Happy release day!
Thanks to Sourcebooks Casablanca for a copy of this before it comes out on April 11th. I found this a hot mess, but the world strangely endearing? So I'm rating it up to help hopefully get more books.
First things first - like my friend Meg noticed too, this book is being entirely mis-advertised. It is much more a diverse urban fantasy than the epic fantasy the marketing and cover are trying to suggest; comparing it to Maas and others' work is setting it up for failure, in my opinion, and its diversity and representation don't deserve that. The plot takes place over about 24 hours, within which: the main romantic pairing meet, Punch is introduced to the supernatural world, she's cursed and must find a solution, then the main pair get together, confessions of love and all. So. A lot happens in a little time. This author's wheelhouse appears to be fast-paced contemporary romantic suspense, and this read as that to me, only with supernatural beings and cool Thai lore, so I think people should adjust their expectations.
It's simultaneously enjoyable and not great, though. I could have done without the romance at all, as well as the POV changes (Marie and Thomas are super randomly added near the end?). The book would be improved if Bennett's POV were cut. The irony is that Punch calls out THOMAS for being patronizing, and also notes Francesco "mansplaining" away, when...Bennett does all of the above, a lot. Bennett also overrides Punch's physical autonomy several times, picking her up to carry her around; and like, usually I love a good bridal carry, but not when it hits unpleasantly like this did every time. He doesn't ask her consent most times, either, and this bothered me especially because the girl is already under the influence of cursed shoes that compel her to move, so there's that pre-existing lack of free will going on. Other than that, Bennett is a fairly [boring] typical vampire archetype, dark and brooding. The only cool thing was his blood-reading powers; when he feeds from people, the 'notes' in their blood, like those in wine, show their character and past deeds.
It felt like there were missed opportunities; exploring the vulnerabilities of the vampires being "dead" during the day was one. The two main characters read as completely flat for me, the book being more plot-driven than anything requiring expansion of their personalities, I guess. Also, the main climax of the book is only half experienced by the reader, and then awkwardly like, recapped by the characters at dinner the next day? It was a hell of a narrative choice; in fact, I have to respect some of the gutsy choices made in this book. Punch has a pair of animal companions whom I won't spoil here that show up randomly and remain entertaining. There is a hilarious scene near the beginning where There Was Only One Electric Scooter, which I enjoyed, and also a sexy vampiric feeding scene near the beginning that was also well done.
Other good parts include Marie the witch, and Thomas the hot Thai werewolf. I hope further installments offer other characters' stories rather than more Punch or Bennett - the chemistry-laden scene featuring Marie and a couple of nine-tailed foxes was spicier than anything between the main pair in this book, for me. Ashke the tiny fae was hilarious, wanting a corgi steed. I liked the gang when they were together, the found family camaraderie and bonding over cultural cuisines was charming. The blending of global folklore, like the dancing red shoes brought into this, was cool.
Four stars and good luck to this book!