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The Ancestor's Secrets #1
Protected by The Falcon
Alternate cover edition for ISBN 9780991211654
Ilona is a doctor and is ruled by logic. When she starts to develop unusual powers, her beliefs change and she’s thrown into a world of mysteries, traditions and secrets. She doesn't know much about her heritage besides legends and rituals when begins to remember her mother’s instructions concealed as rhymes. The discovery of her healing power and ability to freeze time is exciting and frightening. A sinister man appears and Ilona connects his presence with the series of mysterious deaths around her. She has been in love with her unsuspecting best friend, when she meets a stranger. She is drawn to him and confused by the sudden magnetic feeling.
Ilona is a doctor and is ruled by logic. When she starts to develop unusual powers, her beliefs change and she’s thrown into a world of mysteries, traditions and secrets. She doesn't know much about her heritage besides legends and rituals when begins to remember her mother’s instructions concealed as rhymes. The discovery of her healing power and ability to freeze time is exciting and frightening. A sinister man appears and Ilona connects his presence with the series of mysterious deaths around her. She has been in love with her unsuspecting best friend, when she meets a stranger. She is drawn to him and confused by the sudden magnetic feeling.
305 pages, ebook
First published February 18, 2008
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Erika M. Szabo
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“The writing bug bit me on a rainy afternoon when I couldn’t find any new book to read. My daughter had enough of my moping around and snapped at me, “Mom, stop whining! If you haven’t a book to read, then write one.” Her challenge shocked me, but I started playing with the idea and I’ve been writing stories, that I like to read, ever since.”
Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introduces her story writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative, educational, and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.
“I followed my dream to become a writer. As an artist, I paint pretty pictures with my brushes, and as a writer, I paint vivid pictures with my words.”
https://www.authorerikamszabo.com
“The writing bug bit me on a rainy afternoon when I couldn’t find any new book to read. My daughter had enough of my moping around and snapped at me, “Mom, stop whining! If you haven’t a book to read, then write one.” Her challenge shocked me, but I started playing with the idea and I’ve been writing stories, that I like to read, ever since.”
Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introduces her story writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative, educational, and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.
“I followed my dream to become a writer. As an artist, I paint pretty pictures with my brushes, and as a writer, I paint vivid pictures with my words.”
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March 19, 2013
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review from the Goodreads group Lovers of Paranormal, R2R Program.
I like how the author starts each of her chapters, using the meaning of plants and flowers and a definition as the theme of the section, it is very unique.
The cover is also very beautiful and describes Ilona's features perfectly, especially her eyes.
Some parts of the book are written in the Hun language, which gives a special touch to the legends and rhymes.
The concept of the Huns, in this book, has nothing to do with the battles of Attila or history, although he and other well-known people are mentioned in the right moment, surrounded by folklore.
The Huns have special abilities or gifts: foreseeing the future, time traveling, healing with a touch, creating dreams or create art that suggests music. The Huns are also full of mystery and they reach more knowledge when they reach certain ages, and cannot be told from others until the time is right.
Illona is a 29 year old doctor, who can heal her patients with the modern medicine and her secret gift, but is better to be kept away from the kitchen or electronic devices. She also is in love with her best friend and starting to fall in love with the mysterious hun that just moved in town.
While she tries to solve the mysteries about being a True Hun and reevaluates herself as a woman, who is quite insecure, she is being attacked several times.
The universe created in this book is original, mystical and unique; in fact it's so original I have nothing to compare it with.
I look forward to the second book as this one left me with a huge cliffhanger and hunger to know more about the fabulous world that Erika created!
I like how the author starts each of her chapters, using the meaning of plants and flowers and a definition as the theme of the section, it is very unique.
The cover is also very beautiful and describes Ilona's features perfectly, especially her eyes.
Some parts of the book are written in the Hun language, which gives a special touch to the legends and rhymes.
The concept of the Huns, in this book, has nothing to do with the battles of Attila or history, although he and other well-known people are mentioned in the right moment, surrounded by folklore.
The Huns have special abilities or gifts: foreseeing the future, time traveling, healing with a touch, creating dreams or create art that suggests music. The Huns are also full of mystery and they reach more knowledge when they reach certain ages, and cannot be told from others until the time is right.
Illona is a 29 year old doctor, who can heal her patients with the modern medicine and her secret gift, but is better to be kept away from the kitchen or electronic devices. She also is in love with her best friend and starting to fall in love with the mysterious hun that just moved in town.
While she tries to solve the mysteries about being a True Hun and reevaluates herself as a woman, who is quite insecure, she is being attacked several times.
The universe created in this book is original, mystical and unique; in fact it's so original I have nothing to compare it with.
I look forward to the second book as this one left me with a huge cliffhanger and hunger to know more about the fabulous world that Erika created!
November 17, 2011
I received a signed copy of this book as one of the goodreads giveaways, so many thanks to Erika Szabo and Goodreads for this. I really enjoyed reading it, but it ended far too soon for me. The book is well written and easy to read and de-stress too, so I found it perfect to snuggle under a blanket and lose myself in the story.
The background context to this book is one of mystery. The main character Ilona is a true Hun and the book (as book 1) is setting the scene, for a journey of self discovery not just about herself but also her mysterious ancestry. Within the Hun culture, at least in this story, there are a lot of secrets that are not told until you reach certain chronological junctures in life. The first one of these is when they hit their adulthood, at the age of 29. This story begins just before the main characters 29th birthday.
As the ‘heroine’ is an orphan she is stumbling her way through finding out some of these secrets. There were times through the book where I felt that as a character I really liked her, at other times she frustrated me. I think this was a deliberate part of her character as she is conflicted between having confidence in her intelligence and certain abilities while having no confidence in herself. The insecurity she has as a woman, and drawn from life events, meant that she had barriers which kept others out, and I also felt kept her caged in (although whether the author would agree I don’t know).
My only one critique (and I hope it is taken constructively) is that it needed better proof reading. There were only a few typos and grammatical errors, but they did at times distract from the story. I would definitely recommend this book as one to read; in fact I’m after the second part myself.
The background context to this book is one of mystery. The main character Ilona is a true Hun and the book (as book 1) is setting the scene, for a journey of self discovery not just about herself but also her mysterious ancestry. Within the Hun culture, at least in this story, there are a lot of secrets that are not told until you reach certain chronological junctures in life. The first one of these is when they hit their adulthood, at the age of 29. This story begins just before the main characters 29th birthday.
As the ‘heroine’ is an orphan she is stumbling her way through finding out some of these secrets. There were times through the book where I felt that as a character I really liked her, at other times she frustrated me. I think this was a deliberate part of her character as she is conflicted between having confidence in her intelligence and certain abilities while having no confidence in herself. The insecurity she has as a woman, and drawn from life events, meant that she had barriers which kept others out, and I also felt kept her caged in (although whether the author would agree I don’t know).
My only one critique (and I hope it is taken constructively) is that it needed better proof reading. There were only a few typos and grammatical errors, but they did at times distract from the story. I would definitely recommend this book as one to read; in fact I’m after the second part myself.
October 12, 2014
I was very pleased to come across this Fantasy novel because it is much more aligned to my taste in such books, namely real people living in our world, but gifted with special ‘magical’ powers. The first sentences already grabbed my fascination, and the easy flow of the entire book continually held my interest and curiosity. The author has skilfully let the main characters talk in the form of diary entries, and with natural dialogue and careful descriptions of thoughts and feelings, the reader soon feels intimately acquainted with them.
Particularly interesting is the fact that many aspects of this story are based on fact and history, namely the Huns who lived in Eastern Europe some 1500 years ago. It is therefore not too hard to believe that ancient traditions and secret rites could have continued down to our time. The main character, Ilona, is a young doctor educated in the modern world who at first struggles to comprehend the depth and power of her heritage when she ‘becomes of age’ at 29. Fascinating and fun to read is the way she discovers her special healing abilities and in particular, the way she can slow time around her. Even more intriguing is her handsome love interest, Zoltan, who can time-travel, but always within limitations and ancient law.
This first book in the series has been cleverly woven with various threads that continue into future books, and needless to say, I can hardly wait to read Book 2 and find out which man is Ilona’s true love, what her ultimate great destiny is, and what menace is still pursuing her with evil intentions. This is a book I can recommend to anyone interested in this kind of historic fantasy involving ancient traditions and down-to-earth characters of our own world.
Particularly interesting is the fact that many aspects of this story are based on fact and history, namely the Huns who lived in Eastern Europe some 1500 years ago. It is therefore not too hard to believe that ancient traditions and secret rites could have continued down to our time. The main character, Ilona, is a young doctor educated in the modern world who at first struggles to comprehend the depth and power of her heritage when she ‘becomes of age’ at 29. Fascinating and fun to read is the way she discovers her special healing abilities and in particular, the way she can slow time around her. Even more intriguing is her handsome love interest, Zoltan, who can time-travel, but always within limitations and ancient law.
This first book in the series has been cleverly woven with various threads that continue into future books, and needless to say, I can hardly wait to read Book 2 and find out which man is Ilona’s true love, what her ultimate great destiny is, and what menace is still pursuing her with evil intentions. This is a book I can recommend to anyone interested in this kind of historic fantasy involving ancient traditions and down-to-earth characters of our own world.
March 21, 2013
I'm not going to repeat the synopsis because it gives a good overview of the story.
I'm going to see if I can explain why this is a 2 star story for me.
I like the idea of the story. It's different and I really wanted to learn the secrets of the Huns. For me, the problem was the delivery of getting to the bottom of these secrets. The first 60 or so pages, the story moved slowly for me and it was redundant. I remember thinking, "I need Ilona to do something else" like go to work or something. She was just going round and round trying to get answers that she knew she wasn't going to get and inflicting pain on people by trying to get them.
Finally she moves on and the story picks up as we follow her to her job at the hospital. The story started to move for me after about 100 pages not so good when the book is just a little over 200.
There is a romance but I didn't feel the connection. I felt more of the attraction between her and Bela. There is no sex or cursing (that I can remember) in this book but there is talk of pedophilia and rape.
So, the 2 star rating is hard to give for this one because I like the story (even though at times it was still a little too neat and tidy) and characters but I didn't like repeatedly chasing the secrets in circles. I feel to pull of the "big secret" plot you have to have some other things happening to keep the story interesting until that secret is revealed. That started happening to late in this story.
(I was given the book to read in exchange for an honest review)
I'm going to see if I can explain why this is a 2 star story for me.
I like the idea of the story. It's different and I really wanted to learn the secrets of the Huns. For me, the problem was the delivery of getting to the bottom of these secrets. The first 60 or so pages, the story moved slowly for me and it was redundant. I remember thinking, "I need Ilona to do something else" like go to work or something. She was just going round and round trying to get answers that she knew she wasn't going to get and inflicting pain on people by trying to get them.
Finally she moves on and the story picks up as we follow her to her job at the hospital. The story started to move for me after about 100 pages not so good when the book is just a little over 200.
There is a romance but I didn't feel the connection. I felt more of the attraction between her and Bela. There is no sex or cursing (that I can remember) in this book but there is talk of pedophilia and rape.
So, the 2 star rating is hard to give for this one because I like the story (even though at times it was still a little too neat and tidy) and characters but I didn't like repeatedly chasing the secrets in circles. I feel to pull of the "big secret" plot you have to have some other things happening to keep the story interesting until that secret is revealed. That started happening to late in this story.
(I was given the book to read in exchange for an honest review)
March 25, 2013
I absolutely love this story. It's full of mystery, suspense, danger and let's not forget the handsome stranger who falls in love (at 1st sight) with Ilona (the amazingly smart and very lovable heroine). I loved the Hungarian touch written into the beginning of each chapter followed with the English translation. Though, I would love to actually hear the Hungarian version. I think it would sound so amazingly intriguing.
This story took me on a wonderful journey through the past, present and future. When Ilona turns 29, becoming an adult by Hun standards she finds she has an extraordinary gift. She is left frustrated & determined as she tries to figure out what this gift really is and what she can do with it. I found myself feeling her frustrations and rooting for her when she finally puts the puzzle pieces together.
We are left hanging at the end of the story not knowing the full outcome of one of the hardest decisions she has had to make. Queue up book 2, Secrets Revealed. Starting it next.
This story took me on a wonderful journey through the past, present and future. When Ilona turns 29, becoming an adult by Hun standards she finds she has an extraordinary gift. She is left frustrated & determined as she tries to figure out what this gift really is and what she can do with it. I found myself feeling her frustrations and rooting for her when she finally puts the puzzle pieces together.
We are left hanging at the end of the story not knowing the full outcome of one of the hardest decisions she has had to make. Queue up book 2, Secrets Revealed. Starting it next.
February 16, 2012
Oh how I totally loved reading this book and cannot wait to read the next ones.
I found it so easy to read and easy to follow, hence making it easy to finish rather quickly in one of those middle of the night 'must finish' sessions.
I was captivated by the main character Ilona, and the way the book was written had me right there with her throughout her journey in this first novel.
To me there was all the right amounts of suspence, surprise, romance and interesting facts that I can't wait to find more about.
I would recommend this to anyone to read, but be prepared to 'want more' :)
I found it so easy to read and easy to follow, hence making it easy to finish rather quickly in one of those middle of the night 'must finish' sessions.
I was captivated by the main character Ilona, and the way the book was written had me right there with her throughout her journey in this first novel.
To me there was all the right amounts of suspence, surprise, romance and interesting facts that I can't wait to find more about.
I would recommend this to anyone to read, but be prepared to 'want more' :)
November 26, 2011
Oh so cruel to end it there!!!!!! I totally loved this story, it was unlike anything I have ever read before and I am totally hooked. I need to find out more about the True Hun's and their abilities. Who will Ilona choose and what is Elza hiding??
I guess I am just going to have to start with book 2....
Erika, you have a new fan:)
I guess I am just going to have to start with book 2....
Erika, you have a new fan:)
April 22, 2025
This story, as it progresses give the reader a lot of information on the Huns and thier society. Though this is a fictional story the author did quite a bit of research to lend reality to it. The Narrator does a good job with the various characters voices and the entire storyline. I am going on to the next book in this Series.
November 30, 2021
I liked this book because of the unique storyline. The book explores time travel, unknown mystic powers and evil entities trying to disrupt Ilona's destiny. I listened to this lengthy book and it is not finished. I need to get the next book to find out what happens with Ilona and Zoltan.
February 5, 2017
Wow, this was not what I was expecting from a Young Adult Fantasy, and it was a surprising pleasure. Told mostly through the eyes of Ilona, the main character, Szabo cleverly utilizes a combination of narrative prose and passages from Ilona's diary, as well as from those of other characters, in order to advance her plot and tell her story. Ilona is the Chosen One who has been gifted with certain "powers," which she begins to learn about as she comes of age on her 29th birthday. But there are secrets about her heritage and culture that no one can reveal to her, secrets that she alone must uncover for herself. Szabo has crafted an interesting story based on Hungarian culture and tradition, as well as the ancient legends, folklore and mythology of Ilona's ancestral homeland. She also uses ancient runes to add a very realistic touch to the novel, and tells us such things as, in the flower language of Ilona's ancestors, the camellia "represents longing, a persistent and unfulfilled strong desire and need," which is so much at the soul of Ilona's character. There is even an element of time travel to the story, involving the character of Morona, who centuries ago had been given the gift of eternal life by Joland, her lover. Angered by this, the Elders exiled Joland to another timeline in the distant past, and denied him the ability to move forward in time with Morona, who has lived many lifetimes without him, in a castle whose existence is a well-guarded secret. The Elders have also taken from Morona the ability to rejuvenate her body, and now she is a withered, bed-ridden wreck. But her mind has the power to roam about and reach the remotest parts of the world . . . and beyond. To quote Morona,"The Elders took everything in life from me, but they never found out I could read every word written by every gifted Hun, after they have reached maturity, and if they used the ancient letters given to them by the Ancestors." Thus, Morona has an almost omniscient power to read the diaries of Ilona and the other characters. But this is Ilona's story, her "coming of age" and into her own power and knowledge, the story of her learning the secrets that are at the heart of who and what she is . . . a young woman whose parents died when she was a child, and who must now face her world and all that is to happen virtually alone, without a mother and father to guide her; for instance, her mother had the power to heal with her hands. While the story in and of itself is deep, thoughtful and insightful, as well as entertaining and very interesting, what I found most engaging was Szabo's gift for creating and developing a cast of characters that are three-dimensional, characters that live and breath with a depth of realism I found most refreshing. Each character has a distinctive voice and personality that adds to the strength and plausibility to how they relate to one another. There's Eliza, the Seer, who is Ilona's housekeeper, and her daughter Ema, a painter of some renown. Then there's Bela, Ilona's best friend, whom she loves --- a successful writer who loves her in his own way. But is this true, romantic love? Or the love of one friend for another? And then along comes the mysterious Zoltan, who has led a life in the fast lane, a life of endless affairs who has grown weary of that life and sets out to begin a new life. Ilona spots him on a few occasions, before they ever actually meet, and you just know that their fates are somehow tied together. Another gift Szabo has is in making us feel Ilona's frustration as she struggles to learn who and what she is, uncover the secrets she must know but which no one can tell her. She must come to it on her own, and that is, like her relationships with the other characters, is the heart and soul of this novel. I highly recommend this novel to anyone who loves a good story filled with characters who will make you feel a part of it all.
May 3, 2014
Interesting Concept
Starting this read I was undeniably interested in the concept of just the name Hun. We know the stories of Attila the Hun and I was curious to see where the author took this. Turns out it has nothing to do with that Hun, or at least not yet. Of course this is a paranormal read, but it is always interesting to hear a new take on different beliefs. Szabo, did a wonderful job of doing just this and really did capture my attentions with the concept of Huns and unique abilities.
I can't stress enough that I loved the Hun world that was built in this book. It was intelligent, creative and unique. I was intrigued by this group of people that can recognize another Hun by not only a common mark that they all have but occasionally just by looking. There is also teachings from their own legends, and little bits of their own language throughout. The only thing that took away from the experience for me was the constant "you will know when you are ready." The more it happened the less I cared. This being said it is not that it made me care less about the story but more it made me care less about the questions being asked. There is a breaking point even for Ilona, and with it comes a lot of change.
I liked Ilona to start. There is no doubt that she is strong and loving but she is always down on herself. She is a successful woman but doesn't really see herself as a big deal, despite her young age and all that she has accomplished. Although Ilona is a success, she is a private person. Even the people around her know very little about her beyond the fact that she is a great doctor. This does not however bother Ilona, and for the most part she is content with her life the way it is. That is, she is content with everything except the fact that she can't get answers. This inability, is the breaking point for the woman who seems to have endless calm. I could really appreciate this character for this because I seriously sympathized.
The romance in this one confused me. It is one of those reads where you are never quite sure if there is a triangle or not. Bela has been her best friend fr years and though she is attracted to him and wishes there to be more he says they are just friends. However, he seems like he wants more. I believe if he was honest with her they would already be happy...but sadly he can't be and they are not. Enter Zoltan. He is definitely easy on the eyes and is also attracted to Ilona but they don't feel as easy as Bela and Ilona. Sure they can talk and Ilona feels like she can talk to him but I can't shake the feeling that these two are just not meant to be. Regardless, the romance does not play off like a high school drama and is executed well.
Foresight captured my attention and I will continue on with the next book, because the author has done such an outstanding job creating this unique world. The ending had me sitting on the edge of my seat and there were a few twists and a cliff hanger at the end. I honestly can't think of something to compare this read to but would recommend it to anyone looking for something fresh and fun.
Starting this read I was undeniably interested in the concept of just the name Hun. We know the stories of Attila the Hun and I was curious to see where the author took this. Turns out it has nothing to do with that Hun, or at least not yet. Of course this is a paranormal read, but it is always interesting to hear a new take on different beliefs. Szabo, did a wonderful job of doing just this and really did capture my attentions with the concept of Huns and unique abilities.
I can't stress enough that I loved the Hun world that was built in this book. It was intelligent, creative and unique. I was intrigued by this group of people that can recognize another Hun by not only a common mark that they all have but occasionally just by looking. There is also teachings from their own legends, and little bits of their own language throughout. The only thing that took away from the experience for me was the constant "you will know when you are ready." The more it happened the less I cared. This being said it is not that it made me care less about the story but more it made me care less about the questions being asked. There is a breaking point even for Ilona, and with it comes a lot of change.
I liked Ilona to start. There is no doubt that she is strong and loving but she is always down on herself. She is a successful woman but doesn't really see herself as a big deal, despite her young age and all that she has accomplished. Although Ilona is a success, she is a private person. Even the people around her know very little about her beyond the fact that she is a great doctor. This does not however bother Ilona, and for the most part she is content with her life the way it is. That is, she is content with everything except the fact that she can't get answers. This inability, is the breaking point for the woman who seems to have endless calm. I could really appreciate this character for this because I seriously sympathized.
The romance in this one confused me. It is one of those reads where you are never quite sure if there is a triangle or not. Bela has been her best friend fr years and though she is attracted to him and wishes there to be more he says they are just friends. However, he seems like he wants more. I believe if he was honest with her they would already be happy...but sadly he can't be and they are not. Enter Zoltan. He is definitely easy on the eyes and is also attracted to Ilona but they don't feel as easy as Bela and Ilona. Sure they can talk and Ilona feels like she can talk to him but I can't shake the feeling that these two are just not meant to be. Regardless, the romance does not play off like a high school drama and is executed well.
Foresight captured my attention and I will continue on with the next book, because the author has done such an outstanding job creating this unique world. The ending had me sitting on the edge of my seat and there were a few twists and a cliff hanger at the end. I honestly can't think of something to compare this read to but would recommend it to anyone looking for something fresh and fun.
April 7, 2014
What I find interesting in this book is the premise devised by the author, who is Hungarian by birth. The Huns existed between the 1st and the 7th centuries and then were absorbed into other peoples; similarly their language went extinct after the 5th century. The lack of certain knowledge about the Huns (not the same as the modern-day Hungarians, or Magyars, but undoubtedly connected) provided an opportunity to create a secret tribe of humans with special powers who are living clandestinely among the general population of Earth. These remnant Huns have persisted into the present day, recognizing one another by instinct and by a birthmark on the wrist. They have powers that can only be called magical, with individuals who are Seers, Dream Weavers, Time Travelers, and Healers. They also have a secret governmental structure that tyrannically enforces millennia-old customs and prohibitions. The heroine of the book, Ilona, has the heritage of a Healer, but she can’t exercise this power or even learn about it until she comes of age at 29 years. At that time her mother would have instructed her on the nature and laws of the Huns, but her mother died when Ilona was 19. This all sets up a fascinating sequence of circumstances that leave the reader with a big cliffhanger at the end.
This book does have flaws; it reads like a draft that could use more revision and polishing, particularly to sharpen the climactic points and tighten up the dialogue. It also needs some improved copyediting, especially in punctuation. There are some usage errors, too – for example, “She backed away, a look of morose in her eyes.” “Morose” is an adjective, not a noun. “A morose look” would suffice.
The book contains some effective description. One example would be the horse-dream in Chapter 4: “I saw a black mare walking in the tall grass with liquid, graceful movements. She was so beautiful; the sight of her left me breathless, and although she was far away, I could see her very clearly. She had a shiny coat, and her face was chiseled, yet soft and symmetrical. The horse whinnied and started galloping toward me, looking at me with deep, liquid eyes. Was she looking into my soul, making an ancient connection somehow? I saw a white crescent-shaped patch in the middle of her forehead, and her strong muscles vibrated in harmony under her skin as she galloped closer and closer. Her long mane swayed to her left knee, and her long tail just barely touched the grass.”
I enjoyed the book and do plan to read the second volume (entitled Acceptance) so I can find out how the characters’ dilemma is resolved. I recommend the book for anyone who is interested in an unusual take on the paranormal.
This book does have flaws; it reads like a draft that could use more revision and polishing, particularly to sharpen the climactic points and tighten up the dialogue. It also needs some improved copyediting, especially in punctuation. There are some usage errors, too – for example, “She backed away, a look of morose in her eyes.” “Morose” is an adjective, not a noun. “A morose look” would suffice.
The book contains some effective description. One example would be the horse-dream in Chapter 4: “I saw a black mare walking in the tall grass with liquid, graceful movements. She was so beautiful; the sight of her left me breathless, and although she was far away, I could see her very clearly. She had a shiny coat, and her face was chiseled, yet soft and symmetrical. The horse whinnied and started galloping toward me, looking at me with deep, liquid eyes. Was she looking into my soul, making an ancient connection somehow? I saw a white crescent-shaped patch in the middle of her forehead, and her strong muscles vibrated in harmony under her skin as she galloped closer and closer. Her long mane swayed to her left knee, and her long tail just barely touched the grass.”
I enjoyed the book and do plan to read the second volume (entitled Acceptance) so I can find out how the characters’ dilemma is resolved. I recommend the book for anyone who is interested in an unusual take on the paranormal.
March 3, 2014
Ilona is a born healer. Descended from an ancient tribe of Hun.
In her 29 years she hasn’t learnt much about her heritage, due to the premature death of her parents. In keeping with rules and tradition only her parents were allowed to teach her the truth surrounding her destiny and in turn leading her toward a life she would have never imagined.
With only long lost memories to help her she sets herself on a journey of self-discovery and acceptance.
Ever since they met as children Ilona has been in love with her best friend Bela, seemingly unrequited she settles with the incredible friendship they have built together.
Until a handsome stranger starts work at Ilona’s hospital.
Zoltan is incredibly handsome, clever and also a Hun descendant. Ilona feels an increasing attraction to him and it scares her. Why does he feel so familiar and why does she feel so strongly after only meeting for a moment?
As sinister occurrences begin to surround her she believes somebody wants her dead leading her very dear friends to reveal some closely guarded secrets.
With her ever increasing yearning to learn more about her destiny Ilona is now in a fight for her life and the lives of those she loves.
Who is she destined to be?
I had no idea when I started this book I would become as involved in the story as I did.
This book took me on such an incredible journey, it became a learning process too.
With every chapter comes a guide to plants and flowers and their meanings, something I hadn’t known before.
This is a book integrating fact and fiction creating a wonderful historical adventure. I loved each and every character and every surprise they created along the way.
I loved Zoltan from the start and even though there is a part in the book that would make a reader think otherwise I knew he would be redeemed, gosh did I hold my breath in those moments.
So many emotions run through this story and easily takes the reader along for the ride, I was elated and relieved by the final outcome, almost like I’d been through it myself.
I believe that yes this book is long when reading both parts together like I did but incredibly worth a reader’s time in doing so, I can’t wait to see what this author comes up with next, I’d love to know how this story carries on.
Copy Supplied For Review.
In her 29 years she hasn’t learnt much about her heritage, due to the premature death of her parents. In keeping with rules and tradition only her parents were allowed to teach her the truth surrounding her destiny and in turn leading her toward a life she would have never imagined.
With only long lost memories to help her she sets herself on a journey of self-discovery and acceptance.
Ever since they met as children Ilona has been in love with her best friend Bela, seemingly unrequited she settles with the incredible friendship they have built together.
Until a handsome stranger starts work at Ilona’s hospital.
Zoltan is incredibly handsome, clever and also a Hun descendant. Ilona feels an increasing attraction to him and it scares her. Why does he feel so familiar and why does she feel so strongly after only meeting for a moment?
As sinister occurrences begin to surround her she believes somebody wants her dead leading her very dear friends to reveal some closely guarded secrets.
With her ever increasing yearning to learn more about her destiny Ilona is now in a fight for her life and the lives of those she loves.
Who is she destined to be?
I had no idea when I started this book I would become as involved in the story as I did.
This book took me on such an incredible journey, it became a learning process too.
With every chapter comes a guide to plants and flowers and their meanings, something I hadn’t known before.
This is a book integrating fact and fiction creating a wonderful historical adventure. I loved each and every character and every surprise they created along the way.
I loved Zoltan from the start and even though there is a part in the book that would make a reader think otherwise I knew he would be redeemed, gosh did I hold my breath in those moments.
So many emotions run through this story and easily takes the reader along for the ride, I was elated and relieved by the final outcome, almost like I’d been through it myself.
I believe that yes this book is long when reading both parts together like I did but incredibly worth a reader’s time in doing so, I can’t wait to see what this author comes up with next, I’d love to know how this story carries on.
Copy Supplied For Review.
May 25, 2016
It’s Ilona’s twenty-ninth birthday, which is a landmark age for her. As a Hungarian by ancestry, this means that she has reached the “age of reason”—and now her full powers can be engaged.
There’s only one problem—she doesn’t know how to make the most of them, and she hardly even knows they exist. This problem makes a really good umbrella for the host of other issues that arise.
The people she loves the most--her longtime housekeeper Elza, her “uncle” Rua, and Elza’s young daughter Ema, cannot help her at all. Elza and Rua, because of their age, know all about how to help Ilona, but can’t because Ilona’s mother is supposed to help her. Problems on problems—her mother has been dead for many years. So, Ilona has to shift on her own, which is almost impossible.
Ilona’s love life, non-existent up until now, is suddenly not only alive and kicking, it has evolved into a love triangle, with none of the sides knowing how the other feels about anyone else. Her long-time friend Bela is now jealous because of the appearance of a young doctor, Zoltan, who has swept Ilona off her feet.
Never mind that Morana, an evil Immortal, is hell-bent on destroying Ilona, thus making way for a world in which she herself can rule.
Ilona simply wants to be the best doctor she can be, and get on with her life. With the powers she bears, that doesn’t look like it’s going to be possible.
Rich in the mythos and tales of Hungarian folklore, this book is a fantastic story from beginning to end. Ms. Szabo makes a real world with her fictional characters; one can easily imagine a place where people wield magical powers and transport through time. The story is well-written, always interesting, and keeps the reader hanging on with every turn of the page.
I really liked the chapter headings; they began with a type of flower, and what it represented. Every flower used had something to do with the chapter it headed, and tied in also with the Hungarian mythos.
When I finished this story, I delved without hesitation into the next in the series, barely taking a breath in between. They’re just that good!
There’s only one problem—she doesn’t know how to make the most of them, and she hardly even knows they exist. This problem makes a really good umbrella for the host of other issues that arise.
The people she loves the most--her longtime housekeeper Elza, her “uncle” Rua, and Elza’s young daughter Ema, cannot help her at all. Elza and Rua, because of their age, know all about how to help Ilona, but can’t because Ilona’s mother is supposed to help her. Problems on problems—her mother has been dead for many years. So, Ilona has to shift on her own, which is almost impossible.
Ilona’s love life, non-existent up until now, is suddenly not only alive and kicking, it has evolved into a love triangle, with none of the sides knowing how the other feels about anyone else. Her long-time friend Bela is now jealous because of the appearance of a young doctor, Zoltan, who has swept Ilona off her feet.
Never mind that Morana, an evil Immortal, is hell-bent on destroying Ilona, thus making way for a world in which she herself can rule.
Ilona simply wants to be the best doctor she can be, and get on with her life. With the powers she bears, that doesn’t look like it’s going to be possible.
Rich in the mythos and tales of Hungarian folklore, this book is a fantastic story from beginning to end. Ms. Szabo makes a real world with her fictional characters; one can easily imagine a place where people wield magical powers and transport through time. The story is well-written, always interesting, and keeps the reader hanging on with every turn of the page.
I really liked the chapter headings; they began with a type of flower, and what it represented. Every flower used had something to do with the chapter it headed, and tied in also with the Hungarian mythos.
When I finished this story, I delved without hesitation into the next in the series, barely taking a breath in between. They’re just that good!
November 13, 2013
I received this book in exchange for a honest review.
Ilona is a doctor and she's also a female Hun.
For Ilona healing comes naturally.
Her heritage is shrouded in mystery.
She's not allowed to know any details until she is an "adult" by Hun standards. And Hun standard means age of 29. And that day is finally here.
It's Ilona's birthday and she is struggling through her day.
She knows she is special and has gifts.
It is just her full potential she hasn't a clue about.
She is curious about so many things and always received the same response, "when you are of age it will be revealed." How frustrating is that!? Dreaming, reminiscing, reflecting and waiting is all that Ilona can do.
She has been left in Elza's care by her parents when they died.
Ilona loved Elza but knew little about her Hun abilities and by snooping when she was little, Ilona found out Elza was a seer. But she found out nothing more, all she had was a title that Ilona didn't understand.
Ilona knows she is a "true" Hun but doesn't understand what that means.
On her birthday she is at an art gallery with Elza and her best friend who she wishes was more, Bela. He has been her friend since they were children. They are at her practically sister Ema's art show helping to set up the show.
After helping Ema unpack her art and getting a good look at the new across the street neighbor, Bela and Ilona have some time on their hands as her "reflecting" begins....
Memories have been clearer lately but no one can tell her details of her past.
Ilona's journey is just beginning as she comes to terms with things she barely understands.
Luckily she is surrounded by people who love her and only want what's best for her.
Things become clearer as her true abilities surface and more memories flood to the surface.
I am excited at how this unfolds! Some of this floored me! I love it when I have been on an emotional roller coaster ride! This book does not disappoint!
A past, a prophecy, a fight and a future.......
Ilona is a doctor and she's also a female Hun.
For Ilona healing comes naturally.
Her heritage is shrouded in mystery.
She's not allowed to know any details until she is an "adult" by Hun standards. And Hun standard means age of 29. And that day is finally here.
It's Ilona's birthday and she is struggling through her day.
She knows she is special and has gifts.
It is just her full potential she hasn't a clue about.
She is curious about so many things and always received the same response, "when you are of age it will be revealed." How frustrating is that!? Dreaming, reminiscing, reflecting and waiting is all that Ilona can do.
She has been left in Elza's care by her parents when they died.
Ilona loved Elza but knew little about her Hun abilities and by snooping when she was little, Ilona found out Elza was a seer. But she found out nothing more, all she had was a title that Ilona didn't understand.
Ilona knows she is a "true" Hun but doesn't understand what that means.
On her birthday she is at an art gallery with Elza and her best friend who she wishes was more, Bela. He has been her friend since they were children. They are at her practically sister Ema's art show helping to set up the show.
After helping Ema unpack her art and getting a good look at the new across the street neighbor, Bela and Ilona have some time on their hands as her "reflecting" begins....
Memories have been clearer lately but no one can tell her details of her past.
Ilona's journey is just beginning as she comes to terms with things she barely understands.
Luckily she is surrounded by people who love her and only want what's best for her.
Things become clearer as her true abilities surface and more memories flood to the surface.
I am excited at how this unfolds! Some of this floored me! I love it when I have been on an emotional roller coaster ride! This book does not disappoint!
A past, a prophecy, a fight and a future.......
April 22, 2013
Birthright Bestowed
I received a free copy, in exchange for a review.
Being part of an ancient race of people, Ilona's upbringing is not that different from others. Being a True Hun, with certain traditions, she is just like everyone else. Except, one day, when she reaches the first stage of adulthood, on her 29th birthday, mysteries start to revel themselves, to her, but not fully and all in half stories. Being a Hun, there are three main stages of life, at the ages of 29, 40 and 60. Since she is just reaching adulthood, there are certain things that are starting to make some sense, but not really. If only she had not lost both of her parents in a car accident ten years prior, would she have help from someone, to help her understand exactly what is going on. She has her close knit "family" of Elza the housekeeper, Ema, Elza's daughter, Rua, the groundskeeper and Bela, her long time best friend. But, after her birthday, things start to change and she really wants to get to the bottom of the mystery, since she has been in the dark, most of her life.
"I can't even comprehend all this. Yet who in their right mind could understand my time travel either? This Hun mystery is just too complicated to understand. Moreover, how can we find out who sent those dreams and who were they meant for. Most of all, who is the one so determined to kill you?"
This has such an interesting background, not just your normal, we are special people, with special gifts. I like how the author has twined all of these characters together and when you are finished reading it, you understand why certain people are the way they are. Fun, fast read! I can't wait to get the next one, since I really want to know what ends up happening!
I received a free copy, in exchange for a review.
Being part of an ancient race of people, Ilona's upbringing is not that different from others. Being a True Hun, with certain traditions, she is just like everyone else. Except, one day, when she reaches the first stage of adulthood, on her 29th birthday, mysteries start to revel themselves, to her, but not fully and all in half stories. Being a Hun, there are three main stages of life, at the ages of 29, 40 and 60. Since she is just reaching adulthood, there are certain things that are starting to make some sense, but not really. If only she had not lost both of her parents in a car accident ten years prior, would she have help from someone, to help her understand exactly what is going on. She has her close knit "family" of Elza the housekeeper, Ema, Elza's daughter, Rua, the groundskeeper and Bela, her long time best friend. But, after her birthday, things start to change and she really wants to get to the bottom of the mystery, since she has been in the dark, most of her life.
"I can't even comprehend all this. Yet who in their right mind could understand my time travel either? This Hun mystery is just too complicated to understand. Moreover, how can we find out who sent those dreams and who were they meant for. Most of all, who is the one so determined to kill you?"
This has such an interesting background, not just your normal, we are special people, with special gifts. I like how the author has twined all of these characters together and when you are finished reading it, you understand why certain people are the way they are. Fun, fast read! I can't wait to get the next one, since I really want to know what ends up happening!
September 16, 2013
Review of Birthright Bestowed
Book 1
Ilona the Hun trilogy
Written by Author Erika M. Szabo
Reviewed by R. Murry
Fantasy means a product of the imagination. “Everything is possible if we take into account the fact that we’re True Huns,” is a statement made by one of the characters of this magical contemporary fantasy. This belief is there when a child is taught to believe in oneself no matter the culture.
Ilona the Hun, the main character of this somewhat mind awakening novel, comes of age at the ripe old age of twenty nine. Why twenty nine? That is the age a Hun becomes of age, an ancient decision. She awakens to the fact that she has powers a normal human from other cultures don’t have.
As a medical doctor, Ilona’s journey begins for the reader. Ms. Szabo, using sometimes comical prose, has our protagonist explain her history, thoughts, feelings, and reactions to events around her, which all relate to her being a True Hun, a true blood descendant of the Huns who at one time ruled the world.
At this point in her story, her world becomes an overpowering mystical one if one is to rule out the fact that the events are seen by humans. Because the stand biers are not Huns, they don’t see or react to the situations as an insider – they see the conclusions as miraculous. Only Ilona and her inner circle understand what has transpired.
This all leads to interesting turns of events that will keep the reader wanting to know what comes next. Well, you’ll have to read Book 2 to see if Ilona’s powers develop, if her love affair continues, if death is around the corner, and if dreams come true.
Birthright Bestowed is a well written lead book for a trilogy that I recommend for Romantics and Mystic readers alike. Or, if you’re a non-believer, it’s a journey to enjoy.
Book 1
Ilona the Hun trilogy
Written by Author Erika M. Szabo
Reviewed by R. Murry
Fantasy means a product of the imagination. “Everything is possible if we take into account the fact that we’re True Huns,” is a statement made by one of the characters of this magical contemporary fantasy. This belief is there when a child is taught to believe in oneself no matter the culture.
Ilona the Hun, the main character of this somewhat mind awakening novel, comes of age at the ripe old age of twenty nine. Why twenty nine? That is the age a Hun becomes of age, an ancient decision. She awakens to the fact that she has powers a normal human from other cultures don’t have.
As a medical doctor, Ilona’s journey begins for the reader. Ms. Szabo, using sometimes comical prose, has our protagonist explain her history, thoughts, feelings, and reactions to events around her, which all relate to her being a True Hun, a true blood descendant of the Huns who at one time ruled the world.
At this point in her story, her world becomes an overpowering mystical one if one is to rule out the fact that the events are seen by humans. Because the stand biers are not Huns, they don’t see or react to the situations as an insider – they see the conclusions as miraculous. Only Ilona and her inner circle understand what has transpired.
This all leads to interesting turns of events that will keep the reader wanting to know what comes next. Well, you’ll have to read Book 2 to see if Ilona’s powers develop, if her love affair continues, if death is around the corner, and if dreams come true.
Birthright Bestowed is a well written lead book for a trilogy that I recommend for Romantics and Mystic readers alike. Or, if you’re a non-believer, it’s a journey to enjoy.
August 23, 2012
I received this book as a firstread so I would like to say a big thank you to the author.
I really love the concept of this book. It’s a different than any other super natural books I’ve read, which is a wonderful change. Sometimes you don’t realize how similar they start sounding until you read something completely different.
Though I gave this book 5 stars I almost gave it 4 stars for two reasons:
First - I found that some points in the story were repeated too many times. For example – I don’t need to be told repeatedly that when Rua was younger he was hurt by falling off a horse.
Second – While I don’t mind stories were I can figure out what is going to happen, or the answer to the “mystery” the main character is trying to figure it out before they do, I do not like being spoon feed the answers only to have the character take another chapter or two to figure it out. It makes things a little drawn out and I find it slightly frustrating.
Those two things said I really loved this book. I’m not a huge romance fan but this was so much fun to read. It does read a bit like a YA book but I kind of like that, there is something to be said for sweet and innocent romance. I also love the references to the flowers in the beginning of each chapter and the stories of Hun folklore.
This book was an all-around fun, creative, and enjoyable read!
Note - This book is a bit of a cliff hanger so be prepared that you will want to read the second book. Normally I don't like books dropping off like this but for some reason with this book I didn't mind.
I really love the concept of this book. It’s a different than any other super natural books I’ve read, which is a wonderful change. Sometimes you don’t realize how similar they start sounding until you read something completely different.
Though I gave this book 5 stars I almost gave it 4 stars for two reasons:
First - I found that some points in the story were repeated too many times. For example – I don’t need to be told repeatedly that when Rua was younger he was hurt by falling off a horse.
Second – While I don’t mind stories were I can figure out what is going to happen, or the answer to the “mystery” the main character is trying to figure it out before they do, I do not like being spoon feed the answers only to have the character take another chapter or two to figure it out. It makes things a little drawn out and I find it slightly frustrating.
Those two things said I really loved this book. I’m not a huge romance fan but this was so much fun to read. It does read a bit like a YA book but I kind of like that, there is something to be said for sweet and innocent romance. I also love the references to the flowers in the beginning of each chapter and the stories of Hun folklore.
This book was an all-around fun, creative, and enjoyable read!
Note - This book is a bit of a cliff hanger so be prepared that you will want to read the second book. Normally I don't like books dropping off like this but for some reason with this book I didn't mind.
April 17, 2013
**I received this book in exchange for an honest review.**
So whenever I read blurbs on this book, they always looked extremely interesting. And even know that I'm finished the book, it's still a fascinating concept that Erika Szabo came up with. My only exposure to Huns before this was from Mulan (ignorant, yes I do know...) so I kind of went into the story blindly and I still can't decide if it hurt or helped me.
Here what I didn't like:
So it was a great story line. But for some reason it seemed like the plot jumped around way too much. Like one moment we would be enjoying a scene, then all of a sudden you'd turn the page and we'd be at a completely other part of a story and it just didn't feel like it always flowed right, if that makes sense.
My second issue is more of a personal preference when it comes to a great story. I dislike beating around the bush for extended periods of time. I'm fine if it happens one or twice but for almost all of the book, there was WAY too much of it. I disliked having to suffer with Ilona on Hun history!
What I did like:
I liked loved the characters. I loved Ema's story, and I'd love to hear more.
I loved Elza and Rua (very interesting individuals).
And I loved the addition of Zoltan.
Zoltan and Ilona were so cute together. I loved the fact they were both doctors and both have special talents.
Despite my misgivings on some things, Erika Szabo kept me intrigued, I will definitely have to check out more in the future on this series.
3 stars.
So whenever I read blurbs on this book, they always looked extremely interesting. And even know that I'm finished the book, it's still a fascinating concept that Erika Szabo came up with. My only exposure to Huns before this was from Mulan (ignorant, yes I do know...) so I kind of went into the story blindly and I still can't decide if it hurt or helped me.
Here what I didn't like:
So it was a great story line. But for some reason it seemed like the plot jumped around way too much. Like one moment we would be enjoying a scene, then all of a sudden you'd turn the page and we'd be at a completely other part of a story and it just didn't feel like it always flowed right, if that makes sense.
My second issue is more of a personal preference when it comes to a great story. I dislike beating around the bush for extended periods of time. I'm fine if it happens one or twice but for almost all of the book, there was WAY too much of it. I disliked having to suffer with Ilona on Hun history!
What I did like:
I liked loved the characters. I loved Ema's story, and I'd love to hear more.
I loved Elza and Rua (very interesting individuals).
And I loved the addition of Zoltan.
Zoltan and Ilona were so cute together. I loved the fact they were both doctors and both have special talents.
Despite my misgivings on some things, Erika Szabo kept me intrigued, I will definitely have to check out more in the future on this series.
3 stars.
April 9, 2013
The best kind of stories are ones that play in your mind as you're reading along. With Birthright Bestowed, Erika has certainly accomplished a feast-for-the-senses story! Erika's descriptive writing is both simple and complete. Be it describing how a character looks, how a dream feels, or how yummy lunch looks, this story played inside my head beautifully.
Experiencing Ilona's journey as she turns twenty-nine and begins to find out what her destiny and purpose in life is was a treat. Intelligent, caring, self-strong and clumsy, Ilona is a perfectly written central character. Each time she escapes into her “time capsule” to think you are treated to a very busy mind at work. The integration of the main characters' Hun heritage added both historical and mysterious treats. With the inclusion of time travel, unclear rites of passage, and a menacing stranger, Erika wrote a story that I couldn't consume quick enough.
The dynamics between the characters are wonderfully written. Reading along, you feel the instant connection Ilona and Zoltan have for each other, the loving yet quirky bond between Ilona and Bela, and the strong familial ties that Ilona, Elza, Ema, and Rua have formed. There is plenty of mystery, secrets, history, love and even silly (chipmunk) moments to round out this story into a superbly written tale.
Unfolding in a natural rhythm, Birthright Bestowed is an exciting and wondrous novel. Kudos to Erika for a well rounded and creatively written story. I know I'm more than ready for Book 2!
Experiencing Ilona's journey as she turns twenty-nine and begins to find out what her destiny and purpose in life is was a treat. Intelligent, caring, self-strong and clumsy, Ilona is a perfectly written central character. Each time she escapes into her “time capsule” to think you are treated to a very busy mind at work. The integration of the main characters' Hun heritage added both historical and mysterious treats. With the inclusion of time travel, unclear rites of passage, and a menacing stranger, Erika wrote a story that I couldn't consume quick enough.
The dynamics between the characters are wonderfully written. Reading along, you feel the instant connection Ilona and Zoltan have for each other, the loving yet quirky bond between Ilona and Bela, and the strong familial ties that Ilona, Elza, Ema, and Rua have formed. There is plenty of mystery, secrets, history, love and even silly (chipmunk) moments to round out this story into a superbly written tale.
Unfolding in a natural rhythm, Birthright Bestowed is an exciting and wondrous novel. Kudos to Erika for a well rounded and creatively written story. I know I'm more than ready for Book 2!
August 1, 2013
Imagine finding yourself capable of amazing abilities that you don't understand but know that others around you do? The frustrations of having those people unable to tell you for reasons nobody really understands.
Could you or would you simply embrace these new "gifts" or would you want answers and want them NOW??
Ilona finds herself in just this position and you will travel with her through time and the lack of same until you are caught up in the strange reality that is her birthright.
The author takes you through the thoughts, feelings and actions of the characters with such depth that you really feel their actions and emotions moving through you bringing you to feel what they would and then shaking your head as you get lost in the fantasy. Where do fact and fantasy drift off following different paths?
Read Birthright Bestowed for an amazing glimpse into another reality and get lost in all the possibilities which seem endless but are they really?
There is still that blackness that rears its ugly head from places and people you would never have imagined. Will this blackness take from you all that you hold dear or will there be other possibilities to use your birthright or that of another to change the course of time?
The book will leave you breathless, hanging on the edge, thirsting for more of Ilona while you digest that which you have been allowed to know..for now...
Could you or would you simply embrace these new "gifts" or would you want answers and want them NOW??
Ilona finds herself in just this position and you will travel with her through time and the lack of same until you are caught up in the strange reality that is her birthright.
The author takes you through the thoughts, feelings and actions of the characters with such depth that you really feel their actions and emotions moving through you bringing you to feel what they would and then shaking your head as you get lost in the fantasy. Where do fact and fantasy drift off following different paths?
Read Birthright Bestowed for an amazing glimpse into another reality and get lost in all the possibilities which seem endless but are they really?
There is still that blackness that rears its ugly head from places and people you would never have imagined. Will this blackness take from you all that you hold dear or will there be other possibilities to use your birthright or that of another to change the course of time?
The book will leave you breathless, hanging on the edge, thirsting for more of Ilona while you digest that which you have been allowed to know..for now...
August 19, 2014
Protected by the Falcon (Paranormal Fiction)
By Erika M. Szabo
In this wonderful debut paranormal novel, Erika M. Szabo introduces readers to a fascinating world of ancient rights conducted by a secret order. It is a fast-paced story where magic collides with reality.
Meet Illona, a young doctor, who lost her parents at an early age. Unable to learn the wisdom and secrets of the society in which she is a member, Illona struggles without the support of her mother. She will have to understand the traditions and rules of her ancestors as she slowly recognizes the powers she has inherited from them.
Her life is further complicated when she meets a handsome doctor, who seems to be accompanied by an evil presence that she cannot comprehend, and which may threaten her powers and her life. The choices she makes, and the people she meets, drive this mysterious and magical tale forward.
Erika M. Szabo has much to offer in this most unusual story. Her characters are well developed and the plot line is extraordinarily different. I was fascinated by some of the Hun traditions and history scattered throughout the book. I am sure readers will look forward to the next installment of Ms. Szabo’s series.
J.E. Rogers, Author
The Sword of Demelza
Award Winning Middle Grade Fantasy
Where Endangered Animal Heroes Roam the Pages!
Available on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and Books a Million
By Erika M. Szabo
In this wonderful debut paranormal novel, Erika M. Szabo introduces readers to a fascinating world of ancient rights conducted by a secret order. It is a fast-paced story where magic collides with reality.
Meet Illona, a young doctor, who lost her parents at an early age. Unable to learn the wisdom and secrets of the society in which she is a member, Illona struggles without the support of her mother. She will have to understand the traditions and rules of her ancestors as she slowly recognizes the powers she has inherited from them.
Her life is further complicated when she meets a handsome doctor, who seems to be accompanied by an evil presence that she cannot comprehend, and which may threaten her powers and her life. The choices she makes, and the people she meets, drive this mysterious and magical tale forward.
Erika M. Szabo has much to offer in this most unusual story. Her characters are well developed and the plot line is extraordinarily different. I was fascinated by some of the Hun traditions and history scattered throughout the book. I am sure readers will look forward to the next installment of Ms. Szabo’s series.
J.E. Rogers, Author
The Sword of Demelza
Award Winning Middle Grade Fantasy
Where Endangered Animal Heroes Roam the Pages!
Available on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and Books a Million
April 29, 2013
Ilona takes her job seriously and she is a caring person. She is always looking out for other people; her adopted family and her patients at the hospital. She has always wanted to know about her heritage and often is confused by it. The life of a Hun is very secretive and you find out the details when you reach 29, usually from your parents. Ilonas parents died 11 years ago and she is unable to talk to anyone about it, as those who know about being a Hun suffer if they try to talk about it.
On Ilonas 29th birthday, things start to become complicated. She starts to see things differently and her powers start to descend on her. She doesn't understand at first but after time she understands what is happening. With trial and error she is able to figure out how these powers work and use them to help others. She also has an instant attraction to a stranger and finds her feelings are conflicted and is surprised by the connection.
I enjoyed this story as it is told in diary format where the main character, Ilona, is reflecting in detail about her past. A few times we changed POV's as Ilona asks Zoltan and Elka to describe what they remember in her diary. The plot built slowly as we discovered the details along with Ilona and I found the journey to be entertaining. What happens next in their lives will be interesting!!
I received this book from the author for an honest review
On Ilonas 29th birthday, things start to become complicated. She starts to see things differently and her powers start to descend on her. She doesn't understand at first but after time she understands what is happening. With trial and error she is able to figure out how these powers work and use them to help others. She also has an instant attraction to a stranger and finds her feelings are conflicted and is surprised by the connection.
I enjoyed this story as it is told in diary format where the main character, Ilona, is reflecting in detail about her past. A few times we changed POV's as Ilona asks Zoltan and Elka to describe what they remember in her diary. The plot built slowly as we discovered the details along with Ilona and I found the journey to be entertaining. What happens next in their lives will be interesting!!
I received this book from the author for an honest review
July 31, 2014
Previous review:
As I began reading this story, I noticed a lot of mistakes throughout the story and a few places didn't make any sense. But with a little help and some extra work done to make the story more understandable, the author has really brought this story to a new and improved level of pure enjoyment.
New Review:
I was extremely entranced by the plot and I fell in love with each character in this story. I loved the enchanted mystery of the story and how the author was able to capture my attention from the beginning to end. I was intrigued by the story of the Hun and the magical and mystical writing of the Rovasiras. I loved how she added real life places, legends, and events throughout the story to co-inside with the fantasy parts of the story. I love the energy and the imagination of the author. This author is a fabulous storyteller. This is a phenomenally written and entertaining story that will capture your attention and keep you wanting to read more. I highly recommend this to all Paranormal Lovers. This is an awesome debut story and I am anxious to read more from this awesome author. I also love the new book cover too.
I received a complementary copy of this book to edit and give my honest opinion.
As I began reading this story, I noticed a lot of mistakes throughout the story and a few places didn't make any sense. But with a little help and some extra work done to make the story more understandable, the author has really brought this story to a new and improved level of pure enjoyment.
New Review:
I was extremely entranced by the plot and I fell in love with each character in this story. I loved the enchanted mystery of the story and how the author was able to capture my attention from the beginning to end. I was intrigued by the story of the Hun and the magical and mystical writing of the Rovasiras. I loved how she added real life places, legends, and events throughout the story to co-inside with the fantasy parts of the story. I love the energy and the imagination of the author. This author is a fabulous storyteller. This is a phenomenally written and entertaining story that will capture your attention and keep you wanting to read more. I highly recommend this to all Paranormal Lovers. This is an awesome debut story and I am anxious to read more from this awesome author. I also love the new book cover too.
I received a complementary copy of this book to edit and give my honest opinion.
March 27, 2013
I received this book as an ebook from the goodreads group lovers of paranormal in exchange for my honest review.
I'd give this book 3.5 stars.
The premise of the story is very engaging. Ilona is a true hun, but doesnt know much about what that means, other than a lot of rules and rituals to be followed. She should learn on her 29th birthday,but her parents are not there to tell her of her birthright, because they died in a car crash when she was young. So she must figure it out on her own.
Along the way, she meets Zoltan, the sexy new hun in town, and is immediately drawn to him.
Oh, and random people keep trying to kill her for no apparent reason.
I grew to like the flower language used in the beginnings of chapters. I didnt like switching points of view; it seemed to me that, in this case, it gave away some plot that hadnt happened yet.
What really bothered me about the book was that it didnt seem to have been edited. And not just normal ebook errors. There were homonym errors and structural sentence errors! Somebody needs to have a talk with that editor.
But, overall, mostly very enjoyable. Fresh idea. I will be reading the sequel.
I'd give this book 3.5 stars.
The premise of the story is very engaging. Ilona is a true hun, but doesnt know much about what that means, other than a lot of rules and rituals to be followed. She should learn on her 29th birthday,but her parents are not there to tell her of her birthright, because they died in a car crash when she was young. So she must figure it out on her own.
Along the way, she meets Zoltan, the sexy new hun in town, and is immediately drawn to him.
Oh, and random people keep trying to kill her for no apparent reason.
I grew to like the flower language used in the beginnings of chapters. I didnt like switching points of view; it seemed to me that, in this case, it gave away some plot that hadnt happened yet.
What really bothered me about the book was that it didnt seem to have been edited. And not just normal ebook errors. There were homonym errors and structural sentence errors! Somebody needs to have a talk with that editor.
But, overall, mostly very enjoyable. Fresh idea. I will be reading the sequel.
October 26, 2011
Erika Szabo has managed to create a captivating story which centers around Ilona, descendant of the True Hun tribe. She had been kept in the dark about her birthright and the possibilities of being a Hun. She comes to unimaginable powers, healing with a touch is but one of them. Ilona's journey of discovering and learning to use her gifts while her life is in danger is exciting, also dealing with the emotions and problems of being a single woman who is torn between two men. One, Bela, has been her friend and love since they were kids while the other one, Zoltan, appears to have been pulled straight from her dreams. This book also shows how matchmaking can prove to be troublesome. Now she has to deal with her feelings for them as well as learning to use her new powers while fighting unseen evil force to save the future of the Huns.
I highly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a little magic with their romance.
I highly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a little magic with their romance.
May 27, 2013
There were a couple of areas where words were left out (such as "a", "the", etc.) and a few incorrect spellings of words, however they were few and far between, so I was able to read through them
without any problems. That being said, I was captivated by this book from the first page. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Not only were the characters well defined, but the plot had a lot of
substance to it. The history of the Huns was absolutely fascinating and I love that the author incorporated so much of that history into the plot!
I absolutely cannot wait to read the next two books that are in the series - Book #2 is 'Secrets Revealed'(out now on Amazon) and Book #3 is 'Destiny Altered' (coming soon).
DISCLAIMER: This book was gifted to me by the author (through the Goodreads) website in exchange for an honest review. The opinions expressed here are my own, and no money or other compensation was provided for this review.
without any problems. That being said, I was captivated by this book from the first page. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Not only were the characters well defined, but the plot had a lot of
substance to it. The history of the Huns was absolutely fascinating and I love that the author incorporated so much of that history into the plot!
I absolutely cannot wait to read the next two books that are in the series - Book #2 is 'Secrets Revealed'(out now on Amazon) and Book #3 is 'Destiny Altered' (coming soon).
DISCLAIMER: This book was gifted to me by the author (through the Goodreads) website in exchange for an honest review. The opinions expressed here are my own, and no money or other compensation was provided for this review.
April 6, 2014
I must start by saying I was not sure how to rate this book.. It has 5* potential, But It does need a little work.
When I read the synopsis I thought.. Hmm this sounds interesting.
I don't really know about the Hun culture, but reading this story definitely left me intrigued.
I felt I could relate with Ilona and the other character's as well.
Erika was able to keep me interested, there were some interesting tales and secrets. There was some spots where I was missing part of the story.. not sure what happened there, but it did detract from the story a bit, but not enough that I did not keep going. The only thing I did not like was some of the repeating though-out. I was a little angry at the end because I was left hanging at a very intense spot. BUT that just makes me want the next one NOW..
I would recommend the story even though it could use a little work, I enjoyed the character's, the mystery and the suspense that was there and the world and story that Erika has created.
When I read the synopsis I thought.. Hmm this sounds interesting.
I don't really know about the Hun culture, but reading this story definitely left me intrigued.
I felt I could relate with Ilona and the other character's as well.
Erika was able to keep me interested, there were some interesting tales and secrets. There was some spots where I was missing part of the story.. not sure what happened there, but it did detract from the story a bit, but not enough that I did not keep going. The only thing I did not like was some of the repeating though-out. I was a little angry at the end because I was left hanging at a very intense spot. BUT that just makes me want the next one NOW..
I would recommend the story even though it could use a little work, I enjoyed the character's, the mystery and the suspense that was there and the world and story that Erika has created.
May 14, 2013
This wonderful book really piqued my interest in Hun culture and language. Told in a fascinating way through journal entries by the characters we learn of a centuries old traditions which are closed to outsiders and filled with magical lore. One of the aspects of this book I really enjoyed was Ilona's entries which reference the medicinal and religious aspects of various plants and flowers. Each chapter, as I remember it, contains these intriguing short glimpses into traditional medicine and beliefs.
It is, at its core, a romance novel. But it is also a thriller with dark undercurrents of mysterious and dangerous forces at work. As a first book in a series, it sets the stage for an epic saga about complex characters, relationships, and secret traditions. I enjoyed this one greatly and am anxious to read more about Ilona, her gifts, and her family.
It is, at its core, a romance novel. But it is also a thriller with dark undercurrents of mysterious and dangerous forces at work. As a first book in a series, it sets the stage for an epic saga about complex characters, relationships, and secret traditions. I enjoyed this one greatly and am anxious to read more about Ilona, her gifts, and her family.
December 13, 2013
I read this in the original version so I was a little reluctant to read it again. However, I am very glad I did! This version flows so much smoother! I found myself caught right up in the story and routing for the characters! I was so involved that I didn't find myself remembering what came next!!! (That is usually why I do not re-read anything) I can't wait to start book 2! Great Job!
Ilona is a HUN that comes of age (29) and with that gets magical powers. Unfortunately her parents died 10 years earlier and did not prepare her for this. There is also some Hun thing that prevents others from telling her anything! How does she figure it out? What happens when someone tries to kill her repeatedly? Who is her love? The man she has loved all her life but wants to be friends, or the man she just met who she is instantly attracted to??? You will LOVE this book!
Ilona is a HUN that comes of age (29) and with that gets magical powers. Unfortunately her parents died 10 years earlier and did not prepare her for this. There is also some Hun thing that prevents others from telling her anything! How does she figure it out? What happens when someone tries to kill her repeatedly? Who is her love? The man she has loved all her life but wants to be friends, or the man she just met who she is instantly attracted to??? You will LOVE this book!
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