It has the glory of being the first book in my life I almost put down without finishing. And I'm sure I won't pick it up again, except to re-read one or two chapters.
A shiny red apple, juicy and mouth-watering... with a big ugly worm in the middle. That's the way I've felt about it and I think it fits the whole book. I don't really understand all the hype around it and I feel a little bit cheated.
We'll all true and honest with each-other : people love this book, I can see why, I loved it too til the second part. It is very well written. The battles are amazing, my heart did skip a lot of beats and suffering from a heart condition, it's not that healthy. But I felt thrilled. Excited. From the first, I grew quickly fond of Penman's Richard. I also loved poor Edmund. Warwick and George of Clarence's characterizations were brillant. John Neville too. Maybe he is the one character whom I pitied the most and wept for the most. I just felt his portrayal of an honest man torn between loyalties was simple, true to heart, and his death heart-wrenching. Even more so than Warwick's.
George's fall was amazing too, driving us between pity and contempt and never ever quite letting us choose which it was we ought to feel the most.
So why, why, why in light of such good writing did I suddenly stumble upon a whole cast of Disney villains in the Woodville family ?
Before I complain, I will make a point there : I'm quite fresh to the War of Roses. It didn't interest me till a few months ago and I've read very few on the subject. Plus, I've always been taught to process historical informations with great care, because they are more often than not easily biased by personnal feelings. So I try to keep indifferent, factual. I can guess at someone's character and ambitions but I never let mysefl be carried away into becoming Team This or Team That. So I'm no Yorkist, no Lancastrian, no Woodvilles-Rivers, no Nevilles, no nothing. The world is not black and white. Noone is utterly good or bad. They are all humans. End of the story.
But I felt Penman suddenly, inexplicably, somewhere in her book, lost sight of that truth. Lost sight of what it was she was aiming for... or more exactly, became too narrow-minded on exactly her own intent : to prove Richard's innocence in the events that surrounded him. Til the second part, she had drawn a very human and very likable character. So why did she felt the need to suddenly make antagonists out of nowhere only to make him a saint by comparison ? As Anne and Richard became more and more martyrs-like, I grew to like them less and less and pity instead the Woodvilles for such bad character developpement. Honestly, they all seemed to originate from a bad Snow Queen parody. We had the vain Bad Queen, stupid and plotting while trying new jewels, her evil son, the stupid brute out to draw blood, her stupid minion, the poor Anthony Woodville from whom, when I read about him, I've heard only good most of the time... And so on, and so on. Even Edward V, poor child, didn't seem to find grace in Penman's eyes and was cruelly portrayed as a cold and capricious child for the sole crime of being Elisabeth's son (but his brother Richard miraculously escaped that fate thanks to being her beloved Richard of Gloucester's namesake).
Those parts were what spoilt the book for me. I would have forgiven it had Penman been an overall bad author, had she been not good with evil characters, not in her element... But she is. She is a good author, good with "evil" characters, good with tensions and rivalry. So this misstep of her is even more unforgivable. I don't care about dry facts, and we have not a lot of documentation on the Woodvilles anyway. She writes a fiction, not a parody. And bad characters ultimately make bad fictions. And she almost destroyed her own work with what felt a personal vendetta against the Woodvilles. For them, she had been the worst Yorkist slanderer I've seen so far. And I don't like it.
When I read about characters in a fiction, be they on the good or bad side, I like to be given the choice of whether I pity them, like them, forgive them, or hate them. I want to be given good reasons for that, not hastily assembled ones. I hate having my free-will hammered at by the author's personal feelings. And that's exactly what I felt here. Being forced, not subtly, to see them as evil, stupid, violent, and to hate them, and to burn a candle for Saint Anne and Saint Richard.
No. No can do. And I'm growing angry. And hating it. And I want to fling your book into a wall. You're lucky you've done wonders with Warwick, George, even Margaret of Anjou and her son. That's what saved your book. And that's why I condemn you so harshly for it Penman. You were able, for a few pages, to paint a nice if cold and full of pride Edward of Lancaster. Why were you not able to portray an evil (if you want so) but clever, calculating and greedy (but not ridiculously so) Woodvilles ? The kind we wouldn't be surprised to see in power ? Why not make us understand why Edward IV, who was far from an idiot, trusted them ? Because in the characters you draw, so blatantly stupid and evil... No, I don't see why Ned and others would have trusted them. I don't see how they could even have tenants. I can't see why the King would give his precious son and heir into the keeping of a coward and idiot man like Anthony Woodville. And no, I can't see Edward IV being forced into it by his evil wife. He is no Henry VI and I doubt she was a she-wolf and even as determined and subtle as Margaret of Anjou.
So yeah... What should have been a great experience for me turned just ok because of that big mistake. The worm in the apple it was and I was disgusted by it to the point of being unable to stomach the book furthermore. Thanks to some encouragements I did. But I won't relive it again.
Still, to end on a happier note, I've really loved the other characters and now I'm compelled to learn more about George of Clarence than I did before. Him I want to understand. And I think I can imagine how everyone put up with him for so long. That's what I call a good "evil character". (The better would be Warwick still).