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The Crown Phoenix #1
The Night Watchman Express
Orphaned Miriam has always been terrified by the sound of THE NIGHT WATCHMAN EXPRESS as it hurtles by her house. The sound of the train gives her nightmares of an underground factory, and a laboratory where brutal experiments take place.
During the day she has very different problems. Her new guardians, the Marchpanes, have arrived with their son, Simon, to live in Miriam's house. The Marchpanes are plotting to take over her dead father's business.
As they are both strong willed and stubborn, Miriam and Simon develop an instant dislike for each other. They have to work together, however, in order to solve the mystery of what the Marchpanes are doing with Miriam's inheritance.
As they come closer to learning the truth, Miriam is kidnapped and put on THE NIGHT WATCHMAN EXPRESS, and Simon must try to rescue her. In doing so, he will have to confront his own parents and the evil forces behind them.
But as he tries to help Miriam, he is captured. Simon is put in a strange, luxurious prison, where his jailers are as hauntingly beautiful as they are dangerous.
As THE NIGHT WATCHMAN EXPRESS arrives at its destination, Miriam comes to the shocking realization that her nightmares about the subterranean factory and the dark laboratory were not just dreams.
What she always feared more than anything is going to come true.
During the day she has very different problems. Her new guardians, the Marchpanes, have arrived with their son, Simon, to live in Miriam's house. The Marchpanes are plotting to take over her dead father's business.
As they are both strong willed and stubborn, Miriam and Simon develop an instant dislike for each other. They have to work together, however, in order to solve the mystery of what the Marchpanes are doing with Miriam's inheritance.
As they come closer to learning the truth, Miriam is kidnapped and put on THE NIGHT WATCHMAN EXPRESS, and Simon must try to rescue her. In doing so, he will have to confront his own parents and the evil forces behind them.
But as he tries to help Miriam, he is captured. Simon is put in a strange, luxurious prison, where his jailers are as hauntingly beautiful as they are dangerous.
As THE NIGHT WATCHMAN EXPRESS arrives at its destination, Miriam comes to the shocking realization that her nightmares about the subterranean factory and the dark laboratory were not just dreams.
What she always feared more than anything is going to come true.
324 pages, Paperback
First published February 28, 2011
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Alison DeLuca
13 books140 followersAlison DeLuca is the author of several steampunk and urban fantasy books. She was born in Arizona and has also lived in Pennsylvania, Illinois, Mexico, Ireland, and Spain.
Currently she wrestles words and laundry in New Jersey.
Currently she wrestles words and laundry in New Jersey.
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December 7, 2012
I accepted this request because I found the blurb to Night Watchman Express very interesting . Now I am glad I did. I enjoyed every part of this book. The characters were a pure joy to read. I felt myself cheering for Miriam and wanting to smack her new guardians for their treatment of her.
Miriam, who's father died finds out she had new guardians. I honestly don't blame her for her behavior with these two. Mainly Theo, the 'aunt'. If I had to deal with someone like her I would behave badly as well. It wasn't until a governess, Mana who appeared out of nowhere , did she change into a lovely, young lady. I really liked Mana, she was one of my favorite characters as well as Neil and Simon.
This story was such a fun read, filled with drama, humor and tons of danger. I can't wait to dive into the next book, Devil's Kitchen. So if you love Steampunk and everything else I mentioned then I highly recommend this book.
Miriam, who's father died finds out she had new guardians. I honestly don't blame her for her behavior with these two. Mainly Theo, the 'aunt'. If I had to deal with someone like her I would behave badly as well. It wasn't until a governess, Mana who appeared out of nowhere , did she change into a lovely, young lady. I really liked Mana, she was one of my favorite characters as well as Neil and Simon.
This story was such a fun read, filled with drama, humor and tons of danger. I can't wait to dive into the next book, Devil's Kitchen. So if you love Steampunk and everything else I mentioned then I highly recommend this book.
November 15, 2012
Miriam's comfortable world is thrown into chaos when her father dies and his so-called business partners, Virgil and Theodosia Marchpane move in and start to take over the mansion. They've brought along their spoiled son, Simon, and his friend of more modest means, Neil. Upon the horrid realization that Theodosia is intent on moving Miriam up to the attic and installing Simon in her room, is not going down without a fight. She throws things, she curses, and is relegated to her room for days with only bread and water.
Mysterious, steampunky elements appear: twelve silver circles set in the stones near the shore, a seemingly magical night train that inspires strange dreams, and Miriam's own secret possession: her old-fashioned Crown Phoenix manual typewriter, which takes on a larger aura.
Miriam overhears Virgil and Theodosia's whispered business dealings. She reads their private papers and learns of shocking details. The Marchpanes hate her snoopy ways and hire a governess to keep Miriam in line.
Enter Manalapata Postulate, a character every bit as trippy as her name suggests. As Miriam's new governess, she has a hypnotic hold on everyone--for instance, the very racist Theodosia cannot recall saying yes to hiring Miss Postulate, who is the color of dark chocolate, yet Theodosia's signature's on the contract!
At first Miriam rails against her new governess, but soon Miss Postulate, or Mana, not only turns Miriam into a proper lady, she has also, to Theodosia's horror, charmed young Simon and Neil. When Miriam asks Mana why she's being so nice, we wonder too! Most everyone has a nefarious motivation that is big fun trying to figure out. Miriam is much more than she seems as well.
Danger lurks, and finally, the kids learn that Mana has been taken. Upon trying to rescue her, Simon and Miriam are whisked away on none other than the Night Train that inspires fearful dreams.
Part two brings us to the island of Lampala where Miss Postulate grew up. She's been kidnapped and Neil is determined to search her out and save her. It is here that DeLuca crafts her most original setting and language, a testament to her vivid imagination and prowess as a storyteller. Neil is charged with watching a native girl, even more impossible than Miriam ever was, and the earlier plot is echoed in his own creative ways of bringing Riki around. The more serious task is to rescue Mana, who they find hanging in a cage off the edge of a cliff!
I admire DeLuca's quirky sense of adventure, and expertise at weaving together all of the mystifying threads without dropping any. Her prose is gorgeous. Tweens and middle-graders will love this series, as well as teens and even adults. I look forward to reading book #2.
Mysterious, steampunky elements appear: twelve silver circles set in the stones near the shore, a seemingly magical night train that inspires strange dreams, and Miriam's own secret possession: her old-fashioned Crown Phoenix manual typewriter, which takes on a larger aura.
Miriam overhears Virgil and Theodosia's whispered business dealings. She reads their private papers and learns of shocking details. The Marchpanes hate her snoopy ways and hire a governess to keep Miriam in line.
Enter Manalapata Postulate, a character every bit as trippy as her name suggests. As Miriam's new governess, she has a hypnotic hold on everyone--for instance, the very racist Theodosia cannot recall saying yes to hiring Miss Postulate, who is the color of dark chocolate, yet Theodosia's signature's on the contract!
At first Miriam rails against her new governess, but soon Miss Postulate, or Mana, not only turns Miriam into a proper lady, she has also, to Theodosia's horror, charmed young Simon and Neil. When Miriam asks Mana why she's being so nice, we wonder too! Most everyone has a nefarious motivation that is big fun trying to figure out. Miriam is much more than she seems as well.
Danger lurks, and finally, the kids learn that Mana has been taken. Upon trying to rescue her, Simon and Miriam are whisked away on none other than the Night Train that inspires fearful dreams.
Part two brings us to the island of Lampala where Miss Postulate grew up. She's been kidnapped and Neil is determined to search her out and save her. It is here that DeLuca crafts her most original setting and language, a testament to her vivid imagination and prowess as a storyteller. Neil is charged with watching a native girl, even more impossible than Miriam ever was, and the earlier plot is echoed in his own creative ways of bringing Riki around. The more serious task is to rescue Mana, who they find hanging in a cage off the edge of a cliff!
I admire DeLuca's quirky sense of adventure, and expertise at weaving together all of the mystifying threads without dropping any. Her prose is gorgeous. Tweens and middle-graders will love this series, as well as teens and even adults. I look forward to reading book #2.
January 20, 2012
The book follows Marian after her father has died and new guardians take over her home and her fathers business. They are some shady characters and Marian is out to figure out what is going on. Two other main characters are introduced fairly early, Simon the son of the guardians and Neil his poor friend. All great characters and I liked the story, but I was a bit disappointed with the second half of the book because while it had been following the young girl during the transition of new guardians taking over her home and her father's business, the second half there was a great split in terms of the story and where the characters were going. I understand the intended connection, but it didn't entirely work for me. Following Neil was interesting and there was a whole new set of characters to meet, but the way things were written it felt a bit disjointed. I'm thinking the second book will pick up with Marian and Simon after they were kidnapped. And if that be the case it would feel to me that things would have made more sense being split within the same book. For instance every other chapter or so split between the two story lines. I'll continue with the story either way because I am curious to see where things go. There isn't a great ending. It just sort of stops. The extra chapters may help, but I'll get to that with the actual book.
This was another free book from Amazon. I was very impressed to not have found an error until after that point. Being a free book, I have come to expect a few errors here and there, and this one has the least amount of errors I've seen with ebooks. Big plus!! As I write this the second book is also free, so I got that the other night. Hoping it will wrap up some loose ends that were left hanging in the end of this book. Another book that does not actually end at 100%, it was more like 94% with a few bonus chapters from the next book. Since I was able to snag the second book while it was free I didn't bother with reading them now.
This was another free book from Amazon. I was very impressed to not have found an error until after that point. Being a free book, I have come to expect a few errors here and there, and this one has the least amount of errors I've seen with ebooks. Big plus!! As I write this the second book is also free, so I got that the other night. Hoping it will wrap up some loose ends that were left hanging in the end of this book. Another book that does not actually end at 100%, it was more like 94% with a few bonus chapters from the next book. Since I was able to snag the second book while it was free I didn't bother with reading them now.
July 16, 2016
The Night Watchman Express kept me interested throughout the book. This is the book that doubters of Indie publishing should read, it shows that there are Indie books which can be and are of a high quality. In fact better than some main stream books I've read!
What is it about? Well it's a historical fantasy but not the sword and sorcery variety. It is what I would call more of a realistic fantasy.
The main character is an heiress whose life is turned upside down when her guardians come to stay. Relegated to the attic, while her new `aunt' and `uncle' enjoy the trimmings her inheritance pays for, a governess suddenly appears who tames the wild creature the girl has become in her grief. The guardians have an important project which depends on a hidden device. This project has repercussions for not only the girl and their family but also a mysterious island.
The book poses a few questions, which are all (satisfactorily) explained through the book. Who is the Governess? Where did she come from? What is the device the guardians are looking for? What is the project?
The book is extremely well written and I truly cared about the characters. The fact I glared at my husband when he stopped me reading to get my attention says it all. When you read this book you will be drawn into a story that will melt reality away.
Go on buy it, you know you want to!
Ceri Clark
Author of Children of the Elementi
What is it about? Well it's a historical fantasy but not the sword and sorcery variety. It is what I would call more of a realistic fantasy.
The main character is an heiress whose life is turned upside down when her guardians come to stay. Relegated to the attic, while her new `aunt' and `uncle' enjoy the trimmings her inheritance pays for, a governess suddenly appears who tames the wild creature the girl has become in her grief. The guardians have an important project which depends on a hidden device. This project has repercussions for not only the girl and their family but also a mysterious island.
The book poses a few questions, which are all (satisfactorily) explained through the book. Who is the Governess? Where did she come from? What is the device the guardians are looking for? What is the project?
The book is extremely well written and I truly cared about the characters. The fact I glared at my husband when he stopped me reading to get my attention says it all. When you read this book you will be drawn into a story that will melt reality away.
Go on buy it, you know you want to!
Ceri Clark
Author of Children of the Elementi
August 26, 2013
I got this book in the giveaway through Goodreads First Reads. I was not obligated nor paid to write a review. The author signed it and sent a matching bookmark along with the book, which was very nice!
I absolutely loved the story. It is unique in every way, which is incredibly hard to find nowadays. There is an ongoing suspense throughout the book that keeps you interested, and the world and concepts built are very well done.
I was not crazy about the characters. A lot of the main characters act childish to the point of being annoying, so you end up not caring very much about the characters as much as the story. The only characters I felt a connection with were Mana, who came off as a general badass, and Neil, who sort of shined more towards the second half of the book. Everyone else just seemed immature.
Another thing, I was not aware when I started reading this that it is book #1 of a series. While that in itself is okay, there seemed to be no closure at all. I understand that there is a continuation coming in the next book, but I still believe each book should have rising action, climax, and conclusion. For this book it was more of an anticlimax and no conclusion. If this was done, I would happily give this 5 stars.
I absolutely loved the story. It is unique in every way, which is incredibly hard to find nowadays. There is an ongoing suspense throughout the book that keeps you interested, and the world and concepts built are very well done.
I was not crazy about the characters. A lot of the main characters act childish to the point of being annoying, so you end up not caring very much about the characters as much as the story. The only characters I felt a connection with were Mana, who came off as a general badass, and Neil, who sort of shined more towards the second half of the book. Everyone else just seemed immature.
Another thing, I was not aware when I started reading this that it is book #1 of a series. While that in itself is okay, there seemed to be no closure at all. I understand that there is a continuation coming in the next book, but I still believe each book should have rising action, climax, and conclusion. For this book it was more of an anticlimax and no conclusion. If this was done, I would happily give this 5 stars.
March 25, 2011
The fast pacing of this book is immediately apparent in the opening chapters. Miriam, a young girl from a wealthy family, is orphaned when her industrialist father dies. Enter the Marchpanes, her assigned guardian and business partner of Miriam's father. The Marchpanes, under the firm control of the vicious and witchy Mrs. Marchpane, move into the mansion and immediately set out to gain control of the family money and company. They get rid of Miriam by putting her in the Night Watchman Express, a mysterious train headed to a sinister place called Devil's Kitchen where kids are thrown into forced labor and become subjects of nefarious experiments. The story is a mixture of fairy tale, mystery, and adventure story reminiscent of Nancy Drew and the Magic Tree House. A good read for a young adult reader.
January 17, 2013
A delightful story. I must say I was wondering how I would enjoy this book. Being friends with Alison I thought I had better like this book or else I don't know what I'll do. What a pleasure to find that I not only enjoyed it but loved it.
This story while it has a very unique mystery is character driven. The focus being Miriam in the first half and Neil a minor character initially becomes the focus in part two. The children are the central focus of the book while it's quite obvious the adults are up to no good. Miriam's governess being an exception though she herself has many a secret.
I enjoyed the story very much. Alison has a lovely writting style I found myself absorbed in the trials of the children waiting for when they'd take the evil adults down. I can't wait to read the two sequels
This story while it has a very unique mystery is character driven. The focus being Miriam in the first half and Neil a minor character initially becomes the focus in part two. The children are the central focus of the book while it's quite obvious the adults are up to no good. Miriam's governess being an exception though she herself has many a secret.
I enjoyed the story very much. Alison has a lovely writting style I found myself absorbed in the trials of the children waiting for when they'd take the evil adults down. I can't wait to read the two sequels
July 17, 2012
Delicious and rich... it reminds me of the classic children's books I used to mow through and still keep on my shelf for a comfort read (Secret Garden and The Mysterious Island come to mind). High adventure! Peril! If you need some steampunk in your life and are looking for a little Jules Verne or Jack London flavor, you'll really enjoy this book.
October 9, 2012
WOO-HOO!!
Worth every minute of the wait!!
Worth every minute of the wait!!
Want to read
January 18, 2016I received a copy of this for free via Goodreads First Reads.
November 27, 2012
The Night Watchman Express (The Crown Phoenix #1) by Alison DeLuca
Page Count: 291
Release Date: 3 October 2012
Publisher: Myrddin Publishing Group
Source: Complimentary copy provided by author in exchange for an honest and unbiased review as part of the The Crown Phoenix Virtual Book Tour
Review: This is the first steampunk novel I've tried that's targeted for younger readers, and after reading, I can confidently say I love the flourishing, industrializing backdrop set to Edwardian England in The Night Watchman Express; there's something just so exciting about new inventions and innovative ideas when it comes to children's stories. With a fresh concept, eerie undertone, and unending action throughout, this first installment in The Crown Phoenix series is sure to be a hit among middle grade readers.
The mysticism and mystery shrouding the phantom-like train Miriam hears every night is a creative, avant-garde approach to hidden universes, as well as to imagination, which is why I find the plot quite memorable. While in context, there is nothing magical about the strange, seemingly connected occurrences following the takeover of her father's company, Pearson's, from the perspective of children, they won't pass over without being thoughtfully contemplated upon. The characters and events were entertaining enough to keep me reading and just odd enough to stay in the back of my mind. There's plenty of speculative action as well, meaning, little hand-to-hand combat, but many jarring discoveries, many uncovered secrets, and many plot twists.
The danger is less physical and more psychological, involving hidden schemes and betrayal—it's more of a "danger of the unknown" kind of thing, which I found rather thrilling. That's not to say there's a lack of physical action, however; eager protagonists and fateful journeys make for lots of exploration and many discoveries as well.
The broad scattering of characters is a highlight of the novel. Each of them are distinct and well-depicted; it was very easy to like the heros and very easy to despise the villains. However, a balance of good and bad traits is portrayed in all of them, demonstrating that no matter how great or how evil people are, in the end, they are all human. I would have liked to see a little more dimension in terms of characterization, however. There's nothing personal about any of the characters, nothing exposed and nothing learned; I couldn't really connect with any of them individually, and I think this was mostly an issue regarding DeLuca's style:
Lots of telling going on, hardly any showing, which makes for rather bland prose. The writing isn't bad, certainly not, but there's nothing terribly exciting about it. Had it been better in conveying emotions, implementing suspense, and maintaining the reader's interest, I would have enjoyed reading this book a lot more.
I appreciated how the characters evolve under the tests of the book's prevalent themes such as manipulation, true friendship, and trust, and found it interesting how Simon, Miriam, and Neil, who are all merely grade school-age, responded to unfamiliar stimuli. Overall, the setting is charming, the action lively, and the conclusion satisfying, but because it wasn't one of those keep-me-on-the-edge-of-my-seat reads, it's not something I would read again.
Pros: Dark concept, intriguing setting, lots of twists and turns, rich and diverse cast, open-ended so that it makes you want to try the next book, appropriate for all readers (rated PG).
Cons: Rather plain in diction, too tame!, lame clean-cut ending, stale characters (although they're never boring, which is a plus), drags on a bit, may not be successful in capturing attention due to lack of "fun" style.
Love: 'Old Walking Stick,' George repeated ... 'So-called because he looks like he swallowed a walking stick and it be coming out the other end.'
Verdict: Recommended for more mature children (ages 9 to 12) for its dark humor, historical intrigue, and memorable plot, but not an urgent must-read. Not something you should stand in line to buy, but should try if you've already got a copy.
7 hearts - Not without flaws, but overall enjoyable.
Page Count: 291
Release Date: 3 October 2012
Publisher: Myrddin Publishing Group
Source: Complimentary copy provided by author in exchange for an honest and unbiased review as part of the The Crown Phoenix Virtual Book Tour
Review: This is the first steampunk novel I've tried that's targeted for younger readers, and after reading, I can confidently say I love the flourishing, industrializing backdrop set to Edwardian England in The Night Watchman Express; there's something just so exciting about new inventions and innovative ideas when it comes to children's stories. With a fresh concept, eerie undertone, and unending action throughout, this first installment in The Crown Phoenix series is sure to be a hit among middle grade readers.
The mysticism and mystery shrouding the phantom-like train Miriam hears every night is a creative, avant-garde approach to hidden universes, as well as to imagination, which is why I find the plot quite memorable. While in context, there is nothing magical about the strange, seemingly connected occurrences following the takeover of her father's company, Pearson's, from the perspective of children, they won't pass over without being thoughtfully contemplated upon. The characters and events were entertaining enough to keep me reading and just odd enough to stay in the back of my mind. There's plenty of speculative action as well, meaning, little hand-to-hand combat, but many jarring discoveries, many uncovered secrets, and many plot twists.
The danger is less physical and more psychological, involving hidden schemes and betrayal—it's more of a "danger of the unknown" kind of thing, which I found rather thrilling. That's not to say there's a lack of physical action, however; eager protagonists and fateful journeys make for lots of exploration and many discoveries as well.
The broad scattering of characters is a highlight of the novel. Each of them are distinct and well-depicted; it was very easy to like the heros and very easy to despise the villains. However, a balance of good and bad traits is portrayed in all of them, demonstrating that no matter how great or how evil people are, in the end, they are all human. I would have liked to see a little more dimension in terms of characterization, however. There's nothing personal about any of the characters, nothing exposed and nothing learned; I couldn't really connect with any of them individually, and I think this was mostly an issue regarding DeLuca's style:
Lots of telling going on, hardly any showing, which makes for rather bland prose. The writing isn't bad, certainly not, but there's nothing terribly exciting about it. Had it been better in conveying emotions, implementing suspense, and maintaining the reader's interest, I would have enjoyed reading this book a lot more.
I appreciated how the characters evolve under the tests of the book's prevalent themes such as manipulation, true friendship, and trust, and found it interesting how Simon, Miriam, and Neil, who are all merely grade school-age, responded to unfamiliar stimuli. Overall, the setting is charming, the action lively, and the conclusion satisfying, but because it wasn't one of those keep-me-on-the-edge-of-my-seat reads, it's not something I would read again.
Pros: Dark concept, intriguing setting, lots of twists and turns, rich and diverse cast, open-ended so that it makes you want to try the next book, appropriate for all readers (rated PG).
Cons: Rather plain in diction, too tame!, lame clean-cut ending, stale characters (although they're never boring, which is a plus), drags on a bit, may not be successful in capturing attention due to lack of "fun" style.
Love: 'Old Walking Stick,' George repeated ... 'So-called because he looks like he swallowed a walking stick and it be coming out the other end.'
Verdict: Recommended for more mature children (ages 9 to 12) for its dark humor, historical intrigue, and memorable plot, but not an urgent must-read. Not something you should stand in line to buy, but should try if you've already got a copy.
7 hearts - Not without flaws, but overall enjoyable.
January 26, 2013
Firstly, what the heck with that cover? The ghostly, deathly look of the cover is a bit misleading as to what the story is actually about.
This e-book has a part one and a part two. The first part chronicles Miriam, experiencing the death of her Father (they weren't that close) and his business partner, along with his wife, their son, and son's friend moving into the mansion.
The couple are caricature's of evil, shallow and selfish. Though things change a bit, when they find Miriam too much of a challenge and hire a dark skinned (gasp!) and mystical woman from the nearby islands as a governess.
The kids start to get along and soon become wise to the fact that the adults around them seem up to something, along with the encourage from the Governess to exercise their sleuthing skills (that's pretty much how she tricks Miriam into behaving, act nice on the outside, so you can use it to your advantage later).
Miriam and Simon the son of the couple, get separated from his friend Neil, and bam! The book ends quite unexpectedly.
And we're on to Neil's story, without so much as a by-your-leave. Neil's story is good, it's just a little off-putting because you didn't expect it to be there.
He ends up on the island that the governess was originally from, and is taken in by a family with a very unruly little girl, worse perhaps then Miram herself. He uses Mana, the Governesses tactics to make the little girl behave, and the family is joyously grateful for this change in family tensions and locks him in his room ate night, so that he can NEVER leave them alone with their child again.
Neil and the girl, Riki, have a sweet relationship. I don't know what the age difference is, but she's definitely smitten with him, and he tends to bounce around from teacher, big brother, accomplice and friend.
They become wrapped up in a plot to save the Queen of the island, which provides a useful and strong wood that can be obtained nowhere else, and is exported to the mainlands through the company owned by Miriam's late Father and the the partners the Marchpanes.
Things are a big hinky with the Marchpanes, and you learn some of the mystery, but not fully, before the close of this book.
It was a nice read as a kids-preteen book. The only things I didn't like, were that some of the adults were a little over-acted, especially Riki's family. I enjoyed it as an adult though, and I know for certain I would have liked it as a preteen.
And I noticed there seemed to be quite a few spelling errors and wrong words, though....I might say I like finding that sort of thing, makes me feel like I have a superior intellect. Or like I'm a pretend editor for the day!
This e-book has a part one and a part two. The first part chronicles Miriam, experiencing the death of her Father (they weren't that close) and his business partner, along with his wife, their son, and son's friend moving into the mansion.
The couple are caricature's of evil, shallow and selfish. Though things change a bit, when they find Miriam too much of a challenge and hire a dark skinned (gasp!) and mystical woman from the nearby islands as a governess.
The kids start to get along and soon become wise to the fact that the adults around them seem up to something, along with the encourage from the Governess to exercise their sleuthing skills (that's pretty much how she tricks Miriam into behaving, act nice on the outside, so you can use it to your advantage later).
Miriam and Simon the son of the couple, get separated from his friend Neil, and bam! The book ends quite unexpectedly.
And we're on to Neil's story, without so much as a by-your-leave. Neil's story is good, it's just a little off-putting because you didn't expect it to be there.
He ends up on the island that the governess was originally from, and is taken in by a family with a very unruly little girl, worse perhaps then Miram herself. He uses Mana, the Governesses tactics to make the little girl behave, and the family is joyously grateful for this change in family tensions and locks him in his room ate night, so that he can NEVER leave them alone with their child again.
Neil and the girl, Riki, have a sweet relationship. I don't know what the age difference is, but she's definitely smitten with him, and he tends to bounce around from teacher, big brother, accomplice and friend.
They become wrapped up in a plot to save the Queen of the island, which provides a useful and strong wood that can be obtained nowhere else, and is exported to the mainlands through the company owned by Miriam's late Father and the the partners the Marchpanes.
Things are a big hinky with the Marchpanes, and you learn some of the mystery, but not fully, before the close of this book.
It was a nice read as a kids-preteen book. The only things I didn't like, were that some of the adults were a little over-acted, especially Riki's family. I enjoyed it as an adult though, and I know for certain I would have liked it as a preteen.
And I noticed there seemed to be quite a few spelling errors and wrong words, though....I might say I like finding that sort of thing, makes me feel like I have a superior intellect. Or like I'm a pretend editor for the day!
May 15, 2012
I would have loved to give this book a higher review. It does so much right, yet so much wrong.
Miriam's father and mother have passed away. Unfortunately, she now has to deal with two guardians, who have designs on control of her father's Company. Thankfully their son Simon and his friend Neil are decent people, and soon an exotic and mysterious governess named Mana has come. There is a deep mystery going on, and can the four of them fight what seems to be a conspiracy surrounding Mana's home and the Night Watchman Express?
The problems first. I purchased the Kindle version, and this is actually two novels! The Night Watchman Express, and Big Star Island. The first part covers all four of the characters, the second only two. There is an epilogue midway through the Kindle book, and Big Star Island starts off with a recap, so it's not just a "telling the tale in two parts."
The problem with this is that the first part has absolutely horrible pacing. It ends without revealing much, and drags horribly at times because it doesn't have a lot of action. It's a very slow burn and you could almost feel like giving up, and then get angry when you see the book bisect into the second novel.
Don't.
Big Star Island is wonderful. The author has a talent for portraying kids as kids even in the first part, especially with Miriam and Mana's interactions. But the second part is a pure joy to read. It's much better in terms of pacing, it reveals a lot about the story and the aims of the bad guys, and the relationship between Neil and Riku is so much fun it brought a smile to my face. I really enjoyed it, and would be raving about this book if not for the problems with the first part.
I'd also really not call it steampunk yet. There are hints of it, but this isn't an iron and canvas Victorian world where people are using dirigibles to do their laundry. It's more historical fantasy, and is pretty good at that but not perfect. Again, really the only problem with the book in my opinion is a slow first part, that ends just as the stage is set up. That one problem is a big problem though, because they needed more information about the crisis in the book instead of a lot of repetitive scenes where Miriam, Mana, and the evil aunt collide. As well as the servants, though I wager they play a part in a later book?
So keep that warning in mind. But I really liked the book, and it's a steal at its current price. There's a lot to like about it, even as there is things to put you off. Highly recommended, even with what I said. Ipa!
Miriam's father and mother have passed away. Unfortunately, she now has to deal with two guardians, who have designs on control of her father's Company. Thankfully their son Simon and his friend Neil are decent people, and soon an exotic and mysterious governess named Mana has come. There is a deep mystery going on, and can the four of them fight what seems to be a conspiracy surrounding Mana's home and the Night Watchman Express?
The problems first. I purchased the Kindle version, and this is actually two novels! The Night Watchman Express, and Big Star Island. The first part covers all four of the characters, the second only two. There is an epilogue midway through the Kindle book, and Big Star Island starts off with a recap, so it's not just a "telling the tale in two parts."
The problem with this is that the first part has absolutely horrible pacing. It ends without revealing much, and drags horribly at times because it doesn't have a lot of action. It's a very slow burn and you could almost feel like giving up, and then get angry when you see the book bisect into the second novel.
Don't.
Big Star Island is wonderful. The author has a talent for portraying kids as kids even in the first part, especially with Miriam and Mana's interactions. But the second part is a pure joy to read. It's much better in terms of pacing, it reveals a lot about the story and the aims of the bad guys, and the relationship between Neil and Riku is so much fun it brought a smile to my face. I really enjoyed it, and would be raving about this book if not for the problems with the first part.
I'd also really not call it steampunk yet. There are hints of it, but this isn't an iron and canvas Victorian world where people are using dirigibles to do their laundry. It's more historical fantasy, and is pretty good at that but not perfect. Again, really the only problem with the book in my opinion is a slow first part, that ends just as the stage is set up. That one problem is a big problem though, because they needed more information about the crisis in the book instead of a lot of repetitive scenes where Miriam, Mana, and the evil aunt collide. As well as the servants, though I wager they play a part in a later book?
So keep that warning in mind. But I really liked the book, and it's a steal at its current price. There's a lot to like about it, even as there is things to put you off. Highly recommended, even with what I said. Ipa!
July 21, 2012
I want to like this book more than I actually did. There are a lot of things I love about it, but the structure is frustrating.
The initial setting, a quasi-Victorian manor in an unspecified location with an orphan girl, mysterious nanny and horrible guardians is wonderful. The setting is vividly realized and the characters immediately captured my interest. Admittedly not a lot actually happens, it's almost all set up, but it kept my interest the entire time.
The second half is rather abrupt change of location and pace. It also only touches on two of the primary characters introduced in the first half and one of the secondary characters.
Certainly there are a lot of new and interesting people to meet, but it's frustrating to have an unresolved cliffhanger just floating there unaddressed for half the book and eventually to discover it won't be addressed until the next book in the series.
What's particularly disappointing is that the story I read is perfectly entertaining in its own right. I just spent a lot of time waiting for something else that was never going to happen. A different structure would have worked better I think.
In style the book feels as though it was an old fashioned childrens' book. The sort that was written for children, not down to children. There are echoes of The Secret Garden or Swallows and Amazons in it's style. This is a good thing.
The series is referenced as steampunk, but based purely on the first book it isn't. There are some references to something magic-like early on, but it's not clearly explained and there's really no technology at all at this point.
Also the title is quite misleading. The Nightwatchman Express really only gets a few mentions in the entire book.
In the end I feel like the presentation of the story hurts it and takes away from something that's actually rather good.
The initial setting, a quasi-Victorian manor in an unspecified location with an orphan girl, mysterious nanny and horrible guardians is wonderful. The setting is vividly realized and the characters immediately captured my interest. Admittedly not a lot actually happens, it's almost all set up, but it kept my interest the entire time.
The second half is rather abrupt change of location and pace. It also only touches on two of the primary characters introduced in the first half and one of the secondary characters.
Certainly there are a lot of new and interesting people to meet, but it's frustrating to have an unresolved cliffhanger just floating there unaddressed for half the book and eventually to discover it won't be addressed until the next book in the series.
What's particularly disappointing is that the story I read is perfectly entertaining in its own right. I just spent a lot of time waiting for something else that was never going to happen. A different structure would have worked better I think.
In style the book feels as though it was an old fashioned childrens' book. The sort that was written for children, not down to children. There are echoes of The Secret Garden or Swallows and Amazons in it's style. This is a good thing.
The series is referenced as steampunk, but based purely on the first book it isn't. There are some references to something magic-like early on, but it's not clearly explained and there's really no technology at all at this point.
Also the title is quite misleading. The Nightwatchman Express really only gets a few mentions in the entire book.
In the end I feel like the presentation of the story hurts it and takes away from something that's actually rather good.
December 16, 2012
Ever since my first taste of Steampunk which have to give a nod of approval at Kady Kross’s Steampunk Chronicles (The Girl in the Steel Corset, The Girl in the Clockwork Collar) and since then have an interest in any novels bearing Steampunk elements. The Nightwatchman Express when signed up for this Online Book Tour promised to have a stamp of Steampunk as well.
Later once began reading The Night Watchman Express knew with certainty had made a magnificent decision. Alison DeLuca twirls to vibrant life the life of young Miriam Pearson a millionaire’s daughter who soon loses her father. Her new guardians turn out to be greedy for her inheritance. They also bring along with them their son named Simon and Simon’s friend Neil. While Neil is nice the same doesn't apply to Simon. Simon and Miriam’s animosity soon surfaces adding to Miriam’s mounting new limitations to her privileged life. Good things don’t stay horrible for long with the arrival of Mana Postulate whose Miriam’s new governess.
Honestly of all the books out there The Night Watchman Express is perfectly marketed as a Steampunk adventure. It is most definitely a story of adventure with some very three-dimensional characters that are almost like they could be written out of real life. The characters because of that are extraordinary in engaging. Miriam is a favorite that grows and evolves. Simon is another favorite with his intelligent mind. Neil too with a kind manner he always holds. Finally there is Mana who is a firm but elegant governess.
The Crown Phoenix series is a new favorite one! While hardly touches on any increasingly High Fantasy elements there are small glimmers of it. But no what makes it stand out is that we get a definite Gothic Steampunk adventure vibe from it.
Recommended alright for readers who like something new.
Overall: Amazing read!
Genre: Steampunk, Adventure
Later once began reading The Night Watchman Express knew with certainty had made a magnificent decision. Alison DeLuca twirls to vibrant life the life of young Miriam Pearson a millionaire’s daughter who soon loses her father. Her new guardians turn out to be greedy for her inheritance. They also bring along with them their son named Simon and Simon’s friend Neil. While Neil is nice the same doesn't apply to Simon. Simon and Miriam’s animosity soon surfaces adding to Miriam’s mounting new limitations to her privileged life. Good things don’t stay horrible for long with the arrival of Mana Postulate whose Miriam’s new governess.
Honestly of all the books out there The Night Watchman Express is perfectly marketed as a Steampunk adventure. It is most definitely a story of adventure with some very three-dimensional characters that are almost like they could be written out of real life. The characters because of that are extraordinary in engaging. Miriam is a favorite that grows and evolves. Simon is another favorite with his intelligent mind. Neil too with a kind manner he always holds. Finally there is Mana who is a firm but elegant governess.
The Crown Phoenix series is a new favorite one! While hardly touches on any increasingly High Fantasy elements there are small glimmers of it. But no what makes it stand out is that we get a definite Gothic Steampunk adventure vibe from it.
Recommended alright for readers who like something new.
Overall: Amazing read!
Genre: Steampunk, Adventure
April 19, 2011
The Night Watchman Express is a very ambitious story with numerous settings and a large cast, but the author so skillfully guides the reader that it isn't until the end that we look back and say: "Wow! We really went through a lot!"
The rich pallet of main characters are, for the most part, strangers to one another at the onset, so we don't step into a story already in progress, but rather learn the characters and situations as the characters themselves discover what is unfolding. The characters are well defined, yet dynamic and complex. A good writer may achieve two of those three characteristics for a small number of characters, but only a great writer can achieve the level of development we see in this tale with as broad a cast as the one this story offers.
The writing style is relaxed and natural and never distracts from the story, while giving the reader all the information he or she needs. As characters speak, we don't just know their words, but we also see the actions and body language that accompany those words. Those non-verbal clues allow us to really understand what is happening at a higher level than we would get from simple dialogue.
We can tell there's something big going on and the bits and pieces are revealed masterfully. There are a lot of surprises, but hints leading to those surprises are dropped like breadcrumbs on each page so that when they are revealed, it's a pleasant feeling of watching the pieces fall into place - as opposed to a sense of: "Hey, where did that come from?".
There are numerous settings and each is well defined and offers a unique mood to that portion of the story. Overall a masterfully spun tale that leaves the reader feeling that they didn't simply read a story, but rather experienced it.
Outstanding!
The rich pallet of main characters are, for the most part, strangers to one another at the onset, so we don't step into a story already in progress, but rather learn the characters and situations as the characters themselves discover what is unfolding. The characters are well defined, yet dynamic and complex. A good writer may achieve two of those three characteristics for a small number of characters, but only a great writer can achieve the level of development we see in this tale with as broad a cast as the one this story offers.
The writing style is relaxed and natural and never distracts from the story, while giving the reader all the information he or she needs. As characters speak, we don't just know their words, but we also see the actions and body language that accompany those words. Those non-verbal clues allow us to really understand what is happening at a higher level than we would get from simple dialogue.
We can tell there's something big going on and the bits and pieces are revealed masterfully. There are a lot of surprises, but hints leading to those surprises are dropped like breadcrumbs on each page so that when they are revealed, it's a pleasant feeling of watching the pieces fall into place - as opposed to a sense of: "Hey, where did that come from?".
There are numerous settings and each is well defined and offers a unique mood to that portion of the story. Overall a masterfully spun tale that leaves the reader feeling that they didn't simply read a story, but rather experienced it.
Outstanding!
November 11, 2011
The Night Watchman Express by Alison DeLuca tells the story of Miriam. She is a young girl whose father recently passes away leaving her an orphan under the care of her late father's business partners, the Marchpanes. Unfortunately it seems that the Marchpanes have some kind of sinister plan involving the business her father worked so hard to build. Miriam completely rebels against the newcomers to her home until Mana, the new governess is hired to take care of her. Mana earns Miriams respect and teaches her to behave much more appropriately to her guardians. The Marchpanes are unaware that Mana is in the house acting as a spy for her own reasons.
They story unfolds fairly well although I wasn't really sure where it was going in the beginning. I really began to become interested with the introduction of Mana and the demonstration of her special skill. The development of the characters is done very well with Mana teaching Miriam and the relationship the develops with Simon and Neil, the Marchpanes son and his friend from school.
The last quarter or so of the book actually focus on Neil and his adventures on Mana's home island. This is where the action really begins to pick up, but the book ends with several questions unanswered. Miriam and Simon are on the Night Watchman Express and it seems like a very bad thing. Even though I am normally not a fan of the cliff hanger type endings this one wasn't too bad as there was some resolution in the story involving Neil and I will most likely be checking out the next book Devil's Kitchen.
Review copy provided by the author.
They story unfolds fairly well although I wasn't really sure where it was going in the beginning. I really began to become interested with the introduction of Mana and the demonstration of her special skill. The development of the characters is done very well with Mana teaching Miriam and the relationship the develops with Simon and Neil, the Marchpanes son and his friend from school.
The last quarter or so of the book actually focus on Neil and his adventures on Mana's home island. This is where the action really begins to pick up, but the book ends with several questions unanswered. Miriam and Simon are on the Night Watchman Express and it seems like a very bad thing. Even though I am normally not a fan of the cliff hanger type endings this one wasn't too bad as there was some resolution in the story involving Neil and I will most likely be checking out the next book Devil's Kitchen.
Review copy provided by the author.
November 10, 2011
An example of how good indie work can be (and for me that means a great story plus beautifully edited). This book was reviewed through the Blog tour – Tour de Troops.
*MINOR SPOILERS*
Recently orphaned, left a substantial fortune by her father, but in the care of his unfeeling business partner Mr Marchpane and his wife. Only a few hours hours after they arrive it’s decided that she should be moved out of her room and into the attic to make space for the Marchpane’s son Simon. At first glance this may not be the most original opening (it reminded me vaguely of Jane Eyre or Cinderella) but that’s where the similarities end.
Miriam must learn how to behave under harsh rule of Mrs Marchpane and luckily for her, the new governess Miss Postulate appears from out of nowhere to help her do just that. There are several questions flying around as you read this fast-paced and cleverly written book, such as:
- Who is Miss Postulate and what is her objective?
- What is this mysterious device the Marchpanes are looking for?
- Can the Cantwells be trusted?
- What’s the purpose of the strange circles that Simon and Neil find?
The book comes in three parts. The first cleverly sets up the characters and their respective relationships. The second answers many of the questions posed (above), and the (shorter) third section sets up the story for its sequel.
Needless to say, the next book (Devil’s Kitchen) is on my christmas list…
*MINOR SPOILERS*
Recently orphaned, left a substantial fortune by her father, but in the care of his unfeeling business partner Mr Marchpane and his wife. Only a few hours hours after they arrive it’s decided that she should be moved out of her room and into the attic to make space for the Marchpane’s son Simon. At first glance this may not be the most original opening (it reminded me vaguely of Jane Eyre or Cinderella) but that’s where the similarities end.
Miriam must learn how to behave under harsh rule of Mrs Marchpane and luckily for her, the new governess Miss Postulate appears from out of nowhere to help her do just that. There are several questions flying around as you read this fast-paced and cleverly written book, such as:
- Who is Miss Postulate and what is her objective?
- What is this mysterious device the Marchpanes are looking for?
- Can the Cantwells be trusted?
- What’s the purpose of the strange circles that Simon and Neil find?
The book comes in three parts. The first cleverly sets up the characters and their respective relationships. The second answers many of the questions posed (above), and the (shorter) third section sets up the story for its sequel.
Needless to say, the next book (Devil’s Kitchen) is on my christmas list…
March 10, 2012
I’d never read a Steampunk novel until The Night Watchman Express crossed my path and I wasn’t sure if it would be ‘my thing’, but I’d read a few of the 5-star reviews on Amazon and decided to give it a try.
By the end of the first chapter I was hooked! The characters are larger than life: Miriam, Simon and Neil are loveable and you find yourself really caring about them and the twists and turns in their young lives. Mana is enigmatic yet extremely likeable and the Marchpanes are foul creatures that you take an instant dislike to.
The story is fast-paced; the plot and subplots have so many cliffhangers and hooks, you just have to keep reading. The world-building is superior with superb description – you can so easily picture the places in your mind, and that, to me, is the mark of a very skilled writer.
This book would appeal to adults as well as children. It is entertaining, suspenseful and is so well written, it draws you in. Now, I HAVE to buy the sequel, Devil’s Kitchen, just to find out what happens next. That again is the mark of a consummate author if they leave you breathlessly needing to buy the next book in the series!
I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend this book and would give it more than 5-stars if I could! Alison DeLuca has an enormous talent and deserves every bit of success that comes her way.
By the end of the first chapter I was hooked! The characters are larger than life: Miriam, Simon and Neil are loveable and you find yourself really caring about them and the twists and turns in their young lives. Mana is enigmatic yet extremely likeable and the Marchpanes are foul creatures that you take an instant dislike to.
The story is fast-paced; the plot and subplots have so many cliffhangers and hooks, you just have to keep reading. The world-building is superior with superb description – you can so easily picture the places in your mind, and that, to me, is the mark of a very skilled writer.
This book would appeal to adults as well as children. It is entertaining, suspenseful and is so well written, it draws you in. Now, I HAVE to buy the sequel, Devil’s Kitchen, just to find out what happens next. That again is the mark of a consummate author if they leave you breathlessly needing to buy the next book in the series!
I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend this book and would give it more than 5-stars if I could! Alison DeLuca has an enormous talent and deserves every bit of success that comes her way.
October 24, 2012
The Night Watchman Express was a decently good young adult novel. The cover of the book said that it was a steampunk novel, but I am not sure how. It just seemed like a fantasy novel to me. The book didn’t fully capture my interest at the beginning. However, once the Marchpanes arrived, the book got more interesting. It stayed interesting up until the incident with Mana. The second half of the book was a struggle for me to finish. It normally would have taken me three days to finish it. However, it took me almost a week. The plot for the second half was slow. It didn’t get exciting again until the end. I liked most of the characters. I couldn’t stand the Marchpanes. Virgil had a weak personality. He let his wife walk all over him. Theodosia was a horrible woman. She was rude, manipulative, and just plain nasty. She never did anything nice for anyone unless it helped her agenda in some way. My favorite character was Mana. I am envious of all of her powers. I also liked that she seemed knowledgable, and wise beyond her years. Although this book was hit or miss for me at times, I am excited to read book two, The Devil's Kitchen, to find out what is happening to Miriam and Simon.
June 19, 2011
The Night Watchman Express is a wild train ride that spans so far it's almost hard to describe. With the luxurious descriptions of typical Victorian era scenery and exotic tropical islands, DeLuca manages to suspend disbelief when introducing the fantasy elements into this story. Despite the bright cheeriness surrounding most of the characters, there is usually an undertone of darkness that creates a more realistic world. And when the surroundings are gloomy and depressing, sparks of humor are injected in appropriate places. There are stories within stories and the pieces of the ever intriguing mystery fall into place at just the right intervals to keep the reader interested. Some of the elements and language may be slightly difficult for younger readers to understand, but that is not a downside. It makes the reader think and if necessary, do a little research. I wish there had been books like this when I was in school. It's definitely a fun adventure that even adults can enjoy.
July 4, 2011
The Night Watchman Express was my very first YA read, and I have to give Ms. DeLuca high marks for a number of reasons. My schedule seldom allows the luxury of reading for hours on end, so I generally engage in fits and starts. Night Watchman was written so well, it enabled me to pick up where I left off very easily, sometimes after a week or more. This is an important quality for a YA novel to posess, as the attention span of young adults can be limited at times. I found the story line to be wonderfully creative, and engaging. Alison DeLuca also handled character development very well with each persona ringing true; in large part, due to realistic, believable dialogue. I'm pleased that this novel is the first in a series. It's alway nice to see a series start strong like this one has. Well done. I highly recommend The Night Watchman Express for the young, and young at heart.
December 5, 2012
Steampunk is a fairly new to me genre and this series is an awesome plunge in to the genre. There are three book currently in this series. I was able to read the first two books and look forward to the third. I was so glad I already had book two in hand when I finished the first book. DeLuca is a wonderful storyteller and these books are the type that suck you in and you almost feel like you are in the story. Her characters are so believable and they are so well written you begin to care about what happens to them. I recommend these books not only to steampunk lovers but people who enjoy an engrossing enjoyable storyline.
January 14, 2012
Simply superb.
This book, although written as a YA Steampunk book, is something all ages could enjoy. It's a beautifully written novel following the adventures of three children and a mysterious governess who arrives to look after the orphaned Miriam.
The prose reminded me of traditional adventure stories ( a la Enid Blyton, CS Lewis etc) with an injection of fantasy sci-fi. The characters are rich and well developed, notably the female characters.
It ends on a cliff hanger and I shall be getting the sequel soon. Highly recommended.
This book, although written as a YA Steampunk book, is something all ages could enjoy. It's a beautifully written novel following the adventures of three children and a mysterious governess who arrives to look after the orphaned Miriam.
The prose reminded me of traditional adventure stories ( a la Enid Blyton, CS Lewis etc) with an injection of fantasy sci-fi. The characters are rich and well developed, notably the female characters.
It ends on a cliff hanger and I shall be getting the sequel soon. Highly recommended.
January 21, 2013
This was a very good book. One of my new favorites. Set in England in the time of the industrial revolution it is a story that focuses on growing up and magic, two of my favorite themes. I love how the characters grow and change as they develop the story. I have to admit, I read all three of the books one right after the other, and so dividing them up is not going to be easy. I look forward to being able to read the next in the series when it comes out.
October 31, 2011
This book was my first foray into steampunk and I was unsure what to expect. I am SO glad I read this! The characters are extremely well written, there's humour and excitement and hints and the wonderful Mana. I thouroughly enjoyed this book and I've been lucky to read the sequel, the Devil's Kitchen which is excellent again!
December 28, 2011
Awesome steam punk story with lots of charm and good flow to it. Personally the only downside is some unoriginal/cliche characters, Specially "evil characters" that follow the convention of "Victorian Era Villain" so diligently they become predictable and cartoon(ish).
Other than that fun book to go trough.
Other than that fun book to go trough.
September 25, 2012
This was a great book. It had suspense, mystery and mysticism. It took place in an earlier time, but it never felt like I read history. The author wove in history and the fantasy world next to each other and brought out the story. An involving conflict and twist came up constantly. It was easy to stay hooked to this book.
June 18, 2011
I really enjoyed this tale. Maya is the perfect governess and I will she had raised me! I loved the suspense and the darkness, and the way nothing went the way you thought it would. This is a fun book!
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