I received this novel as part of the Goodreads First Reads program.
I really, truly wanted to love this book. The subject is utterly fascinating: underground London, from Roman ruins to present-day tube stations, complete with crypts and buried temples and outlaw hideouts and a unique (and creepy) breed of mosquito. As much as I love the gothic in general, and British history in particular, this subject is made for me.
Unfortunately, Peter Ackroyd's writing reads like a procrastinating student's first rough draft. Here are some of the problems I had with the text that prevented me from enjoying it:
1. Padding. This isn't book-length; it's essay-length. To make it book-length, fully 20-25% of the sentences are bloated, self-important, overreaching statements that say absolutely nothing (along the lines of "Every since the dawn of time, history has been happening"). Why? There's so much fat and very little meat.
2. Organization. Ackroyd flits from topic to topic, even within the same paragraph, apparently without any sense of obligation to tell the reader why. So underground London's a labyrinth. And in Greek mythology, there's a legend about a labyrinth. Okay, so what's the connection? Is there an urban legend about a Minotaur in underground London, or a street named Minotaur Lane? Or is Ackroyd saying London's labyrinths represent an intentional effort to mirror the legend? Or does the Greek legend represent some worldwide pattern in mythology about labyrinths that informs our experience of London? No, there's no connection at all. He just happened to know about the legend, seemingly, and so he included the tidbit to pad out the paragraph. This happens continually. Information isn't marshaled to make an argument: it's flung in all directions haphazardly.
3. Sources. I understand this isn't a scholarly tome, and therefore it shouldn't be packed with footnotes on every page. Nevertheless, the majority of direct quotes have no sources given at all, not even within the lines where they are featured. If a quote is worth producing, then its origin is worth knowing, to give it credibility and power. This not only makes his every assertion suspect, but it also makes it impossible for the interested reader to follow up on a specific point.
Despite the writing, I did learn interesting things; this simply makes me want to find a well-organized, well-written book on the subject to read. That's a shame. This could've been that well-organized, well-written book. It's not.