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“You must come home instantly and make our horrid aunt Gardiner go away to London again. I do not know why Jane and Lizzy liked so much to stay in Gracechurch Street, for our aunt is most unfair. She read me an odiously dull lecture, which was so long that I scarce could have been expected to listen attentively, and then this morning dared to tell me that the consequence of ignoring her was quite my own fault.”

Mrs. Bennet and her sister are bound for Bath to take the waters. The mistress of Longbourn could not part from her duties if it were not for Mrs. Gardiner of Gracechurch Street. At Elizabeth’s request, her favourite aunt has offered to take up residence for the few months Mrs. Bennet is absent. Mrs. Bennet may doubt that her brother’s wife could manage her family even half so well as she, but as she considers the attractions of Bath, she assures herself that no permanent alterations could possibly be made.

Aunt Gardiner hopes otherwise.

Mrs. Gardiner Takes a Hand, the seventh Pride and Prejudice variation by Jeannie Peneaux, is an epistolary novel. Letters are sent to the most surprising people and read with varying degrees of alarm and pleasure.

210 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 10, 2023

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1,338 reviews80 followers
March 3, 2024
Truly Excellent!
Oh, I absolutely loved this book, which is from start to finish written as an epistolary. Elizabeth first writes to her Aunt Gardiner, encouraging her to come to Longbourn to aid in the recovery of her little cousin Meg’s health, and aid the family when her mother and Mrs. Philips go to bath for the latter’s health.

The brilliantly-written correspondence among the various characters of Pride and Prejudice will delightfully entertain you. It’s filled with the efforts of Mrs. Gardiner in attempting to lovingly and tactfully guide the residents of Longbourn. A little reverse psychology doesn’t hurt either. Many humorous exchanges and descriptions within the correspondence.

No spoilers for this one. It’s a definite must read from the author of JAFF favourite, Dear Nameless Stranger. Most definitely recommend.

March 3, 2024 - Audiobook
The narrator of this audiobook, Liz May Brice, is new to me. I must say how entertaining and engaging she made a 100% epistolary sound completely conversational, performing all the individual letter writers’ characters in a more than charming manner. I thoroughly enjoyed her and would not hesitate to purchase another audiobook she performs. Well done!
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1,337 reviews125 followers
April 3, 2025
Find a great mentor who believes in you. Your life will change forever. ~ Bill Walsh

As JAFF tropes go, this one may be under-used.

That’s right, a story idea that is totally different.

We often see the results of Aunt Gardiner’s influence on the older Bennet sisters. The lack of that influence results in the misbehavior of the youngest sisters.

“Mrs. Gardiner Takes a Hand” shows what would happen if a favorite Aunt was in charge of the Bennet household in the absence of the Bennet Mama.

Mentoring is a brain to pick, an ear to listen, and a push in the right direction. ~Author Unknown

Lydia and Kitty Bennet are the most obvious beneficiaries of Aunt Gardiner’s guidance, but by far not the only ones. Papa Bennet also comes face to face with her opinions.

Mr. Collins has options.
Mr. Bingley cannot shilly-shally.
And whatever is Mary Bennet up to?

A certain proposal is not to be missed — even if it is so oblique it might not seem like a proposal! A proposal so unique that uniqueness can’t describe it. Loved it!

We must find time to stop and thank the people who make a difference in our lives. ~ John F. Kennedy
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1,684 reviews82 followers
April 18, 2023
5+!

This book is such a treat to read! Wonderfully inventive and masterfully executed story!

Mrs. Bennet leaves Longbourn for several months to assist her sister, Mrs. Phillips, who is feeling poorly. They travel to Bath for the healthful sea air and waters - and Mrs. B ends up mingling in local society quite a bit.

As it happens, one of the Gardiner children, Meg, has been having difficulty with her lungs. Consequently, Mrs. Gardiner comes to Longbourn with her daughter, both to act as Mistress of the estate in Mrs. Bennet's absence and to nurse Meg back to health away from London's smoky air. She proves herself to be a capable woman who takes charge of her five nieces and indolent brother-by-marriage for the decided benefit of all.

Ms. Peneaux tells the story via letters from various senders to various recipients flying in many directions. Mrs. Gardiner frequently writes to her husband back in Cheapside, as does Elizabeth. Elizabeth is also the chief scribe on behalf of all her sisters sending news to their mother in Bath, but a letter Kitty sends is misdirected, leading to one of many surprising plot twists. Mr. Collins and his disapproving sister, Mrs. Shipman, also exchange letters. His choice of wife here seems inspired by JAFF fandom's delight in his infamous love of Longbourn's potatoes! His narrow-minded opinion regarding the proper education of women - which he attests is supported by his bishop - sets up another intriguing pair of correspondents. Once Mr. Darcy arrives, he exchanges letters with Georgiana, providing his perspective on various developments.

Meanwhile, events in Bath gain significance, as Lady Catherine has brought Anne there to improve the girl's health in anticipation of her becoming Mrs. Darcy ere long. The grand lady is introduced to Mrs. Bennet. Anne shares her observations as she writes to her cousin Darcy, and Mrs. Bennet tells her family about their encounters in her missives.

I can't overstate how well-written this book is. Perfectly edited. The letters are convincingly diverse, allowing the reader to determine the personalities of the various "authors" as well as the information necessary to piece together what's happening.

And it's a whopping good story - lots of humor, minimal angst, surprising turns. Probably less steam
between Darcy and Elizabeth than we generally read in a conventional variation, but their obsession with each other is apparent in the letters they pen. So is
the affection Mrs. Gardiner has for her husband in her letters to Cheapside.

Highly recommend!

Content is clean.
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1,228 reviews61 followers
October 11, 2024
2024 update: The audiobook is fantastic!

Love this author, love her gift for telling a story through letters.

Wonderful and joyous book, with humor and an angsty moment or two. Mrs. Gardiner stars in this variation and subtly forces changes in the Bennet household.

A firm reread.
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1,437 reviews
April 25, 2023
All about the letters

The entire story is a series of letters. Mrs Bennet and her sister go to Bath because the sister has been sick and needs time to get better.. Mrs Gardiner comes to be the temp mistress of Longbourn. Lots of changes for the family.

The problem with everything being in letters is there are no strong emotions since the story takes place through correct letter rules. So we get the HEA but it’s all washed out.

Other than that the story is very original and a very fun read.
902 reviews70 followers
May 9, 2023

My Rating: 5 Amazing Stars!!


An Absolute Gem!

I love epistolary novels and Ms. Peneaux writes some of the best! All these letters conveyed the plot(s) so well. I was completely captivated with Mrs. Gardiner and her ‘tactics’ for bringing each of the girls, especially Mary, Kitty and Lydia, some measure of understanding as to why they must improve themselves. Not only were the letters so delightfully written, but the clever twists Ms. Peneaux made in this unique novel had me devouring it!

I cannot highly recommend it enough!
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2,559 reviews13 followers
April 16, 2023
Delightful

I absolutely adore epistolary novels and they are so rarely done this well. It’s absolutely delightful and made me laugh out loud so many times. I really enjoy this author’s style and humor.
1,204 reviews31 followers
April 25, 2023
Superb

This epistolary creation, a re-imagining of P&P, illustrates the ripple effect of one strong personality introduced into the Bennett household for a few months. Mrs Bennett goes to Bath with Mrs Phillips for several months. Aunt Gardiner, along with one of her daughters, comes to run the home in Mrs Bennett's absence, and she takes the opportunity to give the whole family the benefit of her sense and supervision. Her loving but firm influence results in profound and wonderful changes to them all.

I love the character of Aunt Gardiner, and she's a gem of the first order here. I wasn't sure how this could be handled in letter form, but the author pulls it off brilliantly. The book has it all: drama, intrigue, humor, situations that are both heartbreaking and heartwarming, villains, and lots of romance.

The book is well written and well edited. There are interesting and likable new characters introduced in surprisingly creative ways. It's a fun read, and I only wished it was longer. I recommend it highly.
462 reviews
April 30, 2023
a good read

I did enjoy the story. It was fast paced as it was ALL in letter format. Although I’m not a fan of this style of writing because I don’t connect with the characters. I just read about them via letters.
I always wondered what would happen if Mrs Gardiner had more influence with the Bennet sisters.
I had to laugh with Mrs. Bennet’s attempt to involve herself in the society at Bath. I was laughed out loud when she first met Lady Catherine. I will say this Lady Catherine was a bit more vicious.
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13 reviews1 follower
April 24, 2023
This book is delightful

Ms Peneaux once again writes an epistolary novel. Mrs Gardiner comes to Longbourn to take care of the girls when Mrs Bennett goes to Bath for some months. She takes the youngest girls in hand and there is immediate improvement. I loved the delightful Lydia in this version Mary was a surprise and Kitty was better off not being a follower of Lydia. The D&E romance was sweet
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273 reviews10 followers
April 17, 2023
Love this author, and…

… found the format tedious. So many details given in past tense just makes it seem unlikely that these letters would be written in such detail. This author is too clever and has too much to say to warrant sticking to this form. Would it really have been so much more difficult to write in present tense?
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228 reviews6 followers
April 13, 2023
Lovely letters

4.5* rounded up. As noted in its book description, this variation follows the book, Dear Nameless Stranger, as being a series of letters. Like DNS, the letters spin a rich story despite no direct interaction between characters. There's an elusive quality to this author's epistolary stories that imbue characters' actions with romance and emotion - more so than with dialogue. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and recommend it as a low angst tale.
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25 reviews1 follower
April 15, 2023
I love stories about the lesser characters

I really enjoyed this story. I don't normally pay for books on kindle but.. In this case I'm glad I did. I felt a little rude reading everyone's letters! Which added to the enjoyment.
Author 9 books37 followers
May 7, 2023
Loved this heartwarming epistolary -

4.5*

So what happens when Netherfield is let at last and Mrs B is not present to play spoilsport instead Mrs G is there to take things in hand ?

Well ODC obviously get together as do Jane and Bingley. Additionally Kitty becomes a countess and Mary, the wife of a Bishop and all because of improper/ill-directioned letters.. but I suppose what else do you expect from an epistolary?

What I loved
-?A Hero Darcy- but that is the case in all three books of hers that I have read.
-?A reasonable and very likeable Elizabeth
- A very amusing and managing Mrs G
And a much kinder Mrs B although equally silly as in original
- lots and lots of humor and wit
-Mary's characterization and her you got mailish romance although it happened at speed of light
- Author placed the blame on Mr B for his carelessness, selfishness and disrespect for his wife very squarely. Frankly the man was a thorough scum for quite sometime in the book and I was a little unhappy at the easy way he got his redemption ( perhaps I am being a hypocrite here ...)
Two sets of letters I must mention especially-
Mrs G' letter to her husband were absolutely fantastic.. and her own love story fairly intriguing. Hope the author writes a seperate story about that!
Mr Collins' sister and her letters were hilarious !

What I would have liked more?
D and E's romance to be a little more... personal I suppose....knowing their feelings only through letters felt somewhat lacking ( that's why 4.5 and not 5)..
The author balanced this out very well in Dear Nameless Stranger with it's Book 2
Would have preferred to do away with the customary introduction of a rake.. ( author calls him 'not a proper man'.. but I think statistically with 4 decent Son in laws for Mr B.. a rake was inevitable for the fifth.. sigh .. u can't have everything

All in all I loved the story and recommend it heartily


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211 reviews3 followers
July 29, 2025
Mrs Gardiner single-handedly tames the Bennets.

This is an epistolary novel and usually far from a favorite form of reading for me. I prefer dialogue and face to face contact between characters but this book just plain works. The letters flying between characters brings the story to life and provides a lot of comedy besides. The theme of letter writing also foreshadows some interesting meetings between several Bennet girls and their future love interests.

Mrs Bennet goes to Bath with her sister Mrs Phillips to assist her in her recovery from an illness where she gets up to many adventures. (Think of a middle-aged Lydia and you can imagine some of her hijinks). In her absence Mrs Gardiner is invited to come to Longbourn with her daughter Meg (who has been suffering from a respiratory illness) so she can manage the household in Mrs Bennet’s absence and Meg can get relief from the bad London air. Mrs Gardiner would never have believed that she could be in such sympathy with her sister Bennet, but Mr Bennet is definitely in need of some strict management by someone who refuses to accept or condone his indolence.

All of the Bennet daughters are also sorely in need of management and Mrs Gardiner is just the lady to provide it. Each daughter has need of improvement (even perfect Jane and practically perfect Elizabeth) and Mrs Gardiner rolls up her proverbial sleeves to tackle the job.

Both Mr Collins and Lady Catherine get up to their own shenanigans and Wickham finds that he is unable to stir up his usual mischief on Mrs Gardiner’s watch. This book was definitely worth the price and I believe it will grace my reread list for some time.
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1,006 reviews27 followers
June 18, 2025
5⭐️

This was the best P & P variation I have read. It was funny and it conveyed plot through letters. I liked that we got to read letters of not just 2 people but almost all the characters of the OG story. I have always admired Mrs Gardiner, be it in the original or in the various variations/fan fictions I have read this past couple of months, and this book just reinforces that admiration. The subtle changes to the story because of Mrs Gardiner looking after Longbourn for the duration of Mrs. Bennet's absence was so fun to witness. The love that the ladies of the house found was endearing and the letters between the Gardiners were a personal favourite. Though the romance between Darcy and Elizabeth was not the main focus of the book I liked how it was handled and I was not at all disappointed as I got to read about the other ladies finding their matches. Though if I have one thing that I would like changed, it is that I would have seen I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who loves Epistolary romances and also as a starting point in anyone who wants to foray in to the world of Jane Austen Fan Fiction.
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21 reviews
September 6, 2023
Surprisingly excellent

I have a very (very) low tolerance for Jane Austen knockoffs, particularly of the “variation on such and such novel” sort, and believe there is a very good reason that epistolary novels fell out of favor, but this little book entertained me from beginning to end. The author did quite well at conveying different voices for all of the characters, and did not make many major blunders in era or vocabulary (except that a gold sovereign is a guinea, not a pound).

The author’s willingness to take the risk of allowing the reader to puzzle out the probable contents of missing intermediate letters kept my interest long enough to capture me with her ingenious plot - that of presenting a story about all the Bennet kith and kin and their love lives with Elizabeth and Darcy occupying very nearly the smallest subplot. This really turned into the novel I didn’t know I was waiting for. I’m glad I purchased it, even tho I get 99.9% of my reading materials from the public library. 10/10. Will read again.
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75 reviews7 followers
September 22, 2024
Premise: Just before Michaelmas, Mrs Bennet goes to Bath with Mrs Phillips and the always sensible Mrs Gardiner comes to stay, sparking a multitude of changes for the better. Told in epistolary format.

What I liked: This is a frothy light confection that was immensely fun to read. The Bath based rivalry between Mrs Bennet and Lady Catherine was hilarious.

Characterization: Greatly expanded Mrs Gardiner. Mr Collins figures out how to be a little more sensible.

Smut level: None. Not even kisses described, though there are epilogue babies.

Any non-canon parings: Several.

Issues: The epistolary format works quite well, but I confess to wishing there were some internal-cannot-be-expressed-in-a-letter thoughts.
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1,972 reviews47 followers
January 7, 2026
A fun epistolary reimagining of Pride and Prejudice. What might have happened if Mrs. Bennet went off with her sister to Bath and Mrs. Gardiner stepped into run Longbourn in her absence? Would Jane's and Bingley's courtship go more smoothly? Would Kitty and Lydia be better behaved? Would Mary gain some self-awareness? Would Mr. Bennet step up and start parenting? Would Darcy and Elizabeth still get off to a bad start?

All of the Austen adaptations suffer in comparison to the original works, so it's not ideal to read them in close proximity, but if you can give this one some distance from Pride and Prejudice and take it as it's intended--a lighthearted homage to a book the author clearly loves--it's an enjoyable diversion. It's not anywhere near the quality of Pride and Prejudice, but it's not trying to be. It's a cute little book that knows exactly what it is and invites you to take a low-stakes ramble with it through the English countryside.
213 reviews2 followers
June 7, 2023
Mrs. Gardiner Takes a Hand

Very entertaining story that was written in letters to various characters in the story. Mrs. Gardiner is coming to Longbourn with her daughter Margaret. Margaret has been sick and the air in London has been bad for her lungs so a sojourn to the country is just what she needs. It is good, because Mrs. Bennet is going to Bath with her sick sister Mrs. Phillips. I would definitely classify this story as a comedy of errors that some how manage to correct themselves before ruination of any party indulged in the mishap. All of the daughters found happiness with Mrs. Bennet in Bath instead of at Longbourn. Of course, Mrs. Bennet herself got herself in a bit of a twist with Lady Catherine de Bourgh while in Bath, but with the help from ODB, returns home more subdued that before. The story ends well for everyone that’s important.
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652 reviews32 followers
May 9, 2023
Very enjoyable epistolary book. I really enjoyed getting a better understanding of the characters through their letters. It is a great tool that allows us to get to more more characters more by seeing so many perspectives first hand. The writing was witty and fun and beautiful. Some of the storylines got a bit too fanciful and went off the rails a bit, but I still loved the book. It was so engaging and delightful. Much of the romance between D&E was behind the scenes and didn't feel like a main thread in the story. I would have have enjoyed more page time with ODC, but enjoyed what was there and that Darcy was still able to play the hero in the story. This is a very talented author and I will read this story again and look forward to more from her in the future!
47 reviews1 follower
May 12, 2023
Jeannie Peneaux has a true gift

I first read this book as fanfiction and jumped at the chance to buy it for my library. As with another book of this author's, this story is told entirely through letters that the characters exchange. I often don't like that approach when other authors try it, but Jeannie Peneaux is an absolute master at that art.

I won't give spoilers, but this story is simultaneously hilarious, sweet, touching, and philosophical. All of the characters feel true to canon, while also growing and learning and becoming the best versions of themselves.

The writing is excellent, the plot absolutely works, and I love how the different story arcs play out. I enthusiastically recommend this book.
21 reviews1 follower
January 16, 2024
A lovely story told through letters

This fast read is one of the best pieces of JAFF that I’ve ever consumed, and I’ve read hundreds! Its story is told entirely through letters sent back and forth between all of the primary characters from Pride & Prejudice that you’ve come to love.
The author cleverly captures and expands on the traits and personalities of the subjects, and brings to life everyone in a vibrant and detailed way. All 5 Bennett sisters are nuanced and different in beautiful ways, and you find yourself cheering them all on as they get the happiness they strive towards and deserve. This is a story I’ll gladly come back to and I desperately want Peneaux to write a sequel(s)!
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6 reviews2 followers
April 28, 2023
Where Mrs. Gardiner steps in, good humor, a faithful moral compass, and understated elegance are surely not far behind. In reading this delightful collection of correspondence, I was not in the least disappointed in her character, nor in the unfolding stories. Her creative parenting (Aunting?) always nurtured each family member's strengths and was enforced in such a manner that each felt wrapped in her love and encouraging regard. Although our dear Elizabeth & Darcy may not always have been the prime focus, I found this to be a highly entertaining page-turner all the same. My husband frequently had to ask me what I was laughing at! Huzzah, Jeannie Peneaux! Such fun!
762 reviews8 followers
July 19, 2023
Avid Reader

I have read numerous books by this author, but I have to say that she outdid herself this time! Mrs. Gardiner was not typical and didn't have a typical upbringing. The way that she met her husband was unusual, but it worked. She certainly gave Darcy an earful when she learned the truth about Wickham; and when Lady Catherine tried to hurt Mrs. Bennet, she wore Bennet a new one! Bravo! She made changes in the entire household, and Mary and Kitty made illustrious marriages because of it. Mr. Collins didn't marry Charlotte, nor did he marry a Bennet. He was a shock, but it was to his benefit and Darcy's!
136 reviews
May 1, 2023
Mrs. Gardiner indeed takes a hand in causing various reforms in the Bennet household in this charming Pride and Prejudice variation. Told entirely through letters, the story features some of our favorite beloved Austen characters and some delightful new ones as well. It always amazes me that letters can show characters' personalities and thoughts as well as they do when the epistolary novel is written well, as this one was. It was captivating, amusing, romantic and intelligent. I will re-read Mrs. Gardiner Takes a Hand often. Well done Ms Peneaux.
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Author 4 books12 followers
May 22, 2023
Splendid! one of the best P&P variations I’ve ever read

The only criticism I had of this book was that it ended. I was in awe of Peneaux’s ability to capture the voices of Austen’s characters with such integrity in this epistolatory novel. The variations are surprising and very clever. There is enough ginger and humour to prevent any excess of sentimentality. There was no stumbling over typos, poor punctuation or editing. The language fits the era appropriately. It is rare that I think I’ve found the perfectly written novel, but that was my thought as I finished.
3,472 reviews42 followers
April 13, 2023
This is an epistolary novel. Mrs. Bennet and her sister have gone to Bath together and Mrs. Gardiner stays at Longbourn while they're gone. She's a managing sort of female and influences the Bennets to cause several positive changes. There are also some occurrences that are not strictly speaking her doing. I don't want to spoil it so I'm going to say no more. Some of it is a bit unlikely but everything is delightful and Peneaux's writing is a rare gem.
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774 reviews16 followers
May 8, 2023
The first half of Jeannie Peneaux's Dear Nameless Stranger was epistolary, and it was one of my all-time favorite variations, so I was very much looking forward to this one. It did not disappoint! This one sees four of the Bennet sisters married, as well as some high drama involving Mrs. Bennet and Lady Catherine DeBourgh. Who could imagine Mary and Kitty's stories, much less Darcy's unusual proposal? Thoroughly enjoyable!
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