Well,...I better get right into this review while the story is still fresh in my head. What a collossal disappointment. Miss Stewart- for shame!
*spoilers ahead. Ye be warned!*
Alright, so this little piece follows Lucy Sinclair - wedding planner extraordinaire - and farmer hick Clay Madison. These two couldn't be more different from each other or more oddly paired if you tried. I didn't get a sense of real chemistry between them at all.
Lucy is very much a modern gal, workaholic type living in L.A. and running her first class business while Clay is very old school, tied to the family farm, and all about maintaining his rigidly defined gender role. Lucy's modern sensibilities and Clay's old world chivalry don't really match up to well and I kind of cringed through a lot of their interactions. Which felt forced. All of them.
My biggest complaint is with how Miss Stewart addressed and tackled Lucy's rape. It was very obvious early on what Lucy's trauma was, but the conversation Lucy had with Clay where she described the event felt....contrite and unrealistic. Full stop here - I'm a rape survivor.
I mean...here we have this 14/15 year old girl who is held down and raped by a guest at her family's inn while her parents are away. Apparently, she tried to scream and struggle - which would have left some pretty obvious marks on her body so that if she did come clean about the event early on, this business about "nobody believing you" wouldn't have held up strongly at all. I'd understand her reasoning for not telling anyone if she hadn't really struggled or had been too scared to fight back, because that always carries with it shame and a sense of deserving what happened to you.
But I'm so mad that Miss Stewart didn't have Lucy resolve this with her family. In fact...nothing with her family got resolved. She never got to sit down and talk to her mom about the magic and witchcraft stuff either, and that was mentioned SO MANY TIMES throughout the book that I was honestly looking forward to that confrontation!
Truthfully, Lucy should have also told her mother what happened to her at the inn when she was a teenager. Yes, it would have been dramatic and full of sorrow and mixed emotions, but Lucy would be able to move forward and heal knowing that she'd come clean to the people who really mattered - her family. Just telling Clay isn't going to absolve her of all the complicated emotions and traumatic side effects. It's not realistic.
Overall, there was way too little character development and far too much technical talk about how to plan weddings and the *stress* involved. Yeah, I think we all understand that, it doesn't need to be spelled out so obviously. Clay and Lucy have no chemistry and I honestly don't get how they're good for each other when they're just too different. End of story - did not really enjoy this one. Which is a shame.