunny who’d been claimed by the Alpha of the most powerful pack of wolf shifters on earth. Monroe had faced down the elders of her burrow and offered sanctuary to any bunny who needed it among her wolf pack.
Gathering my courage, I decided to travel across the country and take her up on the offer. Making the journey to Monroe’s pack isn’t the hard part. No, the far more difficult challenge is trying to convince three very persistent wolf shifters that it is impossible for me to be their mate… no matter how much I wished things were different.
But what if the elders are wrong?
What if the rejection I’d suffered from the butthole rabbit shifters means the bond can be broken?
Please read the sensitivity note inside the book for more specifics about possible triggers!
The female in this book does experience bullying and is cheated on by the rabbit shifter males. She is not bullied by her wolf mates. Her wolves are ready to destroy anything that threatens their bunny.
210 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 1, 2024
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Sedona Ashe
42 books947 followersSedona Ashe lives in a tiny town in Tennessee, near the Great Smoky Mountains. She enjoys reading and writing stories filled with powerful paranormal females, and sexy supernatural men. Sedona has a tea collection of over 300 teas from around the world, which her husband claims has become an obsession. When she isn't writing, she enjoys hiking, free diving, and photography. She shares her home with three kids, four pups, five cats, an arctic fox, chickens, a crazy turkey, and way too many reptiles!
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September 28, 2025
5 ⭐️
🐰 I’m obsessed with this series!
“Rabbits have the entire world fooled with the cute and cuddly act. We are savages by nature, and if we were the size of wolves, the world would tremble in terror of us.”
🐰 I’m obsessed with this series!
“Rabbits have the entire world fooled with the cute and cuddly act. We are savages by nature, and if we were the size of wolves, the world would tremble in terror of us.”
April 2, 2024
It is sweet-ish, but it felt like most the book was talking about how horrible her life was with her fluffle and experiencing that with her rather than how awesome her wolves are. Seriously, we get barely a day and a half with the wolves (most of it is spent sleeping) and it is SUCH insta-love. Immediate recognition of mates and then snuggles like the rest of the time.
There were also continuity errors? Like, how long was she actually with her fluffle-- weeks or months? At one point she says she has 5 bunny shifter mates, but I am pretty sure it was only 4. Somehow the bad guys get onto the wolves' territory???? But then the parents try and immediate can't, so like what happened there ESPECIALLY since the pack knows they are protecting a shifter on the run?
It just... a lot of it made no sense. There is little personality difference between her wolf mates and I was continuously getting them confused. It really isn't great??? I love the BunnyxWolf shifter dynamic and the characters leaving their homes and where they should be safe but aren't and going to the predators and finding love. THAT is great, I love this bit, but we don't see any actual HEALING happen after all the abuse she went through. I need healing, not just "oh they love me and treat me great... hope I don't die so I can be with them!" It was bizarre.
Reading this was a huge letdown and I'm not sure I want to put myself through it again with the next book.
ALSO: both the author and the MC saying the MC wasn't raped because she asked for it, is toxic af. I get it is a grey area, but she was in heat. I don't care that the bunny shifters left her alone until she begged for them, OBVIOUSLY she was going to give in because shifters can die going through heat alone (this is actually mentioned in the book). Is it rape? Maybe not classically, but it is assault especially since women bunny shifters immediately mate with the men that get them through their first heat. So. What. The. Fuck.
Essentially she was given the choice of having sex with people she dislikes OR dying.
The absolute trauma Ellora goes through in this book is barely touched on or acknowledged at all.
There were also continuity errors? Like, how long was she actually with her fluffle-- weeks or months? At one point she says she has 5 bunny shifter mates, but I am pretty sure it was only 4. Somehow the bad guys get onto the wolves' territory???? But then the parents try and immediate can't, so like what happened there ESPECIALLY since the pack knows they are protecting a shifter on the run?
It just... a lot of it made no sense. There is little personality difference between her wolf mates and I was continuously getting them confused. It really isn't great??? I love the BunnyxWolf shifter dynamic and the characters leaving their homes and where they should be safe but aren't and going to the predators and finding love. THAT is great, I love this bit, but we don't see any actual HEALING happen after all the abuse she went through. I need healing, not just "oh they love me and treat me great... hope I don't die so I can be with them!" It was bizarre.
Reading this was a huge letdown and I'm not sure I want to put myself through it again with the next book.
ALSO: both the author and the MC saying the MC wasn't raped because she asked for it, is toxic af. I get it is a grey area, but she was in heat. I don't care that the bunny shifters left her alone until she begged for them, OBVIOUSLY she was going to give in because shifters can die going through heat alone (this is actually mentioned in the book). Is it rape? Maybe not classically, but it is assault especially since women bunny shifters immediately mate with the men that get them through their first heat. So. What. The. Fuck.
Essentially she was given the choice of having sex with people she dislikes OR dying.
The absolute trauma Ellora goes through in this book is barely touched on or acknowledged at all.
October 30, 2025
This one wasn't bad, but it wasn't as good as the first one either. So much time was spent on letting us know how terrible the bunnies were, and not enough time on getting to know the wolves. It kinda felt like the author was trying to capture the magic of the first book, but failed. I'm currently reading the third one, and it's not fairing much better, but we'll see how I feel once I finish it.
2.5
2.5
April 2, 2024
Rushed and disappointing
This felt rushed - chapters, relationship building and plot shoved together and much shorter than the story needed.
An example would be how in a few paragraphs, she is mated, told she is wonderful, that her actions are inspiring and she is a warrior queen and then somehow after apparently years of neglect, accepts it all. This is also on a background of a huge character behaviour flip that apparently no character would have seen coming, and with the exception of tropes, the reader would also not given the very short interactions and descriptions we had had of them prior.
Either cut out whole sections like that and backstory, or give the novel twice the length, like it needs.
As someone who has read a lot of Ashe's work, this was disappointing and not what I have come to expect. Rushed, nothing I laughed at and awkward tell-not-show overt explanations that would have been better left skipped.
This felt rushed - chapters, relationship building and plot shoved together and much shorter than the story needed.
An example would be how in a few paragraphs, she is mated, told she is wonderful, that her actions are inspiring and she is a warrior queen and then somehow after apparently years of neglect, accepts it all. This is also on a background of a huge character behaviour flip that apparently no character would have seen coming, and with the exception of tropes, the reader would also not given the very short interactions and descriptions we had had of them prior.
Either cut out whole sections like that and backstory, or give the novel twice the length, like it needs.
As someone who has read a lot of Ashe's work, this was disappointing and not what I have come to expect. Rushed, nothing I laughed at and awkward tell-not-show overt explanations that would have been better left skipped.
June 28, 2024
I loved this one. It was so cute and so much fun to read. I can't wait for the next book. I just love there reactions to her in her bunny form it was hilarious.
May 7, 2025
Another sweet bunny shifter reverse harem standalone!
The following ratings are out of 5:
Romance: 🖤💙💜💚
Heat/Steam: 🔥🔥🔥
Story/Plot: 📕📗📙📘
World building: 🌏🌍🌎🌏
Character development: ☹️😋😀😘
Narration: 🎙🎙🎙🎙🎙
Narration Type: Dual Narration
The heroine: Ellora - she was a rabbit shifter whose parents and community elders had matched her to four male rabbits that she didn’t want to be mated to. She had no choice but to go through with it, even though her mates would not fully bond with her because they wanted to have their cake and eat it too. They treated her with indifference and told her outright that if she couldn’t produce heirs, they would turn her in for a better rabbit. They basically just used her for sex and for arm candy. She was determined to make them fall for her, but it wasn’t working for her.
The story: After Ellora’s mates embarrass and humiliate her by bringing another woman home, she finally figures out that she will never be loved by her mates. She is heartbroken and she runs away. Ellora sees the viral video from Monroe, another rabbit shifter who went against the rabbit shifter community and mated three wolf shifters in a love match. Monroe stated to all that if any rabbit shifter was in a dangerous or unpleasant situation, that she could come to Monroe for sanctuary with the wolf pack.
The Heroes: Quinn, Coda, Macarius - three brothers, wolf shifters in the large pack that one of Monroe’s mates is the alpha for. Quinn and Coda are easygoing and Macarius is known as a broody, grumpy wolf who likes his own space and is not fond of others visiting or staying at their house. When Macarius is away, Quinn and Coda are asked to protect Ellora in case her mates or her family come for her. The two of them fall for Ellora pretty quickly and want to keep her.
When Macarius returns, he doesn’t want Ellora staying in their house and immediately tells his brothers to find someplace else for her to stay. I always like a grumpy Hero, and Macarius is pretty set in his ways. He is older than Quinn and Coda and basically raised them. I enjoyed the fact that Ellora thinks she can’t ever have mates that love her because even though her original mates didn’t bond with her, her rabbit did bond with them, so she believes she will soon die because bunnies that are mated die if they are separated from their mate for any length of time.
The audiobook was told in multiple points of view and narrated via dual narration by Vanessa Moyen and Troy Duran. Troy Duran is one of my favorite male narrators, with a deep sexy voice and he is great at using different voices for different characters. Vanessa Moyen has a soft, feminine voice which is very pleasant and youthful sounding. She is expressive and both her and Troy do a fantastic job.
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The following ratings are out of 5:
Romance: 🖤💙💜💚
Heat/Steam: 🔥🔥🔥
Story/Plot: 📕📗📙📘
World building: 🌏🌍🌎🌏
Character development: ☹️😋😀😘
Narration: 🎙🎙🎙🎙🎙
Narration Type: Dual Narration
The heroine: Ellora - she was a rabbit shifter whose parents and community elders had matched her to four male rabbits that she didn’t want to be mated to. She had no choice but to go through with it, even though her mates would not fully bond with her because they wanted to have their cake and eat it too. They treated her with indifference and told her outright that if she couldn’t produce heirs, they would turn her in for a better rabbit. They basically just used her for sex and for arm candy. She was determined to make them fall for her, but it wasn’t working for her.
The story: After Ellora’s mates embarrass and humiliate her by bringing another woman home, she finally figures out that she will never be loved by her mates. She is heartbroken and she runs away. Ellora sees the viral video from Monroe, another rabbit shifter who went against the rabbit shifter community and mated three wolf shifters in a love match. Monroe stated to all that if any rabbit shifter was in a dangerous or unpleasant situation, that she could come to Monroe for sanctuary with the wolf pack.
The Heroes: Quinn, Coda, Macarius - three brothers, wolf shifters in the large pack that one of Monroe’s mates is the alpha for. Quinn and Coda are easygoing and Macarius is known as a broody, grumpy wolf who likes his own space and is not fond of others visiting or staying at their house. When Macarius is away, Quinn and Coda are asked to protect Ellora in case her mates or her family come for her. The two of them fall for Ellora pretty quickly and want to keep her.
When Macarius returns, he doesn’t want Ellora staying in their house and immediately tells his brothers to find someplace else for her to stay. I always like a grumpy Hero, and Macarius is pretty set in his ways. He is older than Quinn and Coda and basically raised them. I enjoyed the fact that Ellora thinks she can’t ever have mates that love her because even though her original mates didn’t bond with her, her rabbit did bond with them, so she believes she will soon die because bunnies that are mated die if they are separated from their mate for any length of time.
The audiobook was told in multiple points of view and narrated via dual narration by Vanessa Moyen and Troy Duran. Troy Duran is one of my favorite male narrators, with a deep sexy voice and he is great at using different voices for different characters. Vanessa Moyen has a soft, feminine voice which is very pleasant and youthful sounding. She is expressive and both her and Troy do a fantastic job.
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April 6, 2024
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This was another quick and fun read in the Hey There, Hop Stuff series and I enjoyed getting to explore more of this world again. I do think the story was a little rushed though and even going into it knowing that it would be on the shorter side didn't fully prepare me for just how fast it would move. I think I'm just a little disappointed there wasn't more shown between the main characters all together. They felt very divided at times in my opinion. But overall I did like seeing how the wolves were with Ellora and they all had their sweet moments.
Amazon US * Amazon UK
This was another quick and fun read in the Hey There, Hop Stuff series and I enjoyed getting to explore more of this world again. I do think the story was a little rushed though and even going into it knowing that it would be on the shorter side didn't fully prepare me for just how fast it would move. I think I'm just a little disappointed there wasn't more shown between the main characters all together. They felt very divided at times in my opinion. But overall I did like seeing how the wolves were with Ellora and they all had their sweet moments.
April 6, 2024
Ehh.. it’s too insta love for me. I mean Super quick. The second they see her bunny form they melt and accept her as their mate.
The entire book was very quick paced and I didn’t feel we got very much time with the wolf mates. The ending was rushed and unsatisfying. I would have liked to see the bunny mates get punished.
The entire book was very quick paced and I didn’t feel we got very much time with the wolf mates. The ending was rushed and unsatisfying. I would have liked to see the bunny mates get punished.
May 21, 2025
It was fun. Nothing groundbreaking, but I did enjoy that it didn't take itself seriously. The rabbit-related humor was a fun touch!
April 11, 2024
Too fast paced, short, everything felt rushed and nothing was really worked through. It was just alright.
April 2, 2024
3.4 stars.
April 3, 2024
2.25 Disappointing Stars
I found the first book in this series cute enough and unique enough to look forward to the 2nd. Alas, I was completely let down by this entry.
Usually I can ignore annoying exposition and just enjoy the story once it gets going, however I was still reading through clunky dialogue and info dumps at 83%. So I can't in good conscience give this book the 3 stars I was originally planning on.
This book's premise was good but the execution was so very lazy and elementary. Sadly, there wasn't enough plot, relationship building or even spicy scenes to save this one.
I found the first book in this series cute enough and unique enough to look forward to the 2nd. Alas, I was completely let down by this entry.
Usually I can ignore annoying exposition and just enjoy the story once it gets going, however I was still reading through clunky dialogue and info dumps at 83%. So I can't in good conscience give this book the 3 stars I was originally planning on.
This book's premise was good but the execution was so very lazy and elementary. Sadly, there wasn't enough plot, relationship building or even spicy scenes to save this one.
May 9, 2024
Spoilers ahead
While these books are not to be taken seriously this one is still a no for me.
In the beginning we experienced the h with their fluffle, she'd matched with them unwillingly but with her first heat her body gave her no choice and her bunny accepted them as her mate. We then watched her bend over backwards trying to get the men in her fluffle to claim her but they only used her for sex and to keep up appearances. When she's confronted with them being with another woman in her home she finally leaves.
She goes to the wolves for help and is immediately drawn to her protectors. I absolutely could not get over the first part of the book and how her rabbit had already claimed mates unworthy though they were.
There needed to be a bigger gap in time between the two matings 😭
Still a cute series but this one wasn't for me
While these books are not to be taken seriously this one is still a no for me.
In the beginning we experienced the h with their fluffle, she'd matched with them unwillingly but with her first heat her body gave her no choice and her bunny accepted them as her mate. We then watched her bend over backwards trying to get the men in her fluffle to claim her but they only used her for sex and to keep up appearances. When she's confronted with them being with another woman in her home she finally leaves.
She goes to the wolves for help and is immediately drawn to her protectors. I absolutely could not get over the first part of the book and how her rabbit had already claimed mates unworthy though they were.
There needed to be a bigger gap in time between the two matings 😭
Still a cute series but this one wasn't for me
April 4, 2024
3.5 stars
Ok, now *this* is the fluffiest shifter romance I’ve ever read (title last held by Better-Off Bunny, the first book in the series).
We have another bunny shifter FMC, three wolf shifter MMCs who find her the most adorable thing ever (cue lots of cuddling and snuggling), and another soap opera level side plot.
The MMCs all had ridiculous names and the pacing was a bit weird, but I still ate this up and I will be eating up the next instalment too, I’m sure.
Ok, now *this* is the fluffiest shifter romance I’ve ever read (title last held by Better-Off Bunny, the first book in the series).
We have another bunny shifter FMC, three wolf shifter MMCs who find her the most adorable thing ever (cue lots of cuddling and snuggling), and another soap opera level side plot.
The MMCs all had ridiculous names and the pacing was a bit weird, but I still ate this up and I will be eating up the next instalment too, I’m sure.
December 16, 2025
No hopping legs acquired*
*pun from book 1's review
In the first book, my biggest complaint was that absolute lack of worldbuilding. However,
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May 7, 2024
Romance:
April 3, 2024
I really liked the idea but the story was rushed. We barely got a chance to meet the fluffel before she leaves with no sense of time. Then she rushed into another heat with the wolves.
This could be a great story, if it was 100-125 pages longer.
This could be a great story, if it was 100-125 pages longer.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 5, 2024
My only complaint is that it wasn't longer. I wish there was more of a relationship built, and more of a plot because the idea is there and the chemistry is there!
This was a great second book to Ashe's series! I think I might have enjoyed this even more than the first one. I categorize these types of books as palate cleansers because it is short, sweet, to the point, and the conflict is pretty easily resolved. It's less for entertainment and more for relaxing. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing. I just think this book could be more.
This was a great second book to Ashe's series! I think I might have enjoyed this even more than the first one. I categorize these types of books as palate cleansers because it is short, sweet, to the point, and the conflict is pretty easily resolved. It's less for entertainment and more for relaxing. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing. I just think this book could be more.
June 2, 2024
Too short for the story to fit.
This was too big a story, in too complicated a world, to fit into so short a novella.
If it wants to be a light hearted romp, more silly than actual, it needs to simplify the world and plot (which would be a true shame..)
It doesn’t come off so much as fun, but rather shallow and incomplete.
Story lines are given starts and ends, but no filler for how we got there.
The focus is in the sex, but again, it’s rushed and more porno style in its rush to ‘thrust’ and ‘breed’.
No romance at all, little foreplay, and no seduction to be found.
I love the concept, love the potential, the silliness, absolutely adore the wolves. The dialogues is easy to read, and flows beautifully.
But the story just isn’t there.
I don’t mind having to do some of the work, filling in the gaps with my own imagination, but this was essentially having to provide all the best parts, while I only got to read tropey conclusions.
Not for me.
This was too big a story, in too complicated a world, to fit into so short a novella.
If it wants to be a light hearted romp, more silly than actual, it needs to simplify the world and plot (which would be a true shame..)
It doesn’t come off so much as fun, but rather shallow and incomplete.
Story lines are given starts and ends, but no filler for how we got there.
The focus is in the sex, but again, it’s rushed and more porno style in its rush to ‘thrust’ and ‘breed’.
No romance at all, little foreplay, and no seduction to be found.
I love the concept, love the potential, the silliness, absolutely adore the wolves. The dialogues is easy to read, and flows beautifully.
But the story just isn’t there.
I don’t mind having to do some of the work, filling in the gaps with my own imagination, but this was essentially having to provide all the best parts, while I only got to read tropey conclusions.
Not for me.
June 4, 2025
This book was 135 pages.
It’s way too little!!
There is not enough smut. There is a lot of bunny politics, which is annoying because the first book was also about the bunny world and how to break free from it.
We want to read about bunnies who need a new home and find refuge with a pack of wolves.
And mate with them.
That’s all we want.
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All the wolf guys are so sweet.
I wished we could have get more background to this pack. Especially the big brother who had “a different” wolf. We never got to see it :(
When will three wolf brothers find me and claim me??
2/5 stars.
These are cute fluffy books (hehe). I do wish there were more romantic scenes since all female bunnies are treated like trash in the beginning. They deserve all the happiness!
It’s way too little!!
There is not enough smut. There is a lot of bunny politics, which is annoying because the first book was also about the bunny world and how to break free from it.
We want to read about bunnies who need a new home and find refuge with a pack of wolves.
And mate with them.
That’s all we want.
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All the wolf guys are so sweet.
I wished we could have get more background to this pack. Especially the big brother who had “a different” wolf. We never got to see it :(
When will three wolf brothers find me and claim me??
2/5 stars.
These are cute fluffy books (hehe). I do wish there were more romantic scenes since all female bunnies are treated like trash in the beginning. They deserve all the happiness!
August 25, 2025
Bunny on the run
Ellora was placed in her fluffle and the men were certainly not interested in being faithful nor did they claim her back. When the opportunity presents itself she runs.
Finding a bunny in a diner who shows her a video advising bunnies to come to her and her wolves if they need help she knew exactly where to go.
This is such a sweet book. This terrified rabbit finds instant comfort in the arms of wolves. Will there be a way for her to still find her happy ending or will she die being away from her fluffle as she was always told growing up?
Ellora was placed in her fluffle and the men were certainly not interested in being faithful nor did they claim her back. When the opportunity presents itself she runs.
Finding a bunny in a diner who shows her a video advising bunnies to come to her and her wolves if they need help she knew exactly where to go.
This is such a sweet book. This terrified rabbit finds instant comfort in the arms of wolves. Will there be a way for her to still find her happy ending or will she die being away from her fluffle as she was always told growing up?
August 10, 2025
Cute quick read
Same as book 1. I wish the revenge was better for her parents and ex-mates though 😏
They deserved way worse than what they got in the end. I feel like it would have been much more satisfying if they all got their due.
Same as book 1. I wish the revenge was better for her parents and ex-mates though 😏
They deserved way worse than what they got in the end. I feel like it would have been much more satisfying if they all got their due.
April 6, 2024
This book was a hip hoppity wolf howling good time 🤪 I’m officially obsessed with Sedona Ashe. If you’re looking for a shifter romance, with banter, great plot and all the spiciness….pick this book up. It was so much fun!
October 13, 2024
Bunny Blues
Good, lots of assholes and mistreatment but in the end the good girl won.i was very pleased the wolves were the heroes.
Good, lots of assholes and mistreatment but in the end the good girl won.i was very pleased the wolves were the heroes.
May 9, 2024
I like the idea of cute little bunny shifters, but I didn’t like this book.
It was very short, so of course it’s insta lust/insta mates, wham bam thank you ma’am.
Honestly though maybe I’m expecting too much from these types of books
It was very short, so of course it’s insta lust/insta mates, wham bam thank you ma’am.
Honestly though maybe I’m expecting too much from these types of books
April 2, 2024
This was short, fun, and sweet.
May 18, 2024
I know this is an erotic book, but I feel like so little effort was put in here. overall it wasn't a bad read, but the same mistakes that were made in the first book in the series were repeated again. Does the author think is making a great mousse?
I know it's just a few pages, but it took MC longer to get to the city of wolves than the time it took with her mates. we actually had 3 whole chapters of her suffering in your old life before she finally ran away. we saw more of her former relationship than her current one. were so many pages necessary? the author is just trying to score points with the angst.
the dialogues remain ridiculous as in the previous book. his monologues don't sound natural, much less real conversations. The guys who did the kidnapping were supposed to be professionals at keeping up appearances, but they were super rudes in front of the wolves. What does not make sense. Men like them are manipulative and would tell sad stories about themselves and their parents, they would invent psychological diagnoses of the MC to convince they that she was mentally unstable, they would say that a simple and silly fight happened, but nothing like that would ever happen again. but not. they were 100% honest. and that's why it was 100% false and I couldn't even feel angry.
the same when she went to talk to her parents. they should have been in tears, or at least her mother and father would lecture her for making her mother sad. they should try to gain sympathy with the wolves and try to prove that they are being wronged. Do not attack when greeting them. which, again, doesn't make sense.
monroe was also a problem. she acted like a white /bunny savior but never called or texted the mc to ask how she is, much less did she visit her. Not that there would be time, anyway. I already said it, but I repeat, 3 days is enough for someone to fall in love at first sight, but not to develop a romance. the author missed the most important thing here. they love each other, ok. but I as a reader still don't feel that or I haven't had enough yet.
we had so much useless information dump. She loves cooking, perfect. I thought we would follow a journey of professional growth and personal fulfillment as she discovers herself in the kitchen as an incredible chef or pastry chef. right? wrong. After cooking for her exes, we never read about her stepping foot in a kitchen again. So what's the point of mentioning her passion? amateurism. just say that she cooked and worked hard to try to win the hearts of her exes, don't spend paragraphs on this supposed passion.
the convenience of it all irritated me too. Monroe's pack would find out if they were after her, but they were useless. not a single piece of information? but when her exes arrived at the right house and invaded with wolf bandits, they knew exactly how many days she had been there.
also had the villains' lack of punishment. Her exes left with some bruises. Nothing happened to Clarisse, the whore who had sex with all of her exes in her house knowing everything and consciously created a hostile space for MC to suffer in heat, so yes, she deserved to be punished. and nothing happened to her parents either. and I'm supposed to love this?
and the plot holes?
[1] all women get a harem at the age of 20 or 21, but Clarisse has already studied architecture, works in the field and still doesn't have one. interesting. She is also unaware that she may suffer the same fate as MC, as women have no choice in relating to evils.
[2] MC has a mother and a father. Shouldn't she have 3 or 4 fathers?
and can I confess something? Everything irritated me so much that despite this being an erotic book, when it finally came to the hot chapter, I skipped it. I was already fed up. I just don't give it 1 star, because I know this story could have been much better.
and about the bonus chapter. I was interested that we will have a male and female rabbit in the next book, but it's annoying that the formula is repeated. Will it be like this in all books? rabbits seeking shelter with monroe's pack and them acting like tinder and assigning a good pack to these defenseless rabbits? Monroe's pack should soon open a shelter for rabbits. I'd like to see these rabbits meet their wolf mates in other ways. and It's obvious that the girl is already in heat. it is clear. because this story boils down to insta love without development and heat.
no. I won't read the third one when it comes out.
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PT-BR
eu sei que esse é um livro erótico, mas sinto que tão pouco esforço foi aplicado aqui. no geral não foi uma leitura ruim, mas os mesmos erros que foram cometidos no primeiro livro da série voltaram a se repetir. a autora acha que está fazendo um grande mousse?
eu sei que são poucas páginas, mas a mc levou mais tempo para chegar na cidade dos lobos do que o tempo que levou com seus companheiros. na verdade tivemos 3 capítulos inteiros dela sofrendo na sua antiga vida antes de finalmente fugir. vimos mais do seu antigo relacionamento do que do atual. eram necessárias tantas páginas? a autora só está tentando ganhar pontos com a angústia.
então os diálogos continuam ridículos como no livro anterior. seus monólogos não soam naturais muito menos conversas reais. os caras que foram a sequestrar deveriam ser profissionais em manter as aparências, mas eles foram super desagradáveis na frente dos lobos. o que não faz sentido. homens como eles são manipuladores e contariam histórias tristes sobre eles e seus pais, inventariam diagnósticos psicológicos da mc para convencer de que ela era mentalmente instável, diriam que aconteceu uma briga simples e boba, mas nunca mais nada do tipo iria acontecer de novo. mas não. eles foram 100% honestos. e por isso foi 100% falso e não consegui nem sentir raiva.
o mesmo quando ela foi conversar com seus pais. eles deveriam estar aos prantos, ou pelo menos sua mãe e seu pai lhe daria um sermão por deixar sua mãe triste. eles deveriam tentar ganhar simpatia com os lobos e tentar provar que estão sendo injustiçados. não os atacar ao cumprimentá-los. o que, de novo, não faz sentido.
monroe também foi um problema. ela agiu como uma white / bunny savior, mas nunca ligou ou mandou mensagem para a mc perguntando como ela está, muito menos a visitou. não que desse tempo, de qualquer forma. já disse, mas repito, 3 dias é o suficiente para alguém se apaixonar a primeira vista, mas não para desenvolver um romance. a autora perdeu o mais importante aqui. ele se amam, ok. mas eu como leitor ainda não sinto isso ou ainda não tive o suficiente.
tivemos tanto despejo de informação inútil. ela ama cozinhar, perfeito. eu pensei que acompanharíamos uma jornada de crescimento profissional e realização pessoal dela se descobrindo na cozinha como uma incrível chef ou confeiteira. certo? errado. depois de cozinhar para seus exs, nunca lemos sobre ela pisar em uma cozinha de novo. então qual o sentido de citar essa sua paixão? amadorismo. apenas diga que ela cozinhou e se esforçou para tentar ganhar o coração dos seus exs, não gaste parágrafos sobre essa suposta paixão.
a conveniência de tudo me irritou também. a matilha de monroe iria descobrir se estavam atrás dela, mas eles foram uns inúteis que não serviram de nada. nem uma única informação? mas quando seus exs chegaram na casa certa e invadiram com lobos bandidos, eles sabiam exatamente quantos dias ela estava lá.
também teve a falta de punição dos vilões. seus exs saíram com alguns hematomas. nada aconteceu com clarisse, a puta que transou com todos seus exs em sua casa sabendo de tudo e conscientemente criou um espaço hostil para que a mc sofresse em seu cio, então sim, ela merecia ser castigada. e nada aconteceu com seus pais também. e eu deveria amar isso?
e os furos de roteiro?
[1] todas as mulheres ganham um harém aos 20 ou 21 anos, mas Clarisse já estudou arquitetura, trabalha na área e ainda não tem. interessante. Ela também não sabe que pode sofrer o mesmo destino de MC, já que as mulheres não têm escolha em se relacionar com os males.
[2] a mc tem uma mãe e um pai. ela não deveria ter 3 ou 4 pais?
e posso confessar algo? tudo me irritou tanto que apesar desse ser um livro erótico, quando chegou finalmente no capítulo do hot, eu pulei. já estava de saco cheio. só não dou 1 estrela, porque eu sei que essa história poderia ter sido muito melhor.
e sobre o capítulo bônus. fiquei interessada que teremos um coelho macho e uma fêmea no próximo livro, mas é irritante que a fórmula se repita. Será assim em todos os livros? coelhos buscando abrigo com a matilha de Monroe e eles agindo como tinder, atribuindo uma boa matilha para esses coelhos indefesos? a matilha de Monroe deverá abrir em breve um abrigo para coelhos. eu gostaria de ver esses coelhos conhecendo seus companheiros lobos de outras maneiras. e é óbvio que a menina já está no cio. está claro. porque essa história se resume a amor instantâneo sem desenvolvimento e cio.
não. não vou ler o terceiro quando lançar.
I know it's just a few pages, but it took MC longer to get to the city of wolves than the time it took with her mates. we actually had 3 whole chapters of her suffering in your old life before she finally ran away. we saw more of her former relationship than her current one. were so many pages necessary? the author is just trying to score points with the angst.
the dialogues remain ridiculous as in the previous book. his monologues don't sound natural, much less real conversations. The guys who did the kidnapping were supposed to be professionals at keeping up appearances, but they were super rudes in front of the wolves. What does not make sense. Men like them are manipulative and would tell sad stories about themselves and their parents, they would invent psychological diagnoses of the MC to convince they that she was mentally unstable, they would say that a simple and silly fight happened, but nothing like that would ever happen again. but not. they were 100% honest. and that's why it was 100% false and I couldn't even feel angry.
the same when she went to talk to her parents. they should have been in tears, or at least her mother and father would lecture her for making her mother sad. they should try to gain sympathy with the wolves and try to prove that they are being wronged. Do not attack when greeting them. which, again, doesn't make sense.
monroe was also a problem. she acted like a white /bunny savior but never called or texted the mc to ask how she is, much less did she visit her. Not that there would be time, anyway. I already said it, but I repeat, 3 days is enough for someone to fall in love at first sight, but not to develop a romance. the author missed the most important thing here. they love each other, ok. but I as a reader still don't feel that or I haven't had enough yet.
we had so much useless information dump. She loves cooking, perfect. I thought we would follow a journey of professional growth and personal fulfillment as she discovers herself in the kitchen as an incredible chef or pastry chef. right? wrong. After cooking for her exes, we never read about her stepping foot in a kitchen again. So what's the point of mentioning her passion? amateurism. just say that she cooked and worked hard to try to win the hearts of her exes, don't spend paragraphs on this supposed passion.
the convenience of it all irritated me too. Monroe's pack would find out if they were after her, but they were useless. not a single piece of information? but when her exes arrived at the right house and invaded with wolf bandits, they knew exactly how many days she had been there.
also had the villains' lack of punishment. Her exes left with some bruises. Nothing happened to Clarisse, the whore who had sex with all of her exes in her house knowing everything and consciously created a hostile space for MC to suffer in heat, so yes, she deserved to be punished. and nothing happened to her parents either. and I'm supposed to love this?
and the plot holes?
[1] all women get a harem at the age of 20 or 21, but Clarisse has already studied architecture, works in the field and still doesn't have one. interesting. She is also unaware that she may suffer the same fate as MC, as women have no choice in relating to evils.
[2] MC has a mother and a father. Shouldn't she have 3 or 4 fathers?
and can I confess something? Everything irritated me so much that despite this being an erotic book, when it finally came to the hot chapter, I skipped it. I was already fed up. I just don't give it 1 star, because I know this story could have been much better.
and about the bonus chapter. I was interested that we will have a male and female rabbit in the next book, but it's annoying that the formula is repeated. Will it be like this in all books? rabbits seeking shelter with monroe's pack and them acting like tinder and assigning a good pack to these defenseless rabbits? Monroe's pack should soon open a shelter for rabbits. I'd like to see these rabbits meet their wolf mates in other ways. and It's obvious that the girl is already in heat. it is clear. because this story boils down to insta love without development and heat.
no. I won't read the third one when it comes out.
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PT-BR
eu sei que esse é um livro erótico, mas sinto que tão pouco esforço foi aplicado aqui. no geral não foi uma leitura ruim, mas os mesmos erros que foram cometidos no primeiro livro da série voltaram a se repetir. a autora acha que está fazendo um grande mousse?
eu sei que são poucas páginas, mas a mc levou mais tempo para chegar na cidade dos lobos do que o tempo que levou com seus companheiros. na verdade tivemos 3 capítulos inteiros dela sofrendo na sua antiga vida antes de finalmente fugir. vimos mais do seu antigo relacionamento do que do atual. eram necessárias tantas páginas? a autora só está tentando ganhar pontos com a angústia.
então os diálogos continuam ridículos como no livro anterior. seus monólogos não soam naturais muito menos conversas reais. os caras que foram a sequestrar deveriam ser profissionais em manter as aparências, mas eles foram super desagradáveis na frente dos lobos. o que não faz sentido. homens como eles são manipuladores e contariam histórias tristes sobre eles e seus pais, inventariam diagnósticos psicológicos da mc para convencer de que ela era mentalmente instável, diriam que aconteceu uma briga simples e boba, mas nunca mais nada do tipo iria acontecer de novo. mas não. eles foram 100% honestos. e por isso foi 100% falso e não consegui nem sentir raiva.
o mesmo quando ela foi conversar com seus pais. eles deveriam estar aos prantos, ou pelo menos sua mãe e seu pai lhe daria um sermão por deixar sua mãe triste. eles deveriam tentar ganhar simpatia com os lobos e tentar provar que estão sendo injustiçados. não os atacar ao cumprimentá-los. o que, de novo, não faz sentido.
monroe também foi um problema. ela agiu como uma white / bunny savior, mas nunca ligou ou mandou mensagem para a mc perguntando como ela está, muito menos a visitou. não que desse tempo, de qualquer forma. já disse, mas repito, 3 dias é o suficiente para alguém se apaixonar a primeira vista, mas não para desenvolver um romance. a autora perdeu o mais importante aqui. ele se amam, ok. mas eu como leitor ainda não sinto isso ou ainda não tive o suficiente.
tivemos tanto despejo de informação inútil. ela ama cozinhar, perfeito. eu pensei que acompanharíamos uma jornada de crescimento profissional e realização pessoal dela se descobrindo na cozinha como uma incrível chef ou confeiteira. certo? errado. depois de cozinhar para seus exs, nunca lemos sobre ela pisar em uma cozinha de novo. então qual o sentido de citar essa sua paixão? amadorismo. apenas diga que ela cozinhou e se esforçou para tentar ganhar o coração dos seus exs, não gaste parágrafos sobre essa suposta paixão.
a conveniência de tudo me irritou também. a matilha de monroe iria descobrir se estavam atrás dela, mas eles foram uns inúteis que não serviram de nada. nem uma única informação? mas quando seus exs chegaram na casa certa e invadiram com lobos bandidos, eles sabiam exatamente quantos dias ela estava lá.
também teve a falta de punição dos vilões. seus exs saíram com alguns hematomas. nada aconteceu com clarisse, a puta que transou com todos seus exs em sua casa sabendo de tudo e conscientemente criou um espaço hostil para que a mc sofresse em seu cio, então sim, ela merecia ser castigada. e nada aconteceu com seus pais também. e eu deveria amar isso?
e os furos de roteiro?
[1] todas as mulheres ganham um harém aos 20 ou 21 anos, mas Clarisse já estudou arquitetura, trabalha na área e ainda não tem. interessante. Ela também não sabe que pode sofrer o mesmo destino de MC, já que as mulheres não têm escolha em se relacionar com os males.
[2] a mc tem uma mãe e um pai. ela não deveria ter 3 ou 4 pais?
e posso confessar algo? tudo me irritou tanto que apesar desse ser um livro erótico, quando chegou finalmente no capítulo do hot, eu pulei. já estava de saco cheio. só não dou 1 estrela, porque eu sei que essa história poderia ter sido muito melhor.
e sobre o capítulo bônus. fiquei interessada que teremos um coelho macho e uma fêmea no próximo livro, mas é irritante que a fórmula se repita. Será assim em todos os livros? coelhos buscando abrigo com a matilha de Monroe e eles agindo como tinder, atribuindo uma boa matilha para esses coelhos indefesos? a matilha de Monroe deverá abrir em breve um abrigo para coelhos. eu gostaria de ver esses coelhos conhecendo seus companheiros lobos de outras maneiras. e é óbvio que a menina já está no cio. está claro. porque essa história se resume a amor instantâneo sem desenvolvimento e cio.
não. não vou ler o terceiro quando lançar.
April 24, 2024
Okay I’m officially out on this series. I liked the premise but it’s just tooooooo damn cheesy for me. See the 50 million animal puns highlighted.
We have literal cartoon villains in the bunny shifter community for the second time. The lore being bunny shifters is locked away by the “elders” conveniently so the actual mechanics behind mating can be changed to fit the new scenario 🙄
I just don’t see the big bad antisocial wolf becoming a punny dopey piggy bag giving after like 3 days of meeting his mate. Also I’m so sick of there always being one guy in the pack/harem who’s against the woman joining but ending up being the first to claim her. It’s tired and overdone.
These 3 wolves don’t have any personality at all, no differentiation between them, and literally only fall in love due to the mating bond. This book happens so fast I feel no connection to the characters or their love story. The next book doesn’t come out until next year and I definitely won’t care to read it.
We have literal cartoon villains in the bunny shifter community for the second time. The lore being bunny shifters is locked away by the “elders” conveniently so the actual mechanics behind mating can be changed to fit the new scenario 🙄
I just don’t see the big bad antisocial wolf becoming a punny dopey piggy bag giving after like 3 days of meeting his mate. Also I’m so sick of there always being one guy in the pack/harem who’s against the woman joining but ending up being the first to claim her. It’s tired and overdone.
These 3 wolves don’t have any personality at all, no differentiation between them, and literally only fall in love due to the mating bond. This book happens so fast I feel no connection to the characters or their love story. The next book doesn’t come out until next year and I definitely won’t care to read it.
April 29, 2024
This is quite bad but also funny. "Sweater pups" 🤣
April 19, 2024
Was this book ridiculous? Yes. Do I care? No. Did I love it? Yes! This is not great literature by any means, it is trashy garbage ... but it was pretty good shifter trashy garbage. Which I love. If you're here for the storyline, probably give up. If you want to read about a sad bunny shifter who escapes her abusive fluffle, to end up in the arms of wolf shifters and they get down pretty much immediately, then I highly recommend.
There's a lot of juicy dramatics that go on and the FMC is low key kind of badass. While she might have been kind of a door mat while she put up with the antics of her shitbag fluffle members, once she gets the nerve to leave them, she really stands up for herself. Really takes matters into her own hands and doesn't even give in to them when they break into the wolf's house to try and take her back. Even though the wolves sweep in knock her off her bunny feet, she could have held her own. And really, that's the best you can ask for. Knowing that you can take care of your own shit, but having someone else there to do it for you.
I recommend this shifter smut book for sure! I enjoyed the hell out of it. And if you're into shifter smut and liked the first book in this series, you'll definitely like this one.
There's a lot of juicy dramatics that go on and the FMC is low key kind of badass. While she might have been kind of a door mat while she put up with the antics of her shitbag fluffle members, once she gets the nerve to leave them, she really stands up for herself. Really takes matters into her own hands and doesn't even give in to them when they break into the wolf's house to try and take her back. Even though the wolves sweep in knock her off her bunny feet, she could have held her own. And really, that's the best you can ask for. Knowing that you can take care of your own shit, but having someone else there to do it for you.
I recommend this shifter smut book for sure! I enjoyed the hell out of it. And if you're into shifter smut and liked the first book in this series, you'll definitely like this one.
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