In what I consider easily the best of the first three Michigan Chillers, author Christopher Wright (aka Johnathan Rand) takes us to the sunset-ful city of Petoskey, Michigan, where twelve-year-old twins Alex (a girl) and Adrian must win a battle of wits with the poltergeist who prowls their basement...or risk losing their mortal lives.
The old farmhouse in Petoskey is a huge estate, and not in the best of condition when Alex and Adrian's family moved into it. Concentrated renovations have produced wonders in the house, however, and it's shaping up to be a great place to live by the time the twins begin noticing the eerie goings-on. Footsteps sound up and down the stairs with no one in sight, cupboards open and slam closed by themselves, and glasses of ice water mysteriously appear on the kitchen counter with no one there to have poured them. Alex and Adrian are spooked, with no idea what's behind these incidents, but their fears take form when a pair of poltergeist siblings their own age show up to explain what's happening. Conversing with a couple of ghosts is far from what Alex and Adrian expected from their first months in the new house, but at least now they know the cause of all the spectral phenomena.
It turns out the farmhouse has a history of hauntings, and the young poltergeist twins (Catherine and Caleb) aren't the only haints hanging out here. Alex, Adrian, and their parents need to be cautious where they tread in the house, because a malevolently mischievous spirit eagerly waits to bring them to ruin if they intrude in its space. Now time is running out for Alex and Adrian to solve the conundrum of the multiple poltergeists and save their own lives from the careless harm inflicted by the denizens of the next world. If they can't settle the situation soon, their futures could be cut short at age twelve, their move to the farmhouse morphing into a nightmare from which they will never awaken. Is there a way to rescind the curse that threatens their existence and construct a peaceable conclusion for everyone before they reach an unfortunate end?
In my opinion, Poltergeists of Petoskey is a remarkable improvement on the previous two Michigan Chillers, and I enjoyed those, too. The writing and punctuation style is still jarringly nonstandard, but the narrative has a smoother feel, and the pace quickens favorably after the main climax, where there's business to take care of after the book's primary danger has been addressed. The conclusion of the story is genuinely heartfelt and not overdone in the slightest, delivering a memorable goodbye to these characters who have made a surprisingly deep home in our sentiments. From the book: "It was so strange—just yesterday morning, if you would have asked me if I believed in ghosts, I would have said 'no way'...but today, I considered two ghosts among my very best friends." Poltergeists of Petoskey is a positive indicator that the author continues to improve his storytelling even following significant commercial success, and I look forward to more of that storytelling in the fourth installment of the series, Aliens Attack Alpena, and beyond. I liked and recommended Johnathan Rand's Michigan Chillers before reading Poltergeists of Petoskey, and now I appreciate the series even more. I'm pleased to know that others feel the same way.