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418 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2011
**Mohandas is integrated into the emotional life of the crew far too quickly. Is this a result of the new social order? If so, some mention of this would have been helpful. I suspect, though, that his rapid integration was essential to the plot moving forward and so was manipulated into place.
**Unless Steel is already deeply insane at the time, which the story doesn't imply, why does she keep insisting on such a narrow range to their study on the planet they visit? She is intelligent enough to know that only a broad understanding can lead to the end she seeks. If she is insane, none of the crew choose to comment on it or respond accordingly.
**Most people choose to remain the same gender when they reboot. This is the most heavy-handed of the author's manipulations because it (and an entirely superfluous visit to a feminist planet) allow him to hold forth on the sociological manifestations of feminism, patriarchal societies and other subjects on which he is not particularly qualified to speak, it seems to me. This is not to say he doesn't make some interesting points, but his perspective on male domination in most human societies is simplistic, at best.
**The highly risky visit to the planet of Eden doesn't seem to have any purpose proportional to its risk. They are aware that one of their party cannot reboot, yet they still choose to risk her death so she can pay a visit to a relative. Other than the author's need to tell this part of the story (and it is one of the best written sections of the book), the logic of the visit is highly questionable.