I read this book in preparation to teach to a Y7 class (11-12 year olds). Whilst the writing was good and there was nothing glaringly wrong with the characters (in fact, Y7s would probably find the characters relatable and engaging), I think I became a little confused with the message of this book.
Essentially, I think Clay takes a lot of inspiration from Frankenstein. It's about the creation of a "human" through "unnatural" means, and the responsibility required once this creature has been created. The story mirrors Frankenstein's ideas of committing crimes against humanity (i.e. breaking natural laws, such as birth), nature vs nurture, evil vs good, you name it. Davie is caught in between these two worlds, with an unknown power he is capable of to bring life to inanimate objects, one he doesn't discover until meeting Stephen Rose.
As this is, it's a faithful representation of Frankenstein that is accessible to kids. But... there was just something that made me wonder whether the message is only that.
Davie begins in the "normal" world. He adheres loosely to Catholic ideals and morals, he has a love-interest in his year, and he although he isn't perfect, he is, ultimately, a very ordinary boy. Then, out of the blue, Stephen Rose makes friends with Davie. He makes Davie stray from the path of the ordinary, stepping into a world of "evil", "straying" from God and lies and deceit.
Again, OK. Fine. A simple representation, if not a little black and white.
Then, out of the blue, Stephen kisses Davie on the cheek. It's random, and the characters all make fun of Davie about it, and Davie doesn't deny it happened. This event also occurs when Stephen has witnessed Davie kiss Maria. He also says, "Don't bother with the lass," moments before, because he wants Davie to hang out with him instead and learn about his powers.
It felt... out of place. And it really put a damper on the story for me, because progressively Davie pulls away from his life - his family, friends, Maria, and eventually God - as he starts only hanging out with Stephen. It's difficult to explain, and I won't say Almond intended this at all, but it's almost as though, lumped in with the rest of "evil" is homosexuality. Why does Stephen behave romantically towards Davie right after Davie is romantic with Maria? It creates a weird contrast between those two relationships immediately, and tied in with everything else, it comes across as "being gay is on the evil side". I don't know if that's a message I would want to teach my Y7s. I don't even know if I'm just over-thinking it, or whether me being older means that I notice things such as this, whereas an 11 year old would not. I really don't know, but it's a small thing that happened in the book without explanation or reason, and it... stuck with me. I suppose I worry that, if a child is considering their sexuality, small things like this may not impact others, but may be overthought and mean something greater to them?
Then again, I'm not sure if anyone else thought this, too. I only really noticed this because it was so heavily contrasted with Davie's wonderful romantic evening with Maria. Nothing else in the story is developed from this, so it wasn't exactly relevant to the plot, other than Stephen perhaps trying to alienate Davie? Still, this isn't a great message. I really didn't understand that part, and it gave me a sour taste for the rest of the book.
Overall... I don't know. I've given it a two, but perhaps I'll make it a 3 if my Y7s love it. The "monster" is this book is a great character; he's endearing and a perfect representation of "don't judge a book by it's over". This book does a good job of contrasting the monstrous but kind monster with the human but evil Stephen, but I'm not sure all of the complex, morally grey concepts of Shelley's Frankenstein have been effectively translated into Clay. Whether you read this in class, or to your own children, or yourself, is up to your own discretion. I don't want someone to not read a book, as someone has worked hard to write this, so I would say to read it, only so you can develop your own opinion and perhaps maybe you will understand the messages of this book better than I did.