I had pretty high expectations going into this book. I haven’t read the author’s other work but I’m aware of her. And the synopsis made it seem like this book would be right up my alley. At the beginning, I was certain this was going to be a five-star read for me. We had a girl behaving irrationally, with paranoia over being watched on the school security cameras to the point she is willing to murder her vice principal or kill herself to escape them. Mix in some nonconsensual memory-erasure and a concern that the people raising the teen characters are not their actual biological parents, and you have the makings of an incredible sci-fi thriller. I was so ready for this to be my next favorite book.
But then it turned out the teens had the whole plot figured out in practically the first quarter of the book. There was nothing for the reader to figure out, no clues doled out to allow us to put together the puzzle pieces and figure out what was going on. The story devolved into the teens hashing and rehashing their theories over and over, and the plot became convoluted. By the end it sounded like they were just trying to force the pieces together to fit a story that really didn’t make sense. In the end there was no government conspiracy, no evil organization. Characters died for no real purpose other than unfortunate little accidents. Some characters had no point or purpose in the story other than to solve what appeared to be problems on the author’s end. For example, there are several mentions made of a character named Andre, who is part of the main characters’ friend group. Except he never actually appears in the book save for one brief moment where he hands a razor blade to another character to be used as a weapon later. Could she not have gotten a razor blade from anywhere else? I don’t understand why Andre was even in the book. There is also a scene where the teens steal some encrypted files, and they reach out to a teen whose sole purpose in the book was to decrypt those files. Cassidy actually had a very interesting role to play in the beginning, as the main character’s younger sister’s love interest, and she had a backstory about being trapped in a religious organization with homophobic, abusive parents. But once she decrypts the files for the main character, she is never seen again. She served her purpose and the character was then just dropped from the book, same as Andre.
Speaking of stealing classified files, my largest problem with this book is that, despite being called “Someone is Always Watching,” it turns out nobody was ever watching! I imagined that since all the main characters were teenagers involuntarily being experimented on, that they would be closely monitored. But they freely spy, break and enter, and steal without consequence or really any fear of being caught. It was just too easy for them to go sneaking around and Gabrielle’s whole hangup about security cameras, which were expected to play a huge role in the story that took its title from that issue, turned out to just be Gabrielle’s personal issue from childhood and had nothing to do with anybody else and never really came into play after the inciting incident. The adults in the story never have any idea what’s going on, even with their own children. Absent adults are often a problematic issue in YA books, but in this case it was an especially questionable choice because they were supposed to be scientists running an experiment, and they had absolutely no clue what was happening with their subjects at any point in the book.
The first quarter of the book felt really polished, fleshed-out and filled with what I expected to be clues to unlocking the big mystery behind the rest of the book. But the longer I read, the more convoluted and rushed the story felt. The beginning feels like a finished product, but everything after the halfway mark feels like a first draft still pending editing. Suddenly a lot of things seemed to just be summarized instead of the reader getting to see the scenes fully play out, more like an outline was being drafted than the second half of a book being written. Devon kidnapped Gabrielle, but she suddenly pops out of nowhere in the final scene, and the reader never knows how she was kidnapped, from where, where she’d been held or how. The biggest mystery in the book revolved around “where’s Gabrielle and who took her?” and we actually never find out those things.
I was confused as to why one character's perspective was written in first-person but everyone else's chapters were written in third. I didn't notice at first, but once I did, it felt distracting. I liked reading from Blythe's perspective the best because she felt like the most fully-realized character, but it also made me not care about the other characters as much because there was an obvious focus on Blythe.
I was also distracted by the names of the siblings, Tanya and Tucker. I couldn't help think about country music singer Tanya Tucker every time. Was that an intentional reference? If so, maybe some clues should be sprinkled into the story. Maybe their dad is a big Tanya Tucker fan. Otherwise, it was distracting and didn't make sense.
I also noted some dated language, like when the main character uses the word “ticker-tape.” I had no idea what that is, and I’m in my 40s. Google explained the concept to me but said the word had fallen out of use by 1970. So I don’t understand why teens would be using a word like that, or how teens today would be expected to understand it when they see it.
I feel like there are good bones and serious potential to this book but they need fleshing out. I was very invested in the beginning, but the more I read, the less I enjoyed it. In its current state I would not be able to recommend this book and I would not purchase a copy to reread it.