Avg: 2.73/5
The Tomb: 3.5/5
This is the first Lovecraftian story I read. At first, I wasn't sure where the story was going, but through it's progression, it became clear that the lines between reality and hallucination were being blurred and that is an aspect I enjoy in some fiction. The story had a nice philosophical point of view on people who only believe what their physical faculties allow them to observe which leaves open the possibility of mystical supernatural phenomenon being real and it leaves us with the question of whether the main character is truly mentally ill or if he is indeed gifted with the ability to have direct connection with supernatural elements in the world around him and an ability to have correspondence with the dead. The chilling atmosphere created by Lovecraft when the main character "enters" the famous tomb was also enjoyable. Overall, an interesting trip into the psyche of a disturbed (or gifted?) character.
The Festival: 3.5/5
I really enjoyed the descriptive writing style of this story. The line between reality and hallucination is also blurred, similarly to The Tomb, but we have a much more active environment in which terrifying things are occurring. I would have preferred if the end of this "nightmare" had a more frightening conclusion, perhaps some physical confrontation with a scarier descriptiveness, but overall, the story was really engaging and leaves us wanting to know more about the truth behind the town of Kingsport.
Imprisoned with the Pharaohs: 2/5
An exotic trip to Egypt, this story gives us a dark and twisted version of ancient Egyptian culture and beliefs. The oriental world of this North African country which is full of thousands of years of complex history from the days of the pharaohs to the Greco-Roman conquest and Arab rule is explored during this trip, with Lovecraft making sure to mention all of the facets of the events that took place on this land. Although rich in cultural references and a skilled use of ancient Egyptian mythology to describe a unique horror narrative, this story felt slow, drowning the reader in long descriptions of the trip at the expense of excitement. The pull of intrigue Lovecraft has on the reader is still present as it always has been so far in this collection of short stories, but the sea of details and the final climax of the story felt too predictable and unsatisfying. The blur between reality and imagination that Lovecraft seems to enjoy utilizing is still there, but not as skilfully used as in the prior two short stories in my opinion. I also would have personally preferred him mentioning that he ended up being found outside the pyramid and the police not finding a man that matched the description of the deceptive guide at the very end of the story, since this revelation that took place before the end further removed the suspense of what was going to happen later, which was one thing that i was curious about. A positive aspect of this story is how it demonstrates Lovecraft's ability to immerse us in detailed worlds that are vastly different from each other, some taking place in the West and others in places such as Egypt where the culture and way of life distinctly differ from that of Europe. He is skilled at immersing the reader into the worlds he makes use of.
He: 3/5
Being written at the start of the 20th century, I assume this is Lovecraft's way of describing how the older, more tranquil and reflective days were being replaced by the modern and busy city life where everyone is obsessed with the urban demands of work and productivity. The protagonist describes his failed attempts to allow the city of New York to awaken poetic inspirations in him, but instead, he is greeted with the hollowness of the modern urban life. This was also the first Lovecraft story I read which directly described something pretty disturbing and scary, when the old man begins to decay and turns into a black head with bulging eyes. I enjoyed how the story ended up with a descent into madness and chaos, in a way that seemed to be more intense than the last 3 stories I've read. Where it falls short however, is maintaining that mystique and intrigue throughout the story the same way The Tomb or The Festival did. With those ones, the entirety of the story had that creepy allure, but the conclusions weren't as intensely disturbing as this story, in my opinion at least. The signature Lovecraftian blur between what is real and what is hallucination is also present in this story, since by the end of it, we are left wondering if any of what happened was real, or just another hallucination.
The Horror at Red Hook: 3/5
Reading this was a weird ride, since the beginning of the story gave me nothing but general disinterest, the climax a "oh, not this again" reaction, but the end of the story somehow overshadowed my initial lukewarm reaction and I ended up having a positive impression on the story overall. At the beginning, the way he described a modern city with "mysterious horrors" lurking underneath felt too cliche and uninteresting. I also caught a distinct feel of anti-immigration and a closed off attitude towards newcomers in the country, since he seemed to favour the European inhabitants of the city as opposed to the immigrants who spoke different dialects which he finds annoying. His reference of Yezidis as satanic primitive tribes has a narrow-minded view to it, even if it's only fiction, since he paints non-western culture as somehow antagonistic, but I assume that was a norm for an American guy back then. The climax underneath the cellar felt too similar to the one in "Imprisoned with the Pharaohs", where the protagonist was just idly observing atrocities taking place, being described in over the top literary language. As usual, we end the story not being so certain on whether what happened was imagination or reality which gives me the impression that Lovecraft tends to recycle old ideas in several different stories. However, the creepiness of the ending and the more evident links that might imply that what happened was indeed reality gave a spooky feel to the story which I enjoyed, so the ending redeemed this story for me which I would have otherwise given a lower rating.
The Strange High House in the Mist: 2/5
This story takes place in the same location as The Festival. Kingsport seems to be a very interesting town and I liked the connection between this story and The Festival. This makes me wonder if all of Lovecraft's stories take place in the same universe. However, the story itself here felt boring to me. The lore and world development were a bit on the lazy end, with things being a bit too vague. We mainly know that this cottage on the cliff has an entity that steals people's sense of adventure and wonder once they visit it and that part of their soul remains there as evident by the increased laughter the others here from that cottage (though I don't know how they would hear it from such a great distance). However, the vagueness of the story and it's oversimplicity didn't really impress me, but a nice revisit to Kingsport and a nice mention of the hospital next to the graveyard where the protagonist of The Festival was at the end of that story.
In the Walls of Eryx: 4.5/5
A refreshing change to the previous stories and the first sci-fi story I read by Lovecraft! Despite it being lengthy, I was completely drawn to the story and actively blocked out any distraction to fully immerse myself. Lovecraft does a great job creating a highly interesting world in set on the planet Venus. The mysterious reptilian race, the mirage plants, other types of wildlife and a mysterious history which we never completely unravel, which leaves me craving more of this world. This story does an excellent job in feeling so complete and satisfying yet making me want more. It also sparked my interest in sci-fi and that's saying something since I wasn't interested in this genre before. I believe the world built in this short story could have been developed into an entire novel or perhaps a series. The ending is a very sharp description of human nature and the obsession they have to annihilate everything just to get a treasure they want, in this case, the crystals. What makes this a great read is the fact that the story is fairly straightforward and more or less predictable, but the way it was written hooks you to every step of it.
The Evil Clergyman: 2/5
Spooky and ominous story, but it didn't do more than build a scary atmosphere. I didn't understand why the events took place, what the significance of that light was and what was going on in general. I was going to give it a lower rating but the ending gave an unexpected and somewhat disturbing twist that made the story a slightly better experience for me. I don't have more to say on this story and according to the chronology of Lovecraft's work at the end of this book, this was the last story he ever wrote.
The Beast in the Cave: 3/5
This story started out as very interesting. One thing I notice when reading Lovecraft is that I enjoy his stories way more when he doesn't spend a lot of time drowning the reader in descriptions, mainly describing grotesque and terrifying things using a large array of descriptive language and instead, keeps the plot moving and creating a suspenseful atmosphere that leaves me hanging onto every word. This story was fairly simple, (spoiler alert), a guy gets lost in a cave, thinks he's going to die, hears a creature approaching him, hits it with rocks and manages to escape and find his way back to his group and comes back to inspect the creature. The writing style was so captivating however. The ending was kind of underwhelming to me and it felt like the story built up to a climactic ending that just never came. I liked the idea of this "trap" though, of Lovecraft seducing the reader with excellent storytelling and pacing, only for the ending to be pretty average, though the final revelation of the nature of that beast does have a nice impact.
The Alchemist: 3/5
We now get to the older stories written by Lovecraft. The method of storytelling in this one did a good job in keeping me hooked, wanting to read more and making the experience a smooth one, but the ending felt unsatisfying, since the conclusion of the story felt like lazy writing. The fact that it took centuries for someone to finally discover that old passage underneath the mansion is a bit unrealistic, since I would assume anyone would probably want to explore the entirety of the house they live in. The way Lovecraft treated the whole identity of that sinister man the protagonist found in that secret location as a mystery felt comical, since it was obvious that this man was Charles Le Sorcier. I think anyone with common sense could figure that out. The big “shocking” reveal that abruptly ended the story was the revelation that this man was Charles, which the reader probably already knew, so it ended in an underwhelming way. Another aspect that was hard to believe was the fact that no one managed to break the poison vile before Charles murdered them with it. I was also confused on the method of killing. If Charles’s father was killed with poison and that was the way Charles exacted revenge, why was one of the people murdered killed by an arrow? Also, if Charles was immortal and couldn’t die, how did the protagonist manage to survive and live for 90 years? Not counting these holes of plot logic that I found, the smooth reading experience is what makes me give this a 3-star rating, since I don’t want to judge the entire reading experience with the unsatisfying ending.
Poetry and the Gods: 2/5
A story about a girl who isn’t happy with her bleak and mundane human life and falls asleep while reading poetry and has a dream in which she’s surrounded by ancient deities and is experiencing bliss. The dream is described vividly with literary style. Though the descriptive writing is good, I’m not much of a fan, since I prefer stories with plot progression and action going on. The ending was nice and pleasant. Not a horror story at all, just a descriptive piece.
The Street: 1.5/5
Another story where Lovecraft seems to paint immigration in a negative light, but unlike “He”, this story was on the boring end. It described how an area which was formerly good because of its original inhabitants gradually fell into deterioration because the original inhabitants left, and new foreign ones came in. These foreign inhabitants were sinister and were planning to dismantle the country and most of the story was contrasting the new life of the area with the old one and how terrible the current state was. I felt no suspense or climax or any interesting point in the story, probably because I prefer action/plot driven stories more.
The Transition of Juan Romero: 2.5/5
Another change of setting from the gothic English vibes, this story was centered around Native American/Mexican cultural associations. We also got to see more of Lovecraft’s racist disposition by reading how he called brown skinned Mexicans “ignorant and dirty” in the story. That won’t play a role in my rating however since I’m reviewing the story itself and not the author’s ideologies. The pacing of the story kept it interesting and the mysterious ending was ominous in the usual Lovecraftian way of blurring the lines between dream and reality, but Lovecraft didn’t give us a reason why everything happened and we were left with many questions, like what was under that abyss and the truth behind that ring he had and why everything happened. Sometimes, keeping things unknown adds a good sense of mystery to the story, but at other times, like this one, it just seems like lazy writing which takes away from the quality of the story instead of adding to it.
Incomplete Work: (No Ratings)
Azathoth:
This seems to be a bit similar to Poetry and the Gods, talking about a man sick of mundane city life and dreaming of something more. The descriptive writing was beautiful and I found it more digestible than Poetry and the Gods.
The Descendant:
I enjoyed reading this incomplete story. I’m not sure what the protagonist finding the Necronomicon has to do with Lord Northam suddenly opening up about his life. I was getting into reading his backstory and then the story ended abruptly since it was unfinished. I would’ve liked to see it continue.
The Book:
Another incomplete story I enjoyed. The protagonist finds a book that severs his connection with the material world and allows him to dip in and out of other dimensions. The brief trips he described were exciting. The whole felt like a magical book induced acid trip.
The Thing in the Moonlight:
I really enjoyed this. I enjoy the idea of being stuck in a dream and unable to wake up. I wish Lovecraft expanded on this and perhaps turned it into a novella where the protagonist would have to find a way out of that dream.