Short story. 35 pages.
Well, okay then. I am not into BDSM but enjoy reading very, very light versions of it. This was not light. And maybe if I found BDSM stimulating I would enjoy it, but I mostly cringed and would say, "Ouch" out loud. The dom/sub relationship is very strong in this story with the ending making me wonder whether the sub would survive. But if you're really into this lifestyle, this is the story for you.
Now how do I rate this story. Not much plot, strong sexual situations, I cared for neither character but I don't know if that wasn't intentional by the author. Would I read this story again? No, but that's personal preference not because of bad writing. So you see my dilemma. I want to give it a 3 but I think maybe if I enjoyed the subject matter I would have enjoyed the story more and would have given it a better rating. So I don't know if this is a cop-out or not, but I'm giving it a 3. I will definitely read this author again, hopefully writing something different.