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Daddy Goes First

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♡Age Gap
♡Quick Read (9k words)
♡M/M Noah Hamilton doesn’t want to be a married man, but it’s too late. Regrets don’t matter when you're standing at your wedding reception with a brand new ring practically glued to your left hand. He thinks that he’s gotten a small stroke of luck when his new wife informs him of a family tradition that stipulates they can’t spend their wedding night together. He’s ready for a break and some alone time when she reveals that he’ll need to spend the night with her daddy instead. Henry Donahue has secrets, and he has desires. Men like Henry… they always get what they desire.

52 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 10, 2023

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Profile Image for Kati *☆・゚.
1,319 reviews706 followers
July 11, 2023
Combined Review for all three Short Stories

There’s not much of a romance in each of them because they are pretty much eroticas. All three have pretty ridiculous plots but very good, filthy smut.


#1 Daddy Goes First - my fave

Henry & Noah, age-gap, father-in-law, cheating
Daddy gets first dips on the wedding night at the new addition to the family after his daughter got married. Family tradition, you know. Pretty cool plot twist and heavily implied HEA.

side note: I had no qualms with the unaddressed barebacking here because the author mentioned it as CW prior to the stories. I can live with that.



#2 Put Me In Coach

Liam & Jonathan, age-gap, stepdad and -son, coach and player
This was really cute and filthy and also a bit surprising with young Liam being the aggressor in their dynamic and when he tries to seduce not only his coach but also stepdad, husband of his dad —who already left them years ago.



#3 Take Me Away Biker

Tommy & Victor, age-gap, kink, motorcycle club
I was looking forward to their little gem of a story since I met them individually in the previous book as Liam’s and Jonathan’s respective friends. Tommy is a super sweet guy who likes makeup and skirts… and bad boys. Ugh, the worship, just grand!

and on a side note: I absolutely looooooved the friendship between Tommy and Liam. That was so freaking precious.

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726 reviews261 followers
November 22, 2023
Lmao what the fuck is this..

Listen, I’ve expected the marry-the-woman-even-though-you-don’t-love-her-trope. Although, it’s never my cup of tea. In fact, I can say I hate this trope. Reason is, I do not like when it’s written in a way to bring down women in relationships. The man was never in love with her anyway. Men like this already exist irl I don’t need it in my fiction.

Anyway, back to the review. This was pretty much ridiculous. First of all, it was such a surprise that the MC wasn’t a closeted gay man. That was a bit weird to me lmao. The execution was boring. The father was behaving weird with his son-in-law very creepy and not hot. Their first kiss was very rushed. The sex was bland. I wanted to feel the forbidden aspect but it was never there. The chemistry faded so fast bcs of the sex. And what the fuck happen at 71% LMFAO the dad just turn from creepy to psycho. It made me hate him — whatever his name was.

Overall, this was very bad. Hope #2 is better.
Profile Image for Crystal (Crystalreads2).
973 reviews1,002 followers
May 4, 2023
Five Daddy & Pretty Boy Stars

Sweet baby Jesus and all that is holy, this a filthy, dirty book. I thank the author and spicy gods above.

Are you looking for a short Taboo MM erotica? Look no further. Keep an open mind.

Picture this it’s your wedding night, and you’re far from thrilled after all your roped into this marriage. But you just learned it’s a family tradition to spend the night with the bride's father. The plan is to watch a game and talk—famous last words.

My wife’s father is sucking my cock. I’m so going to Hell.


The book is refreshing, fast pace, smutty, and all around Scrumdiddlyumptious. I forgot to do the Daddy Kink. Satisfied my daddy's kink. My only complaint is it’s too short . I wish the book was longer

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1,196 reviews242 followers
April 20, 2023
Yes, yes, I admit it, the cover did it for me, I was amped up and ready to go for this one.

But damn, this wasn't what I thought it was going to be.
I still read it because it's short, but if I'm giving it 2.5-2.75⭐, it's really generous.



This was a really short novella about Noah, who got married to a woman he was hooking up with because she hot pregnant - don't ask me why, because we live in 2023, but okay.

They got married and the wedding night was supposed to be spent with her (single) dad Henry, just him and Noah getting to know each other, because that's the tradition at their house, you know, with only her and Henry being in that house.



So, now we get to the he's a creeper vibes .

Turns out Mr Daddy over here has been thirsting over Noah since before his daughter even brought him home , because he was somewhat known as an athlete, so Daddy, being 22 years his senior was dreaming of the day when he'll be able to get his hands on him .

This is a very delicate subject that can go very wrong real quick in my opinion, and in this case, it wasn't sexy and it wasn't hot, it was cringe and it creeped me out.

The writing did that, the story wasn't presented as an insanely passionate pining affair, but more like lurking in the background for my baby boy when I finally get to dick him down . 🙄

Henry's sex talk that was so talked about, one of the reasons I gave this story a shot, goddamn, I don't know if I'm living in a different Universe or something, but to me it was mostly just amateurish .

So no, this didn't work for me.
I have no problem with there being a silly plot or no plot!, I love erotica, but this wasn't (that) good.
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349 reviews327 followers
April 9, 2025
⭐️ 5/5 🌶 5/5

If you're into some wild taboo smut, then this is the book you need to get your hands on. We're talking forbidden love at its finest between Henry, a 44-year-old Daddy, and Noah, a 22-year-old recently graduated D1 college football player. Noah got married to Samantha but ends up spending the wedding night with Henry—his father-in-law. 💀

Noah’s this big jock, 6 feet tall, a football star with muscles to spare… and yet, Henry—6'4", broad as fuck—calls him his pretty princess... 😏 The juxtaposition between this big, tough jock and the Daddy who owns him is everything you never knew you needed. It’s filthy, it’s forbidden, and it’s so damn hot. 🔥

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Quote: (A scene where Henry was about to get into a zoom meeting)

“Take my cock from my trousers and get it hard, princess. I need to talk to some people, and I want your mouth on me the whole time.” His fingers lift my chin. “Suck, lick, kiss, whatever you want. Just please me, and I’ll make it worth your while, sweetheart.” –Henry
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I just self-combust. 🥵🔥

🎀 MM contemporary romance
🎀 Taboo romance (father-in-law and son-in-law)
🎀 Age gap (22 years)
🎀 Daddy kink
🎀 Feminization (pretty princess, pretty princess hole) 😏
🎀 Praise
🎀 Mild degradation
🎀 Low-angst, hot AF
🎀 HFN
🎀 Epilogue
🎀 Bonus scene
Profile Image for D.L. Howe.
Author 25 books603 followers
May 11, 2023
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

BR with my girl Cass!

This novella was hot as hell! I think I highlighted every dirty utterance out of that filthy daddy’s mouth.

It’s Noah’s wedding day and he’s not really happy about it because it’s a modern day shotgun wedding. I say modern because his bride’s daddy has no idea why they’re getting married.

He does know something that Noah doesn’t so there’s a nice little twist near the end.

Apparently in his bride’s family they have a tradition where the groom spends his wedding night with her daddy.

Yeah, it didn’t take long to get past the getting to know you part and get straight down to business.

I never knew I wanted a man to call another man princess but when it’s used in the following context, I may have found my new favorite thing.

“Bend over daddy’s desk, pretty princess.” Fuck, I’m going to love this job.

“Swallow, princess,” he commands, pumping his hips. “Milk daddy’s cock with your throat, little boy.”
Profile Image for Mariam,.
677 reviews553 followers
June 22, 2023
This book was the copium I needed to stop thinking about Ty and Zane.

But onto better things, I'm pleasantly surprised by this cute little story. Perfect for forgetting reality exists.
Profile Image for Randinicole_reads.
776 reviews257 followers
April 13, 2023
Well this was an experience lol. Perfect little spicy forbidden fun!

4 ⭐️ 3.5 🌶️
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93 reviews5 followers
September 24, 2024
This was such a fun and spicy MM 🫠
I loved the characters and how fast paced this was 🖤 I’ll definitely be needing MORE from these characters eventually.
Tropes-
MM
Age gap
Father in law 😏
Daddy shmink


So basically this was so hot so definitely read it 🖤
Profile Image for Whitney.
313 reviews363 followers
May 29, 2025
Noah + Henry
Quick read | Daddy kink | Cheating | Bi-awakening

Meh. Definitely not very well written but entertaining-ish I guess.
This author struggles with transitions and how the story flows. Stuff just seems to abruptly happen out of nowhere.

Also, this isn't taboo like the cover suggests. It's forbidden. There's a difference. Taboo is blood relatives. K, thanks.

....

"My wife’s father is sucking my cock. I’m so going to Hell."

“You think I’m pretty?” He twirls his tongue around my tip, eyes on mine. “I’ll show you just how fucking pretty you are, if you’ll let me.”

“Go on, get a little taste, baby.”

"I’m having sex with a man, and loving every second of it. Correction, I’m being fucked by a man, and loving every second of it."

....



⚠️potential spoilers below in detailed tropes and trigger warnings





Tropes:
Father-in-law/son-in-law
Cheating to be together
Spends wedding night with father-in-law instead
Daddy kink
Age gap (44 and 22)
Truth or Dare
"Eyes on me"
"You think I'm pretty?"
Princess
Noah's first time with a man
Henry is the first man Noah has ever been attracted to
Sex lessons
"That's my boy"
Shower sex
BJ while on video business call
Henry has pined for Noah for the last 2 years
Strict roles

TWs:
Cheating (the married MC and his wife dont love each other. They got married because they thought it was the right thing to do after a positive pregnancy test.
No condoms or discussion of test results
Noah's new wife has actually already been cheating on him and he finds out the baby isn't even his so he gets an annulment
Profile Image for j.bee.reads.
106 reviews30 followers
April 13, 2023
Daddy Goes First
Book Review:

4.5/5 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
5/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

TROPES:
💙Age Gap
💙Father In Law
💙Daddy Kink
💙Novella
💙Taboo/Forbidden

When I first saw the tropes for this I ran to download it on my Kindle! And let me just say I was not disappointed at all! I love to read a short, filthy, and fun novella in between long reads. And this was the perfect book!

It’s Noah’s wedding day and he should be happy and in love with his new wife. He’s anything but. He doesn’t want to be married but it’s too late now since he now has a new wife.
He’s already ready to be away from his wife, and tradition has it that he cannot spend his wedding night with her. But he must spend it with his new Father In Law Henry.

Omg! This book was hot! 🔥🔥🔥 I loved every page. It was so crazy but in a good way! Very taboo and forbidden. Henry and Noah were so hot together! 🥵 The spice was off the charts. And I loved the plot twist in this story! I love a quick read but I’m now obsessed with Noah and Henry I now need a full book of them! I literally cannot recommend this book enough. Go read this and add to your TBR ASAP! 🖤
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835 reviews28 followers
April 20, 2023
For awhile I didn’t know how to rate this coz it was too short. But since it’s not really a romance, it’s more taboo erotica, it’s easier to rate than a short shorts romance. I really liked it and it’s so well written. Princess hole 🤣. Love Henry and Noah together. I don’t mind visiting them again one day.
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2,125 reviews14 followers
January 9, 2024
I can't decide if Noah's action is cheating or not, sleeping with his father-in-law instead of his wife on their wedding night.

He married Henry's daughter, Samantha, because she told Noah that she was pregnant with his baby, so he did marry her even though he didn't love her. I think she was Noah's usual hook-up, not a girlfriend or anything. Samantha's baby wasn't Noah's but her ex-boyfriend's, and Henry knew that, but he said he got that information after the wedding was over, but still Noah felt betrayed by him.

It turned out that Henry had been pining for Noah for two years, since Noah's sophomore year.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Profile Image for Miki_reads.
469 reviews173 followers
December 21, 2023
This was ridiculous but I'm still gonna read the other 2. If you see this mind your business 🙈
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578 reviews28 followers
April 20, 2023
Craving for more! Spicy and filthy, Henry and Noah combusts together in this short novella. I just bought K. L’s Bask and Burn book because I need kore MM from her.🔥
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74 reviews
July 5, 2023
MM + InstaLove + Father of the Bride with the Groom + Cheating + OTT + Basically Smut (no plot) + Quick Read + Dual POVs

Omggg if you are looking for a smutty fast-paced little MM novella, this is it!! 

One word: HOT 🥵 

I might be biased; this was my first MM read, sooo I didn’t have anything to compare it with 🤷🏻‍♀️ Maybe this was the reason this novella stayed rent-free in my head for a looong time

Oh, the only thing was that the father of the Bride calls the groom ‘princess’, and his ‘princess hole' 🙃
Profile Image for Ive.
602 reviews27 followers
July 4, 2023
Short MM erotica with a mildly taboo nature and a very filthy mouth I enjoyed so much. Henry calling his boy pretty and princess and baby boy ♥️ I am a goner for this kind of praising. Could have been much more longer!
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71 reviews3 followers
February 20, 2024
Finals season made me read stuff I am not proud of.
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251 reviews1 follower
April 12, 2023
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I didn’t know how much I need this till I read it. Such a filthy erotic novella. I only wish it was longer. Praying to the smut goods for a sequel. Need more of Noah and his “princess hole.”
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105 reviews23 followers
December 30, 2023
Not bad but very unrealistic. I guess that's what we can expect from eroticas. This is a reminder why I don't read them a lot. It's still enjoyable though.
8 reviews
April 12, 2023
Absolutely loved this quick read for a taboo MM coupling. The chemistry was on point and I hope to see more of Henry and his pretty princess Noah. 🥵
Profile Image for My Dark Romance.
460 reviews84 followers
May 5, 2023
Need a little forbidden smutty MM daddy and his “princess” son in law. This will hit the spot. Quick read. Lots of smut and daddy kink. All the smutty stars 🤩

“Take it,” he rasps, teeth nipping at my ear. His cock swells in my ass, and sparks roll down my back. “Take daddy’s cum in your pretty princess hole.”
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310 reviews2 followers
May 8, 2023
Since I read “Daddy Goes First” right after “Put Me In Coach”, the contents of these stories mix a bit for me. Both are dirty and taboo as fuck, and therefore just too good. However, in “Daddy Goes First” the roles are reversed compared to “Put Me In Coach”. This time it is the ‘usual’ way, as the dominant is the older father-in-law, Henry, and the submissive is the younger son-in-law, Noah. I cannot really say which of the two novellas I liked better, as both were quite short and hot.
Profile Image for Evan.
120 reviews1 follower
April 12, 2023
This was a quick and easy read. It was short but it was good! Being so short I felt I didn’t get all the characters backstory enough, but it still made me smile and we’ll written. (As are all K.L Mann books) I would have for sure liked to see more of them weather before the events of this book or after it doesn’t matter. It is really good and I loved it! Highly recommended this and any of K.L Mann’s books!
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