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Lone Star Lovers #5
A Four-Gone Conclusion
One devilish night…or a chance at heaven? Lone Star Lovers, Book 5Sam Logan’s foster sons have a bad rep in Two Mule, Texas. Most of it earned. When it becomes clear they don’t plan on giving up scootin’ after every pretty pair of boots in town anytime soon, he issues the one thing he knows they can’t a challenge. Find a wife. The oldest, Johnny, is actually grateful. He’s had his eye on Mean Ellie Harker for a long time, and Sam’s challenge is the kick in the pants he needed to ask her out. Except before he can make his move, his brothers kidnap her right out from under his nose. Now, instead of being one question away from victory, he has to compete for the woman of his dreams. Ellie thought she’d be a dried up old spinster before Johnny finally untangled his tongue long enough to ask for a date. But instead of teaching him better uses for that tongue, his brothers have whisked her away to the ranch. At first she’s furious…then intrigued when she starts to wonder what it might be like to have not just one sexy cowboy dedicated to her pleasure, but four… Four handsome cowboys. Four choices. Will it be a single sordid night or a chance at heaven as she savors every luscious inch of the Logan brothers?
88 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 13, 2011
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Delilah Devlin
349 books1,204 followersDelilah Devlin is a New York Times and USA Today bestselling author with a rapidly expanding reputation for writing deliciously edgy stories with complex characters. Whether creating dark, erotically-charged paranormal worlds or richly descriptive westerns that ring with authenticity, Delilah Devlin “pens in uncharted territory that will leave the readers breathless and hungering for more…” www.DelilahDevlin.com
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October 16, 2011
i loved this book,it had all of the elements that i look for in a great love story/erotic romance. the characters were intriguing and had depth and drew me into the story effortlessly.
i found my self becoming angry,sad,happy and all the other emotions right along with the hero(s) and heroine. i am already planning to read it again just in case i missed anything and i can't WAIT fot the next book in the series so i can find out what happens with them next not to mention the other characters that have their own stories to tell.
if you like a book that will reach out and grab you by the heart strings then this is the one for you.
thank you Delilah the story was wonderful!
i found my self becoming angry,sad,happy and all the other emotions right along with the hero(s) and heroine. i am already planning to read it again just in case i missed anything and i can't WAIT fot the next book in the series so i can find out what happens with them next not to mention the other characters that have their own stories to tell.
if you like a book that will reach out and grab you by the heart strings then this is the one for you.
thank you Delilah the story was wonderful!
November 12, 2015
Love this tale of small town romance problems. Not enough women to go around ! The men take charge and convince their gal to take them on. She already loves Johnny. Interesting, different, romantic, and sexy. ENJOY !!
February 5, 2017
This is book 5 in the Lone Star Lovers series and it features the Logan brothers, Johnny, Killian, Jason and Mace. It also features Ellie Harker. I could see the connection with Ellie and Johnny and maybe a shred of a connection with Killian but I didn't understand why the twins were even in the story. Anyways, there wasn't a whole lot of romance going on. It started with the sex and worked backwards from there. The activity was utterly delicious but the story line lacked any sort of substance.
As this is obviously not my favorite book in the series, I'm still looking forward to the next one.
As this is obviously not my favorite book in the series, I'm still looking forward to the next one.
July 31, 2017
Hot menage
Some interesting twists to this hot menage. Some fascinating family dynamics going on too. Lovely bed time read for very pleasant dreams.
Some interesting twists to this hot menage. Some fascinating family dynamics going on too. Lovely bed time read for very pleasant dreams.
January 1, 2012
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Sometimes a book leaves you wanting more; this story only made me want the next story in the series. I was so pleasantly pleased with the outcome; I think I was actually shocked! The ending surprised me and the satisfied feelings I have about the storytelling have me grinning and giddy.
Ellie was labeled as “mean”. I never found her mean at all. She was spunky and sassy. She gave as good as she got and didn’t let anyone intimidate her. By no means a spinster at thirty, she finds herself in the center of the four Logan brothers. She has always been attracted to them but held herself back until one night of flirting changes everything. Now all the Logan men are showing her some attention. She is about to get more then she expected.
The heroes of the story are yummy but I really don’t want to give anything away so I’ll just give a light overview of the boys. Sam and Gracie Logan were never able to have children, so they opened their hearts and home to Johnny, Killian, and the twins, Mace and Jason. The boys flourished under Gracie’s love and attention. Three years ago they lost their mother, Gracie, and Sam thinks it time for the home to have a woman’s touch and laughter again. He doesn’t care if his boys bring home one woman to share or find four separate women, he just wants his home to be filled with love again.
While the likelihood of the story happening in real life is nil, it sure makes for a quick fun read. Ellie is kidnapped by the Logan brothers and discovers the joy and ecstasy of having her sexual desires fulfilled by four men. Their intentions are clear -- they want her to enjoy herself and then chose one or more of them for her husband.
Ms. Devlin had me going back and forth on how I thought this story would end so many times I think I may have gotten whiplash. I was extremely pleased with the conclusion of the story and ecstatic about the possible next story in the series. I have every appendage crossed that the story that the she hinted towards gets told.
A Four-Gone Conclusion is a prime example on how a novella should be written; fast and fun, touching characters that pull you in and a story that is completely fulfilling. I finished the story with anticipation for the next installment. Here’s hoping I don’t have to wait too long.
Sometimes a book leaves you wanting more; this story only made me want the next story in the series. I was so pleasantly pleased with the outcome; I think I was actually shocked! The ending surprised me and the satisfied feelings I have about the storytelling have me grinning and giddy.
Ellie was labeled as “mean”. I never found her mean at all. She was spunky and sassy. She gave as good as she got and didn’t let anyone intimidate her. By no means a spinster at thirty, she finds herself in the center of the four Logan brothers. She has always been attracted to them but held herself back until one night of flirting changes everything. Now all the Logan men are showing her some attention. She is about to get more then she expected.
The heroes of the story are yummy but I really don’t want to give anything away so I’ll just give a light overview of the boys. Sam and Gracie Logan were never able to have children, so they opened their hearts and home to Johnny, Killian, and the twins, Mace and Jason. The boys flourished under Gracie’s love and attention. Three years ago they lost their mother, Gracie, and Sam thinks it time for the home to have a woman’s touch and laughter again. He doesn’t care if his boys bring home one woman to share or find four separate women, he just wants his home to be filled with love again.
While the likelihood of the story happening in real life is nil, it sure makes for a quick fun read. Ellie is kidnapped by the Logan brothers and discovers the joy and ecstasy of having her sexual desires fulfilled by four men. Their intentions are clear -- they want her to enjoy herself and then chose one or more of them for her husband.
Ms. Devlin had me going back and forth on how I thought this story would end so many times I think I may have gotten whiplash. I was extremely pleased with the conclusion of the story and ecstatic about the possible next story in the series. I have every appendage crossed that the story that the she hinted towards gets told.
A Four-Gone Conclusion is a prime example on how a novella should be written; fast and fun, touching characters that pull you in and a story that is completely fulfilling. I finished the story with anticipation for the next installment. Here’s hoping I don’t have to wait too long.
July 6, 2013
I so like the Lone Star Lovers series - the entire book is an entire, hot, fiery scene, and man oh man, it is good!!!
The one thing about this series is that even with all the hotness, you still get the emotions that are evident and it comes through in the story. In this case, the four step-brothers all naturally land on one woman when advised to get a wife - two because they are attracted to her, the other two because she can cook (they are the younger two!). While the Johnny and Killian convince Ellie to come home with them to give them a chance, Mace and Jason kidnap the poor girl. Johnny and Killian think she stood them up but when they get home, they find out the twins swiped her. She is convinced to give them a chance and fulfill a sexual fantasy, even though the entire scenario was set up to get her with Johnny and, eventually, Killian
The one thing about this series is that even with all the hotness, you still get the emotions that are evident and it comes through in the story. In this case, the four step-brothers all naturally land on one woman when advised to get a wife - two because they are attracted to her, the other two because she can cook (they are the younger two!). While the Johnny and Killian convince Ellie to come home with them to give them a chance, Mace and Jason kidnap the poor girl. Johnny and Killian think she stood them up but when they get home, they find out the twins swiped her. She is convinced to give them a chance and fulfill a sexual fantasy, even though the entire scenario was set up to get her with Johnny and, eventually, Killian
December 29, 2013
4.5 Stars A Four-Gone Conclusion
'It's time you boys found yerselves a wife' these were Sam Logan's parting words to his four foster sons before he left for a few days and when Sam Logan spoke his foster sons listened.
While his brothers were not so convinced Johnny Logan was relieved he knew just the girl for him. The only problem was when the time was right Johnny couldn't put two words together to ask Ellie Harker out. That is where Killian knew he could help Johnny but are they too late and when Johnny finds Ellie with his twin brothers how will he react, does he still have a chance and will she accept what he and Killian propose.
A Broody Cowboy who knows what he wants, A brother that wants it too and a girl about to have a night she will never forget!!
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'It's time you boys found yerselves a wife' these were Sam Logan's parting words to his four foster sons before he left for a few days and when Sam Logan spoke his foster sons listened.
While his brothers were not so convinced Johnny Logan was relieved he knew just the girl for him. The only problem was when the time was right Johnny couldn't put two words together to ask Ellie Harker out. That is where Killian knew he could help Johnny but are they too late and when Johnny finds Ellie with his twin brothers how will he react, does he still have a chance and will she accept what he and Killian propose.
A Broody Cowboy who knows what he wants, A brother that wants it too and a girl about to have a night she will never forget!!
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August 7, 2013
When Sam Logan issues an order, his four sons take it seriously and he has spoken loud and clear, find a wife. Johnny, the oldest has only one woman in mind, Ellie Harker. She is mean, sassy, and can cook a pie and he wants her. With the help of his foster brother Killian he sets out to win her, but before he gets a chance his two twin foster brothers kidnap her. Now that they have her, they have to convince her to stay and Johnny does not have any idea on how to woo the woman who has captured his heart.
Interesting story, I was not exactly sure why the twins were involved as it is a temporary thing for them and it left me a bit disappointed. Johnny is quiet, broody, and a bit vulnerable where Ellie is concerned. Killian is the naughty brother and was my favorite in the bunch.
Interesting story, I was not exactly sure why the twins were involved as it is a temporary thing for them and it left me a bit disappointed. Johnny is quiet, broody, and a bit vulnerable where Ellie is concerned. Killian is the naughty brother and was my favorite in the bunch.
October 7, 2011
actually a 3.75
Ellie, has humor, sexiness and the balls to decide to go after what she's been lusting after, only she didn't realize the one she lusted after came with three more for free. I LOVED Johnny and Killian,the twins..ehhh, they need to mature A LOT.
The smexin' was HOT, HOT, HOT...I loved how ornery Johhny is, but deep inside there is a softie ready for love. Killian...OMG he sounds like a dream. The twins, well they reminded me of two frisky pups, frolickin' around until the next shiny toy catches their eye...lol.
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Ellie, has humor, sexiness and the balls to decide to go after what she's been lusting after, only she didn't realize the one she lusted after came with three more for free. I LOVED Johnny and Killian,the twins..ehhh, they need to mature A LOT.
The smexin' was HOT, HOT, HOT...I loved how ornery Johhny is, but deep inside there is a softie ready for love. Killian...OMG he sounds like a dream. The twins, well they reminded me of two frisky pups, frolickin' around until the next shiny toy catches their eye...lol.
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February 22, 2023
fulfill a fantasy
Ellie now running Kate’s dinner since Kate is pregnant. The Logan boys come in for pie. Ellie gets all bothered when Johnny comes in, but he seems to be tongue tied. Sam the foster father of the boys throws down a request that the boys find wives. Johnny knows who he wants, but not how to get her. Killian decides he is going to help him. Twins Mace and Jason have their own idea. Next thing Ellie knows she is being kidnapped. Will Ellie take what they offer? Will the outcome they want happen? Come on in and find out.
Ellie now running Kate’s dinner since Kate is pregnant. The Logan boys come in for pie. Ellie gets all bothered when Johnny comes in, but he seems to be tongue tied. Sam the foster father of the boys throws down a request that the boys find wives. Johnny knows who he wants, but not how to get her. Killian decides he is going to help him. Twins Mace and Jason have their own idea. Next thing Ellie knows she is being kidnapped. Will Ellie take what they offer? Will the outcome they want happen? Come on in and find out.
October 2, 2011
Its been a while since I've visited Delilah's Lone Star Lovers. I'd forgotten some of the players. A Four-Gone Conclusion features the Logan boys trying to fulfill their foster father's wishes by finding a wife. The story is good. The twins antics funny and the outcome not really what I expected but was happy to see.
I'm hoping there will be more in the Love Star Lovers and the sooner the better.
I'm hoping there will be more in the Love Star Lovers and the sooner the better.
December 29, 2016
Definitely good. Quick, short sassy read. Another book where the main character is kidnapped but this one was quite cute. The story was short but was very good. These books are well written for the content that they have. There just quick sexy reads, so if you like that you will enjoy all these books.
I voluntarily reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book from Rock Star Lit.
I voluntarily reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book from Rock Star Lit.
September 21, 2011
A wonderful addition to the Lone Star series. The brothers are lovable and very sexy! Ellie is just the right amount of tough, sexy and vulnerable - all at the same time. This story is a novella but does not miss anything important but it is such a great story, I wish it were longer!
October 19, 2011
One woman and 4 hot men...how can you go wrong with that! This story was very well written and great fast read. The love between the characters and the emotions in the story were real and strong and it was great to see it unfold. The sex was very hot in this story and I highly recommend it!
September 22, 2012
I always enjoy Delilah Devlin's work and I found this to be no exception the interplay was fast and sexy and hot as hell as always but there was a softer and emotional side that pulled me in to this little tale and I can't wait to see what she has in store for the twins!!
January 17, 2015
Una divertida reunion entre una chica que quiere a uno de los 4 hijos de Sam Logan y los 4 hijos de Sam Logan, queines estan en busca de una esposa y deciden darle la oportunidad de "probarlos" y ver con cual queire casarse.
September 28, 2011
3.5
A fun, quick read. I especially loved the twins. I hope their story's the next one.
A fun, quick read. I especially loved the twins. I hope their story's the next one.
October 12, 2011
I liked Ellie, just too short! I want more of what happens with the boys!!
October 9, 2011
3.5 stars...not much plot buildup our in depth emotional exploration, pretty much have sex and boom they're in love but boy o boy was the sex hottt and fun to read
December 3, 2011
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April 5, 2013
Re-read: start: 4/3/13
Finished:4/4/13
Finished:4/4/13
February 25, 2013
Poorly written
This was a poorly written story, a little disjointed and not exciting at all. It was difficult to connect with the female in the story so the story fell flat for me.
This was a poorly written story, a little disjointed and not exciting at all. It was difficult to connect with the female in the story so the story fell flat for me.
November 23, 2013
3.5 stars for this 'chapter' of the series. A few issues with disconnect of characters, but a developed plot once again. Came close to giving 4 stars, just because of my crush on Johnny!
November 17, 2014
This one is steamy, but not as steamy as some of the others. I kinda fell for Johnny-I'm not sure how since it was such a short read! 
December 2, 2015
Esta es una de esas sagas que sigo por pura curiosidad... para saber como terminara todo...
PD: Es el unico lugar donde se reunen tantas parejas con mente abierta... :P
PD: Es el unico lugar donde se reunen tantas parejas con mente abierta... :P
February 5, 2012
Review to come
September 8, 2016
It was ok for a really short story but was it just me or did it end abruptly?
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