Boring, bad grammar, way too many commas
Interesting stories but not gripping. Way too many commas as in: (not a quote from the book, just my example) way too many commas, as, in, (....) He, grabbed his arm. The monster, slobbered. Stuff like that. This kind of thing dragged my rating way down. Who was this editor anyway. Was he/she out to torpedo this author's career or just stupid? How about the proofreader. Either way the editing of this book is sloppy and very substandard for readers who know American English. I will read other books on Kindle for this price but I guess you get what you pay for. I will read, other books on Kindle. for this price, but, I guess, you get, what you pay for. How illiterate do these jerks think we are? We are on a READING APP FOR GOODNESS SAKE.