From a highschool student that was required to read and review this book.
The book scar town, aims for it to be a gripping mystery novel for young adults, but unfortunately, it falls short in several key areas. My dislike for the book comes mainly from three lil issues: the disconnected and poorly introduced characters, a theme that lacks depth or impact, and a writing style that feels too simplistic for its intended young adult audience. Overall, the book’s execution weakens what could have been an awesome story for the intended audience.
First of all, some characters are introduced in a confusing and unengaging way. From the beginning, it’s difficult to form a connection particularly with Uncle Monty because he’s introduced hurriedly and lacks any reason to suspect him as the main villain. The protagonist, Will, is written with minimal emotional range, moving pretty much from just scared to guilty to sad. When he’s happy it never clearly states that he is and just grazes over it, making it hard to relate to or care about his journey. Other characters are introduced abruptly, without enough background or motivation to make their actions feel believable. As a result, the story struggles to create meaningful reasons to care about the character other than “They’re the protagonist” or “They’re the bad guy”.
Secondly, the theme of the book feels underdeveloped and flat. While Scar Town tries to explore mystery and family secrets, and it does, it’s just that it does so in a surface-level way that doesn't leave much for the reader to think about or delve deeper in their imagination with. The tension and drama that should be driving the story often fall short, making the theme feel more like something they put on the description so people that like the genre would read it rather than a compelling part of the narrative. This lack of depth takes away from the impact that the story is trying to convey and weakens the overall message.
Lastly, the way the book is written significantly limits the enjoyment one receives when reading. The language and overall tone are more suitable for younger readers, I’d say aged 9–11, rather than the 13–18 age group it's clearly aimed toward. The simplicity of the writing strips the story of emotional scenes and makes the characters and events feel less real. As a result, the book may fail to hold the interest of a teen audience looking for something more layered and interesting. I would also like to acknowledge that it could be written in such a way purely because it’s in the perspective of a thirteen-year-old, but even then, it doesn’t really suit thirteen-year-olds.
In conclusion, Scar Town falls short due to its poorly introduced characters, a weakly executed theme, and a writing style that is too simplistic for the young adult demographic. I found the book unsatisfying and believe it is not suitable for the age group it targets. The characters fail to engage the reader from the start, and the writing style doesn't match the expectations of a teen audience. Ultimately, Scar Town is a disappointing read that I would not recommend to the specified audience.