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Mageborn #2
The Line of Illeniel
Alternate cover edition of ASIN B005TVVS2E
Mordecai has discovered his heritage and must take up the mantle of a lord of the realm, while figuring out what it really means to be a mage of the line of Illeniel. He is beset on both sides by allies and enemies trying to control or destroy his future. Gods and kings both seek to manipulate him for their own ends, and no matter what he chooses his loved ones will suffer. Will he risk destroying his love with a bond that might be her death, or face the madness that comes to wizards who embrace power without restraint?
Mordecai has discovered his heritage and must take up the mantle of a lord of the realm, while figuring out what it really means to be a mage of the line of Illeniel. He is beset on both sides by allies and enemies trying to control or destroy his future. Gods and kings both seek to manipulate him for their own ends, and no matter what he chooses his loved ones will suffer. Will he risk destroying his love with a bond that might be her death, or face the madness that comes to wizards who embrace power without restraint?
548 pages, ebook
First published January 1, 2011
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About the author
Michael G. Manning
25 books2,096 followersMichael Manning was born in Cleveland, Texas and spent his formative years there, reading fantasy and science fiction, concocting home grown experiments in his backyard, and generally avoiding schoolwork.
Eventually he went to college, starting at Sam Houston State University, where his love of beer blossomed and his obsession with playing role-playing games led him to what he calls 'his best year ever' and what most of his family calls 'the lost year'.
Several years and a few crappy jobs later, he decided to pursue college again and was somehow accepted into the University of Houston Honors program (we won't get into the particulars of that miracle). This led to a degree in pharmacy and it followed from there that he wound up with a license to practice said profession.
Unfortunately, Michael was not a very good pharmacist. Being relatively lawless and free spirited were not particularly good traits to possess in a career focused on perfection, patient safety, and the letter-of-the-law. Nevertheless, he persisted and after a stint as a hospital pharmacy manager wound up as a pharmacist working in correctional managed care for the State of Texas.
He gave drugs to prisoners.
After a year or two at UTMB he became bored and taught himself entirely too much about networking, programming, and database design and administration. At first his supervisors warned him (repeatedly) to do his assigned tasks and stop designing programs to help his coworkers do theirs, but eventually they gave up and just let him do whatever he liked since it seemed to be generally working out well for them.
Ten or eleven years later and he got bored with that too. So he wrote a book. We won't talk about where he was when he wrote 'The Blacksmith's Son', but let's just assume he was probably supposed to be doing something else at the time.
Some people liked the book and told other people. Now they won't leave him alone.
After another year or two, he decided to just give up and stop pretending to be a pharmacist/programmer, much to the chagrin of his mother (who had only ever wanted him to grow up to be a doctor and had finally become content with the fact that he had settled on pharmacy instead).
Michael's wife supported his decision, even as she stubbornly refused to believe he would make any money at it. It turned out later that she was just telling him this because she knew that nothing made Michael more contrary than his never ending desire to prove her wrong. Once he was able to prove said fact she promptly admitted her tricky ruse and he has since given up on trying to win.
Today he lives at home with his stubborn wife, teenage twins, a giant moose-poodle, two yorkies, a green-cheeked conure, a massive prehistoric tortoise, and a head full of imaginary people. There are also some fish, but he refuses to talk about them.
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Eventually he went to college, starting at Sam Houston State University, where his love of beer blossomed and his obsession with playing role-playing games led him to what he calls 'his best year ever' and what most of his family calls 'the lost year'.
Several years and a few crappy jobs later, he decided to pursue college again and was somehow accepted into the University of Houston Honors program (we won't get into the particulars of that miracle). This led to a degree in pharmacy and it followed from there that he wound up with a license to practice said profession.
Unfortunately, Michael was not a very good pharmacist. Being relatively lawless and free spirited were not particularly good traits to possess in a career focused on perfection, patient safety, and the letter-of-the-law. Nevertheless, he persisted and after a stint as a hospital pharmacy manager wound up as a pharmacist working in correctional managed care for the State of Texas.
He gave drugs to prisoners.
After a year or two at UTMB he became bored and taught himself entirely too much about networking, programming, and database design and administration. At first his supervisors warned him (repeatedly) to do his assigned tasks and stop designing programs to help his coworkers do theirs, but eventually they gave up and just let him do whatever he liked since it seemed to be generally working out well for them.
Ten or eleven years later and he got bored with that too. So he wrote a book. We won't talk about where he was when he wrote 'The Blacksmith's Son', but let's just assume he was probably supposed to be doing something else at the time.
Some people liked the book and told other people. Now they won't leave him alone.
After another year or two, he decided to just give up and stop pretending to be a pharmacist/programmer, much to the chagrin of his mother (who had only ever wanted him to grow up to be a doctor and had finally become content with the fact that he had settled on pharmacy instead).
Michael's wife supported his decision, even as she stubbornly refused to believe he would make any money at it. It turned out later that she was just telling him this because she knew that nothing made Michael more contrary than his never ending desire to prove her wrong. Once he was able to prove said fact she promptly admitted her tricky ruse and he has since given up on trying to win.
Today he lives at home with his stubborn wife, teenage twins, a giant moose-poodle, two yorkies, a green-cheeked conure, a massive prehistoric tortoise, and a head full of imaginary people. There are also some fish, but he refuses to talk about them.
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December 26, 2020
The magical setting is as beautifully written as always. The Mordecai story goes on. Of course, the whole lot feels to be a bit immature but is strangely a satisfying read.
The magical studies and the structured approach to all things magical blew my minds, as is the usual state of things with MGManning. Love his books precisely for how academically he goes about showing magic happening.
The magical studies and the structured approach to all things magical blew my minds, as is the usual state of things with MGManning. Love his books precisely for how academically he goes about showing magic happening.
December 19, 2011
I think there is a good story floating around in here but it is difficult to stay immersed in it. There are so many contemporary references and slang that keeps me from believing in that world.
For me, fantasy is about being transported into another world and I had trouble getting there on this one. My Kindle version was a bargain but I don't think it was worth more than I paid.
For me, fantasy is about being transported into another world and I had trouble getting there on this one. My Kindle version was a bargain but I don't think it was worth more than I paid.
December 3, 2019
Rating 3.0 stars
Much like the first book, this felt much more like a YA story. Mort is now a count and has taken control of his father's land. The story takes place about a year after the events of the last book. The town is still growing and Mort and Penelope are living together planning on a wedding. Things then start to happen very quickly. The town is attacked by a group of monsters that has not been seen in over 1000 years. At the same time, Mort is expected to go to the capital to give his testimony on what happened in the last book that ended with the death of another Count's son. He is also supposed to swear fealty to the king right after that. Then other stuff starts to happen. Despite all the issues I still enjoyed the story, I just wish there was a little more practicality/believability in the plan and Mort's actions.
Much like the first book, this felt much more like a YA story. Mort is now a count and has taken control of his father's land. The story takes place about a year after the events of the last book. The town is still growing and Mort and Penelope are living together planning on a wedding. Things then start to happen very quickly. The town is attacked by a group of monsters that has not been seen in over 1000 years. At the same time, Mort is expected to go to the capital to give his testimony on what happened in the last book that ended with the death of another Count's son. He is also supposed to swear fealty to the king right after that. Then other stuff starts to happen. Despite all the issues I still enjoyed the story, I just wish there was a little more practicality/believability in the plan and Mort's actions.
August 29, 2013
Ahhh...the story proceeds. I'm really enjoying this series, which is good as most of the books/series I've "really" liked lately have proved to be the only one available in that series for the next year.
I found the characters fairly interesting from the get-go in this tale and got this one not long after I finished the first. There we saw Mordecai find who he really is, find his true love (and as much as I "don't" care for romance I survived it), come into his power, fight his first big battle and so on. Good book.
Now he has assumed the responsibilities of his identity (and that's all we'll say about that as I wouldn't want you to skip the first book due to something I said). The romance and interpersonal relationships ramp up a bit here...but again i found it survivable. The characters are still interesting, the story is still well constructed, interesting, and fast moving. You get action and plot with characters you can believe.
It also has me wanting to follow it up with the next volume.
Why only 4 stars then? Well, it's not up to some of my favorite books...but I reserve the right to come back and up the rating later.
Recommended. Enjoy.
I found the characters fairly interesting from the get-go in this tale and got this one not long after I finished the first. There we saw Mordecai find who he really is, find his true love (and as much as I "don't" care for romance I survived it), come into his power, fight his first big battle and so on. Good book.
Now he has assumed the responsibilities of his identity (and that's all we'll say about that as I wouldn't want you to skip the first book due to something I said). The romance and interpersonal relationships ramp up a bit here...but again i found it survivable. The characters are still interesting, the story is still well constructed, interesting, and fast moving. You get action and plot with characters you can believe.
It also has me wanting to follow it up with the next volume.
Why only 4 stars then? Well, it's not up to some of my favorite books...but I reserve the right to come back and up the rating later.
Recommended. Enjoy.
December 31, 2021
Ugh! Another 2.5 star read for me in the Mageborn series.
I read another review for this book that said something along the lines of “I can tell there is a good story floating around within” and I couldn’t have said it better myself. Manning had SO many really good elements to his book but the overall execution was just not good. The amount of immaturity that the book is doused with just kills me, it continually drew me out of the story and honestly I almost DNF is on more than one occasion because I just couldn’t deal anymore, my eyes were rolling so hard my optic nerves almost popped off my eyeballs. The constant idiotic bickering between Mort and Penny specifically was infuriating, unforgivably so. When Mort and Penny weren’t bickering like school girls then we had to be subjected to all Mort’s disgusting sexual thoughts about Penny, I’m 110% NOT here for that. I THINK(?) these books are supposed to be adult but really I think that older teenaged boys would probably enjoy the series a lot more than me given that there are many pretty cool plot points and the beginnings of what I think will be revelations later on were planted here in this installment but also the whole wishy-washy teenaged games and thoughts will be more relatable to that audience.
Another much lesser complaint is that a lot of the magic was very convenient. There were too many times when Mort became a Mary Sue you guys! Here is the unsuspecting boy who was raised by a blacksmith who suddenly learns he’s the only mage remaining on this earth and he just knows how to do all the magic and save the day. Manning tried to write in some “failures” with Mort’s magic but it was all trivial failures and when the stakes were high he just became a Mary Sue and won the day with no training. That’s super annoying to read, I want more struggle for my characters, it makes the victory that much more rewarding.
The last 25% of this book was its saving grace. I feel like Manning really started to his his stride at the end and instead of writing a lot of stupid sexual thoughts and fighting, actually important things started happening that were more believable and felt overall more cohesive.
I said in The Blacksmith’s Son that I had a soft spot for it because it felt very Robin Hobb-esc, this installment really started to create a vibe unique to Manning and didn’t feel heavily influenced like the first one so it does have that going for it as well.
So, again, thought I was overall not satisfied with the book I could see that there were hints of a good story buried into all the riffraff. I feel like two books in I have given the series a fair try and at this point in time I have no desire to continue on, there are so many other books and series out there that I’m pretty sure I’m going to love I can’t justify wasting more time on a series that has been a solid 2.5/5 stars in both installments I have read to date. If I am ever needing an audiobook to listen to I MIGHT try the third book on audio but I know for sure that I won’t be continuing this series in physical form anymore. I’m a slower reader and I don’t want to spend another 8 days of my life on one of these books but it might be worth a listen. If Manning can’t get away from the heavy sexual ramblings out of Mort I do not want to continue though. So, if anyone on here has read past book two and knows that drop a yay or a nay in the comments so that can help influence my choice in the future.
I read another review for this book that said something along the lines of “I can tell there is a good story floating around within” and I couldn’t have said it better myself. Manning had SO many really good elements to his book but the overall execution was just not good. The amount of immaturity that the book is doused with just kills me, it continually drew me out of the story and honestly I almost DNF is on more than one occasion because I just couldn’t deal anymore, my eyes were rolling so hard my optic nerves almost popped off my eyeballs. The constant idiotic bickering between Mort and Penny specifically was infuriating, unforgivably so. When Mort and Penny weren’t bickering like school girls then we had to be subjected to all Mort’s disgusting sexual thoughts about Penny, I’m 110% NOT here for that. I THINK(?) these books are supposed to be adult but really I think that older teenaged boys would probably enjoy the series a lot more than me given that there are many pretty cool plot points and the beginnings of what I think will be revelations later on were planted here in this installment but also the whole wishy-washy teenaged games and thoughts will be more relatable to that audience.
Another much lesser complaint is that a lot of the magic was very convenient. There were too many times when Mort became a Mary Sue you guys! Here is the unsuspecting boy who was raised by a blacksmith who suddenly learns he’s the only mage remaining on this earth and he just knows how to do all the magic and save the day. Manning tried to write in some “failures” with Mort’s magic but it was all trivial failures and when the stakes were high he just became a Mary Sue and won the day with no training. That’s super annoying to read, I want more struggle for my characters, it makes the victory that much more rewarding.
The last 25% of this book was its saving grace. I feel like Manning really started to his his stride at the end and instead of writing a lot of stupid sexual thoughts and fighting, actually important things started happening that were more believable and felt overall more cohesive.
I said in The Blacksmith’s Son that I had a soft spot for it because it felt very Robin Hobb-esc, this installment really started to create a vibe unique to Manning and didn’t feel heavily influenced like the first one so it does have that going for it as well.
So, again, thought I was overall not satisfied with the book I could see that there were hints of a good story buried into all the riffraff. I feel like two books in I have given the series a fair try and at this point in time I have no desire to continue on, there are so many other books and series out there that I’m pretty sure I’m going to love I can’t justify wasting more time on a series that has been a solid 2.5/5 stars in both installments I have read to date. If I am ever needing an audiobook to listen to I MIGHT try the third book on audio but I know for sure that I won’t be continuing this series in physical form anymore. I’m a slower reader and I don’t want to spend another 8 days of my life on one of these books but it might be worth a listen. If Manning can’t get away from the heavy sexual ramblings out of Mort I do not want to continue though. So, if anyone on here has read past book two and knows that drop a yay or a nay in the comments so that can help influence my choice in the future.
September 21, 2015
If anything, this book is even more immature than the first one. The first half of the book tried to cover too much and moved too fast for me to really feel immersed in the plot. The main character is arrogant and makes the same mistakes repeatedly without taking away any lessons from it. The relationship between the two main characters has no depth. I wanted to like the book, but it was very mediocre.
November 1, 2011
This was an ok book. I felt like the majority of the book was the two main characters squabbling like teenagers. I found myself flipping over most of the dialogue and scenes between the two since the was really no substance to what they had to say. The plot and outcome were very obvious. I probably won't read the next installment.
January 9, 2012
This book was just as, if not more so, addicting than the first one. The roller coaster of emotion between Mordecai and Penelope gets a bit much at times, but hey, young love. It's probably a fairly accurate portrayal of how two teenagers in love and under that kind of stress would be. There is plenty of action in this book, and sarcastic humor abounds. Read: warning to those readers that don't appreciate that sort of humor.
One thing I like about this story is that the protagonists aren't always making the most ignorant decisions possible (from the readers viewpoint), as is sometimes the case. Every time a moment of decision arises, I find myself cringing inwardly, waiting for the hammer to fall, but it only occasionally does, and even then, their mistakes are often rectified.
The biggest reason I like this story isn't anything specific though, it is just a good, entertaining fantasy read. With all the competition out there, sometimes it seems to me that authors are trying a little to hard to stand out from the crowd. There is nothing particularly unique about this story, but it remains eminently enjoyable none the less.
One thing I like about this story is that the protagonists aren't always making the most ignorant decisions possible (from the readers viewpoint), as is sometimes the case. Every time a moment of decision arises, I find myself cringing inwardly, waiting for the hammer to fall, but it only occasionally does, and even then, their mistakes are often rectified.
The biggest reason I like this story isn't anything specific though, it is just a good, entertaining fantasy read. With all the competition out there, sometimes it seems to me that authors are trying a little to hard to stand out from the crowd. There is nothing particularly unique about this story, but it remains eminently enjoyable none the less.
August 28, 2020
This is a well written tale about a man who is doing his best to excel at his duties and make the world a better place. Unfortunately he's found himself in a codependent relationship with a partner who is verbally, emotionally, and physically abusive and who consistantly tries to manipulate and control him with lies and secret power plays. Her lies and manipulations even result in the death of someone dear to the hero.
In spite of it all, our hero comes through with aplomb. Unfortunately, at the end if the book, he still hasn't figured out that the greatest millstone around his neck is the self-centered, dishonest, abusive woman that he's infatuated with. I'm not sure that he'll ever figure that out. I'm saddened and disgusted by their relationship but, in spite of that, it's still a great story. I can't wait to read the next one!
In spite of it all, our hero comes through with aplomb. Unfortunately, at the end if the book, he still hasn't figured out that the greatest millstone around his neck is the self-centered, dishonest, abusive woman that he's infatuated with. I'm not sure that he'll ever figure that out. I'm saddened and disgusted by their relationship but, in spite of that, it's still a great story. I can't wait to read the next one!
March 22, 2022
Buku kedua dalam siri Mageborn, bergenre high fantasy. Target pembaca adalah golongan young adults. Plotnya buku kali ni lebih berat. Padat dengan kisah politik golongan bangsawan dan scene2 peperangan yg brutal. Cuma ada beberapa part yg meleret dan membuatkan pembacaan sedikit perlahan.
Plot mengisahkan tentang kisah peperangan di antara negara Lothion dan Gododdin. Mordecai, yg kini diiktiraf sebagai salah seorang golongan bangsawan di Lothion terpaksa memimpin orang bawahannya yg serba kekurangan untuk menghalang bala tentera Gododdin yg cuba menceroboh...
Plot mengisahkan tentang kisah peperangan di antara negara Lothion dan Gododdin. Mordecai, yg kini diiktiraf sebagai salah seorang golongan bangsawan di Lothion terpaksa memimpin orang bawahannya yg serba kekurangan untuk menghalang bala tentera Gododdin yg cuba menceroboh...
July 11, 2023
A rather melodramatic novel in this series. Well done and a good read.
November 12, 2024
"The Line of Illeniel" is the second book in the "Mageborn" series by Michael G. Manning. The story continues to follow Mordecai, who has discovered his heritage and must take up the mantle of a lord of the realm while figuring out what it really means to be a mage of the line of Illeniel. Beset on both sides by allies and enemies trying to control or destroy his future, Mordecai faces manipulation from gods and kings alike. The stakes are high, and his loved ones are caught in the crossfire.
Review
Michael G. Manning's "The Line of Illeniel" builds on the foundation laid in "The Blacksmith's Son" and takes the story to new heights. The plot is rich with political intrigue, magical battles, and personal growth, making it a compelling read for fans of epic fantasy. Mordecai's journey is fraught with challenges as he navigates the treacherous waters of power and responsibility. His struggle to balance his duties as a lord and a mage is both relatable and inspiring.
One of the standout aspects of the book is its world-building. Manning's detailed descriptions of the realm of Lothion, its cultures, and its magic system create a vivid and immersive experience for the reader. The magic in this world is both wondrous and dangerous, adding an element of suspense to the story. The battles and confrontations are thrilling, and the stakes are always high, keeping the reader engaged from start to finish.
Alex Wyndham's narration of the audiobook is good, but I do wish that he had more tonal variety in his portrayal of the various characters. However, he does manage to bring the characters to life, making each one memorable. His performance of Mordecai's internal struggles and external conflicts is particularly noteworthy, adding depth to the protagonist's journey.
The supporting cast is well-developed, with characters who have their own arcs and motivations. The relationships between Mordecai and his allies and enemies are complex and multifaceted, adding layers of intrigue to the plot. The interactions between characters are well-written, with dialogue that feels natural and engaging.
Conclusion
"The Line of Illeniel" is an engaging audiobook that offers a great blend of magic, adventure, and personal growth. Michael G. Manning's storytelling, combined with Alex Wyndham's narration, creates an immersive experience for listeners. Whether you're a fan of epic fantasy or just looking for a captivating story, "The Line of Illeniel" is a great choice.
Review
Michael G. Manning's "The Line of Illeniel" builds on the foundation laid in "The Blacksmith's Son" and takes the story to new heights. The plot is rich with political intrigue, magical battles, and personal growth, making it a compelling read for fans of epic fantasy. Mordecai's journey is fraught with challenges as he navigates the treacherous waters of power and responsibility. His struggle to balance his duties as a lord and a mage is both relatable and inspiring.
One of the standout aspects of the book is its world-building. Manning's detailed descriptions of the realm of Lothion, its cultures, and its magic system create a vivid and immersive experience for the reader. The magic in this world is both wondrous and dangerous, adding an element of suspense to the story. The battles and confrontations are thrilling, and the stakes are always high, keeping the reader engaged from start to finish.
Alex Wyndham's narration of the audiobook is good, but I do wish that he had more tonal variety in his portrayal of the various characters. However, he does manage to bring the characters to life, making each one memorable. His performance of Mordecai's internal struggles and external conflicts is particularly noteworthy, adding depth to the protagonist's journey.
The supporting cast is well-developed, with characters who have their own arcs and motivations. The relationships between Mordecai and his allies and enemies are complex and multifaceted, adding layers of intrigue to the plot. The interactions between characters are well-written, with dialogue that feels natural and engaging.
Conclusion
"The Line of Illeniel" is an engaging audiobook that offers a great blend of magic, adventure, and personal growth. Michael G. Manning's storytelling, combined with Alex Wyndham's narration, creates an immersive experience for listeners. Whether you're a fan of epic fantasy or just looking for a captivating story, "The Line of Illeniel" is a great choice.
August 11, 2015
I started this book hoping the writing and the anachronisms would have improved since the first book, but it was more of the same thing. I don't want to read about Joe the farmer, how their travels feel like a camping vacation, or that there were multiple bedrooms in their chamber once they arrived at the king's castle.
And it wasn't just the anachronisms; the writing itself continued to come off as very immature (there was more of the annoying switching between 1st and 3rd person narrative) and the characters were their usual inconsistent selves. For example, I know I'm using the word "random" a lot in my reviews, but it's because the events in the story happen very haphazardly.
I got through about 20% before I couldn't stomach it anymore.
And it wasn't just the anachronisms; the writing itself continued to come off as very immature (there was more of the annoying switching between 1st and 3rd person narrative) and the characters were their usual inconsistent selves. For example, I know I'm using the word "random" a lot in my reviews, but it's because the events in the story happen very haphazardly.
I got through about 20% before I couldn't stomach it anymore.
August 3, 2016
I wish I could get into these books, but I find the frequent grammatical errors to be downright distracting. I may be more of a stickler for punctuation than most people, but the rampant lack of commas alone makes me want to pull my hair out and scream--- in part because the universe and fantastical elements could otherwise make the story quite entertaining. (It wouldn't be a great work of literature, but could stand on its own as light fantasy.)
An example: " 'At least one of you has some sense then. How much longer are you going to be Mort?' [...] 'Not long, an hour or two.' 'Alright, Dorian if you would be so kind?' " would be SO MUCH BETTER if an editor took even a cursory pass: " 'At least one of you has some sense, then. How much longer are you going to be, Mort?' [...] 'Not long, an hour or two.' 'All right. Dorian, if you would be so kind?' "
I hope that the author can find someone to help him edit his work. For now, though, I'm sad to say I won't be buying any more in this series.
An example: " 'At least one of you has some sense then. How much longer are you going to be Mort?' [...] 'Not long, an hour or two.' 'Alright, Dorian if you would be so kind?' " would be SO MUCH BETTER if an editor took even a cursory pass: " 'At least one of you has some sense, then. How much longer are you going to be, Mort?' [...] 'Not long, an hour or two.' 'All right. Dorian, if you would be so kind?' "
I hope that the author can find someone to help him edit his work. For now, though, I'm sad to say I won't be buying any more in this series.
March 23, 2015
Second book continued the authors strong showing in the first book.All the characters are interesting.Dialogue is witty and often comedic at times.I really enjoyed the back and forth banter between Mort and Penny.I am enjoying that the story isnt all over the place with hundreds of characters.I also have enjoyed that the main character Mordecai "Mort" makes several mistakes and has a penchant for saying the wrong thing at the wrong time which kind of endears him to you the reader.Flawed characters ring true to life after all who the hell wants to read about someone who is perfect in every way in every situation.Thats the epitome of uninteresting writing in my opinion.
November 8, 2018
The man character is insufferably misogynistic, arrogant, and headstrong. The main girl is just as insufferable.... The lore, and Marcus, and Rose are the only things keeping me interested in this series.
October 27, 2011
A ton of editing issues, but entertaining nonetheless.
January 29, 2014
gripping , and better than the first book...interesting and refreshing.
September 28, 2018
4.5 stars, great series, I love this book and series.
December 6, 2025
Editing to add that I listened on Audible:
I enjoyed this book, however, had major qualms which led me to give it three stars. My biggest qualm would be the fact that we missed Mordecai learning all the magic! That’s precisely what I was hoping to be there for. The second major qualm I had with this book is the fact that it took Mordecai almost the entirety of the book to realise the voice he was hearing was who he dubbed the lady of the earth. For someone who’s supposedly so smart, who rediscovered enchanting and becomes an amazing general and tactician, how could he not put that together, at least a little sooner than before? This leads me to my third major qualm: his skills in warfare. In the first book and the majority of the second, it is never mentioned that he had any training in warfare of any kind, nor does he ever sit down and consult with those who have been trained. Yes, he talks to Dorian and Scion every now and then, but these conversations are mostly him convincing them that his plans would work; which they do. I don’t quite understand how he’s such an amazing tactician without at least having read a book or something, let alone consulting people who’ve been trained or have seen battle. Sure, he’s a great mathematician and chess player, but even those skills aren’t drawn upon while planning for the conflict.
Additional minor qualms I had were Mordecai’s bouts of brooding, the interactions between himself and Penny, and character building. Mordecai’s brooding is understandable, in a way, but his incessant need to make remarks instead of being in a bad way are a tad annoying. In WoT, for example, Rand broods often, however, also acts the part. Rand isolates himself, snaps at people, and acts erratically. Mordecai never does any of this, just makes remarks every so often about himself feeling like shit for the impending war and the lives he’ll have to take.
The interactions with Penny are just cringeworthy. Not because they’re written poorly, but rather because they act as if they’ve been in a multi-decade, healthy, and strong relationship when in actuality they’re both 17 years old and have dated for perhaps a year. One could chalk it up to young love, but when all the other characters are also buying into the way Mordecai and Penny interact, it just becomes cheesy.
At this point, I consider the character building to be a minor qualm as there are still three books left in the series. In all honesty, all the characters seem to be exactly as they were in the first book, despite learning more, changing, and undergoing harrowing events. **Spoiler for the third book!!!*** It’s true that the in the third book, Marcus seems to be grappling with his emotions from the addiction that was healing people by channeling Milicenth’s power, but I am too early in the third book to tell where this will lead to. Still, the other characters don’t seem to have changed much.
Now, I will commend Manning for his series. It certainly isn’t easy to write books, and I have been largely entertained and will continue with the series. I do, however, hope that as the series progresses we’ll see more genuine character building and get to tag along Mordecai’s learning.
I enjoyed this book, however, had major qualms which led me to give it three stars. My biggest qualm would be the fact that we missed Mordecai learning all the magic! That’s precisely what I was hoping to be there for. The second major qualm I had with this book is the fact that it took Mordecai almost the entirety of the book to realise the voice he was hearing was who he dubbed the lady of the earth. For someone who’s supposedly so smart, who rediscovered enchanting and becomes an amazing general and tactician, how could he not put that together, at least a little sooner than before? This leads me to my third major qualm: his skills in warfare. In the first book and the majority of the second, it is never mentioned that he had any training in warfare of any kind, nor does he ever sit down and consult with those who have been trained. Yes, he talks to Dorian and Scion every now and then, but these conversations are mostly him convincing them that his plans would work; which they do. I don’t quite understand how he’s such an amazing tactician without at least having read a book or something, let alone consulting people who’ve been trained or have seen battle. Sure, he’s a great mathematician and chess player, but even those skills aren’t drawn upon while planning for the conflict.
Additional minor qualms I had were Mordecai’s bouts of brooding, the interactions between himself and Penny, and character building. Mordecai’s brooding is understandable, in a way, but his incessant need to make remarks instead of being in a bad way are a tad annoying. In WoT, for example, Rand broods often, however, also acts the part. Rand isolates himself, snaps at people, and acts erratically. Mordecai never does any of this, just makes remarks every so often about himself feeling like shit for the impending war and the lives he’ll have to take.
The interactions with Penny are just cringeworthy. Not because they’re written poorly, but rather because they act as if they’ve been in a multi-decade, healthy, and strong relationship when in actuality they’re both 17 years old and have dated for perhaps a year. One could chalk it up to young love, but when all the other characters are also buying into the way Mordecai and Penny interact, it just becomes cheesy.
At this point, I consider the character building to be a minor qualm as there are still three books left in the series. In all honesty, all the characters seem to be exactly as they were in the first book, despite learning more, changing, and undergoing harrowing events. **Spoiler for the third book!!!*** It’s true that the in the third book, Marcus seems to be grappling with his emotions from the addiction that was healing people by channeling Milicenth’s power, but I am too early in the third book to tell where this will lead to. Still, the other characters don’t seem to have changed much.
Now, I will commend Manning for his series. It certainly isn’t easy to write books, and I have been largely entertained and will continue with the series. I do, however, hope that as the series progresses we’ll see more genuine character building and get to tag along Mordecai’s learning.
May 16, 2017
The language is a bit odd. It could be a selling point for some, but not me. I dislike the pretensions that some fantasy novels have, they try to be Shakespeare with odd sentence structure for character speech and use invented words every other sentence. I do want some effort though, English is a flexible language that constantly changes and that allows fantasy authors a great leeway in world building. A few proverbs here about local gods here, a gripe about about whatever local situation there and you can world build without long expositions and just smart and efficient world building.
However Mageborn is the opposite end of the spectrum. It is too simplistic and there a lot of jarring modern colloquial speech, I can stand how many times the main character says his wife is "beautiful" or "pretty," that I literally forgot how she was supposed to look like other than she is hot. I supposed that there is a description somewhere in the first novel, but it is probably a bad sign when the mental pictures of the characters become nonexistent after a while.
The simplicity has to be a conscious choice probably. There is a lot of violence, rape incidents and so on so I don't think the author is trying to cater to the younger crowd, but the vocabulary in these novels is atrociously simple. Maybe that is supposed to reflect the limited literacy of a Blacksmith's son, but according to the first novel he was supposedly a learned man so I am not sure.
However Mageborn is the opposite end of the spectrum. It is too simplistic and there a lot of jarring modern colloquial speech, I can stand how many times the main character says his wife is "beautiful" or "pretty," that I literally forgot how she was supposed to look like other than she is hot. I supposed that there is a description somewhere in the first novel, but it is probably a bad sign when the mental pictures of the characters become nonexistent after a while.
The simplicity has to be a conscious choice probably. There is a lot of violence, rape incidents and so on so I don't think the author is trying to cater to the younger crowd, but the vocabulary in these novels is atrociously simple. Maybe that is supposed to reflect the limited literacy of a Blacksmith's son, but according to the first novel he was supposedly a learned man so I am not sure.
September 25, 2018
Michael G Manning delivers a fast-paced, fun, and emotional fantasy.
This a 3-star but almost became a four star as the story pulled me all the way through and delivered in the ending. The story is very straightforward and not very deep but it is still fun. With the foundation of the first book The World building here did expand the story enough to give it more of an epic feel. If you're looking for an easy fantasy this is for you.
I do not mean for my compliments to sound backhanded at all. There are many different styles of writing and stories to be enjoyed in fantasy. In the second book as well as the first the main protagonist comes into his power fairly easy. There is no long trial of training nor is there a complex magic system that he uses. In truth the protagonist is written as a very intelligent young man who was raised as a blacksmith's son but it was in truth much more. It does seem a bit too easy in how he steps into the role he is found himself in.
The romance and relationships within the story feel genuine but there are times in which misunderstandings and disagreements feel forced. The author does make the various Side characters interesting but there are no real surprises in them.
This a 3-star but almost became a four star as the story pulled me all the way through and delivered in the ending. The story is very straightforward and not very deep but it is still fun. With the foundation of the first book The World building here did expand the story enough to give it more of an epic feel. If you're looking for an easy fantasy this is for you.
I do not mean for my compliments to sound backhanded at all. There are many different styles of writing and stories to be enjoyed in fantasy. In the second book as well as the first the main protagonist comes into his power fairly easy. There is no long trial of training nor is there a complex magic system that he uses. In truth the protagonist is written as a very intelligent young man who was raised as a blacksmith's son but it was in truth much more. It does seem a bit too easy in how he steps into the role he is found himself in.
The romance and relationships within the story feel genuine but there are times in which misunderstandings and disagreements feel forced. The author does make the various Side characters interesting but there are no real surprises in them.
March 23, 2020
Much humor and some sadness
Mordecai, an untrained wizard, and his fiance, Penny, her summon to the king to swear fealty just after he finds out that he will be going to war for his people in the spring. When they arrive in the Royal City they find their good friend the Duke of Lancaster is there because he has to go to trial and that they are there to testify in his defense. Mordecai also finds out that his father how to house in the capital city and then his father had been not only a very great wizard but also a very wealthy man who had invested is money well. The home he inherits from his father is magical and no one has been in it since his father and mother died. When he declares fealty to the king he finds out that he will have to bond with someone to train and control his magic or die. He also tells the king about the threat of the invasion and the King says he isn't going to help. This story is filled with the trials and tribulations of a young wizard. It is not boring it is very funny in a lot of places and there are some very sad moments also. This is a very good store you really don't want to miss.
Mordecai, an untrained wizard, and his fiance, Penny, her summon to the king to swear fealty just after he finds out that he will be going to war for his people in the spring. When they arrive in the Royal City they find their good friend the Duke of Lancaster is there because he has to go to trial and that they are there to testify in his defense. Mordecai also finds out that his father how to house in the capital city and then his father had been not only a very great wizard but also a very wealthy man who had invested is money well. The home he inherits from his father is magical and no one has been in it since his father and mother died. When he declares fealty to the king he finds out that he will have to bond with someone to train and control his magic or die. He also tells the king about the threat of the invasion and the King says he isn't going to help. This story is filled with the trials and tribulations of a young wizard. It is not boring it is very funny in a lot of places and there are some very sad moments also. This is a very good store you really don't want to miss.
October 1, 2023
I enjoyed the main plotline but found the Gods and magic system confusing, despite having just read the prequel series. It doesn't seem internally consistent... unless something world-shaking happened in between the two eras.
The romantic relationship between the protagonist and Penny is also frustrating. It seems the author feels the need for dramatic conflict outweighs common sense. Thus the reader has to sit through stupid arguments based on unnecessary deceptions and withheld information. I'm not a fan of Mordecai's habit of exclaiming how women are impossible to understand. Yep, that's what happens when both of you are hiding the truth.
Also, It beggars belief that a hoard of vampires would sit out the entire story except for some obvious setup for book three toward the end. I'll give this a pass though as there may be some form of control in play by the dark gods.
There are many more irritations like Modecai taking a strategic leadership role in a pivotal battle despite having no experience or relevant training. In short, this is a problematic book unless you turn off critical thinking. I'm taking a hiatus before continuing.
The romantic relationship between the protagonist and Penny is also frustrating. It seems the author feels the need for dramatic conflict outweighs common sense. Thus the reader has to sit through stupid arguments based on unnecessary deceptions and withheld information. I'm not a fan of Mordecai's habit of exclaiming how women are impossible to understand. Yep, that's what happens when both of you are hiding the truth.
Also, It beggars belief that a hoard of vampires would sit out the entire story except for some obvious setup for book three toward the end. I'll give this a pass though as there may be some form of control in play by the dark gods.
There are many more irritations like Modecai taking a strategic leadership role in a pivotal battle despite having no experience or relevant training. In short, this is a problematic book unless you turn off critical thinking. I'm taking a hiatus before continuing.
May 27, 2019
Once again, I find myself thinking of this as a 'fun' series, rather than a more serious series like Mistborn or Abhorson. Which is nice. It's not the mostly brilliantly written, but it has a charm to it that is hard to ignore.
This story focuses on the main character's mental health a lot. Not only does he start hearing voices, but he is also faced with many tough choices. At first, I expected this to make the story more real. However, I found myself questioning a lot of his choices and motives. How did a pacifist son of a blacksmith get so cold? How did we go from trying not to hurt anyone, so burning men alive? The connection didn't feel right and I found it odd no one was around to offer a better idea. Of which, I feel there were many.
Once again, I found the perspective to be very limiting. Yes, we got to see the reasoning and discovery of new magic and enchantment, which was nice, but I wondered what else was happening in the world.
Overall, I'm excited to continue reading, but I go into future books with a bit of a lower expectation of logic winning out.
This story focuses on the main character's mental health a lot. Not only does he start hearing voices, but he is also faced with many tough choices. At first, I expected this to make the story more real. However, I found myself questioning a lot of his choices and motives. How did a pacifist son of a blacksmith get so cold? How did we go from trying not to hurt anyone, so burning men alive? The connection didn't feel right and I found it odd no one was around to offer a better idea. Of which, I feel there were many.
Once again, I found the perspective to be very limiting. Yes, we got to see the reasoning and discovery of new magic and enchantment, which was nice, but I wondered what else was happening in the world.
Overall, I'm excited to continue reading, but I go into future books with a bit of a lower expectation of logic winning out.
May 3, 2019
I thought that this is a really good second book in a great series . I think the author did a wonderful job and I thought everything blended really well . I could relate to a lot in the book and definitely cried in some parts . But over all great book !
I thought that this was a really good book over all definitely recommend it to you if u love sord and sorcery and the author did a really good job of blending everything together . It brought tears to my eyes several times as I was reading this book because I really think the author hit the emotional loss of Morts father, and thought he nailed it . Which made me cry because I can relate to the author . But over all really good story
I thought that this was a really good book over all definitely recommend it to you if u love sord and sorcery and the author did a really good job of blending everything together . It brought tears to my eyes several times as I was reading this book because I really think the author hit the emotional loss of Morts father, and thought he nailed it . Which made me cry because I can relate to the author . But over all really good story
April 27, 2022
My gosh I love the story of this series, but damn the sexism is so bad and way overly enhanced. The story was great. I only gave this three stars because of the extreme sexism comments were on every other page. While during those times women were looked at differently in the open, and even if men look at women in the same way today but not quite so openly, it didn't have to be enhanced like it was. I'm sure many men would love this book because of that. While the story was great, ultimately it didn't matter.
May 5, 2017
This was a very good follow up to the first book.
Mordecai continues to learn of his heritage, his powers and romance.
It takes a dark turn and has a strong Nick Seafort vibe for a while. Leadership. Responsibility. Burden of command. It was done well, though. Showing the negatives without hitting the reader on the head with a hammer.
Had a great ending with a few things setup for future book(s). Can't wait to get to the next installment.
Mordecai continues to learn of his heritage, his powers and romance.
It takes a dark turn and has a strong Nick Seafort vibe for a while. Leadership. Responsibility. Burden of command. It was done well, though. Showing the negatives without hitting the reader on the head with a hammer.
Had a great ending with a few things setup for future book(s). Can't wait to get to the next installment.
September 23, 2019
Another wonderful book
I have loved reading this second book. I've not for time to write a massive review , I'm sorry , it's more important to me that I now download book 3 , and spend my day off lounging on the sofa binge reading as much of it as I can.
Thank you , Michael G Manning , it's such a great feeling when one finds an author who really , really gets it spot on , and you don't want to stop reading their books.
I have loved reading this second book. I've not for time to write a massive review , I'm sorry , it's more important to me that I now download book 3 , and spend my day off lounging on the sofa binge reading as much of it as I can.
Thank you , Michael G Manning , it's such a great feeling when one finds an author who really , really gets it spot on , and you don't want to stop reading their books.
January 18, 2020
Ok read
Same issue as with the first book. Characters behave as if taken from a soap opera - rash decisions, lack of logic, bad communication.
MC needs to grow up and stop whining about the moral difficulty of every choice he has to make.
It is annoying when unrealistic tools like this are used to drive a story that has a lot of potential.
So 4 stars because I like the story and the book is readable, and trying to ignore the annoyance of the brain-dead characters.
Same issue as with the first book. Characters behave as if taken from a soap opera - rash decisions, lack of logic, bad communication.
MC needs to grow up and stop whining about the moral difficulty of every choice he has to make.
It is annoying when unrealistic tools like this are used to drive a story that has a lot of potential.
So 4 stars because I like the story and the book is readable, and trying to ignore the annoyance of the brain-dead characters.
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