Tracing the long, winding road of Avi's career isn't easy, but No More Magic, first published in 1975, is one of his earliest works. The word choice and sentence structure are kind of wandery, with less attention paid to form than conveying the story in a way true to the minds and hearts of the young characters. When Chris wakes up the morning after spending Halloween as his favorite superhero, the Green Lantern, he knows he made a mistake. Last night he left his bike outside, and it's gone. Chris was proud of that bike his mother found at Mr. Bullen's junk yard, a bike the exact shade the Green Lantern wears. Sick at his stomach, Chris tries to find the stolen bike around town in the obvious places, but he needs help. His parents will be disappointed he wasn't careful with his cherished possession.
"My father is always saying that when you have an idea you have to test it out on other people, cause when you talk to yourself nobody is listening."
—Chris, P. 32
Chris's mom and dad are less upset than he. They suggest returning to Mr. Bullen to get another used bike, but Chris isn't ready to let his go. He and his dad compile a list of facts about the case, including kids who trick-or-treated at the house and what costumes they wore. Can Chris pinpoint the identity of every one? Masks and makeup complicate the process, but he narrows it down to a few suspects. The main one is a kid who dressed as a warlock; who was that? Chris's best friend Eddie says it was Muffin, a new girl who lives with her aunt. Chris heads to meet and investigate her, but is charmed by Muffin. Her parents are gone and she is shy, but willing to help Chris. She's more forthcoming than Eddie about last night, and Chris's suspicions turn on his best friend.
"Get the questions right before you get the answers wrong."
—No More Magic, P. 9
As recriminations fly between Chris, Eddie, and Muffin, the case gets muddled. Why did Muffin's parents leave? Is Chris's stolen bike magical as Muffin believes, and its disappearance linked to the absence of her parents? How does Mr. Podler, the town drunk who claims he saw a kid riding Chris's bike on Halloween, fit into this mess? How about Mr. Bullen, who Chris suspects may have stolen back the bike he sold him? What about Chris's older brother Mike, who has his own secrets? Chris claims that on a night after the theft, he witnessed his bike flying across the sky, and that the incident proves real magic is afoot. The central question remains: who took Chris's bike, and where is it? Relationships hang in the balance as Chris finds himself on the verge of an answer.
No More Magic isn’t the height of Avi’s literary powers, but it has a winsome quality. The story reflects the mindset of a kid who has lost something special and is desperate to connect threads that, to a dispassionate observer, aren’t connected at all. This culminates in Chris, Eddie, and Muffin's delightfully deranged denouement to Police Chief Byers at the end, proud of themselves for supposedly cracking the case. The narrative they present makes close to zero sense, but reveals how young minds operate. Parts of No More Magic are confusing, and I wish Chris, Eddie, and Muffin's ages were given so the reader can better frame their behavior, but I'll rate this book the full two stars. It has grown on me since I turned the last page.