Reread: 4.5 stars. Why was this so much better the second time around? I feel like several of AC’s books have been like this, and I’m glad I gave it a second try. There were still some parts that I didn’t love, but the story is very unique and interesting overall, and the things that bothered me the first time just really didn’t make a big difference to my enjoyment this time.
3.5 stars. So many mixed feelings about this book. I really wasn’t a fan of the storyline right from the start - I also felt like both of the MCs were underwhelming. However, both of these did improve quite a bit as the story progressed. I’m just not completely sure that I actually enjoyed reading this story.
Warning… there will be spoilers… but I’ll try to keep them minimal. Still, you may want to skip this review so my feelings don’t influence your read.
So going into this book, I already had an idea of Clem in my head as being a rake/manwhore/womanizer… whatever you want to call him. However, besides other people commenting to the heroine about his “ways” we never really saw that side of him. Y’all know I am mostly just thankful for this turn of events, but why did AC even make him that way in the past? It felt like she set up the hero one way in previous books, only to make him totally different here. For nearly the entire book I was waiting for OW drama, which thankfully didn’t come.
The heroine, Theo, is also a bit of a mystery to me. She’s definitely unique and interesting - being a male impersonator made her one of the most unique HR heroines I’ve ever read. And I liked that side of her character. However, while she initially is introduced as being strong and determined… her strength and determination seemed to fade into nothing very quickly. I hated how unsure of herself she was, how timid at times, how she just went along with her brother’s whims before Clem “rescued” her from them. I also hated how quickly she changed her opinion from disliking the hero to wanting to jump into bed with him. They spent 4 weeks “courting” while the bans were being read, but there was more telling than showing during this part of the book. This is not even remotely a slowburn, and I felt the story moved too quickly for believability.
As the story progressed, both of the MCs made more sense to me overall, but I could never quite reconcile how they acted in the beginning with the whole picture. I think this all could have been avoided with a slower relationship progression. Considering they both initially intended for the marriage to be in name only, there was plenty of opportunity for a slower burn.
The other thing that didn’t work for me in this story was that Clem kept a secret from Theo for way too long, and I wasn’t totally sure why he didn’t just confess earlier. This part felt fairly contrived and unrealistic to me. Also, he becomes self-sacrificing at the end, which just NEVER works for me in any story. I won’t elaborate further on these issues because I don’t want to include too many spoilers.
There were also many more typos, skipped words, and other errors than I ever caught in her previous books.
Overall though, I did think this was an interesting read. I definitely enjoyed some parts more than others. I liked the change of pace from a traditional heroine. The side characters were extremely well developed and really gave the story a lot of depth. I am a huge fan of the AC brand of hero who acts jealous/possessive but isn’t sure why. The epilogue was excellent and I love that AC wraps up everyone’s story, not just that of the MCs.
I also think that I will enjoy this book more the second time around because expectations are everything. And since I knew practically nothing going into this book, I expected something different than what I got. Especially with the MCs.
Now I’m looking forward to seeing what my GR friends think of this book too!
Safe; virgin heroine, hero was a manwhore but has been celibate for ~8 months iirc, no ow drama, some om drama but mostly just irrational jealousy, no cheating, no scenes with om/ow.