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Diary of a Small Fish

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When Paul Forte is indicted by a federal grand jury, everyone suspects prosecutor Bernard (don’t call him “Bernie”) Kilroy has more on his mind than justice. Then the FBI agent in charge of Paul’s case gives him a clue to the Kilroy is bent on settling an old family score, and he’s not above breaking the law to do it.Paul is already dealing with the death of his parents and divorce from a woman he still loves. Now, with the support of an alluring grand juror, Paul must expose the vindictive prosecutor’s own corruption before the jury renders a verdict on his Osso Buco.

392 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 23, 2011

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Pete Morin

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Pete Morin has been a trial attorney, a politician, a bureaucrat, a lobbyist, and now, a novelist.

When he is not writing crime fiction or legal mumbo jumbo, Pete plays blues guitar in Boston bars, and on increasingly rare occasion, plays a round of golf. He lives in a money pit on the seacoast south of Boston, in an area once known as the Irish Riviera.

Pete is represented by Christine Witthohn of Book Cents Literary Agency.

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Author 19 books53 followers
December 14, 2011
This is an unusual book. It's hard to bracket, not a comedy but funny, not a thriller but mysterious and curiously engaging, not a courtroom drama and yet it has its gavel-beating moments.

It has voice, a huge voice. At times it reminded me of Robert Heinlein, oddly enough - there are moments of camaraderie, even moments of sexuality, that evoke Heinlein's right wing klatches. This is not a book for namby-pamby liberals. It's a very male book, with much Martini drinking, golfing and bonding going on. And yet it's got a soft underbelly, a romantic streak that somehow never manages to get too girly - a good dose of body paint stops all that kind of thing.

One of the things I loved about this was the morality of it all - the hero of the book is a lawyer and ex-politician who is found to have indulged in a huge amount of golf and wining and dining with other politicians, lobbyists and other types. Incurring the wrath of the attorney general, himself on a political campaign (as well as carrying some personal baggage), who sets our man up as an example in an unfair trial. It's sort of republican versus republican, a test of whether the system itself is evil or whether a little 'leeway' is a good thing. I happen to think not, personally, but DOASF (natty acronym, no?) actually had me rooting for the little guy. Who is not, in all fairness, really a little guy at all!

Although the unfairness of the trial process never made me burn with indignation, I was hooked. There are ups, there are downs, there are premature celebrations and there are moments when you think the protagonist is surely self-harming, he's so blinded to his own danger.

The book's engaging, very well written and is utterly American - this is a Boston Book, it reeks of the city and as someone who has never visited the Continental USA, I found myself remarkably 'there'.

Read this. You'll enjoy it. When you've finished it, scenes and moments will stay with you. And that's a good thing.
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Author 17 books1,446 followers
December 14, 2011
(Reprinted from the Chicago Center for Literature and Photography [cclapcenter.com]. I am the original author of this essay, as well as the owner of CCLaP; it is not being reprinted illegally.)

To review Pete Morin's Diary of a Small Fish is to contemplate a subject that I occasionally get asked about as a prolific reviewer; because although my rule to myself is to read at least half of a book before feeling qualified enough to give a general opinion of it, a lot of the shorter write-ups of only so-so titles here are books that I barely got past the halfway point of, calling into ethical question whether that makes a person capable of rendering a legitimate opinion. In this case, for example, the book starts out with a troubling premise that makes it naturally hard to slog forward: the tale of a golf-obsessed Tea-Partyish state representative, who faces minor ethics charges when a lobbyist he often hits the links with gets indicted for some much bigger crimes, Morin is clearly going for a light comedy about the surrealism of small-time politics (think Carl Hiaasen, for example), and how wrong it is for the government to be squeezing our "one percenter" hero on what amounts to merely some free golf, because they want to "flip" him and help further entrap the much more guilty lobbyist; but in the "Occupy" times we live in, that's kind of like trying to write a sympathetic novel about a mid-level Nazi who merely kept count of all the gold teeth yanked from dead Jews' bodies after their gassing, not the guy who actually gassed or yanked, so why is he sitting in a glass cube in Nuremberg and being treated so harshly?

But still, maybe Small Fish would turn out to be a redemptive story when all is said and done, and our protagonist would by the end understand what kind of sneaky, petty, subsumed-guilt Bush-loving Michael-Scott frat-boy douchebag he actually is; but alas, the more that I kept reading, the more I realized that this entire novel is meant to be read in a straightforward fashion, and that our expected hero is actually the villain of the larger story called society, without the author I think even being fully conscious of it. "Yes, but maybe this transformation does take place at the very end of the tale," I hear you arguing, which is what always makes it a tricky issue when writing a review of a book you haven't finished; but in a case like this, you simply have to ask yourself, if the author hasn't shown even a taste by the halfway point that he is going somewhere new or unexpected with an unagreeable storyline, is he even going to have any readers left by the end when he actually does flip the plot? A sometimes ugly book that often wallows in casual stereotyping and the mocking of others for its small-moment humor, and loaded with the kinds of mistakes that almost every attorney who tries fiction seems to be guilty of (Dear Every Lawyer In History Who's Ever Written A Novel: Full transcripts of deposition hearings do not make for compelling fiction, no matter how many f-cking times you do it -- Sincerely, Jason Pettus), Morin certainly has his heart in the right place when wanting to do a Catch-22 style comedy about the foibles of legal bureaucracy; it's just too bad he picked such a naturally repellant subject in which to base his tale.

Out of 10: 6.6
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Author 6 books27 followers
December 12, 2011
Entertaining, fast courtroom drama with a very human feel.

This review is from: Diary of a Small Fish (Kindle Edition)
To start off, I don't usually read courtroom drama. I've done the Legal 101 reading Grisham, and I did enjoy the early two or three books, but since that I've not touched the genre.

One of the causes for that is that the American legal system is very different from the one we have in Finland, and it's like learning a new game to be able to understand what happens. This usually leads to info dumps and lots of backtracking for the reader to understand what happened.

Pete Morin's book succeeds brilliantly in carrying the story and offering the uninitiated reader just the right amount of information; the legal story is easy to follow and it is very interesting too. Paul Forté's plight in the maelstrom of a corruption trial is believable in the extreme. There is none of the "As you know, Bob,..." type of explanatory tirade.

Mr Morin cuts the picture of Forté so close he becomes very real. I happen to have a brother with the same attitude towards the game of golf that I could relate to people that Forté has to explain his stance on the game. It also serves very well as the glue that bonds together the world view of honor codes that Forté has.

The human interest side of this book is also handled very capably; I was hooked by the character of Shannon right after she had the nerve to ask Forté a question at his first meeting with the jury, and it had precious little to do with the trial. I should also say that Morin is an adept observer of emotions and the effect they have on humans - his portrayal of Forté's broken marriage is on a par with John Updike's Rabbit books.

The variety of characters appearing in the book is quite large, but they all serve a purpose and there are no superficial, pasted-on personnel. Of the side characters my favorite was Sidney Hartfield, the 90+ year old former SEC official. Morin has considerable talent in imbuing his characters with just the right feel; Hartfield especially brought chuckles to me as I read. Ah, chuckles: there's many a moment in this book when you laugh out loud because Morin knows the world he writes of and has the linguistic wit to bring it out too. I am envious of his one-liners and sarcasm.

All in all, I think you can't go wrong if you are in search of a quick-paced book with twists and turns, intriguing plot, wine and osso bucco. This book is to be highly recommended.
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1,879 reviews54 followers
August 12, 2012
It is incredibly hard to create a character that is so realistic that the reader forgets its actual fictional purpose. Morin has managed to do just that. The main character is someone the reader can identify with, whether it is financially, emotionally or morally.
The book is very hard to fit snugly into a specific genre. The main focus of the storyline is centred around the political machinations of lobbyists. The question of when is an invite, having dinner together or picking up the tab a bribe. How do you discern between favour and coincidence?
Intertwined into the world of political roulette is a man who yearns for lost moments in time, both with his parents and ex-wife. His romantic relationship develops at a slow pace and never overshadows the main plot, as secondary storylines often do.
It takes a big person to question the validity of his own actions and ask that his friends do the same to his face. The reader is invited to query the morality and ethical dilemma that ensues in these political environments.
It is hard to explain exactly why this is such a great read. It doesn't adhere or conform to the usual book ingredients, there are no super extreme situations or attempts at world domination.
Instead it just simply 'is'.
The writing is superb. Finishing the book the reader is left feeling as if they have just enjoyed a fine wine, an illegal cigar and all whilst sitting comfortably in the safe confines of their favourite armchair wearing a pair of fluffy slippers.
It is a cleverly executed comfortable fit.
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Author 34 books178 followers
October 13, 2011
What exactly IS this book? Yes, it’s a political mystery. It’s also a love story. It explores corruption, honour and integrity. And it’s funny. But how to define it?

Paul Forte is the small fish; general counsel for the Boston Transport System, unhappily divorced, recently bereaved and possessor of a smart mouth. Oh, and he loves golf. A true sportsman, he respects the code of conduct. It’s how he was raised. Paul’s skills on the green have made him some powerful friends, a fact about to bite him in the ass.
As a governmental employee, accepting gifts such as a round of golf, followed by a fine meal, can amount to a federal crime. If you want to be petty about it. And Bernard Kilroy, FBI prosecutor, takes petty to new lows. He wants to run for Attorney General and has a score to settle. And worst of all, Paul calls him Bernie.
There is an upside to being subpoenaed to appear before the grand jury, however. A dark-haired juror with a wicked smile called Shannon.

The book follows Paul’s attempts to understand the net closing around him and who’s pulling the strings, while trying to start a relationship with the most elusive woman in Massachusetts.
Despite having no real interest in legal machinations, and even less in golf, this book hooked me from the start. The fast-paced twists and turns, the huge cast of vivid characters, the intriguing world of politics and corruption, the rich detail of the Boston setting and the whipsmart dialogue all collude to reel you in. I found myself thinking about this world and these characters for days after I finished the novel.
So far, so good. Morin’s background in law and government provide an expert’s safe hands and his storytelling abilities make the novel fly.
Yet in my view, where Diary of a Small Fish reaches another level is in its emotional honesty. The character of Paul Forte shows a touching openness to people and a vulnerability to grief which had me in hiccupping sobs by chapter 25. And by the time I’d finished the epilogue, I was grinning with satisfaction and wishing I could start all over again.

So how to define it? As a damn good read.
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Author 59 books48 followers
December 18, 2011
The mark of a good writer is to show you a world you know nothing about, and make you care about that world and what happens in it, and to feel a part of it. I wouldn't have thought I'd be interested in party hacks and the dirty business of state politics, but the author shows us a decent man in a tough situation. Several tough situations, actually. And we care, because having a person like the main character Paul Forte in the world is a good thing. He lives well, plays a lot of golf, laughs a lot, learns to love, and treats people well, unless they go out of their way to mess with him.

The book is about character, and why it is important. Paul Forte is a moral man, even when he swims in the dirty pools of favor-trading. He battles his demons, and helps others to do the same. The struggle is absorbing, and this book has heart and soul, a truckload of it. If you don't get a little teary-eyed at some of the events, you might be a Grinch.

The author is an authority on this world, or at least he makes us believe it. The differences in the Boston neighborhoods are sharply defined, the rivalries between groups are highlighted, and we see how it all comes together in the world around Boston. I feel like I know a lot more about the place I live because of this. I got absorbed in this book-- like I haven't in others for too long. I cheer at a new writer who can bring such a work to us. Bravo!

Pete Morin has given us a book that the NY publishers don't know what to do with, because it doesn't fit any of their narrow genre categories. It's simply a great book, and they don't know much about what good books are worth, or how to sell them. It's clear that things have changed when we can discover this story anyway and have the ability to enjoy it.
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23 reviews1 follower
August 7, 2012
To begin, this is a DAMN good read! Pete Morin has produced a gem of a debut novel that I recommend without reservation. The reader cannot help but root for the protagonist, Paul Forte, as he fights to avoid the snares of corrupt politicians and faces a preposterous criminal indictment based on the fact that people like to play golf with him. The action is fast-paced and laced with delightful witticisms. Not all is rosy and upbeat in Forte's life, however, and along the way he must struggle with the after-effects of a sad divorce, an intriguing new girlfriend with a history of her own, and the machinations of a malicious federal prosecutor.

Morin asks the question, just what exactly is "influence peddling?" When do the rules become so vague and subjective that they can be used against anybody at the whim of people with power? This theme provides the back beat to the story's frothy narration and renders the novel more than an entertainment. This one will make you think for a long time after you've read the final page.
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Author 12 books11 followers
March 19, 2013
I suspect only lawyers write can write good courtroom dramas, and politicians write te best political thrillers, so it's hardly surprising that Pete Morin, who has experience in both fields, has come up with a great yarn here.

This book has more than a nod to Scott Turow and John Grisham, but in many ways it's more credible than either, a tale where the mystery lies in complex human relationships rather than murder or violence. The premise of the novel is simple; corruption at the heart of government. The central character, Paul Forte, appears innocent and yet by midway through the book nothing is quite as simple as it seems, and the reader ends up questioning if there is such a thing as an honest man or woman in politics. Meanwhile, Forte has his own personal issues to deal with.

I hope Morin can cook up another story as good as this one some time soon. It would be a shame if he'd used up all his good ideas on one five-star effort.
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27 reviews7 followers
February 20, 2015
I had purchased and read Diary of a Small Fish last year. The writing is excellent and I enjoyed the humor and legal wrangling. Since it was written in the first person voice of the main character, Paul Forte, I had a little difficulty, as a female reader, staying in the story.

Nonetheless, when the author offered the audio book on Goodreads I was anxious to give it another go. I am so glad I did as the narration by Keith Sellon-Wright is absolutely perfect for the main character. Mr. Sellon-Wright also did a superb job of conveying the character when he narrated female character dialogue.


Small Fish is a very enjoyable book and the Audible version takes the story to a whole new level. Kindle version purchased and Audible version received from the author. My opinion is my own.
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Author 10 books69 followers
May 23, 2012
Diary Of A Small Fish is a fantastic read. I'm impressed how Mr. Morin was able maintain the growing suspense while keeping it all based in reality. It would be too easy to dive into a world of cheap thrills, car chases, explosions and mob-like mentalities. It was refreshing to read a novel that had a truth to it. It was heartfelt, humorous at times, romantic and familiar. I felt every bit of pressure and impending doom as an innocent man would and I applaud Mr. Morin for getting me lost in the details of an exciting legal drama.
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Author 9 books102 followers
October 31, 2013
This book was a wonderful surprise. I was up at night with a horrible cold and needed something to distract me. I flipped through the books on my Kindle and decided to read this one. I am glad I did. The story is engaging, and the characters are well developed. The book has a lot of style, with appropriate references to food, wine and the city of Boston. I would highly recommend this book for an enjoyable read.
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355 reviews30 followers
July 8, 2016

This book is one that I've owned since I pretty much got my first Kobo eReader, which was a while ago. I don't actually remember why I bought it but I'm certainly not complaining about it. This novel, while a law based fiction has a lot of heart, and humour as well as despair which is certainly not what I was expecting. Paul is my kind of guy, with the exception of his golf obsession, and it's written in a way that allows you to completely understand the process.
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Author 54 books278 followers
April 22, 2012
It’s just a game of golf. A game of camaraderie that creates bonds that can last a lifetime. Right? Or is it really an evil tool used by some to bring about the destruction of our political system one hole at a time?
Paul Forte is an honest guy who served his time as a politician voting his conscience. So what was the harm in playing a few (read a hundred or so) games of golf with lobbyists who never asked him for anything? They didn’t affect his votes. Right? Looking at a prison sentence because of charges brought on by a vindictive enemy he didn’t even know he had a connection with, Paul has to figure out the answer to that question. Is his conscience truly as clean as he has convinced himself it is?
Whether it is considering his somewhat gray past, exposing grand scale misuse of federal funds or figuring out how to love someone new when his life is falling apart, Paul faces it all with courage and strength. He also shows an intense vulnerability that endears him to readers. You will find yourself wanting to be on his side regardless of what side of the green you fall on in regards to the issues of lobbyists and politicians. Paul knows how the games are played and he finds out who his friends really are as he searches for answers and support. He also learns that sometimes the love of a quirky and extremely honest woman can get you through some of the toughest times of your life.
Diary of a Small Fish exposes layers of corruption in the government that we all suspect are there. But do we really want to know if they are there or not? Do we just want to cheer the television screen when a ‘dirty politician’ is indicted, or do we want to have to think about the politics that may be behind it? Is that guy corrupt – or are the guys attacking him the corrupt ones? To put this in perspective in our daily lives consider the medical field and drug sales. Physicians are no longer supposed to receive gratuitous gifts from sales reps. That very expensive pen advertising a specific drug that your doctor is using, which was given to her by a sales rep, on some level makes you feel the drug it advertises is effective and recommended by her. Should she be indicted for using it if she prescribes that drug even if she feels it is the right one for you? What if she plays golf with the sales rep? What if she takes a vacation on the drug company’s dime? When does it become an indictable offense? The same goes for politics. Sometimes, a game of golf is just a game of golf. Just as the pen your doctor is using could simply have been the first one she pulled out of her desk that morning. While still acknowledging that there is indeed corruption in the world of politics, perhaps some of it does comes down to perception – how it looks to the masses and how that perception can be used to advance careers.
In this look at the behind the scenes world of politics, Pete Morin shows some of its ugly underbelly but there is an undertone in his writing that gives one hope that maybe there are a few good politicians out there. The more I got to know his characters, the more hope I felt. I thank the author for a review copy and I give the book five stars.
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Author 1 book72 followers
November 4, 2011
This was a very enjoyable read, and I felt that I was in the hands of an excellent storyteller. The view into the lives of patrician Bostonians felt entirely authentic. (I don't claim to know the first thing about that sphere of existence, but the author clearly makes good use of his own experiences and expertise to bring it to life.)

Paul Forté, the narrator, seems to know what he's talking about when he observes of his peers, "they were the fourth generation in a culture where the spoils of government were harvested like potatoes ... [ good people who were ] paid a good salary to do work that was unnecessary or even counterproductive." There's no evidence that Forté himself is guilty of that. On the contrary, he seems very conscientious about his responsibilities. But then, as he points out many times, he's a "small fish" in that crowd. Probably because of his insignificance, he becomes a handy scapegoat for an ambitious politician who's seeking credit for weeding out corruption.

Yes, in playing golf and schmoozing with lobbyists while holding elected office, Forté probably committed an ethics violation. Having personally dealt with rather more existential challenges, I might have had little sympathy for his problem. However, I felt completely on board with him because of the unjustified viciousness, scope, and hyprocricy of the legal attack, and the vividness of the scene in which he is arrested and processed through the court. This is as close as I ever want to get to that experience! And I doubt he's more deserving of it than would be anyone randomly selected from the general population. (Now, among today's governing elite, I can easily think of a great many who truly need to be locked up for the public good, but that's a rant for another day.)

The dialog in this story is pitch-perfect and most of the characters entirely believable. I got a charge out of the Chinese family eating after hours in their restaurant when Forté barged in on them. (That's a sphere of life I understand rather better.) Sidney, the worldly-wise old codger in the retirement home, reminded me strongly of my own father, and I appreciated that.

For me, the drawbacks to the book were few. There are a lot of characters, and occasionally I had a little trouble remembering who everyone was when names were reintroduced. Also (I admit to being a broken record about this), there are a fair number of little errors, of the your vs you're variety. As publishing moves away from the dying corporations that held sway for so long, we must remember to stay on top of the chores copy editors used to handle for us.

All in all, the book is a worthy accomplishment. I was entertained, moved, even educated. I expect it to do well.
51 reviews1 follower
May 8, 2014
Ultimately DIARY OF A SMALL FISH by Pete Morin is a love story. And a crime story, but not my usual fare. I rarely read legal fiction and almost never read American political thrillers; usually I find the machinations boring. Not so with DIARY OF A SMALL FISH—I was riveted, finding the action smack in the middle of a slippery slope where seemingly innocent behaviour can become criminalized just because someone intimates it so. And worse, where highly criminal behaviour is the order of the day—where no one goes after the big fish.

In my salad days, I was captivated by the far flung, drawn out intricacies of the mating dance. I would have enjoyed sidling up to protagonist Paul Forté and joining him on a barstool. I hugely enjoyed embodying his new seductress, watching his clumsy attempts at self-revelatory honesty and its aftermath.

Once I began DIARY OF A SMALL FISH, I found very little as interesting as reading the book. For those who like to savour their characters word-by-word (instead of an aha! moment one or more pages later), join me in suggesting to the author that he add a Cast of Characters to the book. It’s too late for the paperback, but not the ebook. If I had had anything of import in my life while reading this story, I might have gotten lost; I didn’t and I didn’t—but it’s too much to ask a reader to arrange. A nod to Pete’s ebook design skills which got the hyperlinked chapter headings down to one page.

A special commendation belongs to Pete for adding that lovely graphic in the chapter header. Every time I saw it I smiled at the simplicity of the design _and_ how well it reminded me of the title of DIARY OF A SMALL FISH _and_ how it kept me focused on the story.

DIARY OF A SMALL FISH is an absorbing and satisfying read.


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As Pete Morin and I have shared a few groups for a few years, I have watched his comments with increasing interest. One day I was sufficiently motivated by something he wrote in Crime Fiction group to investigate how he wrote fiction and purchased DIARY OF A SMALL FISH. In a general way Amazon asks paying customers for reviews but I was not asked for a review by anyone for DIARY OF A SMALL FISH. The story was not at all like I expected, but nonetheless wholly absorbing. Quite some time later arose an opportunity to re-edit Pete’s story, which was fortunate for me, because I’m picky enough to only edit stories I like. Most fortunate for me, Pete selected my services from amongst his choices.
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51 reviews10 followers
February 6, 2015
Diary of a Small Fish by Pete Morin is a riveting political thriller. Set in Boston, MA. Pete has pulled out all the punches in this novel about how those behind the scenes seem to always be the ones pulling the strings to get what they want. Lobbyist and other concerned parties. Found that this novel kept my attention from start to finish. The characters were all well written into a suspenseful drama of cat and mouse. But, it actually ended up with the mouse trapping the cat. I actually listened to it in 2 days.

The main character Paul Forte finds himself in trouble. He is counsel of Boston’s MBTA and representative. He is subpoenaed to give testimony against another representative. Only to find himself days later being in the same shoes. Why? For playing too much golf? All Paul could think of was “Are they for real!” His wife of 10 years leaves him and now he meets this beguiling woman who/becomes his girlfriend. She has a past that Paul just wants some answers to since she is not ready to leave him in her bed.

Then there is Bernard Kilroy from his father’s past. He is now his enemy. Why? How does his part play into this indictment that ends up dragging on for a year? Paul’s attorney plays his part but, Paul wants to dig deeper. Why would golfing get him landed into the slammer. So he went golfing with lobbyist and others. Is that a crime? This all plays out well for a time for the prosecution. However, Paul is not taking this sitting down by his lawyer’s rules. He is going to find out who is behind this and that is where an FBI agent in the investigation slips some suggestions to Paul.

This book will leave you routing for Paul all the way thru. How he finally finds out the truth behind his girlfriend and how their relationship grows. How Paul’s ex-wife reenters the picture due to cancer. How this helps build the bound between his girlfriend and Paul. Their love for his ex-wife thru her medical care. I felt myself welling up inside.

So whether you read this book or listen to it you will find yourself not wanting to put the book down. Narrator, Keith Sellon-Wright was dead on with the New England accents. He played thru each part seamless with a first rate performance. I know he is on my list of narrators to watch for in other books. As the author for I will be putting his books on my wish list.

This book was provided by the author. In no way was I influenced by the author or others for this review. All views are my own. I always welcome comments and likes if this help you decide on reading or listening to this book.
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32 reviews25 followers
July 27, 2014
I just posted this review on audible and thought I'd share it here too. (I've also have it on kindle, and should add that I love the cover design. I give it four stars here, but am tempted to give it more.)

"Entertaining, Funny and Smart"

Would you consider the audio edition of Diary of a Small Fish to be better than the print version?

It's so well written. I decided to read this book after coming across reviews on Goodreads which referred to the author's “big voice” and called Morin “a funny Robert Heinlein”. The first comment is true and the second debatable, but I did enjoy this book. The audible performance is as engaging and entertaining as the novel: Sellon-Wright was a good choice for narrator and it was easy to visualize.

Who was your favorite character and why?

My favorite character was Paul Forte, the like-able hero with a dry wit and a passion for golf. It was quite a way into the story before I realized he was a republican and I’m not sure why it surprised me. I think democrats and republicans alike would enjoy this story. This story wouldn't have worked without Bernard Kilroy who plays the foil to the Paul's easy-going nature. He tries to use Paul as political fodder to forward his own career. But no plot spoilers here. ( :

What about Keith Sellon-Wright’s performance did you like?

It was a natural voice, easy to listen to, and the actor played all the characters well.

Did you have an extreme reaction to this book? Did it make you laugh or cry?

There are many moving, funny and sensual moments. It made me laugh often and increased my appreciation for golf. ( : The insight into the relationship between lobbyists and politicians was also an eye opener.

Any additional comments?

I'll be eager to read anything else Morin has to write. His background in law serves him well as a novelist, but he has a way with words that only a gifted writer could. I would have liked it if the court case has played out for a little longer because it was the writer's "forté" (no puns intended) but it was still a satisfying novel and one I won't forget.
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Author 19 books39 followers
October 30, 2011

Pete Morin's first novel features Paul Forte, an affable, well-connected, smart-ass politico, who finds himself on the receiving end of a corrupt US Attorney, "Don't Call Me 'Bernie'" Kilroy. When Kilroy manipulates a federal grand jury to return an indictment against Forte, the game is on.

Forte's great sin is his love of golf, an addiction that blinds him to the fact that playing golf with lobbyists at some of the swankiest venues in the world could be construed as not only improper, but possibly illegal. For Forte, golf's code of honor is a microcosm of how a person should lead his life: play by the rules, love your comrades, don't cheat. Kilroy doesn't share his view.

We like our heroes to have flaws and Forte doesn't disappoint. He has a failed marriage, a blue-blood, cavalier attitude toward life in general and a gnawing inner sense that he does not live up to the high standards his father bequeathed him.

But when he faces the criminal justice system head on, Forte rises to the occasion and demonstrates not only that he has the inner gumption necessary to fight back, but also that he is at heart a decent, even compassionate, ordinary guy.

Along the way, Forte develops a torrid romantic relationship, one fueled by the desperation of both lovers. Morin's descriptions of the intimate scenes they share crackle with erotic fire, tinged with tenderness.

One of the great strengths of Small Fish is Morin's detailed descriptions of Boston and its environs. We see, feel and taste the bars, restaurants, street scenes. A book must first be local, if it hopes to be universal. Paul Forte, general counsel to the Metropolitan Boston Transit Authority, provides a portal to greed, corruption, love, ambition, failure and victory that is as applicable to small-town Americans as it is to city-dwellers everywhere.

I HIGHLY RECOMMEND Pete Morin's debut novel and look forward to its soon-coming sequel.
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Author 72 books68 followers
May 17, 2013
Things are looking pretty bleak for Paul Forte. A former politician who's now chief counsel for a transportation authority in Boston, Forte lives the good life. He has a great condo, he eats terrific food, and he plays a lot of golf -- often with lobbyists. Of course, his personal life is falling apart; he's divorced from his wife, whom he still loves, and his parents are dead. And now his penchant for golf has gotten him in trouble; a crusading prosecutor named Bernard Kilroy has convinced a grand jury to indict him on charges of taking kickbacks from those lobbyists he plays golf with.

While he's second-guessing his lobbying connections and wondering whether Kilroy has a vendetta against him, he finds himself falling for Shannon, a woman on the grand jury. Together they try to figure out Kilroy's angle, as well as where they themselves fit together. But it's when Forte's former wife calls with heartrending news that Shannon really proves her worth.

The intrigue and courtroom scenes in this book are up to snuff; Morin knows his way around Massachusetts politics and the Boston legal community, and it shows. But some of the best scenes in the book are those with Forte, Shannon, and ex-wife Kate. The story line involving this trio could have easily tipped into the maudlin, but Morin handles them brilliantly. I only wish he could have worked in some sort of epiphany for Forte that would tie these scenes in better with the rest of the book.

That said, if you're a fan of legal thrillers, Diary of a Small Fish is well worth your time.
(First published at http://hearth-myth-rursday-reads.blog...)
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Author 5 books74 followers
March 30, 2012
The small fish in question, Paul Forte, is a quick-witted master of the funny line. He is also, like the author, a lawyer. Recently divorced, and still grieving over the sudden death of his parents, his life takes an unexpectedly sinister turn when he finds himself facing criminal charges over a few (okay, more than a few) games of golf with friends who happen to be lobbyists. Forte loves golf, it’s his passion, but it’s about to bring him down because prosecutor Bernard Kilroy has the Attorney General post in his sights and intends to use Forte’s trial as his vehicle to gaining the position.

Running through the storyline as a secondary thread is Forte's attempt to love again, but this brings still more difficulties into his already overcomplicated life.

As the book progresses, we find out that Forte has been deliberately targeted and why, all of which adds to the complexity of the tale.

The first few pages didn’t hook me as much as the rest of the novel. For me, Morin overloads the opening with too much legal jargon and political scene setting. Fortunately, he soon moves into the heart of the story, which is a great read.

The characters are well drawn and credible. Paul Forte, the narrator of the story, is inherently likeable, so much so that I was rooting for him to find a way out of his legal troubles, get the girl and live happily ever after. Did he? You’ll have to read the book to find out.

Recommended.
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370 reviews21 followers
February 14, 2012
While governmental representatives have the right to represent the interests of their constituents, it becomes a crime when done for personal benefit. In other words, when is a game of golf not just a game of golf?

The protagonist, Paul Forte, spent a small amount of time as a member of the Massachusetts House of Representatives, but is currently serving as general counsel for the MBTA, greater Boston’s public transportation system. He considers himself “a small fish” in the political arena. When he finds himself indicted for “influence peddling,” he has to wonder why he of all people is being targeted. What is the U.S. Attorney’s office up to?

While Paul fights the seemingly unwinnable case against him, we meet a delightful cast of supporting characters, including: his crusty lawyer Al Croston, quirky new love interest Shannon, his friend and private detective Rex, and his still-loved ex-wife, Kate.

While not an action-packed thriller, Diary of a Small Fish is thought-provoking and enjoyable. I look forward to more from author Pete Morin. This is a book I most likely wouldn’t have found without Goodreads, but I’m glad I did!
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Author 7 books165 followers
February 8, 2012
Diary of a small fish is not groundbreaking, unique, or genre bending. In the end it’s not really surprising. But I enjoyed the hell out of it. It’s funny, a tad profane, sexy, fast paced enough to keep the reader engaged and could serve as a “how to get around, where to eat, where to play golf(if you're connected and have a fat wallet)and how to talk" manual if one is in Boston or its surrounding environs.
The story is fairly predictable but that never distracted from my enjoyment, and in fact was rather refreshing. Good guys and bad guys are who you think they are and the descriptions of both the political world and the city of Boston ring true, obviously springing from the author’s own experiences and life.
Oh, and I cried once. Not that my tears are such a hard thing for an author to conjure but it was an aspect of the story that displayed Mr. Morin’s substantial literary chops. He weaved the tear inducing scene into the story in a way that was tender, heartfelt and admirable.
The book could do with one last edit for some minor mistakes, missing words mostly, but all in all I would recommend Small Fish and eagerly await more from Pete Morin.
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Author 11 books63 followers
October 21, 2011
I always had the idea this guy could write and now I know I was right. I spent a great weekend reading this book and it was worth every minute of my time.

For a start, it's refreshing to read something this intelligent about someone who knows right from wrong. There's nothing about Paul Forte you won't like. He's decent, talented and overall unassuming. Beset by doubts that he's somehow made a terrible mistake somewhere along the line - at least according to his nemesis, Bernie Kilroy - he spends his time wondering whether or not he's a good guy or a bad guy. With the help of his friends, he fights to overcome charges of corruption he cannot understand. After all, what's wrong with playing golf - even if it is at the best golf courses in America. Forte is a gentleman - if someone invites him to play golf, he will return the favour. That's not corruption - even if he does hold a position of influence and he plays with other people in the same situation. Is it?

Very highly recommended and, in my view, better than Grisham - and he's good.
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Author 3 books16 followers
December 5, 2012
Mr. Morin's novel was a compelling, entertaining read that had great windows into a lot of areas: the courtroom, the back rooms of the legislature, bureaucratic back biting, and the life and heart of the protagonist working his way through multiple personal and professional crises.

I particularly enjoyed the dialogue which was entertaining enough to carry the scenes, a rarity. The characters also were nicely drawn and the main romance was both believable and unpredictable. The patient simmering between Paul and Shannon gave their later relationship a much deeper resonance.

A slice of the book occurs in the bowels of the federal courthouse, passing through the hallways and minders assigned to criminal defendants. I'm guessing that Mr. Morin went the extra mile to personally see this rarely witnessed parallel universe and take us through it. It was a nice touch and representative of the excellent work and writing throughout Diary of a Small Fish.
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Author 9 books27 followers
October 11, 2011
When Massachusetts attorney Paul Forte is subpoenaed to go before a grand jury investigating unreported contributions, he assumes he's just a small fish caught up in the net. He testifies truthfully about his golfing dates with lobbyists, assuming that the reciprocal policy golfers always use - I'll pay for you to play my course, you pay for me to play yours - will keep him safe.

Not. Seems the prosecutor has a grudge against Paul. He's indicted, subjected to arrest and put in a holding cell. All without knowing why.

Paul displays humor, vulnerability, and decency in an impossible situation where the bureaucratic process could easily grind him down. We cheer for him because we like him.

The book is funny, with crisp dialogue and good characterization.

No murders, but if you're tired of the same old legal thrillers, give this a try.

A very entertaining, good read.
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Author 8 books50 followers
January 18, 2012
This is an interesting novel from a writer-attorney who obviously has experienced some of the situations the characters go through, like the dread of testifying in court, or how local politics and lobbyists interact. As a fellow professional I found it interesting from the standpoint of a world that most people do not get to experience directly and that is not often written about by individuals with direct knowledge or experience.


Doug Bremner, author of

The Goose That Laid the Golden Egg
Profile Image for LM Goodrich.
210 reviews
August 2, 2012
A great first novel by Mr. Morin! The pace of the story was solid. Having worked in and around the government the interplay between the characters rings true. Add a little golf and you have a funny and fabulous read.

I will not go into the story-line, many other reviews have already done this so I will just rate the book on its elements (0 to 5 being highest):

Protagonist Development: 5
Antagonist Development: 5
Minor Character Development: 5
Storyline: 5
Setting: 5
Theme: 5
Writing Style: 5
Overall Rating: 5

I do not give many books a Overall Rating of 5 so to me this is a must read!
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4 reviews
October 22, 2012
VERY well-written. First-person narrative from the perspective of a politician accused of corruption. Even he's not quite sure whether or not he's innocent.

Rated four stars for me because the heavy politics and courtroom intrigue generally isn't my cup of tea. For those that do enjoy this genre, though, I imagine it'd be quite easy to give this one the fifth star.
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328 reviews36 followers
October 31, 2012
I never thought I would enjoy a political legal drama, but this was extremely well-written and I couldn't help but keep turning pages!

This book was picked up as part of The Second Degree Bundle over at StoryBundle, and trust me, my full donation amount was paid in full with this one title. Well-defined characters, a fast-moving plot, and enough intrigue to last you a year.
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Author 5 books111 followers
December 21, 2011
Though it's not a genre I usually read, I enjoyed "Small Fish." It's about a man, a former state legislator, caught up in a series of events that leave his head spinning. The characters were nicely drawn, and believable. I'd like to see more from this author.
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