Star Wars One

by Mortimer Jackson

A Star Wars fan fiction. Clone trooper 483 once believed he was like every other clone in the galactic empire. One day he finds out that he's more different than he thinks.

Genres: Star Wars, Science Fiction, Fiction

Nook

First published August 24, 2011

Reviews

[Ron · Rating 3 out of 5]

Three stars is a gift. A well-conceived and indifferently written 49-page bit of Star Wars fan fiction.

A proofreader would have caught some of the worst errors.

But, despite that, I like it.

Good try.

[Shawn Fairweather · Rating 2 out of 5]

I think it is safe to assume that the author was simply trying to take a stab at writing...for that, this piece isnt bad but needs alot of work. Too much was written similarly to modern day fiction and not as if it took place in the star wars universe. Simple things like using the word refrigerator instead of refrigeration unit tends to ruin the feel of the story. Calling vehicles trucks does the same thing. Again good effort by trying to get your feet wet, but there needs to be more flavor to the story.

[Robert Mason · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good read

[Jenny T. · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is a fan inspired Star Wars short story about a clone with a conscious. The writing was okay, but the plot was simple.

[Eric Cone · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great story, from the perspective of a clone soldier. Took about 30 minutes to read.