I love Jackie Kay's style of taking different perspectives and interweaving them. The first half of this book, The Adoption Papers, is thought-provoking and uncomfortable. The adoptive mother's perspective is the strongest for me, the most fleshed out, but perhaps I only feel that as a white woman who'd like to adopt! Or perhaps it's because she has power over the other two voices, or because Kay is drawing on her intimate, nuanced knowing of her mother. The two other voices are more about body-sense and emotion is signified more viscerally. This could be a really subtle way to suggest the physical distance of the adoptive mother.
The second part Severe Gale 8 now seems to cohere as a personal and political commentary of British life in the 1980s. Kay again moves through the perspectives of different narrators, a little like Carol Ann Duffy in The World's Wife, but while Duffy seems to deal with fully formed, exaggerated literary personae for a multicoloured, larger than life effect, Kay's narrators only partly reveal themselves; they are more outward-looking, yet Kay positions them carefully, delineating the structures of power and identity around them. There is much great telling here. The last poem about stealing a baby in particular takes a nuanced, empathetic approach