I did like this book, but I found myself with an overall sense of dissatisfaction, which is why I have only given two stars.
Obviously, this being the story of a vampire, the point of the vampire's birth is pretty crucial. Likewise, I would say that the background leading to his creation was also pretty important, yet the tone of this first third of the book seemed to be very superficial in tone, and I felt there was no depth to the character until about half way through the book. The narrative style almost seemed to be in the style of someone reciting by rote from someone else's notes. I found myself asking more questions rather than getting absorbed into the story - why had Daumia been in the bullring? If he had been hit so hard by his attackers, why wasn't he more injured? Why didn't his mother protest when he was taken away? Who was Roelle to decide to take him away? And why did he wait so long before trying to see his mother again?
The writing style is very easy on the mind, and is very much a page turner. But I did find myself not really caring what happened to Daumia, because there didn't seem to be any substance to him - rather, he flitted about like a butterfly, and simply accepted everything. Until one day he changed his mind...but there seemed to be no catalyst or reason as to why he would suddenly change from acceptance to vengeance.
Once Daumia was turned, the substance became much deeper, and I found myself drawn in more, as it began to feel more like a story rather than a simple summary of events, and I started becoming more interested in the characters. Although I did feel that, for all his being a strong and powerful vampire, he wasn't very good at saving himself.
I also felt that there was a sense of confusion about who the 'bad' guys were. When Sunaria first turns Daumia, she lets slip that she is on the run from other vampires, but doesn't reveal any more about who they are. When they are leaving Spain for England, she refers to them as Creda. These are ancient vampires, but nothing more is said about them or about who they are. Once they are in England, they find themselves up against the Stone Masters, and the Creda. The Stone Masters apparently came out of nowhere, and for a while, I have to admit I simply assumed that they were also vampires. Then I thought they were humans trying to wipe out vampires, and then I thought they were vampires again. Unfortunately, for want of a simple line of description, it was unclear who was who, and why they were killing each other.
One other point - there really should have been a context checker. I noted several uses of the word "bare" for "bear", and there was also one, really jarring moment when Daumia, bearing in mind that he was in London in 1498, and was mingling with the aristocracy, responded "Yep!" Seriously?!
Overall, I do have to say that I (eventually) enjoyed the book, and will probably read the others in the trilogy - but I don't think I'll be rushing to download them.