What do you think?
Rate this book
The Noble Hearts #1
The Loyal Heart
Lady Aubrey has a problem. Several problems. Her childhood love, Ethan, has returned home from the Crusades, but he’s more interested in winning his land back than wooing her. She has to rescue a pair of nuns who are being held prisoner in Derby Castle’s tower by the sadistic Sheriff Buxton. And to top it all off, she’s developing scandalous feelings for Buxton’s lackey, the dark and devilish Crispin. Faced with all that what’s a girl to do but don her disguise as the Derbywood Bandit and take matters into her own hands?
Sir Crispin is at his wit’s end. Not only does he have his hands full keeping Buxton from killing half the shire, now his arch nemesis, the Derbywood Bandit, has joined forces with his old rival Ethan. And that’s nothing compared to the burning torch he carries for his ex-fiancé, Lady Aubrey. He would do anything to win Aubrey’s love …
… until he suspects that there could be a closer connection between Aubrey and the Derbywood Bandit than anyone knows.
Sir Crispin is at his wit’s end. Not only does he have his hands full keeping Buxton from killing half the shire, now his arch nemesis, the Derbywood Bandit, has joined forces with his old rival Ethan. And that’s nothing compared to the burning torch he carries for his ex-fiancé, Lady Aubrey. He would do anything to win Aubrey’s love …
… until he suspects that there could be a closer connection between Aubrey and the Derbywood Bandit than anyone knows.
290 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2011
145 people are currently reading
1280 people want to read
About the author
Merry Farmer
292 books1,138 followersUSA Today Bestselling author Merry Farmer lives in suburban Philadelphia with her two cats, Justine and Peter. She has been writing since she was ten years old and realized she didn't have to wait for the teacher to assign a creative writing project to write something. It was the best day of her life. Her books have reached the top of Amazon's charts, and have been named finalists for several prestigious awards, including the RONE Award for indie romance.
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 30 of 83 reviews
July 27, 2012
Are you a fan of the BBC series Robin Hood? If so, this book will seem very familiar -- most of this book is lifted directly from the show. So much, in fact, that this book is either fan fiction or plagiarism, I'm not sure which.
On the show, we have Robin of Locksley, recently returned from the Crusades to find his estate given over to Guy of Gisbourne, who works for the eeeeeeeevil Sheriff of Nottingham. Both Robin and Gisbourne court Maid Marian, who, disguised as The Watchman, robs from the rich to give to the poor. Pretty soon, Robin, along with Alan A'Dale, Little John, Much and Will Scarlet (among others) is also robbing/giving.
In the book, we have Ethan of Windale, recently returned from the Crusades to find his estate given over to Crispin Huntingdon, who works for the eeeeeeeevil Sheriff Buxton. Both Ethan and Crispin court Lady Aubry, who, disguised as The Bandit, robs from the rich to give to the poor. Pretty soon, Ethan, along with Jack/Alan, Toby/Much and Tom/Will, is also robbing/giving.
But that's just the beginning.
-- The characters in the book display the very same slangy, anachronistic language as the characters on the show. It works on TV. Not so much in print.
-- The Sheriff of Nottingham keeps little critters in cages and torments them to let us know he's eeeeeevil. He also has a homeoerotic attachment to Gisbourne that he displays by either being way too touchy-feely with him, or torturing him. Same thing with Buxton and Crispin, critters and bad-touching and all.
-- Gisbourne and Marian have a bizarre on-off engagement that's never fully explained. So do Crispin and Aubrey!
-- Gisbourne grievously wounds Marian, in disguise as The Watchman, just before a major event on the show, which I will not reveal so as not to spoil it. Oddly enough, Crispin wounds Aubrey (in the exact same spot on her side, if I'm not badly mistaken, that Gisbourne wounded Marian), disguised as The Bandit, just before a major event I will not spoil. That's not all -- the dress Aubrey wears to the major event is described as being nearly IDENTICAL to the one Marian wears to the event.
-- Speaking of clothing, a major plot point on the show has Alan A'Dale turning traitor and selling secrets to Gisbourne, who later hires him as a man-at-arms. Can you believe it? Jack also turns traitor and sells secrets to Crispin, who later hires him as a man-at-arms. On the show, Alan A'Dale garbs himself in Gisbourne's clothing, and Gisbourne remarks on it. In the book, Jack garbs himself in Crispin's clothing and Aubrey remarks upon it. Oh, it's also a running joke on the show that Alan has a thing for nuns -- guess who also has a thing for nuns?
-- High drama ensues on Robin Hood when the visiting Duke of Winchester (sic, maybe) decides to demand Marian as part of a negotiation with the Sheriff. Mild drama ensues in this book when the visiting Pennington decides to demand Aubrey as part of a negotiation with the Sheriff.
There's more, so much more, but I won't bore you with the details. Besides, I've saved the best for last:
The descriptions of the characters in the book are almost identical, character for character, to the actors/actresses who played the corresponding characters on the show. As though that were not enough, Crispin's name is an Easter Egg -- it's the same as his corresponding character's middle name in real life.
The two biggest problems with the book are the heroine and hero. The author obviously has a thing for the Gisbourne/Crispin character (and understandably so), but does nothing with him to make him more sympathetic/understandable/believable than he was on the show. If anything, she completely emasculates him! And don't get me started on Aubrey/Marian -- she was a bratty, immature character on the show, and she is in the book as well. When she's not inexplicably lusting over Crispin, she's creating drama. She's an almost unlikeable heroine.
Additionally, the writing, while not unreadable, is so prosaic and repetitive as to be mind-numbing. Major plot lines are either unbelievable or left hanging loose completely (the threat posed to Aubrey by Pennington is one that comes to mind, as is the whole business with the nuns).
But here's the sad thing -- the show could have been lifted scene for scene, character for character, and a great book come out of it, one that fleshed out the characters, particularly Gisbourne/Crispin, who plays such an important part in the book. That, unfortunately, is not this book.
On the show, we have Robin of Locksley, recently returned from the Crusades to find his estate given over to Guy of Gisbourne, who works for the eeeeeeeevil Sheriff of Nottingham. Both Robin and Gisbourne court Maid Marian, who, disguised as The Watchman, robs from the rich to give to the poor. Pretty soon, Robin, along with Alan A'Dale, Little John, Much and Will Scarlet (among others) is also robbing/giving.
In the book, we have Ethan of Windale, recently returned from the Crusades to find his estate given over to Crispin Huntingdon, who works for the eeeeeeeevil Sheriff Buxton. Both Ethan and Crispin court Lady Aubry, who, disguised as The Bandit, robs from the rich to give to the poor. Pretty soon, Ethan, along with Jack/Alan, Toby/Much and Tom/Will, is also robbing/giving.
But that's just the beginning.
-- The characters in the book display the very same slangy, anachronistic language as the characters on the show. It works on TV. Not so much in print.
-- The Sheriff of Nottingham keeps little critters in cages and torments them to let us know he's eeeeeevil. He also has a homeoerotic attachment to Gisbourne that he displays by either being way too touchy-feely with him, or torturing him. Same thing with Buxton and Crispin, critters and bad-touching and all.
-- Gisbourne and Marian have a bizarre on-off engagement that's never fully explained. So do Crispin and Aubrey!
-- Gisbourne grievously wounds Marian, in disguise as The Watchman, just before a major event on the show, which I will not reveal so as not to spoil it. Oddly enough, Crispin wounds Aubrey (in the exact same spot on her side, if I'm not badly mistaken, that Gisbourne wounded Marian), disguised as The Bandit, just before a major event I will not spoil. That's not all -- the dress Aubrey wears to the major event is described as being nearly IDENTICAL to the one Marian wears to the event.
-- Speaking of clothing, a major plot point on the show has Alan A'Dale turning traitor and selling secrets to Gisbourne, who later hires him as a man-at-arms. Can you believe it? Jack also turns traitor and sells secrets to Crispin, who later hires him as a man-at-arms. On the show, Alan A'Dale garbs himself in Gisbourne's clothing, and Gisbourne remarks on it. In the book, Jack garbs himself in Crispin's clothing and Aubrey remarks upon it. Oh, it's also a running joke on the show that Alan has a thing for nuns -- guess who also has a thing for nuns?
-- High drama ensues on Robin Hood when the visiting Duke of Winchester (sic, maybe) decides to demand Marian as part of a negotiation with the Sheriff. Mild drama ensues in this book when the visiting Pennington decides to demand Aubrey as part of a negotiation with the Sheriff.
There's more, so much more, but I won't bore you with the details. Besides, I've saved the best for last:
The descriptions of the characters in the book are almost identical, character for character, to the actors/actresses who played the corresponding characters on the show. As though that were not enough, Crispin's name is an Easter Egg -- it's the same as his corresponding character's middle name in real life.
The two biggest problems with the book are the heroine and hero. The author obviously has a thing for the Gisbourne/Crispin character (and understandably so), but does nothing with him to make him more sympathetic/understandable/believable than he was on the show. If anything, she completely emasculates him! And don't get me started on Aubrey/Marian -- she was a bratty, immature character on the show, and she is in the book as well. When she's not inexplicably lusting over Crispin, she's creating drama. She's an almost unlikeable heroine.
Additionally, the writing, while not unreadable, is so prosaic and repetitive as to be mind-numbing. Major plot lines are either unbelievable or left hanging loose completely (the threat posed to Aubrey by Pennington is one that comes to mind, as is the whole business with the nuns).
But here's the sad thing -- the show could have been lifted scene for scene, character for character, and a great book come out of it, one that fleshed out the characters, particularly Gisbourne/Crispin, who plays such an important part in the book. That, unfortunately, is not this book.
October 25, 2016
++Spoilers++
DNF 30%
I love Merry Farmer's historical western romances, and so I decided to try her medieval book, and have found it seriously lacking.
What was most disturbing is the dialog and modern phrases used throughout. To me this takes away from the feeling of the time period and completely ruins the book for me.
The cliched and cartoonish antagonists were unbearable, and the world building was not very good. The fight scenes were repettitive and lacked intensity.
The plot was disjointed and uninteresting. It seemed there was a loss of focus as to what the story is truly about.
I really wanted to like this book, but I cannot go on.
I still like this author, and know she has talent, but I believe she took on far too much with attempting this type of genre. I will continue to read her books, but I do not recommend this one.
DNF 30%
I love Merry Farmer's historical western romances, and so I decided to try her medieval book, and have found it seriously lacking.
What was most disturbing is the dialog and modern phrases used throughout. To me this takes away from the feeling of the time period and completely ruins the book for me.
The cliched and cartoonish antagonists were unbearable, and the world building was not very good. The fight scenes were repettitive and lacked intensity.
The plot was disjointed and uninteresting. It seemed there was a loss of focus as to what the story is truly about.
I really wanted to like this book, but I cannot go on.
I still like this author, and know she has talent, but I believe she took on far too much with attempting this type of genre. I will continue to read her books, but I do not recommend this one.
August 3, 2012
I don't usually use my reviews as a soapbox, but I feel especially motivated to do it here. Here's my one suggestion: don't read this book!
Why? Because you're better off watching the original TV show that the author has so artlessly ripped off here: BBC's Robin Hood (2006). Not only are the characters here only thinly disguised from the original, but several plot points are essentially recycled from the show.
I realize that much of the Robin Hood legend is in the public domain, but instead of reworking the legend or presenting readers with a new twist, the author chose to merely change the names and locations on the show and recast her work as original.
Why? Because you're better off watching the original TV show that the author has so artlessly ripped off here: BBC's Robin Hood (2006). Not only are the characters here only thinly disguised from the original, but several plot points are essentially recycled from the show.
I realize that much of the Robin Hood legend is in the public domain, but instead of reworking the legend or presenting readers with a new twist, the author chose to merely change the names and locations on the show and recast her work as original.
March 31, 2014
After skimming a few other reviews, I discovered I wasn't the only one to draw parallels between this story and the classic tale of Robin Hood. I've never seen the BBC rendition of Robin Hood, but I know the tale and I've seen the Costner film, and as I was reading this book, I found myself drawing those parallels. Buxton is the Sheriff of Derbyshire (Sheriff of Nottingham), Crispin is Guy of Gisbourne, Ethan is Robin Hood, and Aubrey is Maid Marian, though admittedly a bit less helpless than her literary counterpart.
However, because this is moderately skillful fan fiction, Maid Marian ends up with Guy of Gisbourne (who isn't totally evil, after all), and Robin Hood is kind of a douche. While I applaud someone giving Guy of Gisbourne a more noble part in this tale, I can't help but wonder why "Merry Farmer" bothered. The emotions in this book were on a rollercoaster ride. Everyone behaved in alternating patterns of rage, disgust, and depression, and the love story was overshadowed by Aubrey's idiocy when it came to her own romantic feelings. She sees Ethan is a douche. She's pissed at him about 98% of the time, but sees more and more that Crispin is a pretty decent dude underneath it all...still, she holds on to her "love" for Ethan? It made me dislike her quite a bit.
A piece of fan fiction from this perspective would have been pretty cool in the hands of a more capable writer. As it's written, however, I can't wholeheartedly endorse it. There's just too much emotional fuckwittage that had me rolling my eyes and wishing it would end. Not to mention the obscene, slightly offensive homosexual overtones. Whenever an author creates a complete psychopath, then highlights his "madness" with homosexuality, well...it's more than a little insulting to homosexuals.
However, because this is moderately skillful fan fiction, Maid Marian ends up with Guy of Gisbourne (who isn't totally evil, after all), and Robin Hood is kind of a douche. While I applaud someone giving Guy of Gisbourne a more noble part in this tale, I can't help but wonder why "Merry Farmer" bothered. The emotions in this book were on a rollercoaster ride. Everyone behaved in alternating patterns of rage, disgust, and depression, and the love story was overshadowed by Aubrey's idiocy when it came to her own romantic feelings. She sees Ethan is a douche. She's pissed at him about 98% of the time, but sees more and more that Crispin is a pretty decent dude underneath it all...still, she holds on to her "love" for Ethan? It made me dislike her quite a bit.
A piece of fan fiction from this perspective would have been pretty cool in the hands of a more capable writer. As it's written, however, I can't wholeheartedly endorse it. There's just too much emotional fuckwittage that had me rolling my eyes and wishing it would end. Not to mention the obscene, slightly offensive homosexual overtones. Whenever an author creates a complete psychopath, then highlights his "madness" with homosexuality, well...it's more than a little insulting to homosexuals.
January 27, 2013
I love HR and saw this book was Free, not read anything from this author before. Wow what an exciting read its been, the fast paced story kept me turning the pages.
This story had everything you could want in a great read, intrigue, plots, betrayals, sexual tension, hot passion and humour and the list goes on. Aubrey was torn between Ethan a childhood sweetheart, who constantly let her down and a man who she thought she should not like Crispin, who clearly loved her with every breath he took. Who would she finally choose, the story certainly keeps you guessing.Adding to that she had nuns to rescue, and other battles to fight, as she unintentionally gets herself into some scrapes. Her skills in weaponry certainly came in handy, she had plenty of practice going out dressed in disguise as a bandit. Once she realises which man she really loves then she goes all out for that man.
I have to mention Jack oh he made me laugh, loved this character, he is so sweet on one of the nuns I think it maybe his story next, I will certainly be reading this one.
To anyone thinking of getting this book, I can certainly recommend it, I was nearly put off by negative review I read so glad I decided to make my own mind up, Enjoy I did.
This story had everything you could want in a great read, intrigue, plots, betrayals, sexual tension, hot passion and humour and the list goes on. Aubrey was torn between Ethan a childhood sweetheart, who constantly let her down and a man who she thought she should not like Crispin, who clearly loved her with every breath he took. Who would she finally choose, the story certainly keeps you guessing.Adding to that she had nuns to rescue, and other battles to fight, as she unintentionally gets herself into some scrapes. Her skills in weaponry certainly came in handy, she had plenty of practice going out dressed in disguise as a bandit. Once she realises which man she really loves then she goes all out for that man.
I have to mention Jack oh he made me laugh, loved this character, he is so sweet on one of the nuns I think it maybe his story next, I will certainly be reading this one.
To anyone thinking of getting this book, I can certainly recommend it, I was nearly put off by negative review I read so glad I decided to make my own mind up, Enjoy I did.
February 21, 2013
There's a lot to like about this story. The heroine, Lady Aubrey, is torn between two men: Sir Crispin, the nobleman to whom she was once engaged, and Ethan -- whose lands have been given to Crispin by the local sheriff, Buxton. Aubrey also spends no small part of her time disguised as the Derby Bandit, robbing the rich to help the poor.
The tale owes more than a little bit to the classic Robin Hood cycle, which is all well and good. Aubrey is a little feistier than we would expect from a woman of the period, but that is part and parcel of the genre. The characters are well-drawn and complex, with no one being a cardboard cut-out (except Buxton, who is two-dimensionally creepy).
What cost the book a star was the anachronistic dialogue that took me right out of the story every time it came up. Terms like "bye-bye" and "okay" were not used in 1191. Neither were "lunch," "yeah," or "nope." This was a problem throughout the entire book that I just could not overlook.
The tale owes more than a little bit to the classic Robin Hood cycle, which is all well and good. Aubrey is a little feistier than we would expect from a woman of the period, but that is part and parcel of the genre. The characters are well-drawn and complex, with no one being a cardboard cut-out (except Buxton, who is two-dimensionally creepy).
What cost the book a star was the anachronistic dialogue that took me right out of the story every time it came up. Terms like "bye-bye" and "okay" were not used in 1191. Neither were "lunch," "yeah," or "nope." This was a problem throughout the entire book that I just could not overlook.
April 30, 2012
I never thought that I could love this author. I got it as ebook give away by the author Merry Farmer. Seeing the cover art make me want to see what the story is about. I really love the cover art. Yes, it's Bodiam castle!!! :-)
This author pulled you into the story right from the start. I couldn't put it down when I started reading it. She keeps the reader's eyes glued to the pages up to the very end.
I would recommend this book to anyone. It's worth every penny you spend.
This author pulled you into the story right from the start. I couldn't put it down when I started reading it. She keeps the reader's eyes glued to the pages up to the very end.
I would recommend this book to anyone. It's worth every penny you spend.
April 2, 2013
Being set in Medieval times, one would think that proper terms & phrases (for the time frame in reference) would be used, however, that was so not the case. I was tired of the heroine's wishy-washy ways shortly after the tale began, and sadly it continued throughout the book. I have no desire to complete the series and it was a struggle to finish this.
May 29, 2012
Overall story: This is definitely not your average Robin Hood tale. Although it has similar characters and circumstances: a bandit stealing money from a noble on the road in the middle of the woods, Prince John, the sheriff. But I think that’s the extent of similarities.
The story revolves around loyalty, while the title is only scratching the surface. It has several layers intricately woven throughout the whole book. Loyalty to the crown, loyalty to the master, loyalty to the family, loyalty to the childhood sweetheart, and loyalty to your true heart. It will keep you guessing, plotting, and wanting.
I love a deep, psychological, in your head type of book. Books that make you think. Go deeper than the surface. The story and characters all have many layers and Merry Farmer gives it a good show.
Grammar/Editing: I would have LOVED to have been able to do a line-by-line critique/edit of this while it was still in beta. I truly enjoy helping writers become better writers, while they do the same for me. There are a few grammatical errors and POV confusions throughout the book. (“Glancing” is definitely an overused word that left me groaning by the end.) While tripping me up every now and again, they are still easy to overlook because of the story as a whole.
When you are the author and so close to the story, it’s easy to miss errors. Even having a single copy-editor, I could understand some slip through. Heck, even traditional published books still have their own grammatical/spelling errors. But if the author has a couple of really good people, betas, critique partners, that are willing to go over it line-by-line, fewer errors will ever get through. The more eyes the better, right?
Characters: Merry Farmer makes me become, fall in love, despise, loathe, cringe, want, and fall in love all over again. Her characters are not just three-dimensional, they are real--each having a distinct personality all their own. Whether you want to love them, hate them, or both, you will find that you will question, you will want to reach through and strangle them, slap them, or shake them until they wake up. No person is perfect, and nor are her characters. Some even have redeeming qualities, while others are pure evil.
• Lady Aubrey: Very strong and independent. A main character you can really get into the head of, feel what she feels, and plot, hope and love right along with her. She’s calculating. She’s head-strong. She’s smart. All of which, make her clash with any and all men she meets. And in this era, a woman like that should be put in her place. She will have none of it, from anyone. Well, maybe just one…
• Sir Ethan: A very noble man. Fights for what he believes in. Defender of the crown and country. Fights for his country, his land, his right, and his love. At every turn, Aubrey clashes with his wishes, his plans, his attempts to get back what is rightfully his. But he always puts his priorities in the wrong basket, which ends up getting him into a lot of trouble.
• Sir Crispin: You are supposed to despise him. He is the epitome of authority. Secrets. Lies. And a “love” for Aubrey that looks to be a strategic move, only superficial. She refused him once before. She refuses to be controlled, told what to do. Infuriating Ethan. But through her decisions, her actions, she begins to see the truth, and so does the reader.
• Lord Buxton: I loathe this man! Not just hate him. I LOATHE him. He’s disgusting. He’s brutal. He wants what he wants and doesn’t care who he hurts in the process to get it. As long as he gets it and it makes him look good doing it! I wanted to see him dead. Well, if not dead, then stripped of everything and made to beg on the streets—a fate worse than hell for him. People like him do not deserve greatness. But it’s people like him that always seem to get wealth and power, even today.
• Jack: I adore this character, even though he says “Oy!” way too much. ;) His basic, rough, very matter-of-fact character is someone you just can’t help but love. He is true to himself, and everyone around him. There is no hiding who he is. He is definitely not blinded by power, nor loyalty to anyone but himself and his heart. He makes his own way in life, does what he feels is right, regardless who does or doesn’t follow. He is a very strong supporting character who’s loyalty changes when he sees the truth with his own eyes.
• Geoffrey/Toby/Tom/other minor characters: I’m not sure that we need to have a point of view for any of the minor characters. There aren’t too many to distract the reader, but I don’t feel the need to get into their head at any given time. We could easily see their POV through their actions and through the eyes of the others, I think.
I am not a very fast reader due to my real life situation. I read when I can. I also write when I can. So when the voices in my head tell me to write, I write. When I’m stuck, I read. This book was really engaging, riveting at points. I didn’t want to put it down, even when life made me. I am pleasantly surprised that I found a self-published book, worthy to stand the ground against a traditional published one.
I still fear, though, the self-published world is inundated with bad books. Since everyone can publish, everyone thinks they can write. I hope to find more quality, self-published books out there, like Merry Farmer. This is the first self-published book I actually enjoyed and recommend. If you like historical romance, a strong female main character, a bit of sword play, chess, settings in the medieval era, Robin Hood, and lord/peasant society, secrets, spies and plots, you will enjoy this book. However, be warned, there are a couple of very detailed, intimate scenes that are rather necessary for plot progression. This is not something you want your teenager reading.
The story revolves around loyalty, while the title is only scratching the surface. It has several layers intricately woven throughout the whole book. Loyalty to the crown, loyalty to the master, loyalty to the family, loyalty to the childhood sweetheart, and loyalty to your true heart. It will keep you guessing, plotting, and wanting.
I love a deep, psychological, in your head type of book. Books that make you think. Go deeper than the surface. The story and characters all have many layers and Merry Farmer gives it a good show.
Grammar/Editing: I would have LOVED to have been able to do a line-by-line critique/edit of this while it was still in beta. I truly enjoy helping writers become better writers, while they do the same for me. There are a few grammatical errors and POV confusions throughout the book. (“Glancing” is definitely an overused word that left me groaning by the end.) While tripping me up every now and again, they are still easy to overlook because of the story as a whole.
When you are the author and so close to the story, it’s easy to miss errors. Even having a single copy-editor, I could understand some slip through. Heck, even traditional published books still have their own grammatical/spelling errors. But if the author has a couple of really good people, betas, critique partners, that are willing to go over it line-by-line, fewer errors will ever get through. The more eyes the better, right?
Characters: Merry Farmer makes me become, fall in love, despise, loathe, cringe, want, and fall in love all over again. Her characters are not just three-dimensional, they are real--each having a distinct personality all their own. Whether you want to love them, hate them, or both, you will find that you will question, you will want to reach through and strangle them, slap them, or shake them until they wake up. No person is perfect, and nor are her characters. Some even have redeeming qualities, while others are pure evil.
• Lady Aubrey: Very strong and independent. A main character you can really get into the head of, feel what she feels, and plot, hope and love right along with her. She’s calculating. She’s head-strong. She’s smart. All of which, make her clash with any and all men she meets. And in this era, a woman like that should be put in her place. She will have none of it, from anyone. Well, maybe just one…
• Sir Ethan: A very noble man. Fights for what he believes in. Defender of the crown and country. Fights for his country, his land, his right, and his love. At every turn, Aubrey clashes with his wishes, his plans, his attempts to get back what is rightfully his. But he always puts his priorities in the wrong basket, which ends up getting him into a lot of trouble.
• Sir Crispin: You are supposed to despise him. He is the epitome of authority. Secrets. Lies. And a “love” for Aubrey that looks to be a strategic move, only superficial. She refused him once before. She refuses to be controlled, told what to do. Infuriating Ethan. But through her decisions, her actions, she begins to see the truth, and so does the reader.
• Lord Buxton: I loathe this man! Not just hate him. I LOATHE him. He’s disgusting. He’s brutal. He wants what he wants and doesn’t care who he hurts in the process to get it. As long as he gets it and it makes him look good doing it! I wanted to see him dead. Well, if not dead, then stripped of everything and made to beg on the streets—a fate worse than hell for him. People like him do not deserve greatness. But it’s people like him that always seem to get wealth and power, even today.
• Jack: I adore this character, even though he says “Oy!” way too much. ;) His basic, rough, very matter-of-fact character is someone you just can’t help but love. He is true to himself, and everyone around him. There is no hiding who he is. He is definitely not blinded by power, nor loyalty to anyone but himself and his heart. He makes his own way in life, does what he feels is right, regardless who does or doesn’t follow. He is a very strong supporting character who’s loyalty changes when he sees the truth with his own eyes.
• Geoffrey/Toby/Tom/other minor characters: I’m not sure that we need to have a point of view for any of the minor characters. There aren’t too many to distract the reader, but I don’t feel the need to get into their head at any given time. We could easily see their POV through their actions and through the eyes of the others, I think.
I am not a very fast reader due to my real life situation. I read when I can. I also write when I can. So when the voices in my head tell me to write, I write. When I’m stuck, I read. This book was really engaging, riveting at points. I didn’t want to put it down, even when life made me. I am pleasantly surprised that I found a self-published book, worthy to stand the ground against a traditional published one.
I still fear, though, the self-published world is inundated with bad books. Since everyone can publish, everyone thinks they can write. I hope to find more quality, self-published books out there, like Merry Farmer. This is the first self-published book I actually enjoyed and recommend. If you like historical romance, a strong female main character, a bit of sword play, chess, settings in the medieval era, Robin Hood, and lord/peasant society, secrets, spies and plots, you will enjoy this book. However, be warned, there are a couple of very detailed, intimate scenes that are rather necessary for plot progression. This is not something you want your teenager reading.
July 27, 2013
I initially waffled over how I should rate this book. I loved the storyline, the characters, and the author's voice as she brought everything to life with a deft touch. There was wicked humor, despicable treachery, and steamy romance. However...if you've watched even one episode of BBCA's Robin Hood then you will understand my perceived dilemma. While the character names are different, the location is Derbyshire and not Sherwood, and the story resolves in a new manner, at first I was constantly reminded of scenes from the TV show as I read. As I continued I slowly realized that I love re-imaginings of classics, and I love new novels that pay homage to previous favorites - exactly what this author was doing. After finishing the book my opinion firmed into one of support for the author. The classic tale of Robin Hood has been adapted by such varied talents as Walt Disney, Mel Brooks, and Ridley Scott. The story has been written of, sung in ballads, retold at faires, and adopted as a native tale in more countries than England (France and Germany stake their claims on the tale). Thus I decided why criticize this author for doing what untold others have already done, that is, give us a new perspective of this timeless story. Especially when she has done such a fantastic job.
Without giving anything away, let me say The Loyal Heart of the title is not Robin Hood, or Ethan, as he is named in this version. And while I will admit that I pictured Richard Armitage in my mind every time Sir Crispin entered a scene, the character is not merely a reincarnation of BBCA's Sir Guy of Gisborne (and who doesn't picture Richard Armitage in their mind every chance they get?!). The author no doubt received inspiration from that show but the reader can clearly see she changed the plots and reworked the characters to fit the story she wanted to tell. I loved the plots and subplots, which all worked smoothly together, moved briskly, and were easy to follow. The romance built steadily and was captivating and steamy; I really rooted for the H and h from the outset and felt like cheering aloud when they began to be truthful with each other.
It would be a disservice to the author to claim this is just a rehash of a TV show; afterall, the TV show was just a rehash of the movies, which were a rehash of the novel Ivanhoe, which was a rehash of the traveling ballads, which were a rehash of the story from folklore. You see what I mean? The story of Robin Hood has been around for over 500 years. It has been told and told often, with a variety of scenery and character changes and embellishments. Merry Farmer wrote some terrific fan fiction here, with an engaging style and gift for description that brought her scenes to life in my mind. If you enjoy stories like Robin Hood then grab this book, and be prepared to ignore your chores so you can devour it in one sitting. I'm off now to read the next book in the series, The Faithful Heart.
Without giving anything away, let me say The Loyal Heart of the title is not Robin Hood, or Ethan, as he is named in this version. And while I will admit that I pictured Richard Armitage in my mind every time Sir Crispin entered a scene, the character is not merely a reincarnation of BBCA's Sir Guy of Gisborne (and who doesn't picture Richard Armitage in their mind every chance they get?!). The author no doubt received inspiration from that show but the reader can clearly see she changed the plots and reworked the characters to fit the story she wanted to tell. I loved the plots and subplots, which all worked smoothly together, moved briskly, and were easy to follow. The romance built steadily and was captivating and steamy; I really rooted for the H and h from the outset and felt like cheering aloud when they began to be truthful with each other.
It would be a disservice to the author to claim this is just a rehash of a TV show; afterall, the TV show was just a rehash of the movies, which were a rehash of the novel Ivanhoe, which was a rehash of the traveling ballads, which were a rehash of the story from folklore. You see what I mean? The story of Robin Hood has been around for over 500 years. It has been told and told often, with a variety of scenery and character changes and embellishments. Merry Farmer wrote some terrific fan fiction here, with an engaging style and gift for description that brought her scenes to life in my mind. If you enjoy stories like Robin Hood then grab this book, and be prepared to ignore your chores so you can devour it in one sitting. I'm off now to read the next book in the series, The Faithful Heart.
October 7, 2011
First, I wish to qualify my review. I hear many e-books are subject to "friend review" suspicion when 5 stars are involved. I only met Miss Farmer online in recent months, and while we've had friendly exchanges, I am not in the circle of friends and contacts involved in the making of this book. We met and talked primarily because I found her website and loved the posts she put up. I gave her a few blog awards and though this book, as "historical romance," was out of my preferred genre, my enjoyment of her posts lead me to sample it on Smashwords.
All-in-all, despite becoming online friends with Merry in recent months, I don't review books I don't like (particularly if they are written by friends). I had an easy excuse to pass on reviewing and rating this if I didn't like it (not my genre) and I wasn't obligated to either. Am I biased? Possibly, but only because I loved Merry's blog before picking up her book. I'm a fan first.
I hit the end of 20% and thought, what, already?! I dished out the $3 that same day to read the rest. I spent all day reading (not all that unusual for me with a good book) and finished it up the same day I got it. That is unusual for me. I usually take my time with books (sometimes reading more than one at a time). There are only two reasons I read a book all in one day. It is either a fairly easy read (ie fluff) or I just can't put it down.
I couldn't put The Loyal Heart down for long. Merry taps into my childhood love for swashbuckling adventure but inserts a character I always wanted in the fray. A swashbuckling woman without a crutch. She's not Robin Hood's girl, or his daughter, or "The love interest." She's not defined by a better/more well-known man. She's Aubrey and her story may share common threads with the Robin Hood legend, but it stands on its own and turns it on its head.
What Maguire did for Oz, Merry does for the Robin Hood story. The only difference is that Merry draws on research and real places during the times surrounding the legend and turns Loyal Heart into its own story with hints of the legend. This is not a rehash of an old story, it stands on its own.
Only one part of the text gave me pause, but I don't want to give it away. I'll only say I found it odd for the character near the end and wasn't sure I "bought" that they'd make a certain assumption about a certain death without making sure. I also only found about 10 typos max and they were easily read over with the intended words. This is the only reason I wavered between 4 and 5 stars. It was really only enough to make a 1/4 of a star difference, so I rounded up.
I can't wait for book 2, it moves on to the not a nun, nun as the main character and her comic relief (in book 1) love interest. Yes, non-nun nuns have love interests. And no, it's not something out of Sister Act!
All-in-all, despite becoming online friends with Merry in recent months, I don't review books I don't like (particularly if they are written by friends). I had an easy excuse to pass on reviewing and rating this if I didn't like it (not my genre) and I wasn't obligated to either. Am I biased? Possibly, but only because I loved Merry's blog before picking up her book. I'm a fan first.
I hit the end of 20% and thought, what, already?! I dished out the $3 that same day to read the rest. I spent all day reading (not all that unusual for me with a good book) and finished it up the same day I got it. That is unusual for me. I usually take my time with books (sometimes reading more than one at a time). There are only two reasons I read a book all in one day. It is either a fairly easy read (ie fluff) or I just can't put it down.
I couldn't put The Loyal Heart down for long. Merry taps into my childhood love for swashbuckling adventure but inserts a character I always wanted in the fray. A swashbuckling woman without a crutch. She's not Robin Hood's girl, or his daughter, or "The love interest." She's not defined by a better/more well-known man. She's Aubrey and her story may share common threads with the Robin Hood legend, but it stands on its own and turns it on its head.
What Maguire did for Oz, Merry does for the Robin Hood story. The only difference is that Merry draws on research and real places during the times surrounding the legend and turns Loyal Heart into its own story with hints of the legend. This is not a rehash of an old story, it stands on its own.
Only one part of the text gave me pause, but I don't want to give it away. I'll only say I found it odd for the character near the end and wasn't sure I "bought" that they'd make a certain assumption about a certain death without making sure. I also only found about 10 typos max and they were easily read over with the intended words. This is the only reason I wavered between 4 and 5 stars. It was really only enough to make a 1/4 of a star difference, so I rounded up.
I can't wait for book 2, it moves on to the not a nun, nun as the main character and her comic relief (in book 1) love interest. Yes, non-nun nuns have love interests. And no, it's not something out of Sister Act!
May 16, 2012
Hi Merry Farmer.
I just ve been reading ab 60 % of this book, and I really enjoy it.
First I was bored till Crispin revealed as the actual hero in this book.
First Ethan does my favorite to pair for Aubrey, then till on chapter of 15th my feeling get favor to Crispin. His kindness to Aubrey.
I don't care about Buxton and others character.
The funy one, a peasant Jack does I like very much. M Farmer succes to put Jack as other hero in this book. The "Oy" words most I like for Jack.
I just bit confuse with how M Farmer separate between its plot or scene among chapter. There are some chapter that consist of more than one plot or scene. Why does not make them on different chapter, so it will be marker when we want to pause on reading.
But, compare with others book that I ever read, this one is so simple on how the story flow.
Anyway, I am getting hang of with Marry Farmer style. Absolutely , her others book will be my favor on reading later.
Perhaps I am wrong, but this is my own assesment ; that after reading others book with different stye, different method, that very very complicated scene, a lot of character appears etc ; like book of 5 Song of Ice and Fire ; that I have read before - my judgement for any book I read getting dull. Not fair at all . I had to force to read The Loyal Heart till on 3rd chapter, then I got enjoyment on it.
Yes, I d love this book. Still curious what s happen next with Aubrey. I hope she will love Crispin as Crispin love her. I don't like Ethan .. that only on the first page, Merry Farmer ve introduced as good holy man that want his right shire back. His love to Aubrey does not met my standard ... at least till now ...
It is review on my 60 % reading.
Done. And fantastic books. After Aubrey getting married with Crispin then the next plot coming. So exciting ... and ..
and I do not know what I have to tell. Good book and I love it. Odd, I love how Merry Farmer changed my review about this book. 60 % was not fair to give 3 stars only. But after 100 % I completed, I want to give 6 star ******
I just want to read the continues one : The Faithful Heart ...
Oh Madeline. I love this peasant Jack that now had become real noble.
Hmm. I love it Merry.
March 27, 2012
When Ethan returns home from the crusades, he discovers his home has been reclaimed and a new Lord has been appointed in his place. He also discovers that the new adversary in town ‘the Derbywood bandit’ is not a man but is Lady Aubrey; the sister of his old friend and neighbour. Crispin, the man Ethan believes killed his father now lives in his home and acts like he’s Lord of the Manor. Much seems to have changed in the two years Ethan has been away!
I think I was expecting a run of the mill romance when I picked up this book but that isn’t what I got. ‘The Loyal Heart’ is kind of a reverse adaptation of ‘Robin hood prince of Thieves’……..Our Robin is a tough female who disguises herself as a man and keeps the local Bailiff Crispin on his toes by out manoeuvring him and his men at every turn….. Don’t misunderstand me the story quickly moves along and isn’t a rehash of this well known legend.
Aubrey our MC has been in love with Ethan for years but it has taken her this long to realise that really he is a selfish ass and not worthy of her attention, on the other hand Crispin who she has spent years thinking is an ass turns out to be rather thoughtful and nice. It takes Aubrey’s realisation of this fact for Ethan to finally notice Aubrey as a woman rather than his friends little sister. Definitely a case of not realising what you’ve got ‘til it’s gone and wanting what you can’t have! There were some fairly unpredictable things in this plot……..I didn’t expect ------ to happen, Well I’m not going to give that away am I! But there were a couple of things that surprised me and I liked that.
I did notice a few typo’s, ‘out’ instead of ‘our’ wrong tense and things like that, they weren’t excessive but they were noticeable, it didn’t take away my enjoyment of the story but I have deducted point 5 from my rating because of them.
This is a really entertaining book with love, lust, action, intrigue, humour, stress, happiness and sadness and is well worth taking the time out of your day to read.
Copy supplied for review
October 26, 2012
For the sake of disclosure - Merry Farmer and I met through Twitter, which led to an exchange of books for reading and review. First, let me say that Farmer writes a good review which includes constructive criticism, so I will do my best to return the favor.
The Loyal Heart is a rowdy twist on the classic tale of Robin Hood. The protagonist, Lady Aubrey, is in your face from page one fighting for her brother, her people, and eventually her true love. I really appreciate a strong multifaceted female character who retains the ability to fall flat on her face, and Merry Farmer delivered beautifully in that department.
The story has a host of entertaining characters and the plot moves along at a fast pace. The historical setting was believable and approachable. There may have been minor anachronisms here and there, but overall I felt that "The Loyal Heart" transported me to medieval England at the right time and place.
One of the book's strongest points for me was the evolution of the characters. They came across as three dimensional and their dialogue was smart and realistic. I would have liked more variation in the exposition though, especially when the narrator was describing the characters emotional/physical states and inner thoughts.
A few chapters from the end, I had to separate from my iPad but rather than wait to see how things worked out for Lady Aubrey, I finished the book on my iPhone! For lovers of historical romance, this story delivers in both departments and I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series to see if the author evolves with her story.
The Loyal Heart is a rowdy twist on the classic tale of Robin Hood. The protagonist, Lady Aubrey, is in your face from page one fighting for her brother, her people, and eventually her true love. I really appreciate a strong multifaceted female character who retains the ability to fall flat on her face, and Merry Farmer delivered beautifully in that department.
The story has a host of entertaining characters and the plot moves along at a fast pace. The historical setting was believable and approachable. There may have been minor anachronisms here and there, but overall I felt that "The Loyal Heart" transported me to medieval England at the right time and place.
One of the book's strongest points for me was the evolution of the characters. They came across as three dimensional and their dialogue was smart and realistic. I would have liked more variation in the exposition though, especially when the narrator was describing the characters emotional/physical states and inner thoughts.
A few chapters from the end, I had to separate from my iPad but rather than wait to see how things worked out for Lady Aubrey, I finished the book on my iPhone! For lovers of historical romance, this story delivers in both departments and I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series to see if the author evolves with her story.
February 22, 2015
The Loyal Heart started off with a bang for me but then fell flat for quite a while. I generally love historical romances but this one just wasn't quite it for me. It definitely follows along the Robin Hood tale (not sure if that was quite intentional but it seems it would be).
I enjoyed the spunk of Aubrey, adored Jack (by far my favorite character in the novel), and really liked Crispin once we learned his true nature. I wasn't a huge fan of the other characters though. Of course, Ethan... blah. I didn't like him from the get-go.
Anyways... overall, it just went on and on and on and on and on and on and on.... you get the point here. I had to push myself to continue reading for a while but once we get to the point in the plot where we see Crispin is actually the good guy... it took back off for me.
At that point, I became a bit more invested in the story & the outcomes of the characters. The characters you thought were the good guys during the first half of the novel are flipped to the bad guys. I did like that part of the plot but I wish we wouldn't have wasted so much time to get to that point.
So overall, for me, I liked this novel but I didn't just fawn over it. Now, give me a story about just Crispin & Jack... I think I'd love that! Those two characters truly made this novel worth reading for me. If it wasn't for those two characters, I don't think I'd have even finished this one.
Overall Rating: 3 Stars
I enjoyed the spunk of Aubrey, adored Jack (by far my favorite character in the novel), and really liked Crispin once we learned his true nature. I wasn't a huge fan of the other characters though. Of course, Ethan... blah. I didn't like him from the get-go.
Anyways... overall, it just went on and on and on and on and on and on and on.... you get the point here. I had to push myself to continue reading for a while but once we get to the point in the plot where we see Crispin is actually the good guy... it took back off for me.
At that point, I became a bit more invested in the story & the outcomes of the characters. The characters you thought were the good guys during the first half of the novel are flipped to the bad guys. I did like that part of the plot but I wish we wouldn't have wasted so much time to get to that point.
So overall, for me, I liked this novel but I didn't just fawn over it. Now, give me a story about just Crispin & Jack... I think I'd love that! Those two characters truly made this novel worth reading for me. If it wasn't for those two characters, I don't think I'd have even finished this one.
Overall Rating: 3 Stars
May 13, 2012
I was given a copy of this book to review, and although I am a huge fan of romance, historical romance is not really my forte. I was very happy to be proved wrong and I could not put this book down, in fact I devoured it in one setting and then immediately bought the second book too!
Lady Audrey is not a typical maiden, all bodices and beauty, she is actually a clever, articulate ballsy woman who I adored. Merry Farmer, the author actually has two degrees in history, so as you can expect, this book ticks all the boxes and more. I am looking forward to reading the second book, and seeing the future projects that Merry has up her sleeve. This book is well written and formatted, a couple of typos, but nothing major once your eye glosses over them to get to the next part of the story. All in all, a lovely book that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Rachel Dove
The Kindle Book Review
Lady Audrey is not a typical maiden, all bodices and beauty, she is actually a clever, articulate ballsy woman who I adored. Merry Farmer, the author actually has two degrees in history, so as you can expect, this book ticks all the boxes and more. I am looking forward to reading the second book, and seeing the future projects that Merry has up her sleeve. This book is well written and formatted, a couple of typos, but nothing major once your eye glosses over them to get to the next part of the story. All in all, a lovely book that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Rachel Dove
The Kindle Book Review
August 24, 2012
It's the first time I read her book (Merry Farmer), and she's definitely good. Her plot and characters are well-made. Another page turner...
Nathan of Windale returning home fighting from the Holyland with King Richard, was devastated when he found out that Prince John's devotee took his land, and his people. Now, he's in hiding in Derbywood forest plotting for revenge against Sir Crispin whose not only married to his ex-fiancee Aubrey, but likewise was incharge his former Windale castle.
Lady Aubrey was tired of waiting Nathan of Windale from the Holyland, and when Nathan was home he doesnt have time for her, and was busy plotting against Sir Crispin's demise, so she decided to marry Sir Crispin instead. It was a fantastic story until the end~~~
Nathan of Windale returning home fighting from the Holyland with King Richard, was devastated when he found out that Prince John's devotee took his land, and his people. Now, he's in hiding in Derbywood forest plotting for revenge against Sir Crispin whose not only married to his ex-fiancee Aubrey, but likewise was incharge his former Windale castle.
Lady Aubrey was tired of waiting Nathan of Windale from the Holyland, and when Nathan was home he doesnt have time for her, and was busy plotting against Sir Crispin's demise, so she decided to marry Sir Crispin instead. It was a fantastic story until the end~~~
October 13, 2013
I rarely real romance novels, but since this book came highly recommended I thought I’d give it a try. I was pleased to find a fast-paced story with characters I cared about and a plot that kept me turning pages. I particularly enjoyed the love triangle and the fact that the characters weren’t always who they seemed to be. I look forward to reading the next book in the series.
August 12, 2014
This medieval adventure has a beginning full of promise. We meet a spirited heroine, an amusing cast of secondary characters and not one, but TWO potential heroes.
Read full review in the 2012 July/August issue of InD’tale Magazine.
Read full review in the 2012 July/August issue of InD’tale Magazine.
June 24, 2012
3 stars.
Reviewed for InD'tale Magazine.
Reviewed for InD'tale Magazine.
August 12, 2012
Pretty decent love triangle--liked the main characters. Buxton was just the right amount of creepy. Fun summer read and was nice to get out of Regency England for a while!
October 11, 2012
Many funny moments. Confused woman. Not your typical damsel in distress. Who is the hero? How wins her heart? A fun, fast read.
February 15, 2013
Another beautiful read..:) hmmm..
July 1, 2016
I've had enjoy every word.. Only I can say it's awesome!
August 2, 2017
Another twist on Robin Hood.
The story moved very slowly at first. Lots of description and musings of the characters. Some action but mostly political plotting. The story of Robin Hood was revealed very early and was followed the entire time. Not a lot of originality. The tale was interesting as well as frustrating. I don't know where the author plans to take the next book in the series, but I'm not that interested to find out.
The story moved very slowly at first. Lots of description and musings of the characters. Some action but mostly political plotting. The story of Robin Hood was revealed very early and was followed the entire time. Not a lot of originality. The tale was interesting as well as frustrating. I don't know where the author plans to take the next book in the series, but I'm not that interested to find out.
July 15, 2019
A tale of robin hood like action and romance
What if robin hood was a girl? You never know who the person is behind the mask. But, can you recognize the eyes, the eyes that burn with passion and ferocity? I think you'll enjoy this, but it has more than a couple typos.
What if robin hood was a girl? You never know who the person is behind the mask. But, can you recognize the eyes, the eyes that burn with passion and ferocity? I think you'll enjoy this, but it has more than a couple typos.
January 19, 2022
Great read
I enjoyed this book very much. I finished reading it in a few hours. The story is good, the characters are strong and interesting. Its a hea romance that takes on a bit of intrigue. I would recommend this book
I enjoyed this book very much. I finished reading it in a few hours. The story is good, the characters are strong and interesting. Its a hea romance that takes on a bit of intrigue. I would recommend this book
August 28, 2024
DNF - This book was all tell and no show, and the colloquialisms and dialogue were entirely anachronistic and made this read like bad fanfiction. I guarantee I could find something more compelling on AO3. Pass.
August 9, 2019
3.5 stars
I overall enjoyed this but I had some issues with parts of it. Not bad writing, just personal preference. I loved the chemistry between Crispin & Aubrey!
I overall enjoyed this but I had some issues with parts of it. Not bad writing, just personal preference. I loved the chemistry between Crispin & Aubrey!
July 14, 2021
I quit! The weirdly contemporary dialogue drove me nuts and the characters......they NEED to live in a book-they would die in real life from being clueless.
Displaying 1 - 30 of 83 reviews