Loved the premise of this storyline. Small-town southern girl falls in love with small-town boy, but it’s sure not forever. See, small-town boy is a few notches above small-town girl on the social scale. He breaks her heart and so much more. He won’t even realize how much damage he did till 20 years later. That’s when that small-town girl ends up saving that small, southern gossipy town she was forced to flee. There will be a lot of twists and turns. Lets just say that small-town girl gets her HEA, but that boy that dumped her way back then? Well, not so much.
👁 OBSERVATIONS:
Jeffrey: The past 20 years haven’t been nice to him… but he asked for it. It was hard to fathom him staying in the situation he was living in, especially when he knew what Angela did. Talk about duplicity! He surely lacked cojones. He couldn’t stand up to his parents, nor did he confront his scheming, duplicitous wife when her lies were revealed… lies that totally changed everything.
Bella: Jeffrey may not have had cojones but Bella certainly did, if that’s even possible. She took control of her life and didn’t look back. That small-town girl wasn’t so small-town anymore. Her determination wasn’t overboard, just very effective.
Rafa: Should have made his move much sooner. Wonderful man, father figure and business partner but way to slow in matters of the heart.
Melissa: What’s not to like about her. She seemed a little too adult when she was five but perfect when she was 20.
Mom’s and Dad’s: Both sets have big issues…
…Where were Jeffrey’s parents when the truth came out? They were such a role in his marriage, why did they just disappear from the storyline? They too, had been duped.
… Belle’s mom didn’t want the small town gossip so chases her daughter away. If she regretted it so much, why not try to make amends? And Belle’s dad was wonderful but why didn’t he try to stay in Belle’s life? Why was it Belle that always made the moves for reconciliation?
… Secondary characters played a good support role and were needed.
🧐 WISHES:
✓ Wanted to be drawn into the story with more emotion. This was the perfect storyline for emotion and feelings but it didn’t come across that way. I didn’t feel I was there watching things happen, it was more like I was simply reading the lines.
✓ Would love to know Jeffrey’s thoughts and feelings. A lot happens during a space of 20 years. His choices affected a lot of people, including himself. Needed more of his thoughts. I never felt his remorse. I never felt his shock when he learns the real impact of his choices. Especially would like to know his thoughts/emotions as he watched Bella’s success from a far-away distance. Where was his mind while reading article after article, about Bella and her daughter?
Also, why was Jeffrey so concerned about Angela when he learned who Melissa was? Seems like again, Angela takes precedence, first place, even though she brought everything she’s experiencing on herself. Did Jeffrey really love her after all? Why keep putting her selfishness ahead of everyone else?
✓ Where was Todd in all of this? How did he react when he learned just who Melissa was and what happened between her parents all those years ago? Does he make excuses for his dad, his mother, or does he confront them?