Chasing Clovers is a strongly penned read, very emotional. It gets at the heart of the reader and had me gripped from the start. I love books about people running from their pasts because, as we all know, you can run but your past will always catch you. I enjoy seeing characters come to this realization as the things they try to run from catch up to them.
I don't read a lot of Westerns, but I don't know why. I like reading about the simplicity of Ranch life, especially during simpler times such as portrayed in this book. And of course a work-roughened cowboy doesn't hurt either!
Before I go any further, I want to address some other reviews of this book I read criticizing the fact that the character, the hero, profess faith in God but use foul language and make bad decisions. Firstly, this is by no means an Inspirational or Christian romance. Yes, the hero John has a strong faith in God. He has leaned on God to help him move past the death of his first wife. I found this to be the most attractive aspect of his personality. Instead of shaking his fist at the sky and cursing his bad luck, John thanks God for what he still has....his health, his ranch, friends, beautiful children. Shouldn't we all be so optimistic? So what if John says a few curse words or lets his temper get the best of him? People who believe in God are not perfect people...in fact, it is their imperfection that causes them to rely on God. This is one of the reasons why, despite being a Christian woman myself, I do not read a lot of Christian romances, because I get sick of lily white characters with their piousness. It's unrealistic. People are flawed. It is because these characters are flawed that I identified with them and wanted to see them end up together.
Now, on to the rest of the review. My favorite characters in the book were John, Ezekiel the cook, and John's children. What a sweet little family our heroine, Olivia, has a chance of becoming a part of. My heart ached for John and his kids after the death of their wife and mother and I wanted them to find happiness.
I will say that Olivia took some time to grow on me. On the one hand, the issue of her sexual abuse and the death of her daughter made her a sympathetic character. Losing a child is every mother's worse nightmare, and Olivia is barely hanging on after she loses her baby girl. However, I found her treatment of John's daughter to be a bit over the top. Upon coming into John's home, she treats the girl bad (but not the son) just because she's a girl. I wasn't fond of how Olivia used her pain to lash out at a little girl who was mourning the loss of her mother. I found it to be a bit immature on her part to not be able to see past her own pain and understand this little girl was hurting just as badly as she was. However, she redeemed herself toward the end with actions I won't give away for fear of spoiling the story. Let's say that by the end she'd more than made up for it and I was able to like her more as a character.
Aside from that, I also had a hard time understanding some of the characters' actions in relation to their circumstances and/or portrayed personalities. For one thing, Olivia continues to go on and on about how she doesn't need anybody, yet she has answered this ad to become a mail order bride because she has nothing else. In her thoughts we are reminded of her past rape and the fact that she's terrified of men and the thought of having to have sex with John. Then why get married? At some point it had to occur to her that a husband was going to want intimacy from her. Then there's John, who brings this woman into his home and then proceeds to question whether or not he can 'betray' his dead first wife by marrying her. Then why even send for her? It just annoyed me, mainly because I felt there was too much internal dialog. The characters were in their own heads too much, and the same emotions were being rehashed over and over, which lessened their impact. I couldn't feel as bad for them when I was annoyed for having to read the same thought patterns over and over again. I also felt John's reaction to Olivia coming out with the truth about her past to be horrible. He was diminished as a hero in my eyes when he starts with the name calling and accusations. It just seemed so out of character, as if the author forced it in order to make his actions fit the turn of the story. I get why he had to react...so that things would pan out the way they were, but it didn't feel right and made me sick to my stomach to see John act in such a way.
Aside from those things, I very much enjoyed this story and I liked the ending. I liked that it didn't wrap up too prettily and the characters had time for reflection before getting back together in the end. At the end of the day, Chasing Clovers was a truly romantic and enjoyable story, one that does not contain consummated sexual scenes for those who prefer not to read those. I did appreciate the subtle sensuality of kisses shared by John and Olivia. Their chemistry was real and endearing. Kat Flannery's debut novel is a success as far as I'm concerned and I'm looking forward to seeing what else she's got up her sleeve in the future. I think she's off to a smashing start!