An urban fantasy with some really big ideas, occasionally some well-crafted sections that just drew me in, but overall this novel is all over the place in terms of pacing, plotting, and characterization, veering between some very vivid descriptive writing and some rather too sparse descriptions. The setting is an interesting blend of elements including Native American legends, Spanish conquistadors, the Old West, Greek mythology, European faeries, undead, time travel, witches, far future dystopias, and even dinosaurs, but it is hard to say they all blended together well. The motivations of the two antagonists were well fleshed out though I am not sure I really ever understood them as people. The main character was hard to really understand in terms of motivations or goals and I don’t think he was particularly sympathetic.
In a nutshell, the non-spoiler overview of the story is that a science fiction author named Larry Ngitis decides to abruptly leave his West Coast home and journey to remote Dry Water, Seco County, New Mexico (population 455, elevation 6580), a sort of hipster town of artists and authors out among the canyons and mesas. Larry can see the future, not as a general thing (as in he doesn’t know what will happen next Tuesday on the stock market) but he can look at people and things and see what will happen next (such as the impending death of someone, knowing how and when they will die, a fate he cannot apparently change, or at a storm cloud and knew when and where the next bolt of lightning will strike, which apparently he can avoid).
Leaving his long-time girlfriend Linda Becket in Oakland, California, Larry ends up crossing paths with two scheming centuries-old magic users in Dry Water, two people who have a long history together and though they have been lovers are now mortal enemies. Both of these people will be nothing but a problem for Larry. One is a local witch (though not originally from there, with her origins in Tibet) named Raja Anumati (usually just goes by Raja), who wants to find a sort of water that is not water, a “water in between worlds,” that if someone drinks it they can go back into the past and manipulate it, vastly changing history, something the witch is keen to do. The other antagonist is a necromancer, goes variously by the name Nick (short for Nikolos) or Judzyas, who has foreseen Larry’s arrival and fears the vast changes he will cause to history. Both of these antagonists view the other one as an obstacle and before they even directly cross paths with Larry, are fighting one another. Neither really wants to kill the other but both feel they have to in order to either get this dry water (Raja) or stop Larry (Judzyas).
There are several other characters in the story, notably Paloma (a sort of apprentice for Raja who becomes a love interest for Larry and a pawn for Raja), Matt Carlson (a gunslinger whose spirit is trapped in Larry’s hotel room, at least originally, as that was where he was gunned down, and becomes a friend and ally for Larry, as for some reason Larry can see and interact with him though pretty much no one else can), and Spencer, another local of Dry Water, a mechanic who befriends Larry and a man Larry can see will die very soon from the strange homemade beverage he keeps drinking. There is also a ghost that can manipulate electricity, whether manmade or natural as in lightning, that is a servant of Judzyas.
I think one of the book’s biggest problems for me is the main character. Larry just isn’t remarkable. He is described early on as “rather plain” with “an unremarkable body.” He ditched his long-time girlfriend because he saw a boring, safe future with her thanks to his powers, but that really came off as not any different than anyone fearing commitment and a sedentary, middle-aged lifestyle (didn’t look too bad to me). For all his powers to see the future, he doesn’t do much with those powers…until later on in the book when suddenly he has vast powers, sorry if this is spoilers, but while using the dry water he can visit alternate timelines or summon dinosaurs to the present to fight armies of undead summoned by Judzyas. It just felt like he rarely had any grand schemes of his own other than a growing interest in Paloma and to work on his novel, though at the end I would say he was heroic. He was mostly a trophy to be fought over or an enemy to be eliminated by Raja and Judzyas and any ally of Larry’s faced grave danger. Larry was bothered by this but didn’t seem to do a whole lot to protect anyone until it was too late.
The best writing in the book were vignettes in the past, of when the characters in the present interacted with or controlled to change history. Some of that was rather engaging writing and sometimes more engaging than the present-day writing. I think author Eric S. Nylund could definitely do a good historical novel.
I liked Matt as a character and he added some nice touches of humor and grounded the book some, though his Western gunslinger diction could be a little cringey at times. Paloma and Linda didn’t seem to be as much characters on their own as story elements to further along the overall conflict or Larry’s character development. I did like how though both Judzyas and Raja did do evil things their overall grand scheme wasn’t necessarily evil or if it was evil, it was definitely principled evil. I enjoyed the southwestern setting and the central concept of the story – magically altering all of world history – was a really cool concept and what I saw of it I enjoyed. I think that cool central concept got buried in so many story trappings with lost silver mines and faeries and undead armies and the rivalry between Judzyas and Raja and the mess of Larry’s life. Larry did point out some issues with Raja’s plans to alter world history and they were excellent questions that weren’t answered to my satisfaction, so that too affected my enjoyment of the book. Also some of the setting rules, such as what powers the dry water gave people, how they knew how to use it, how people went in and out of being dead (as several characters died for a time and then recovered), could have been better explained. There is also a shaman character that helps and protects Larry for a time but I simply did not understand well at all in terms of abilities or motivations.