This is another one of those books that begs the question, "Why do I even have this?" and the sad answer probably is, "I needed to get something, and I had a coupon." It must have been quite a sale, since I have this and its follow up novel, which turned out to be a part of a trilogy where I never saw the last book and thus will probably go through this series not entirely sure how it ends. Well, isn't that just like life?
The cover features a one-armed man apparently attempting to outrun a stationary spaceship and while that sounds like a feverish executive pitch for "The Fugitive! But in space! And focusing on the wrong guy!" it’s a basic feature of the story of Tom Corcorigan, who will spend a lot of running but not a lot of clapping over the course of the novel. We meet him when he's a teenager living with his parents on one of the lower levels of his world where people are mostly just trying to exist. One day he's writing okay poetry when a strange woman comes up to him and hands him a crystal before running off to get herself killed (its not clear that he's her plan but its definitely the end result). She has completely black eyes, the telltale sign of a Pilot. What are Pilots? Like the buffalo wings at the local bar that allegedly once caused someone to reenact that scene from "Bleak House", they're completely legendary. What does that mean? Don't ask me, the book never really bothers to explain.
There are some novels that want to hold your hand like a parent grasping a small child and there are some novels that are quite content teleporting you into the middle of a foreign country where no one speaks your language, all the customs are utterly different and maps have been outlawed (and not even the outlaws have maps). Meaney seems to have felt that was the right approach here as we're plunged into Tom's life without much in the way of introduction to anything, which wouldn't be a big deal except that having some understanding of the social and economic underpinnings of this whole society is sort of key to figuring out just what the heck is going on. But unfortunately you're going to realize that at the exact same moment you realize that on Meaney's medical records, among whatever else is there, he has "exposition" listed under his allergies.
From what you'll figure Tom's world exists as a series of levels and things get nicer as you go up. The people who live on the upper levels are your standard lords and ladies, and like lords and ladies in fiction everywhere, are pretty okay with treating everyone like their servants. There are also Oracles, people who tend to randomly "truecast" and see the future, though since nobody seems to be able to stop what happens in the visions its unclear how useful this is. Early on, one of the Oracles take Tom's mother as a consort or something (who's not all there due to some kind of addiction), with the end result being something along the lines of Bambi being inspired to go after the firearms industry . . . a notable goal perhaps, but you have to wonder, "How is this adorable guy going to pull it off?"
With the magic of logic, it seems. Before too long Tom is pressed into servitude by the Lord of his realm and quickly catches peoples' attention with his mathematical logosphere abilities, which seem to involve visualizing the nature of time itself and perhaps tapping into Mu space. For all their skills in treating people like garbage, the Lords seem to recognize merit, leading to Tom's elevation in society.
Alternating with Tom's travails are chapters that are apparently being projected by the crystal given to him by the Pilot . . . those chapters are set hundreds of years earlier and feature someone named Karyn on Earth as she goes through some kind of pilot training with some colleagues. These are meant to be learning modules (and haven't we all had enough of remote learning lately?) and while Tom seems to be interpreting them as lessons of a sort, its not entirely clear what lesson they're supposed to be imparting or what puzzle he's supposed to try and solve so he can unlock the next module (the story at least implies that in the early modules, later its just seems like its straight-up telling Karyn's story). Either way, it seems to be helping his progress in making all the lords and ladies gasp at the mention of his name.
None of this is necessarily very obvious, which points to peoples' most common complaint about this novel . . . its extremely difficult to tell what's going on sometimes. Not even in a "where on earth is this plot heading?" fashion but even in the chapters themselves where it seems like Meaney decided that what the SF world needed was an aggressively hyperactive version of Ernest Hemingway's style where stripped bare sentences are just firing at you constantly like that dude from the X-Men shooting out deadly playing cards one after the other, only instead of trying to hurt you he's insisting you guess the card. Its an interesting choice of presentation and I'm not sure it entirely works given that very little of the action in the book seems to warrant this breakneck approach and as an attempt at immersing the reader in a new environment it falls somewhere short, like trying to catalog species in a lake by strapping a camera to a rock and skipping it wildly across the surface. Sure, you can get some idea of what's going on but its not clear what's important or what difference it makes.
For me, the style worked exactly once . . . during a major confrontation things turn rapid and angular, with a wobbly sense of tension that suggests even the book doesn't know what's going to happen next. Unfortunately, this scene would probably have been the climax of any other story but instead winds up occurring about halfway through, which means the book spends the rest of its time in a sort of perpetual "Now what?" Which is a good question, but not one it answers very well.
Part of that is because, in keeping with the "someone cut the brakes" aesthetic, the plot has a tendency to feel like Meaney is making up scenes as he goes along without a real scene of how they relate to one another, or further any kind of overall plot. He keeps throwing up roadblocks for Tom (or Tom keeps up throwing up roadblocks for himself) but it often feels haphazard, a "drama! I thus summon you!" approach where an issue comes out of left field that keeps Tom busy for a handful of chapters until the book seems to remember that he still exists and plot goes out to find him again. Which can mean that when you're in a scene the book can read just fine, but ultimately it starts making the book feel like a bunch of vaguely connected sketches featuring the same character that isn't really building to anything (tellingly, the biggest event in the book happens at a distance to Tom, who's unaware of it until after the fact) so much as leaping from one problem to the next.
This would be easier to take if Tom was a more dynamic or interesting character but, alas, he's kind of flat. While we don't need every lead character to heroically takes the reins every time things get rough Tom is mostly swept along by events . . . once in a while he tries to swim against them but there are quite a few moments when he seems like a supporting character in his own story. His motivation for the first half of the novel is mostly selfish and then afterwards he's mostly absent from anything that can affect the plot for a good chunk of the book. Which would work better if he was a supporting character since he could vanish for a bit and then reappear dramatically but since he's our guy we're stuck with him while more interesting things happen elsewhere. And he's just not fascinating enough to warrant that attention . . . he seems to meet the Pilot purely by accident and beyond his useful logosphere abilities (he's not even the smartest person with that stuff) really doesn't have much more going on except for reacting to whatever in-the-moment travail the book decides to throw at him.
It’s a shame because while Meaney's world here doesn't break any new ground, its has the potential to not be totally boring. But we rarely get a sense of the culture beyond the bog-standard "lords and ladies lording and ladying over the oppressed populace" angle and the whole logosphere stuff, beyond forging new territory in hard SF, eventually across with the same rapid-fire mumbo-jumbo as the rest of the book, with just as much technical verve as old Doc Smith or AE Von Vogt stories but without their sense of flair (and five times as long). Instead of being dazzling people with its promise of science pushed beyond known limits, once the revved up science terms are stripped away it feels no different than elves standing around to cast spells to open portals to other worlds.
The end result is a book that has all the trappings of something epic but winds up having little weight to it at all, images and events cycling by rapidly like a Viewmaster with an methamphetamine habit, with very little gripping the mind. It slips by and slips away before you can even hope to grasp it, leaving you behind to watch it speed ahead with a confident laugh, insisting that you have to keep it with it if you want to understand even as you're standing by watching it plow forward gleefully unaware into a pile of rocks and wondering if at any point its going to realize its heading in the wrong direction.