Overall underwhelming. I found the sexual themes in cohesive. There are stories that read like trauma dumping trashy texts. There were a few strong stories. I’m reviewing my favourite:
Nothing but a Legacy tells a bittersweet story of a young boy named John-John, whose innocent and observant perspective emphasizes tension in his complex family dynamics.
Set at night in their kitchen, the narrative opens with John-John and his father, who is drinking to pass the time while loosely engaging in their card game.
The story weaves together vivid flashbacks to interactions between John-John and his family. His older brothers, Lukey and Mark, are referred to as a “legacy,” as they are in a pattern of doing things they shouldn’t be doing. John-John remains naïve to their intentions and motivations. His sense of longing for the unknown that lies just within arm's reach is astutely articulated throughout the story.
“Lukey sent me in to get a cigarette from Mom’s package on the table. Then he let me hold the string attached to the stick.” The story is best told from John-John’s unique perspective because it allows readers to experience the intense highs and lows of each moment, which are often blurred in adulthood. The underlying themes have not yet registered with him, inviting us to empathize in the moment with his innocent viewpoint.
“Yesterday Lukey taught me how to trap a tomcat. One medium-sized cardboard box, one paint stick, a long piece of string, and a plate of tinned ham.” The narrative offers convincing scenes that explore the unspoken truce of a sibling relationship and John-John’s enduring innocence.
The dialogue is written in Hynes's own voice, informal and enriched with the dialect of Newfoundland English, evident in little snippets like “I looks…” and “I watches…” John-John’s voice is masterfully crafted to be both assertive and hopeful, fostering an intimate relationship between him and the reader. “The picture burned into my head, like when you looks at a light bulb and then tries to look at something else,” he says, after witnessing an event he wasn't meant to see. This moment encapsulates a profound sense of discovery and growth, capturing the essence of lost innocence.
The family is painted with simple but crisp imagery. “He tromps out to the back porch, opens the door, and stands there staring out at the track, chugging his beer. It’s pitch-black and the wind is up.”
As the title suggests, John-John will likely follow in the footsteps of his family, inheriting their complex legacies.
The final anecdote builds throughout the narrative but could benefit from additional connective phrases and context for smoother transitions between flashbacks and the present. It is unclear whether the key event that took place the prior week is being discussed in current time or in flashback.
Readers who have experienced older influencers that were both cool and problematic will continue to yearn for more time with John-John after the story's comedic and bittersweet end.
Nothing but a Legacy is a rich exploration of a child's perspective through familial complexities told by a boy who remains hopeful amid chaos. Hynes leaves readers reflecting on our own experiences with family legacies and the bittersweet nature of the influences tethered to the loss of childhood innocence.
Joel Thomas Hynes was born in Culvert, Newfoundland and Labrador. His latest novel, We’ll All Be Burnt in Our Beds Some Night, won the 2017 Governor General’s Award for Fiction, the BMO Winterset Award, the NLB Award for Fiction, and was longlisted for the Scotiabank Giller Prize. His debut novel, Down to the Dirt, was adapted into a film. He holds an MFA in Creative Nonfiction from the University of King’s College. Hynes is also the creator of the hit TV show Little Dog, a CBC comedy series.