Carlene Thompson's novel, If She Should Die, was a good read; I liked it, but it was just okay.
Early on, a character is reading, aloud, from a diary.
"She hates Patricia. Can't stand the Amazon. The Amazon would be me."
Had the diary writer been to the Amazon? Was she comparing herself to the Amazon having read about the river in geography class? No, the reader was informing the listener as to identity of a person called "the Amazon."
It is just a little thing, yet when reading a mystery novel, I do not want to stop reading to ponder or guess "the girl felt she was like a wild, raging river?"
There is an over abundance of red herrings in If She Should Die. By novel's end, those red herrings were not explained. Like: where did so and so really go when s/he conveniently disappeared at exact same time of the murder. Thompson threw that character into the story as the possible culprit, yet never returns to give that character an alibi once the murder was solved.
Loose ends, yet I am left wondering, "Well, where was that person at that time?"
The novel was predictable in the boy meets girl department. It was also a bit implausible; "that many people can hide outside the door eavesdropping on conversations without residents' knowledge?" Real life, I would assume most people would set up motion activated lights after the first peeping Tom-like incident.
I also did not get the reason for the title, nor the row boat on the book jacket illustration. There is a river in the novel, but if there was a mention of a row boat, I missed it. A good read, that I liked of which I found minor flaws.