This had the makings to be good but really fell flat due to some major holes.
Are the police supposed to be bumbling idiots? I couldn’t tell if we were supposed to think they were doing a good job or not, but I thought they were absolute morons. First, the kidnappers reach out and say that this is happening because of a secret that a parent has. Ok, so you’d think the immediate police reaction would be to…interview the parents, right? NOPE. There’s no interrogation of the parents, they just review their past arrests (or lack thereof) and throw their hands up. What??? If the kidnapper has reached out and hinted at the reason for the kidnapping, you better believe none of the parents in question are going to be let off the hook like that! It was unreal. The detectives instead interview the principal for the third time (?!?!) in case she has any insight into the parents’ deep dark secrets. HUH??? Why don’t you just go straight to the source!!?? Then it turns out they had actually SEARCHED the building where the 13 people were being hidden, and the police didn’t notice brand new locks on this decrepit location? Ok. Nice work. Then, when they have identified that the abductees are very likely being held in the old mansion, they just sit around? Hello? What? I’m not sure what they do in England but I’m pretty sure whatever the British equivalent of a SWAT team would’ve been there in under an hour. Then they let a civilian in to talk to the mastermind because they’re afraid she’s going to kill the kids before the kidnap specialists show up. Ummm. The mastermind is inside of a bunker. She has no idea you’re there. They should’ve just let things play out and all the kids would’ve been safe. It made no sense.
On the other hand, the parents are also aware that their kids have been abducted due to one of their secrets, and they keep repeatedly saying they’ll do anything to get their kids back. Anything, except, it seems, DIVULGE THEIR SECRETS TO THE POLICE. Lol. Ok. Instead they blow up their marriages and social lives by sharing them with each other.
And finally, to be frank, what Reynold did wasn’t even that awful. Ok, having an affair with someone he has power over is sexual harassment and inappropriate for the workplace, urging her to get an abortion is shitty, and then having his boxer friend go threaten her is scary, but uhhh the people who ran someone over and then drove away and covered it up are DEF WORSE. I just felt like the lengths Cally, Brandon, and Oscar went to to make this dude suffer were nonsensical given the actual role he played. They made it seem like he had done something way more heinous. Also the twist at the end with Cally being twins with Oscar was just like…I don’t care. It didn’t feel exciting or even interesting. I didn’t care that Reynold ended up killing his own son. It was just like trying too hard to be a soap opera at that point.
So this was a 3 for me. The writing itself was fine, but the plot has MAJOR issues. Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the e-arc in exchange for my honest review.