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212 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 13, 2011
This is a book with really excellent prose. As I was reading, it was almost a feeling of, "Oh that's right, this is how nice prose can be, wow!". However, I found the story fell flat. I didn't really connect with either of the two protagonists, and as intriguing as the world-building was, even by the end of the book, it seemed like it couldn't decide between dream-like erotic fantasy (which follows Rule of Sexy and doesn't really need to make sense under scrutiny) and actual strong world-building.
The D/s dynamic between the protagonists was fine, but not especially my thing. I think I've gotten a bit spoiled by internet writing; I know this would've had a few tags that would've told me it wouldn't be my cup of tea, haha.
Overall, it was a good airplane read, but I don't think I'll be checking out the other books in this series.