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Being Improper
Born into world as mere chattel, Carrie Scott rebels against the oppression women are dealt in 1897 Philadelphia the only way she knows how—by hiding under layers of black mourning clothes worn for a fiancé she respected but did not love. Freedom from the marriage auction block allowed her the quiet she needed, but the lonely life eventually made her body yearn for more.
Dr. Matthew Gibson was floored to see his best friend’s little sister standing in his office, now the full fledged beauty he had always expected her to become. But the fact she was asking to be treated for “Female Hysteria” made his fingers itch to touch her and claim her as his own.
Neither knew that the one afternoon in his office would change their lives forever.
Dr. Matthew Gibson was floored to see his best friend’s little sister standing in his office, now the full fledged beauty he had always expected her to become. But the fact she was asking to be treated for “Female Hysteria” made his fingers itch to touch her and claim her as his own.
Neither knew that the one afternoon in his office would change their lives forever.
70 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 5, 2011
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Alexandra O'Hurley
34 books161 followersAbout me? How anyone can summarize their whole being within a little block of space is beyond me.
I have tried on numerous bio pages and what not and I hate making them. :)
So, let's just say I wear many hats. Mother, daughter, friend, writer, boss, employee, student, lover, and whatever else I may do within my day.
We all wear many hats within our lives, and most days we are stressed beyond words because of them.
So I write down my words and hope that someone out there is entertained by them and it helps them escape for a few minutes into another place where there are no hats.
I have tried on numerous bio pages and what not and I hate making them. :)
So, let's just say I wear many hats. Mother, daughter, friend, writer, boss, employee, student, lover, and whatever else I may do within my day.
We all wear many hats within our lives, and most days we are stressed beyond words because of them.
So I write down my words and hope that someone out there is entertained by them and it helps them escape for a few minutes into another place where there are no hats.
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July 4, 2012
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Being Improper is an enticing novella-length story with a rather unique premise. It centers around the Victorian-era diagnosis of female hysteria and its prescribed treatment of pelvic massage. When Carrie, the heroine, hears of this treatment from her best friend who is receiving it from a doctor who Carrie has known and been attracted to for years, she decides to seek him out. Our hero, Matthew, is more than happy to help out and even gives Carrie special “hands-on” attention. At first glance this might sound like a really spicy story and it does appear to be billed as erotic romance, but in my opinion, the actual sexual content is fairly tame. There are only three steamy scenes in the entire book and all are sweet and tender. None of them are wild or contain anything of a kinky nature, and Matthew and Carrie even wait for their wedding night to fully consummate their union. True erotic romance fans might be a little disappointed by this, but I found that it lent more authenticity to the time period. The only thing that might be a bit eyebrow raising to more sensitive readers is the use of a small amount of frank language that is typically reserved for the erotic sub-genre, but that alone does not make an erotic romance in my estimation.
Carrie is a young woman who feels trapped by the fact that she was born a female. She despised the endless parade of suitors lining up at her door, but she eventually met one who was sweet and unassuming. They hit it off, became close friends, and eventually became engaged. Carrie didn't truly love him, but knowing that many marriages were based on far less than deep friendship, decided it would be a good match. Unfortunately, the young man was tragically killed. Unwilling to put herself back on the market, she has stubbornly continued to wear her mourning clothes for two years. Carrie feels stifled, constricted and about to loose her mind if she can't break free and gain her independence from her strict father. When a friend tells her about having been treated for female hysteria, Carrie think she may have the affliction too. She can't bear the thought of talking to the older doctors about such a thing, so she goes to a young doctor who is a long-time, family friend. She has also had a crush on him since she was a girl, and quickly finds herself falling in love and wanting more from him. I thought it took some courage on her part to ask for what she thought she needed, and she was very responsive to Matthew when he gave her the slightest hint of interest. I think having these two be friends for years made the rapid development of the relationship more believable.
Matthew had been attracted to Carrie too, but at the time he went away to Harvard, he knew she was still too young for him. Once he returned, she was wrapped in mourning garb, and he has been patiently waiting for her to shed the widow's weeds and come back to life. When Carrie comes to him seeking treatment, he can't bear to let a machine perform such an intimate task for the woman he's loved for so long. Matthew was a sweet, kind and gentle man who would do just about anything to win Carrie. Aside from when his protective instincts kicked in, he was definitely a beta hero. He is certainly a man who respected Carrie although almost to the point of loosing her. He kept his distance when he knew she was too young, then continued to keep his distance while he thought she was still in mourning. When the opportunity to get closer to her finally presented itself, he wouldn't let go, but even still he exhibited a great deal of self-control and respected her enough to wait until they were married to make love, which was very romantic to me. Matthew was just an all-around wonderful hero.
Between the likable characters and the enjoyable and steamy premise, Being Improper could have been a fabulous read, but the reason I couldn't give it a higher rating is because the author made some glaring technical errors. First was her repeated use of the word petticoat (which is a layered underskirt) when I know she meant pantaloons (the ladies undergarment). Next, there was a scene where the hero was driving himself in a hansom which is highly unlikely given that a hansom was a carriage for hire and the equivalent of a modern-day taxi cab. Lastly (and this isn't even a historical authenticity issue), the author apparently does not know where the hymen is located. Having just recently taken a workshop on writing love scenes, I know it's something I'll never forget, and once the hero is three inches inside... sorry, hon, but it's long gone.;-) Normally, I'm not a huge stickler for historical details and can usually allow a lot of leeway for the sake of literary license, but these mistakes were so elementary (even my husband who knows virtually nothing about historical romance knew these things), that I couldn't help knocking a few points off for them. All three together would have taken less than ten minutes to research for accuracy, and I can't believe they not only got past the author but also the editor. The overall writing could have used more polish as well. There were lots of little things like grammar, punctuation, incomplete/run-on sentences and clunky word choices that really should have been cleaned up before publication. However, if these things won't bother the reader overmuch, I would definitely recommend this novella. Being Improper was a sweet, tender romance that had some decent character development considering its short length. This was my first read by Alexandra O'Hurley, and overall, it has left me open to the possibility of trying something else by her. I just hope she'll try harder to get her facts straight next time.
Being Improper is an enticing novella-length story with a rather unique premise. It centers around the Victorian-era diagnosis of female hysteria and its prescribed treatment of pelvic massage. When Carrie, the heroine, hears of this treatment from her best friend who is receiving it from a doctor who Carrie has known and been attracted to for years, she decides to seek him out. Our hero, Matthew, is more than happy to help out and even gives Carrie special “hands-on” attention. At first glance this might sound like a really spicy story and it does appear to be billed as erotic romance, but in my opinion, the actual sexual content is fairly tame. There are only three steamy scenes in the entire book and all are sweet and tender. None of them are wild or contain anything of a kinky nature, and Matthew and Carrie even wait for their wedding night to fully consummate their union. True erotic romance fans might be a little disappointed by this, but I found that it lent more authenticity to the time period. The only thing that might be a bit eyebrow raising to more sensitive readers is the use of a small amount of frank language that is typically reserved for the erotic sub-genre, but that alone does not make an erotic romance in my estimation.
Carrie is a young woman who feels trapped by the fact that she was born a female. She despised the endless parade of suitors lining up at her door, but she eventually met one who was sweet and unassuming. They hit it off, became close friends, and eventually became engaged. Carrie didn't truly love him, but knowing that many marriages were based on far less than deep friendship, decided it would be a good match. Unfortunately, the young man was tragically killed. Unwilling to put herself back on the market, she has stubbornly continued to wear her mourning clothes for two years. Carrie feels stifled, constricted and about to loose her mind if she can't break free and gain her independence from her strict father. When a friend tells her about having been treated for female hysteria, Carrie think she may have the affliction too. She can't bear the thought of talking to the older doctors about such a thing, so she goes to a young doctor who is a long-time, family friend. She has also had a crush on him since she was a girl, and quickly finds herself falling in love and wanting more from him. I thought it took some courage on her part to ask for what she thought she needed, and she was very responsive to Matthew when he gave her the slightest hint of interest. I think having these two be friends for years made the rapid development of the relationship more believable.
Matthew had been attracted to Carrie too, but at the time he went away to Harvard, he knew she was still too young for him. Once he returned, she was wrapped in mourning garb, and he has been patiently waiting for her to shed the widow's weeds and come back to life. When Carrie comes to him seeking treatment, he can't bear to let a machine perform such an intimate task for the woman he's loved for so long. Matthew was a sweet, kind and gentle man who would do just about anything to win Carrie. Aside from when his protective instincts kicked in, he was definitely a beta hero. He is certainly a man who respected Carrie although almost to the point of loosing her. He kept his distance when he knew she was too young, then continued to keep his distance while he thought she was still in mourning. When the opportunity to get closer to her finally presented itself, he wouldn't let go, but even still he exhibited a great deal of self-control and respected her enough to wait until they were married to make love, which was very romantic to me. Matthew was just an all-around wonderful hero.
Between the likable characters and the enjoyable and steamy premise, Being Improper could have been a fabulous read, but the reason I couldn't give it a higher rating is because the author made some glaring technical errors. First was her repeated use of the word petticoat (which is a layered underskirt) when I know she meant pantaloons (the ladies undergarment). Next, there was a scene where the hero was driving himself in a hansom which is highly unlikely given that a hansom was a carriage for hire and the equivalent of a modern-day taxi cab. Lastly (and this isn't even a historical authenticity issue), the author apparently does not know where the hymen is located. Having just recently taken a workshop on writing love scenes, I know it's something I'll never forget, and once the hero is three inches inside... sorry, hon, but it's long gone.;-) Normally, I'm not a huge stickler for historical details and can usually allow a lot of leeway for the sake of literary license, but these mistakes were so elementary (even my husband who knows virtually nothing about historical romance knew these things), that I couldn't help knocking a few points off for them. All three together would have taken less than ten minutes to research for accuracy, and I can't believe they not only got past the author but also the editor. The overall writing could have used more polish as well. There were lots of little things like grammar, punctuation, incomplete/run-on sentences and clunky word choices that really should have been cleaned up before publication. However, if these things won't bother the reader overmuch, I would definitely recommend this novella. Being Improper was a sweet, tender romance that had some decent character development considering its short length. This was my first read by Alexandra O'Hurley, and overall, it has left me open to the possibility of trying something else by her. I just hope she'll try harder to get her facts straight next time.
January 17, 2012
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Delightfully improper. That’s what came to mind as I became engrossed in Alexandra O’ Hurley’s novel, Being Improper.
The story begins with a number one major no-no for society: a forbidden doctor-patient relationship. Carrie is a sweet young girl, too smart and too outgoing for her time period, who thinks she has female hysteria. When she goes to visit handsome Dr. Mathew, sparks ensue. The building of anticipation between them and what would happen was craftfully written; I was on the edge of my seat as the doctor drew out his remedy for Carrie.
Carrie and Mathew are sweet characters, especially Carrie. She really tugged at my heartstrings. She’s sort of naive but with a curious and kinky streak that made her endearing. I specially loved her curiosity for the male anatomy (the scene in which she performed a hand job was fun, erotic and very visual).
Mathew is a kind, good man, who’s terribly in love and doesn’t know how to show it. He didn’t come off as your usual dominant, aggressive male alpha. He staked his claim on Carrie but in a more desperate, love sick, intellectual way. He was a man willing to do anything to make the woman he loved happy.
Though she was a secondary character, Carrie’s best friend, Etta and her prying, knowing ways made me laugh more than once. She was a great addition to the story!
Though it was part of the plot and Carrie’s emotional baggage, I didn’t like the family drama. It was a nuisance to have that big secret revealed almost at the end of the story, when the characters could have lived happily ever after. However, the description of the family feud was well crafted and Ms. O’ Hurley did succeed in making me hate Carrie’s brother and father.
Being Improper is a quick hot read with a sweet ending that will leave you with a smile.
Delightfully improper. That’s what came to mind as I became engrossed in Alexandra O’ Hurley’s novel, Being Improper.
The story begins with a number one major no-no for society: a forbidden doctor-patient relationship. Carrie is a sweet young girl, too smart and too outgoing for her time period, who thinks she has female hysteria. When she goes to visit handsome Dr. Mathew, sparks ensue. The building of anticipation between them and what would happen was craftfully written; I was on the edge of my seat as the doctor drew out his remedy for Carrie.
Carrie and Mathew are sweet characters, especially Carrie. She really tugged at my heartstrings. She’s sort of naive but with a curious and kinky streak that made her endearing. I specially loved her curiosity for the male anatomy (the scene in which she performed a hand job was fun, erotic and very visual).
Mathew is a kind, good man, who’s terribly in love and doesn’t know how to show it. He didn’t come off as your usual dominant, aggressive male alpha. He staked his claim on Carrie but in a more desperate, love sick, intellectual way. He was a man willing to do anything to make the woman he loved happy.
Though she was a secondary character, Carrie’s best friend, Etta and her prying, knowing ways made me laugh more than once. She was a great addition to the story!
Though it was part of the plot and Carrie’s emotional baggage, I didn’t like the family drama. It was a nuisance to have that big secret revealed almost at the end of the story, when the characters could have lived happily ever after. However, the description of the family feud was well crafted and Ms. O’ Hurley did succeed in making me hate Carrie’s brother and father.
Being Improper is a quick hot read with a sweet ending that will leave you with a smile.
October 19, 2011
While the characters are set in a time period with a strict code of conduct, they manage to bend to the rules. The author did an amazing job of writing characters true to the time and yet keeping them refreshing. Carrie isn’t a simpering woman that only want to do a man’s biding. She may have to follow the rules but she looks for the loopholes. Matthew isn’t interested in Carrie because everyone else is. He isn’t looking at her to rise in society but instead is drawn to her for her vitality and life. This is a historical romance, the plot is out of the ordinary and quickly grabs attention because of the female hysteria aspect. Considering the creativity, I was surprised by the writing style, honestly it made the book all the more riveting.
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October 19, 2011
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This is a historical romance, the plot is out of the ordinary and quickly grabs attention because of the female hysteria aspect. Considering the creativity, I was surprised by the writing style, honestly it made the book all the more riveting. It’s an easy but good read that historical romance fans are sure to enjoy.
This is a historical romance, the plot is out of the ordinary and quickly grabs attention because of the female hysteria aspect. Considering the creativity, I was surprised by the writing style, honestly it made the book all the more riveting. It’s an easy but good read that historical romance fans are sure to enjoy.
June 17, 2012
Really enjoyed this short story. I love Historical Romance and this was no exception. I do hope the author will have more Historical Romance stories for us in the near future.
January 9, 2013
Cute story. Short but with an interesting idea.
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