So it turns out the plot of Sense and Sensibility was written to be my enemy, but I sure did love Bear and Nora. The problem was that they simply weren’t together enough. Like the entire second half of the book. I’m obsessed with them, but wow the last three hours of that book were made to test me. As for the audiobook, I really enjoyed both performances!!
**Spoilers below! It probably just spoils the plot of Sense and Sensibility more than anything but just be warned.**
I’m weaaaaak. I just wanted to see his hair braided without the suffering (Bear’s, Nora’s, mine)😩. The way the book was written at the beginning included a LOT of time jumps that I wish didn’t jump. A lot of the renovation content and even some foundational parts of their relationship were skipped and then summed up for us. This made space for the drawn out second half of the book, which just kind of hurts.
I think it’s a case of the book being too tied to the source material or too focused on being something else. (And me not remembering the source material enough to know that I would be epically pissed off.) Like Nikki created such beautiful characters in Bear and Nora that this didn’t need every Sense and Sensibility plot element added. I mean I think if you like Sense and Sensibility you’ll love this, I’m just selfish and want this book without whatever the hell Jane was on.
Like call me crazy but when the hero is so close to getting married to ANOTHER woman that he said the vows, I’m GOING to be angry. He was going to do it, a technicality got in the way. Self sacrifice just isn’t romantic to me. He needed to be the one to fully end it. He said all the vows!! Someone objected that’s the only reason he’s not married!!
Tell me why marrying a woman he didn’t love for the inheritance made more sense than at least marrying the woman he did love for the money???? I get why they ~wouldn’t~ have done that, but why wasn’t it even an option?? Don’t even get me started on the rest of the Lu plot because I legit can’t handle it. (Whispers *I did enjoy their scene at the pharmacy though.*)
I can handle the “good boy” though like more of that please!!! It was a lot hotter than Pride & Protest. My only gripe was that they kept getting interrupted. They were soooooo hot together I just want more of them being happy!! I also loved her giving back that dress at the funeral and telling the town to fuck themselves at that pharmacy over the intercom. Bucket! List! Item!!! I was always on Nora’s side, Bear just made it a liiiittle hard for me to love him which in turn made it EASIER to love him because he was such a nice guy. He just needed to say no sooner.
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It’s hard because, duh, I wasn’t duped or anything; this is very clearly marketed as a Sense and Sensibility retelling! But I also can’t change the fact that I didn’t enjoy a good deal of the plot. It was frustrating seeing one path for the characters and then knowing they were going down another because that’s what S&S did. But again, if you love S&S or don’t mind weird non emotional but severely toxic and transactional love triangles (????) then I bet it’s for you and I’m jealous.
Given the fact that this was beautifully written, includes a Black heroine and an Abenaki hero, and was hot hot HOT, I’d pick this up to reread any day before the original. I originally rounded down for Goodreads, but the more I sat and thought about the book, the more I valued what it added to S&S. So I’m rounding up for Goodreads because it did improve on the original for me, which is the hope for any retelling I pick up I think??? It just had the issue of retelling a plot that I was never going to love—that’s on me though I should’ve Sparknoted S&S to prepare myself.
To sum it up, apparently there was a reason I failed my Sense and Sensibility quiz in college. Nikki’s writing remains wonderful, and I’m excited to see what she does next. Her take on Emma will SLAP. Like if Bear was this much of a simp…Knightley will cause me bodily harm. And the humor!!
⭐️⭐️⭐️.5/5 🌶️🌶️.75/5
Thanks so much to PRHaudio for an ALC and to Berkley Romance for a finished copy. All opinions are honest and my own.