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Seven Kings of Jinn #1
Smokeless Fire
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When eighteen year old Ari Johnson is transported from her bedroom into the chilling realm of Mount Qaf - home to the terrifying and mercurial Jinn - she learns a truth that rocks her very world. Suddenly her anxiety over college and her broken friendship with Charlie seem like small change compared to the war she now finds herself stuck in the middle of. Her unease isn’t lessened any by the hot guardian, Jai, who won’t stop following her around everywhere - a Jinn whose loyalty Ari hates to question but must. She has no idea who she can trust.
When the truth burns through her life in its determination to turn it to ashes, Ari will have to battle with ancient deadly creatures, epic family drama and heart-wrenching romantic entanglements.
When eighteen year old Ari Johnson is transported from her bedroom into the chilling realm of Mount Qaf - home to the terrifying and mercurial Jinn - she learns a truth that rocks her very world. Suddenly her anxiety over college and her broken friendship with Charlie seem like small change compared to the war she now finds herself stuck in the middle of. Her unease isn’t lessened any by the hot guardian, Jai, who won’t stop following her around everywhere - a Jinn whose loyalty Ari hates to question but must. She has no idea who she can trust.
When the truth burns through her life in its determination to turn it to ashes, Ari will have to battle with ancient deadly creatures, epic family drama and heart-wrenching romantic entanglements.
358 pages, ebook
First published October 20, 2011
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December 23, 2011
1 very generous star.
This book got a lot of five stars and enthusiastic commendation. I delved in expecting to like the book. I mean, it's about Jinn—something that I haven't read about yet! So why such a low rating? What is wrong with me?
I know, I’m sorry. But I was so very annoyed with this book that only the catharsis of expelling my frustration into this review could give me some peace.
There were so many problems with this book. From the editing, the sluggish plot, lack of credible myth building, and character un-development, the book got worse and worse as I turned the pages.
Synopsis
There are beings called Jinn in the world, and Ari, our protagonist, is somehow related to their existence. Of course, Ari does not know about Jinn until her 18th birthday, when she gets a surprise visit from one of the Jinn. The rest of the story revolves around Ari coming to terms with her own destiny while dealing with teenage problems typical to YA novels: estranged relationship with parents; dealing with a friend who's lost his path; and of course the irrevocable love triangle.
A fairly interesting concept, right?
But wait. Here are some of the major problems I encountered:
1. Annoying protagonist : When we are first introduced to Ari, she’s portrayed as a lonely yet caring girl. She lives with a detached father whose business takes him away from his daughter months at a time. Ari’s only solace is a close childhood friend who has spiraled down into a dark depression filled with drugs, alcohol, and sex after the death of his brother.
At first, I sympathized with Ari’s constant efforts to get things back under control, especially since the two men in her life keep pushing her away. But here’s the thing: despite all of Ari’s efforts, they still hurt her purposely, and you know what? She repeatedly takes their crap. To top it off, she lashes out at other people and emotionally hurts them after suffering such numerous setbacks. My reaction towards Ari's reactions slipped very quickly from sympathy, to disbelief, to annoyance, and finally to wanting to pound her face in.
For example (one of many, really), Ari has a huge crush on Charlie and so deep in love is she that she keeps taking his crap after (1) dragging him out of his druggie friends’ house only to have him crawl back for another high; (2) demanding that he get a medical exam to ensure he’s STD free—yes, he is THAT much of a manwhore; and (3) catching him having sex on her dad’s bed during her birthday party. That Ari not only opens her arms for the creep but also continues to be his emotional crutch and whipping post after all of that astounds me. Even worse, despite her complaints about how lonely she is, she basically abandons her friends again and again to be with Charlie.
2. Hazy myth building : Jinn are beings not dealt with much in paranormal YA, and while I could see veritable effort in creating a new Jinn mythos, there were too many gaping holes in it for me to be convinced. The concept of different classes of Jinn was interesting, especially since the Seven Kings hold dominion not over land, but over a day of the week. Talk about separation of power! But unlike our executive, legislative, and judicial branches of government, the Jinn system does not allow for any interaction among the kings and conflict arises from the strict need to keep dominions separated.
However, the author’s way of streamlining this Jinn myth into the real world was highly unoriginal and unrealistic. Mainly, the magic system is, well, omnipotent:
Wait, what? All you have to do is believe and thou shalt receive? No tradeoffs? No consequences? No going to school to hone your magical abilities? So, if you believe in a billion dollars, a private island, and an endless supply of pina coladas, it will happen? Granted, the money and the island must come from somewhere, but for one person to have such a power with little limitations is unbelievable.
Ari’s own unique powers, which I won’t spoil, reach even more preposterous heights. All I can say is, Ari, girl, just take over the freaking world already because you are more than capable of doing so.
3. Sluggish plot : After the birthday party, things slowed down considerably. While there were some minor developments, things came to a standstill until her jaunt to Roswell, New Mexico.
4. Quality control : I realize that the author is independently published, but this book needs serious editing. The language was very colloquial. There are better ways to display your character’s frustration than making them call someone an asshat or douchebag. Because, frankly, it sounds very juvenile. I understand teens say dumb shit, but seeing this in dialogue over and over again really made the characters unlikable.
Overall, I was frustrated with this novel. It has potential and an interesting premise. But the characters and plot were very under developed. Maybe this novel is intended for the younger audience, but I found everything overly simplistic and without substantial direction.
1 star and not recommended at all.
This book got a lot of five stars and enthusiastic commendation. I delved in expecting to like the book. I mean, it's about Jinn—something that I haven't read about yet! So why such a low rating? What is wrong with me?
I know, I’m sorry. But I was so very annoyed with this book that only the catharsis of expelling my frustration into this review could give me some peace.
There were so many problems with this book. From the editing, the sluggish plot, lack of credible myth building, and character un-development, the book got worse and worse as I turned the pages.
Synopsis
There are beings called Jinn in the world, and Ari, our protagonist, is somehow related to their existence. Of course, Ari does not know about Jinn until her 18th birthday, when she gets a surprise visit from one of the Jinn. The rest of the story revolves around Ari coming to terms with her own destiny while dealing with teenage problems typical to YA novels: estranged relationship with parents; dealing with a friend who's lost his path; and of course the irrevocable love triangle.
A fairly interesting concept, right?
But wait. Here are some of the major problems I encountered:
1. Annoying protagonist : When we are first introduced to Ari, she’s portrayed as a lonely yet caring girl. She lives with a detached father whose business takes him away from his daughter months at a time. Ari’s only solace is a close childhood friend who has spiraled down into a dark depression filled with drugs, alcohol, and sex after the death of his brother.
At first, I sympathized with Ari’s constant efforts to get things back under control, especially since the two men in her life keep pushing her away. But here’s the thing: despite all of Ari’s efforts, they still hurt her purposely, and you know what? She repeatedly takes their crap. To top it off, she lashes out at other people and emotionally hurts them after suffering such numerous setbacks. My reaction towards Ari's reactions slipped very quickly from sympathy, to disbelief, to annoyance, and finally to wanting to pound her face in.
For example (one of many, really), Ari has a huge crush on Charlie and so deep in love is she that she keeps taking his crap after (1) dragging him out of his druggie friends’ house only to have him crawl back for another high; (2) demanding that he get a medical exam to ensure he’s STD free—yes, he is THAT much of a manwhore; and (3) catching him having sex on her dad’s bed during her birthday party. That Ari not only opens her arms for the creep but also continues to be his emotional crutch and whipping post after all of that astounds me. Even worse, despite her complaints about how lonely she is, she basically abandons her friends again and again to be with Charlie.
2. Hazy myth building : Jinn are beings not dealt with much in paranormal YA, and while I could see veritable effort in creating a new Jinn mythos, there were too many gaping holes in it for me to be convinced. The concept of different classes of Jinn was interesting, especially since the Seven Kings hold dominion not over land, but over a day of the week. Talk about separation of power! But unlike our executive, legislative, and judicial branches of government, the Jinn system does not allow for any interaction among the kings and conflict arises from the strict need to keep dominions separated.
However, the author’s way of streamlining this Jinn myth into the real world was highly unoriginal and unrealistic. Mainly, the magic system is, well, omnipotent:
“Jai insisted that she use her magic for everyday things. He said there was no one muscle that needed to be worked, no inner power that had to be tapped into or explored. It was all about believing. It was as simple as that. Ari had to believe that if she wanted a glass of water that she could conjure it. Or a bag of chips.”
Wait, what? All you have to do is believe and thou shalt receive? No tradeoffs? No consequences? No going to school to hone your magical abilities? So, if you believe in a billion dollars, a private island, and an endless supply of pina coladas, it will happen? Granted, the money and the island must come from somewhere, but for one person to have such a power with little limitations is unbelievable.
Ari’s own unique powers, which I won’t spoil, reach even more preposterous heights. All I can say is, Ari, girl, just take over the freaking world already because you are more than capable of doing so.
3. Sluggish plot : After the birthday party, things slowed down considerably. While there were some minor developments, things came to a standstill until her jaunt to Roswell, New Mexico.
4. Quality control : I realize that the author is independently published, but this book needs serious editing. The language was very colloquial. There are better ways to display your character’s frustration than making them call someone an asshat or douchebag. Because, frankly, it sounds very juvenile. I understand teens say dumb shit, but seeing this in dialogue over and over again really made the characters unlikable.
Overall, I was frustrated with this novel. It has potential and an interesting premise. But the characters and plot were very under developed. Maybe this novel is intended for the younger audience, but I found everything overly simplistic and without substantial direction.
1 star and not recommended at all.
March 29, 2012
First of all my expectations were low.
Why?
Because I was dumb enough to read some of the lower star'ed reviews. Thankfully, I was smart enough to check it out for myself.
This book is FUCKING AWESOME!
Sorry for cursing, but if you havn't read this yet.... then WHAT THE FUCK?
I loved it and frankly if you don't love it then you just aren't as cool as me... and that is okay... only a certain amount of people can be cool as me and walk this planet... (I'm so humble.)
Regardless...
THINGS I LOVED:
-New supernaturals
-Different type of female main character... some readers felt she took alot of crap from people... WHAT THE FUCK? She's a teenage girl that has been abandoned most of her life... You want her to be stabbing and arguing with everybody for minor offenses like "friends that only care about themselves"?
-I liked both love interests... and yes! There are two. What the fuck is wrong with everybody hating a love triangle... just go fuck yourselves! (sorry... that's pent-up anger)
Charles is really flawed. Loved it!
Jai is pretty battered. Awesopme!
Thing I disliked:
-The first two chapters took a minute to get through.... I had too trudge through all of the thoughts, emotions, into of friends.... thankfully once I got through that... it was great.
Why?
Because I was dumb enough to read some of the lower star'ed reviews. Thankfully, I was smart enough to check it out for myself.
This book is FUCKING AWESOME!
Sorry for cursing, but if you havn't read this yet.... then WHAT THE FUCK?
I loved it and frankly if you don't love it then you just aren't as cool as me... and that is okay... only a certain amount of people can be cool as me and walk this planet... (I'm so humble.)
Regardless...
THINGS I LOVED:
-New supernaturals
-Different type of female main character... some readers felt she took alot of crap from people... WHAT THE FUCK? She's a teenage girl that has been abandoned most of her life... You want her to be stabbing and arguing with everybody for minor offenses like "friends that only care about themselves"?
-I liked both love interests... and yes! There are two. What the fuck is wrong with everybody hating a love triangle... just go fuck yourselves! (sorry... that's pent-up anger)
Charles is really flawed. Loved it!
Jai is pretty battered. Awesopme!
Thing I disliked:
-The first two chapters took a minute to get through.... I had too trudge through all of the thoughts, emotions, into of friends.... thankfully once I got through that... it was great.
January 26, 2022
4.5 Stars!
(ARC provided by author)
-The need Ari felt just looking at him was overwhelming, her chest tightening so much so she could barely breathe.
(ARC provided by author)
-The need Ari felt just looking at him was overwhelming, her chest tightening so much so she could barely breathe.
June 10, 2014
1 star for the cover and it's trickery.
I disliked this so much.
Now, I usually read good reviews before I indulge in a book 'cause I don't like negative vibes when I read. Okay, maybe I read one or two but I don't take it in account as much as 4+ star reviews. Unfortunately, as much as I really tried to like Smokeless Fire, oh sweet baby Jesus, it even has a stupid name, I just couldn't.
Here are my reasons.
Ari. Ignorant, slut-shaming to the 10th degree, name calling, self centered, self-pitty, hates when people tell her what to do but loves to tell people off for their mistakes, thinks only of herself, blames people for not paying attention to her when she doesn't talk to them.
Here are some of her memorable, intelligent, 'witty' quotes that just stood out to me so much I just had to write them down.
She has a best friend named Rachel who is only ever nice and seems to tolerate her extreme bitchiness. She looks out for Ari, is always trying to be there for Ari, but all Ari does is push her away and think she's sticking her nose in her business. Ari doesn't treat Rachel nicely- much less respect her. Rachel even decorates her house for Ari's b-day party, hires a 'Genie' for entertainment and 'wish-granting'. And what does Rachel get in return?
It isn't nice reading a book when the main character keeps calling her 'best friend' anal. It isn't nice reading a book when the main character is so up her own ass that all she does is diss everyone around her that didn't do anything wrong.
If I knew Ari in person, I wouldn't be afraid to slap her across her face and ram her dumb head against the wall. Yes, that is how much I am disgusted and irritated by her disgusting character. It isn't 'cool' to constantly call people asshat, bitch, idiot. She even dissed the guy she claimed she was 'in-love' with.
That stubborn idiot being the one and only Charlie that she was constantly trying to 'change'.
Ari wasn't the only problem with this book. The writing was so boring I mean, it was meh, nothing special about it. I could tell that the Author tried desperately to make this sound so AMAZING, FUN, INTERESTING, EXCITING, DANGEROUS. I did not give even one ounce of a fuck.
It wasn't convincing, the world building was shit.
Now, let's move onto Jai the 'insta-sexual-interest'. Worst than 'insta-love' in my opinion.
Jai is assigned to 'guard' Ari because she's soooooooooo special for some fucking reason. She's not like ANY other girl. Ok guys?? She's an IMPORTANT! She's different!
Ari describes Jai as 'delicious' cause she lacks a better vocabulary. Ari is sooooooo attracted to him, like SOOOOO attracted to him, he's like freaking 23 years old and she just turned 18.
But because it is in Ari's nature, she manages to disrespect him as well!
But Jai thinks of her as someone SO SPECIAL.
Good to know her nasty personality doesn't effect the way she walks Jai! Thanks for letting me in on that!
If those paragraphs didn't convince you not to read this wretched book, then maybe these remaining paragraphs would.
HA! All Ari does in the beginning is assume Rachel wouldn't listen to her. Remain 'strong'? More like 'remain bitchy.'
Now, I usually don't mind cursing in books AT ALL. I find it funny sometimes. But Ari is non stop, she has a sick attitude and thinks everyone is against her. It's just the way she constantly curses.
Her other curse is 'Holy Macaroons!' What the fuck, she can't say 'shit' but she can call people anal? She's so messed up. I just can't.
And why the fuck is she insulted when she pushed them away and called them names? WHO EVEN CALLS SOMEONE AN ANAL? That's just wrong and so humorless.
So yadadadada, apparently the reason why no one ever 'stay's with her is because she's special. She's an 'Important.' Goddamnit, it has nothing to do with her heritage why people don't stick around her, it's because she has a disgusting personality! Everyone in this book acted immature, and even their conversations were board scratching bad.
I am so done.
currently losing hope I'll find a good YA book.
I disliked this so much.
Now, I usually read good reviews before I indulge in a book 'cause I don't like negative vibes when I read. Okay, maybe I read one or two but I don't take it in account as much as 4+ star reviews. Unfortunately, as much as I really tried to like Smokeless Fire, oh sweet baby Jesus, it even has a stupid name, I just couldn't.
Here are my reasons.
Ari. Ignorant, slut-shaming to the 10th degree, name calling, self centered, self-pitty, hates when people tell her what to do but loves to tell people off for their mistakes, thinks only of herself, blames people for not paying attention to her when she doesn't talk to them.
Here are some of her memorable, intelligent, 'witty' quotes that just stood out to me so much I just had to write them down.
“Or we could do something you want to do.”
He laughed bitterly, slamming his hands into his jean pockets and hunching over a little as they continued walking. “I wouldn’t let you do what I want to do.”
OK, maybe it was too early for patience. “What… get high? Get wasted. Sleep around with a bunch of STD-infected skanks.”
“Ari,” he moaned. “It’s too early for this shit.”
“Yeah well it’s never too early to catch a disease,” she snapped.
She has a best friend named Rachel who is only ever nice and seems to tolerate her extreme bitchiness. She looks out for Ari, is always trying to be there for Ari, but all Ari does is push her away and think she's sticking her nose in her business. Ari doesn't treat Rachel nicely- much less respect her. Rachel even decorates her house for Ari's b-day party, hires a 'Genie' for entertainment and 'wish-granting'. And what does Rachel get in return?
Ari flopped down at her computer desk and logged into her Twitter account. She scrolled through her friend’s tweets, her eyes narrowing at a certain comment. "Sometimes friendships are a one-way system. Sad but true. A hard lesson I learned this week.' “Bitch,” Ari hissed, clicking the unfollow button on Rachel’s profile. One guess as to who the little anal, straight-A, genie-hiring suckass was talking about.
It isn't nice reading a book when the main character keeps calling her 'best friend' anal. It isn't nice reading a book when the main character is so up her own ass that all she does is diss everyone around her that didn't do anything wrong.
Rachel was this completely anal, bossy, know-it-all, bratty, self-important type-A pain in the ass a lot of the time.
If I knew Ari in person, I wouldn't be afraid to slap her across her face and ram her dumb head against the wall. Yes, that is how much I am disgusted and irritated by her disgusting character. It isn't 'cool' to constantly call people asshat, bitch, idiot. She even dissed the guy she claimed she was 'in-love' with.
It was so selfish but Ari was glad the stubborn idiot didn’t want to leave her.
That stubborn idiot being the one and only Charlie that she was constantly trying to 'change'.
Ari wasn't the only problem with this book. The writing was so boring I mean, it was meh, nothing special about it. I could tell that the Author tried desperately to make this sound so AMAZING, FUN, INTERESTING, EXCITING, DANGEROUS. I did not give even one ounce of a fuck.
It wasn't convincing, the world building was shit.
Now, let's move onto Jai the 'insta-sexual-interest'. Worst than 'insta-love' in my opinion.
Jai is assigned to 'guard' Ari because she's soooooooooo special for some fucking reason. She's not like ANY other girl. Ok guys?? She's an IMPORTANT! She's different!
Ari describes Jai as 'delicious' cause she lacks a better vocabulary. Ari is sooooooo attracted to him, like SOOOOO attracted to him, he's like freaking 23 years old and she just turned 18.
But because it is in Ari's nature, she manages to disrespect him as well!
Ari shot him a hateful look. “What crawled up your butt? Did you find out you were the Seal of Solomon and the most sought after weapon in the history of the Jinn?” she mocked. “Oh no, wait, that was me.”
But Jai thinks of her as someone SO SPECIAL.
She smelled of the rich, exotic Dior perfume she wore all the time, a scent Jai would never be able to smell again without thinking about her. As he and Charlie followed her downstairs he noted the change in her gait. Ari was one of those rare girls who seemed to float from place to place when she walked, graceful and feminine.
Good to know her nasty personality doesn't effect the way she walks Jai! Thanks for letting me in on that!
If those paragraphs didn't convince you not to read this wretched book, then maybe these remaining paragraphs would.
“I’ve been freaking out for weeks about college, but I couldn’t even talk to my best friend about it because she would have turned her back on me the second I said I didn’t want to go.”
Rachel snapped her head back as if she’d been slapped. “Ari, that is so not true. I would have been there if you’d just talk to me. You blame it on me but you don’t talk to us! You didn’t even tell us your dad was in the hospital! What is wrong with you?” Her lips trembled and Ari had to hold herself back. Rachel was so close to crying. Ari couldn’t stand to see anyone cry.She shrugged, remaining strong.
HA! All Ari does in the beginning is assume Rachel wouldn't listen to her. Remain 'strong'? More like 'remain bitchy.'
Ari shook her head, hating everyone and everything at that moment. “You’re asshats."
Now, I usually don't mind cursing in books AT ALL. I find it funny sometimes. But Ari is non stop, she has a sick attitude and thinks everyone is against her. It's just the way she constantly curses.
Her other curse is 'Holy Macaroons!' What the fuck, she can't say 'shit' but she can call people anal? She's so messed up. I just can't.
Rachel and Staci were gone from her life (and so easily – it was a little insulting)
And why the fuck is she insulted when she pushed them away and called them names? WHO EVEN CALLS SOMEONE AN ANAL? That's just wrong and so humorless.
So yadadadada, apparently the reason why no one ever 'stay's with her is because she's special. She's an 'Important.' Goddamnit, it has nothing to do with her heritage why people don't stick around her, it's because she has a disgusting personality! Everyone in this book acted immature, and even their conversations were board scratching bad.
I am so done.
currently losing hope I'll find a good YA book.
December 27, 2011
Oh, boy. I want to feel sorry for Charlie. People do some pretty stupid things when they hurt like he does. But I'm thinking something sinister is going on here with him...
I really enjoyed the book.
I'm really looking forward to book two in hopes that Ari kicks Charlie out of her heart and makes Jai realize that they'd be super, duper hot together.
I can't wait for there to be some real love and action between Jai and Ari ;) I enjoyed the flow of Samantha's writing and will definitely pick up another Samantha Young book. Can't wait for book 2!
5 solid stars from me!
I really enjoyed the book.
I'm really looking forward to book two in hopes that Ari kicks Charlie out of her heart and makes Jai realize that they'd be super, duper hot together.
I can't wait for there to be some real love and action between Jai and Ari ;) I enjoyed the flow of Samantha's writing and will definitely pick up another Samantha Young book. Can't wait for book 2!
5 solid stars from me!
May 5, 2012
All I can say is read this book :) It was amazing. One of the things I noticed a couple other reviewers said was that the beginning of this book was slow. I got in touch with Samantha because I wanted to tell her this myself and I will say it here; it wasn't slow at all, it was necessary detail and back ground information that was heart wrenching and at times even made it difficult to breath because you felt Ari's need to help the guy she loved even though he continually hurts her. It's a frustrating situation and Samantha does an amazing job writing it. She is able to draw the reader in and help them feel what the characters are feeling. I loved it. I was very impressed with it and would recommend it to any YA paranormal genre lover. Well done Samantha!
October 24, 2011
I must admit, I have been kicking myself hard since I finished reading this book. Why might I be kicking myself? Because I cannot believe that this is the first book of Samantha's that I have read (especially since I have at least five of her books on my Kindle- and have had them on there for at least half a year)! If you have yet to read one of Samantha's books, what are you waiting for? Seriously, go read one, I guarantee that you won't be disappointed!
This book was jam-packed with everything that I love, a wholly unique premise (I personally believe that Samantha has done for Jinns what Rachel Vincent did for bean sidhes), a strong (and snarky) female character, equally strong male characters (both of whom were entirely swoon-worthy), and the basis for a successful love triangle (for some of you a 'successful love triangle' may seem like an oxymoron, but in my opinion, a successful love triangle is one in which the reader has an extremely difficult time choosing which of the characters they would like the main character to end up with, in this case Charlie and Jai, because both are such equals, possessing amazing qualities and whatnot, versus an unsuccessful or unnecessary love triangle where it is obvious from the get-go who the main character will choose as one option clearly outweighs the other- for instance Jace over Simon in Cassie Clare's "Mortal Instruments" series). While I am a tad bit more Team Jai than Team Charlie, I wouldn't be disappointed in the slightest if Ari were to choose Charlie.
As mentioned, each and every one of the characters in this book was so well developed and complex (main characters and secondary characters alike!)- from Ari, lonely and struggling to find her place in the world (even before being made aware of her paranormal heritage), from Jai, also lonely, being a pariah amongst his family, to Charlie, a boy blaming himself for something that was out of his control. Furthermore, I loved the change in perspectives as it allowed us to gain an even better understanding of each character- I think it would be near impossible to not feel for these characters and come to befriend them.
All in all, this is a book that I know I will be rereading time and time again. Not only can I not wait to read the next next book in this series, but I cannot wait to start reading Samantha's other series including her "The Tale of Lunarmorte" series, her "Warriors of Ankh" series, and her "Chronicles of the Fade" series!
This book was jam-packed with everything that I love, a wholly unique premise (I personally believe that Samantha has done for Jinns what Rachel Vincent did for bean sidhes), a strong (and snarky) female character, equally strong male characters (both of whom were entirely swoon-worthy), and the basis for a successful love triangle (for some of you a 'successful love triangle' may seem like an oxymoron, but in my opinion, a successful love triangle is one in which the reader has an extremely difficult time choosing which of the characters they would like the main character to end up with, in this case Charlie and Jai, because both are such equals, possessing amazing qualities and whatnot, versus an unsuccessful or unnecessary love triangle where it is obvious from the get-go who the main character will choose as one option clearly outweighs the other- for instance Jace over Simon in Cassie Clare's "Mortal Instruments" series). While I am a tad bit more Team Jai than Team Charlie, I wouldn't be disappointed in the slightest if Ari were to choose Charlie.
As mentioned, each and every one of the characters in this book was so well developed and complex (main characters and secondary characters alike!)- from Ari, lonely and struggling to find her place in the world (even before being made aware of her paranormal heritage), from Jai, also lonely, being a pariah amongst his family, to Charlie, a boy blaming himself for something that was out of his control. Furthermore, I loved the change in perspectives as it allowed us to gain an even better understanding of each character- I think it would be near impossible to not feel for these characters and come to befriend them.
All in all, this is a book that I know I will be rereading time and time again. Not only can I not wait to read the next next book in this series, but I cannot wait to start reading Samantha's other series including her "The Tale of Lunarmorte" series, her "Warriors of Ankh" series, and her "Chronicles of the Fade" series!
October 26, 2011
Never having known her mother, her father always away on business, and her best friend Charlie growing more distant since the death of his brother, Ari Johnson doesn’t know how more she can take.
Ari just wishes that she could be normal, but she soon finds out that she’s anything but that. On her eighteenth birthday, Ari discovers dark hidden secrets that have long been kept away from her.
Jinn are extremely powerful creatures with magical abilities and who deeply enjoy being at the center of chaos. When Ari discovers that she’s a Jinn, her already complicated life turns even more upside-down, putting everyone around her grave danger…
The whole concept of Jinn (Genies) in Smokeless Fire definitely stood out and made it such a wonderful and enjoying read. As a lover of the paranormal, the unique elements presented in the story were very exciting to read and had me flipping through the pages all in one sitting. I have to admit that I don’t usually finish reading a book in just one sitting so that alone says a lot!
I loved all the characters presented in Smokeless Fire, namely Jai, Ari, and Charlie, in that order. Behind the tough act, Jai is very caring (even if he doesn’t want anyone to know that, especially Ari). There are similarities between Jai and Ari that I won’t go much into detail, but I do believe that they make these two characters perfect for each other. I am hoping to see more chemistry develop between Jai and Ari in the next installment! Ari is a strong character, and definitely dramatic at times, but she is very easy to relate to. I did feel very sympathetic with Ari and Charlie, Ari’s whole life was a lie, and Charlie is going through a rough time trying to deal with the loss of his brother, which all in all puts a strain on their friendship.
I am also a big fan of love triangles and the one presented in Smokeless Fire is no exception. Action packed throughout and leading to a cliffhanger ending will leave readers wanting more!
I cannot believe that I have not read Samantha Young’s work before reading this novel. Samantha Young is a very talented author who captures her readers with the details of this enchanting world presented in Smokeless Fire.
Smokeless Fire is the first installment in Samantha Young’s Fire Spirit series, and I can definitely say that I cannot wait to read the next installment!
I recommend Smokeless Fire to Young Adult readers.
5/5 Must Read! Highly Recommended!
Ari just wishes that she could be normal, but she soon finds out that she’s anything but that. On her eighteenth birthday, Ari discovers dark hidden secrets that have long been kept away from her.
Jinn are extremely powerful creatures with magical abilities and who deeply enjoy being at the center of chaos. When Ari discovers that she’s a Jinn, her already complicated life turns even more upside-down, putting everyone around her grave danger…
The whole concept of Jinn (Genies) in Smokeless Fire definitely stood out and made it such a wonderful and enjoying read. As a lover of the paranormal, the unique elements presented in the story were very exciting to read and had me flipping through the pages all in one sitting. I have to admit that I don’t usually finish reading a book in just one sitting so that alone says a lot!
I loved all the characters presented in Smokeless Fire, namely Jai, Ari, and Charlie, in that order. Behind the tough act, Jai is very caring (even if he doesn’t want anyone to know that, especially Ari). There are similarities between Jai and Ari that I won’t go much into detail, but I do believe that they make these two characters perfect for each other. I am hoping to see more chemistry develop between Jai and Ari in the next installment! Ari is a strong character, and definitely dramatic at times, but she is very easy to relate to. I did feel very sympathetic with Ari and Charlie, Ari’s whole life was a lie, and Charlie is going through a rough time trying to deal with the loss of his brother, which all in all puts a strain on their friendship.
I am also a big fan of love triangles and the one presented in Smokeless Fire is no exception. Action packed throughout and leading to a cliffhanger ending will leave readers wanting more!
I cannot believe that I have not read Samantha Young’s work before reading this novel. Samantha Young is a very talented author who captures her readers with the details of this enchanting world presented in Smokeless Fire.
Smokeless Fire is the first installment in Samantha Young’s Fire Spirit series, and I can definitely say that I cannot wait to read the next installment!
I recommend Smokeless Fire to Young Adult readers.
5/5 Must Read! Highly Recommended!
September 27, 2012
MY RATING: 4 Hearts
****I would like to thank Samantha Young for providing an e-copy of the book, and giving me an opportunity to review it! :D****
Usually when you hear “YA paranormal romance book”, the first things that come to mind are - vampires, werewolves, witches, warlocks, angels and demons. But hardly ever do readers come across Jinns. Yes, you heard me...JINNS. I don’t know what I was expecting when reading Smokeless Fire, but it definitely wasn’t a world so brilliantly created by Ms. Young. The original concept was one of the strongest qualities of this book - and I found myself completely absorbed by it. A wonderful start to a new series - Smokeless Fire will leave you pleasantly surprised from the first to the very last page.
It’s always refreshing to read about something new, especially in the YA paranormal genre, where more than often the topics are generally “similar”. By introducing Jinns to the YA scene, Ms. Young’s inventiveness is much appreciated. The idea of this whole other world where Jinns exist was simply fascinating. But what’s even more surprising is how much the characters were so easy to relate with, despite having that paranormal aspect present. The portraying of these issues through the character’s emotions was very well written - and it was something I looked forward to while reading this book.
As the protagonist - I thought Ari was lacking that “it” factor. I liked her - and on more than one occasion found myself relating to her and sympathizing for her. But, I believe she still needs a final push into being a great heroine. Although, Ari hasn’t fully captured my attention, I still found her to my liking. No matter who or what she was up against, she never gave up. She remained strong and never got deterred, which is an admirable quality to have in a character - and one I liked best about Ari. Another thing that really struck out to me was when Ari finds out about her Jinn heritage - it takes her a while to come to terms with it. Ms. Young didn’t rush through that issue, which made it realistic and an effective aspect of the story.
Then of course, what’s a fantasy story without a love interest? Ever since she was young, Ari believed that she was in love with Charlie, her best friend. Even after Charlie loses his brother in an accident, and cuts of all contact with her, she still “loves” him. That is until she finds unexpected growing feelings for her new bodyguard, Jai. The constant bickering and humor between them is a bright side to the story, which always had me smiling. Jai is, to put it in YA terms, the bad boy with the soft soul. There was nothing I didn’t like about him. He was fun, unique and someone you would love to be friends with. The romance between him and Ari was achingly sweet. It’s a gradual build up, that just barely skims the tipping point - so there is a lot to expect from the next book. But, it was perfectly paced and a joy to read about.
One part of the book, that really got on my nerves was the relationship between Ari and Charlie, the best friend. Honestly speaking, I didn’t understand them. After losing his brother, Charlie cuts Ari out of his life and turns to drugs. Throughout the story Charlie repeatedly hurts Ari, but she is still infatuated with him. She wants the old Charlie back, so she sticks to him. Where loyalty is an admirable quality, in this case it was just irritating and frustrating beyond belief. But, thankfully, Ms. Young turned the story around just in time, by bringing Jai into the picture. I really hope the sequel presents this relationship a lot differently.
Overall, Smokeless Fire proved to be not only adventurous and action-packed but also a refreshing and original read. The story captures your attention from the very start and it will have you flying through the pages. I am looking forward to the sequel to this because Ms. Young’s beautifully crafted world is not one I intend to miss out on.
This Review is also posted at: Literary Love Affair
January 1, 2014
First off this has been on my kindle for over a year! WTH I am such an idiot!
I have to say it took me a good bit to get into this but once I did I was totally hooked.
The world building is what confused me the most. The concept was a new interesting one for me but trying to work out who everyone was & why they were had my head spinning for a little bit and stopped me from getting totally lost in it.
But I persevered and I am so glad I did. As with all of Young's character's the female leads are strong likeable girls who grow into their powers but have their vulnerable moments so that they are still relateable and Ari is no different.
I really wanted to kill some of the people in her life though especially her dad and that ass-hat Charlie.
And I love that Jai isn't this perfect guy, he has some major issue's which make him even more loveable!
So on that note I am gonna dive into Scorched Skies :)
I have to say it took me a good bit to get into this but once I did I was totally hooked.
The world building is what confused me the most. The concept was a new interesting one for me but trying to work out who everyone was & why they were had my head spinning for a little bit and stopped me from getting totally lost in it.
But I persevered and I am so glad I did. As with all of Young's character's the female leads are strong likeable girls who grow into their powers but have their vulnerable moments so that they are still relateable and Ari is no different.
I really wanted to kill some of the people in her life though especially her dad and that ass-hat Charlie.
And I love that Jai isn't this perfect guy, he has some major issue's which make him even more loveable!
So on that note I am gonna dive into Scorched Skies :)
December 5, 2011
I took a gamble on this 99cents kindle read because the concept sounded unique. YA novels about vampires, faeries, and werewolves are a dime a dozen. But Jinn? I didn't even know what a Jinn was. (They're basically like genies; "supernatural creatures in Arab folklore and Islamic teachings that occupy a parallel world to that of mankind." -from wikipedia.)
So yeah, that seemed like a really fresh concept to me, and I was excited to delve into some world building that I haven't seen done anywhere else.
As with most self published works, I noticed several mistakes and awkward grammar. It's rough around the edges. But I just unabashedly liked the concept/story, so the rough edges didn't phase me.
The language used and the amount of adult content (none of which ever gets graphic), sets this book apart from its watered down and sanitized YA paranormal cousins. And I think that may be part of why I liked it so much!
I felt the characters were nicely developed. AND, this is the first love triangle I've read that didn't feel completely contrived (Ok, well maybe the second after Hunger Games). But, I will disagree with other reviewers and say it's obvious this is going to be a Team Jai adventure, but I'm still interested to see what happens to Charlie and how she overcomes her emotional attachment to him.
The ending was rather abrupt. Made it feel like a short pilot of a tv show. You know there's got to be way more to the story than what was given in this first book. I would've preferred more of a solid climax/resolution, because I like a book that can stand on its own, even in a series.
My only other major gripe is that this book is heavy on the dudes. Everybody who is a God, or just a strong authority figure, is a dude. The women are treated as pawns in the men's scheming, or were evil with a capital E. What up with that Samantha Young? My feminist side bristles at your treatment of gender.
Still a fun read though.
So yeah, that seemed like a really fresh concept to me, and I was excited to delve into some world building that I haven't seen done anywhere else.
As with most self published works, I noticed several mistakes and awkward grammar. It's rough around the edges. But I just unabashedly liked the concept/story, so the rough edges didn't phase me.
The language used and the amount of adult content (none of which ever gets graphic), sets this book apart from its watered down and sanitized YA paranormal cousins. And I think that may be part of why I liked it so much!
I felt the characters were nicely developed. AND, this is the first love triangle I've read that didn't feel completely contrived (Ok, well maybe the second after Hunger Games). But, I will disagree with other reviewers and say it's obvious this is going to be a Team Jai adventure, but I'm still interested to see what happens to Charlie and how she overcomes her emotional attachment to him.
The ending was rather abrupt. Made it feel like a short pilot of a tv show. You know there's got to be way more to the story than what was given in this first book. I would've preferred more of a solid climax/resolution, because I like a book that can stand on its own, even in a series.
My only other major gripe is that this book is heavy on the dudes. Everybody who is a God, or just a strong authority figure, is a dude. The women are treated as pawns in the men's scheming, or were evil with a capital E. What up with that Samantha Young? My feminist side bristles at your treatment of gender.
Still a fun read though.
Read
July 20, 2017DNF @ 46%
i'm dnfing this for now for several reasons:
1- THIS BOOK DESPERATELY NEEDS AN EDITOR.
2- THE WRITING WAS ONE OF A 12 YEAR OLD
3-THE AUTHOR WAS TRYING SO HARD NOT TO MAKE THE ROMANCE AN 'INSTA-LOVE' ONE BUT FAILED -MISERABLY-
i'm dnfing this for now for several reasons:
1- THIS BOOK DESPERATELY NEEDS AN EDITOR.
2- THE WRITING WAS ONE OF A 12 YEAR OLD
3-THE AUTHOR WAS TRYING SO HARD NOT TO MAKE THE ROMANCE AN 'INSTA-LOVE' ONE BUT FAILED -MISERABLY-
October 21, 2011
Ari Johnson had no idea that her life could get more complicated than it already was.
Her childhood best friend Charlie, the boy she had a secret crush on for years, had completely fallen apart when his brother was killed. And try as she might, she could not save him from the downward spiral he was in.
Her father was more absentee than anything. And every time she tried to let him know just how much she really needed him, he made her feel ungrateful and selfish and spoiled.
She was supposed to graduate and go to college just like all her friends. She was supposed to be excited about it. But all she could think about was how much she didn’t want to go.
Of course, after everything she learned about who and what she was, who her parents really were and just what was expected of her, she’d gladly take those complications any day.
Finding out she was a Jinn, a legendary being with magical abilities was bad enough. But finding out the man who raised her, the man she thought was her father, wasn’t actually her dad, was a shock she didn’t think she could get over any time soon.
And to make matters even worse, she wasn’t just any old Jinn, but one that was being sought after to choose sides in the War of the Flames, putting everyone she knew in danger.
As much as she had wanted her life to be different, she never wanted this. And if she could be granted one wish, she’d wish to have her old life back.
***
Smokeless Fire is the enchanting and incredibly exciting first book in the new Fire Spirits series by author Samantha Young. This story, which introduces readers to the ancient, magical and legendary world of the Jinn, is a captivating and refreshingly unique addition to the current offerings for young and not-so-young adult readers.
Stories of genies and their power and magic go way back, but this author adds her own spin and creativity, weaving in new ideas and breathing new life into these age-old tales.
Smokeless Fire is the story of a girl, Ari Johnson, who at eighteen discovers that she is not human as she had always believed, but is the daughter of two Jinn who left her in the mortal world to be raised by a man she had thought was her father.
She is forced to learn about her history and about who and what she is, because living in ignorance has put not only her, but her friends, in danger. And those who are looking to have her on their side will stop at nothing until she embraces her magic and her powers and chooses to join them.
Even with a protector at her side around the clock, Ari will have to decide whether she can live with putting everyone’s life at risk by refusing to accept that she is Jinn and ignoring the tremendous power and magic that exists within her or whether she’s willing to risk her own life if she does.
The Jinn rulers in this story are cold and calculating, master manipulators and exceptional game players, with incredible power and little regard for who gets hurt. Even if it’s one of their own.
And while all Jinn are not evil, most have a dark side. With the amount of power at their command, it’s very easy for the darkness to take hold, and hopefully Ari won’t succumb to its lure.
Smokeless Fire is an utterly riveting must read with characters who have intriguing abilities, and hidden motives and agendas that remain shrouded in secrecy at the story’s end, leaving readers anxiously awaiting the next installment in the series.
On a personal note:
I have read enough of Samantha Young’s writing to know that she is madly, insanely, ridiculously talented and that I will love basically anything she has to write. But I will admit that I thought based on the subject matter alone that this would be my least favorite of her books. I was wrong.
Completely and totally wrong. I cannot believe how much I love this new series by one of my favorite authors. I never would have thought I could fall in love with a story about Genies or Djinn (or Jinn as they’re called in this book). I was never lured in by their powers or the world in which these legendary beings existed. Until now.
Now I can’t wait until the next book in the series is released. Especially after the way things ended, which makes me want to jump on a plane to Scotland to beg the author to reveal what she has in store for Ari, Jai, Charlie, The Red King…and The Glass King.
Although I had taken a sneak peek at the first chapter on the author’s blog some time ago, so I knew that the story intrigued me, I wasn’t sure just how much I’d love this story when the point of view switched from Ari to Jai in the second chapter. As a Jinn, I just wasn’t sure how much of a connection I could possibly make with him, and when he was first introduced I wasn’t sure just what part he’d play in the story. I remained wary.
Until the very next chapter. Once it switched back to Ari’s perspective I was immediately sucked right back into the story. Ari was a totally sympathetic character. I couldn’t help but ache for her and the loneliness she felt after basically losing her best friend Charlie after the death of his brother.
And she just seemed so unbelievably lost. She had a father who seemed callous and distant and friends who seemed more fair-weather than anything. I kept hoping that Charlie would come around. I was rooting for the two of them. For awhile.
So of course when she discovered what she was – and you may think you know from the description, but you don’t – even with the all the problems and drama that comes with it, I couldn’t wait to see just what powers she had and how she planned on using them.
I have got to say that the author created some seriously awesome abilities for her characters. And not just Ari. The bad guys have some pretty wicked powers too. I am fascinated by Azazil and all his sons, the Kings.
But it’s Jai that won my heart. I did not expect that at all. I thought I’d be a member of Team Charlie, but nope, my allegiance is firmly with Jai. He’s all sorts of sexy. He’s strong and caring – even when he doesn’t want to be – and just a little bit broken like Ari is. They are so unbelievably perfect together.
I am a brand new fan of the world of the Jinn. Samantha Young created one that is unique and alluring and filled with all kinds of secrets that I want answers to. In my wildest imagination I had no idea there could be quite so many types of beings that had the cruelty and coldness of the Fae but with a whole different set of rules and such seriously bad-a** abilities.
There is just a hint of a love triangle, which I almost always tend to love and did very much so in this book, but for those who aren’t huge fans, this one felt important to the story.
And there is definitely a lot left up in the air at the end – I know I have a million and a half questions – even if it doesn’t quite feel completely like being left hanging off a cliff.
While I don’t usually take much notice of chapter titles, I did in this book, and kept trying to figure out what they could possibly mean before I started reading each chapter.
And I still have questions about that prologue even after I read the story and went back to re-read it (which I highly recommend). I definitely knew more about the location but I’m still wondering just who the characters are.
This new series is a definite must read for me. I could not put it down and easily devoured it in one sitting. And with passages like the one below, how could I not?
Favorite passage:
He laughed, an unhappy sound that ripped at Ari. She wanted to reach for him. Take his hand. Do something to comfort this man who had come so suddenly into her life, pretending to be some untouchable, uncaring being when there was clearly so much more to him than that.
Her childhood best friend Charlie, the boy she had a secret crush on for years, had completely fallen apart when his brother was killed. And try as she might, she could not save him from the downward spiral he was in.
Her father was more absentee than anything. And every time she tried to let him know just how much she really needed him, he made her feel ungrateful and selfish and spoiled.
She was supposed to graduate and go to college just like all her friends. She was supposed to be excited about it. But all she could think about was how much she didn’t want to go.
Of course, after everything she learned about who and what she was, who her parents really were and just what was expected of her, she’d gladly take those complications any day.
Finding out she was a Jinn, a legendary being with magical abilities was bad enough. But finding out the man who raised her, the man she thought was her father, wasn’t actually her dad, was a shock she didn’t think she could get over any time soon.
And to make matters even worse, she wasn’t just any old Jinn, but one that was being sought after to choose sides in the War of the Flames, putting everyone she knew in danger.
As much as she had wanted her life to be different, she never wanted this. And if she could be granted one wish, she’d wish to have her old life back.
***
Smokeless Fire is the enchanting and incredibly exciting first book in the new Fire Spirits series by author Samantha Young. This story, which introduces readers to the ancient, magical and legendary world of the Jinn, is a captivating and refreshingly unique addition to the current offerings for young and not-so-young adult readers.
Stories of genies and their power and magic go way back, but this author adds her own spin and creativity, weaving in new ideas and breathing new life into these age-old tales.
Smokeless Fire is the story of a girl, Ari Johnson, who at eighteen discovers that she is not human as she had always believed, but is the daughter of two Jinn who left her in the mortal world to be raised by a man she had thought was her father.
She is forced to learn about her history and about who and what she is, because living in ignorance has put not only her, but her friends, in danger. And those who are looking to have her on their side will stop at nothing until she embraces her magic and her powers and chooses to join them.
Even with a protector at her side around the clock, Ari will have to decide whether she can live with putting everyone’s life at risk by refusing to accept that she is Jinn and ignoring the tremendous power and magic that exists within her or whether she’s willing to risk her own life if she does.
The Jinn rulers in this story are cold and calculating, master manipulators and exceptional game players, with incredible power and little regard for who gets hurt. Even if it’s one of their own.
And while all Jinn are not evil, most have a dark side. With the amount of power at their command, it’s very easy for the darkness to take hold, and hopefully Ari won’t succumb to its lure.
Smokeless Fire is an utterly riveting must read with characters who have intriguing abilities, and hidden motives and agendas that remain shrouded in secrecy at the story’s end, leaving readers anxiously awaiting the next installment in the series.
On a personal note:
I have read enough of Samantha Young’s writing to know that she is madly, insanely, ridiculously talented and that I will love basically anything she has to write. But I will admit that I thought based on the subject matter alone that this would be my least favorite of her books. I was wrong.
Completely and totally wrong. I cannot believe how much I love this new series by one of my favorite authors. I never would have thought I could fall in love with a story about Genies or Djinn (or Jinn as they’re called in this book). I was never lured in by their powers or the world in which these legendary beings existed. Until now.
Now I can’t wait until the next book in the series is released. Especially after the way things ended, which makes me want to jump on a plane to Scotland to beg the author to reveal what she has in store for Ari, Jai, Charlie, The Red King…and The Glass King.
Although I had taken a sneak peek at the first chapter on the author’s blog some time ago, so I knew that the story intrigued me, I wasn’t sure just how much I’d love this story when the point of view switched from Ari to Jai in the second chapter. As a Jinn, I just wasn’t sure how much of a connection I could possibly make with him, and when he was first introduced I wasn’t sure just what part he’d play in the story. I remained wary.
Until the very next chapter. Once it switched back to Ari’s perspective I was immediately sucked right back into the story. Ari was a totally sympathetic character. I couldn’t help but ache for her and the loneliness she felt after basically losing her best friend Charlie after the death of his brother.
And she just seemed so unbelievably lost. She had a father who seemed callous and distant and friends who seemed more fair-weather than anything. I kept hoping that Charlie would come around. I was rooting for the two of them. For awhile.
So of course when she discovered what she was – and you may think you know from the description, but you don’t – even with the all the problems and drama that comes with it, I couldn’t wait to see just what powers she had and how she planned on using them.
I have got to say that the author created some seriously awesome abilities for her characters. And not just Ari. The bad guys have some pretty wicked powers too. I am fascinated by Azazil and all his sons, the Kings.
But it’s Jai that won my heart. I did not expect that at all. I thought I’d be a member of Team Charlie, but nope, my allegiance is firmly with Jai. He’s all sorts of sexy. He’s strong and caring – even when he doesn’t want to be – and just a little bit broken like Ari is. They are so unbelievably perfect together.
I am a brand new fan of the world of the Jinn. Samantha Young created one that is unique and alluring and filled with all kinds of secrets that I want answers to. In my wildest imagination I had no idea there could be quite so many types of beings that had the cruelty and coldness of the Fae but with a whole different set of rules and such seriously bad-a** abilities.
There is just a hint of a love triangle, which I almost always tend to love and did very much so in this book, but for those who aren’t huge fans, this one felt important to the story.
And there is definitely a lot left up in the air at the end – I know I have a million and a half questions – even if it doesn’t quite feel completely like being left hanging off a cliff.
While I don’t usually take much notice of chapter titles, I did in this book, and kept trying to figure out what they could possibly mean before I started reading each chapter.
And I still have questions about that prologue even after I read the story and went back to re-read it (which I highly recommend). I definitely knew more about the location but I’m still wondering just who the characters are.
This new series is a definite must read for me. I could not put it down and easily devoured it in one sitting. And with passages like the one below, how could I not?
Favorite passage:
He laughed, an unhappy sound that ripped at Ari. She wanted to reach for him. Take his hand. Do something to comfort this man who had come so suddenly into her life, pretending to be some untouchable, uncaring being when there was clearly so much more to him than that.
April 26, 2012
- Review taken from my YA book blog Little Paper Rose
*I will alert for start/end of spoilers.
Before ‘Smokeless Fire’ I had no knowledge about the Jinn mythology so this was all extremely new to me. Getting to learn about the story and the history of the Jinn very much from scratch has been interesting as well as exhausting. I experienced the first half of ’Smokeless Fire’ to be jam-packed with information and explanation. At some point I felt like I was practically studying about Jinn, and that just gets tiring and boring. I was relieved once I got past all the explanations and whys.
I appreciated the original storyline and the maze-like plot with surprises along the way, but it wasn’t believable. It didn’t feel real or likely in the slightest, imaginable way - all coming down to how free of emotional conflict the story was.
A lot happens in ‘Smokeless Fire’ - threads were pulled and then left hanging without a purpose which made me wonder if the story would’ve turned out more intricate and personal if Young had solely stuck to the main plotline.
As for the characters (which there were several interesting of):
The Red King was truly hilarious at times. I liked him for his sarcasm and shockingly up-too-date way of speaking, but that was also the things that didn’t fit in with the almighty Jinn King. For what he was supposed to be he wasn’t authenthic and I failed to perceive him as powerful and intimidating.
Charlie was like a sidetrack but being there all the time to distract and put a barrier between Ari and Jai. I expected him to have much more depth since in the beginning Young hinted that Charlie was a big deal, but he turned fainter as the story went. As soon as the Jinn issue kicks in Charlie ends up beng a third-friend-who-just-won’t-give-up-and-go-home type of character.
My favorite of them all was Jai - mysterious and level-headed. He was the most real one. I appreciated (the few times) you got Jai’s point-of-view because what he was really thinking and feeling would clash with how Ari interpreted it. Also, for Young to have Jai be a few years older was refreshing and suiting (I don’t really understand why many authors make only a year or two sound so much older it’s pratically impossible in the world of YA).
Finally, Ari, our protagonist. I didn’t gather much from her other than being mentally strong and solid. It’s a nice change from the many protagonists who are on a crying-go-round; when Ari did finally give in and cry, it was for something real.
Though, to what mainly bothered me with ‘Smokeless Fire’: the lack of reactions. Nada, nothing. Ari’s literally thrust into a world of Jinn, supernatural powers, strange creatures, another existing world.. and she takes it VERY WELL. She finds out she’s not human.. and takes it VERY WELL. She’s so accepting and understanding - zero emotional battle. It’s time to be in a total, full-on freak out mode. Her reaction wasn’t believable at all. Even how easily it was for Charlie to take it all in was ridiculous.
[Slight spoilers!] How Ari went from referring to The White King as her father so out of the blue and the only father she’s known as her dad for 18 years, as Derek, was very bothersome and unlikely; as well as how she so very cooperatively agrees that it’s for the best if she disconnects herself from family and friends and just leaves. I’d wished for it to be more overwhelming but it was barely significant enough to acknowledge. [Spoilers ended!]
‘Smokeless Fire’ is supposedly a YA Urban Fantasy Romance but truthfully, had I purchased the book expecting romance I would’ve been very disappointed. It’s not a romance, I’m sure the relationships are further inspected in the later installments but this first book just didn’t have any of it. Young would regularly hint on romance but it never came to that.
On a last note, the ending just left me hanging. Like, huh? It ended in such an unsatisfactory and abruptly manner. I won’t be purchasing the second installment but I recommend anyone reading this if you’re looking for a non-mainstream, fantasy read.
*I will alert for start/end of spoilers.
Before ‘Smokeless Fire’ I had no knowledge about the Jinn mythology so this was all extremely new to me. Getting to learn about the story and the history of the Jinn very much from scratch has been interesting as well as exhausting. I experienced the first half of ’Smokeless Fire’ to be jam-packed with information and explanation. At some point I felt like I was practically studying about Jinn, and that just gets tiring and boring. I was relieved once I got past all the explanations and whys.
I appreciated the original storyline and the maze-like plot with surprises along the way, but it wasn’t believable. It didn’t feel real or likely in the slightest, imaginable way - all coming down to how free of emotional conflict the story was.
A lot happens in ‘Smokeless Fire’ - threads were pulled and then left hanging without a purpose which made me wonder if the story would’ve turned out more intricate and personal if Young had solely stuck to the main plotline.
As for the characters (which there were several interesting of):
The Red King was truly hilarious at times. I liked him for his sarcasm and shockingly up-too-date way of speaking, but that was also the things that didn’t fit in with the almighty Jinn King. For what he was supposed to be he wasn’t authenthic and I failed to perceive him as powerful and intimidating.
Charlie was like a sidetrack but being there all the time to distract and put a barrier between Ari and Jai. I expected him to have much more depth since in the beginning Young hinted that Charlie was a big deal, but he turned fainter as the story went. As soon as the Jinn issue kicks in Charlie ends up beng a third-friend-who-just-won’t-give-up-and-go-home type of character.
My favorite of them all was Jai - mysterious and level-headed. He was the most real one. I appreciated (the few times) you got Jai’s point-of-view because what he was really thinking and feeling would clash with how Ari interpreted it. Also, for Young to have Jai be a few years older was refreshing and suiting (I don’t really understand why many authors make only a year or two sound so much older it’s pratically impossible in the world of YA).
Finally, Ari, our protagonist. I didn’t gather much from her other than being mentally strong and solid. It’s a nice change from the many protagonists who are on a crying-go-round; when Ari did finally give in and cry, it was for something real.
Though, to what mainly bothered me with ‘Smokeless Fire’: the lack of reactions. Nada, nothing. Ari’s literally thrust into a world of Jinn, supernatural powers, strange creatures, another existing world.. and she takes it VERY WELL. She finds out she’s not human.. and takes it VERY WELL. She’s so accepting and understanding - zero emotional battle. It’s time to be in a total, full-on freak out mode. Her reaction wasn’t believable at all. Even how easily it was for Charlie to take it all in was ridiculous.
[Slight spoilers!] How Ari went from referring to The White King as her father so out of the blue and the only father she’s known as her dad for 18 years, as Derek, was very bothersome and unlikely; as well as how she so very cooperatively agrees that it’s for the best if she disconnects herself from family and friends and just leaves. I’d wished for it to be more overwhelming but it was barely significant enough to acknowledge. [Spoilers ended!]
‘Smokeless Fire’ is supposedly a YA Urban Fantasy Romance but truthfully, had I purchased the book expecting romance I would’ve been very disappointed. It’s not a romance, I’m sure the relationships are further inspected in the later installments but this first book just didn’t have any of it. Young would regularly hint on romance but it never came to that.
On a last note, the ending just left me hanging. Like, huh? It ended in such an unsatisfactory and abruptly manner. I won’t be purchasing the second installment but I recommend anyone reading this if you’re looking for a non-mainstream, fantasy read.
October 28, 2011
Smokeless Fire a Fire Spirits novel
Samantha Young
5 Stars
The cover of Smokeless Fire is just gorgeous. Ari is beautiful and exactly the way I pictured her while ready Smokeless Fire. I have been a fan of Samantha Young since she released the Tale of Lunarmorte series and I will say that I will be a fan forever! I have read all of her books and I just can’t get enough of her captivating books. Samantha has a way to bring a new light to old mythology and mix it with today’s modern age.
Ari’s father is always away on business trips and since Ari’s mother dropped her off on her father’s doorsteps when she was just born, 18 year old Ari has been pretty much raising herself since she became a teenager. Soon she will graduate from high school and will have to go to college – something she is seriously having doubts about. Her best friend, Charlie, who she has known since she was a little girl, is going through a rough time with the guilt of his little brother’s death. Then one day she goes to sleep and wakes up in this strange place called Mount Qaf in the house of a man who claims to be her real father. The only thing is that she isn’t dreaming and the man in front of her IS her father and also known as The White King. Ari is lost and confused when she returns back home after telling The White King, her father that she didn’t want anything to do with him. That’s when Jai comes into the picture to protect her from her “father’s plan. Jai is hired, by Ari’s uncle, The Red King to protect Ari and follow her wherever she goes. Ari will discover the true plan her evil father has planned for her and she will find out that she is stronger than she thinks. Jai will help her awaken her powers and teach her how to use them in order to protect herself from the war her father has started.
Smokeless Fire is the beginning to an incredible series surely to capture everyone’s hearts. The characters are unique and easy to fall in love with. I hate to say that I am team Jai all the way! I totally recommend reading Smokeless Fire and any book from Samantha Young. She is an incredible author with the gift of creating wonderful stories and memorable character that will be with you always.
Blog: http://www.onceuponatwilight.com/2011...
Samantha Young
5 Stars
The cover of Smokeless Fire is just gorgeous. Ari is beautiful and exactly the way I pictured her while ready Smokeless Fire. I have been a fan of Samantha Young since she released the Tale of Lunarmorte series and I will say that I will be a fan forever! I have read all of her books and I just can’t get enough of her captivating books. Samantha has a way to bring a new light to old mythology and mix it with today’s modern age.
Ari’s father is always away on business trips and since Ari’s mother dropped her off on her father’s doorsteps when she was just born, 18 year old Ari has been pretty much raising herself since she became a teenager. Soon she will graduate from high school and will have to go to college – something she is seriously having doubts about. Her best friend, Charlie, who she has known since she was a little girl, is going through a rough time with the guilt of his little brother’s death. Then one day she goes to sleep and wakes up in this strange place called Mount Qaf in the house of a man who claims to be her real father. The only thing is that she isn’t dreaming and the man in front of her IS her father and also known as The White King. Ari is lost and confused when she returns back home after telling The White King, her father that she didn’t want anything to do with him. That’s when Jai comes into the picture to protect her from her “father’s plan. Jai is hired, by Ari’s uncle, The Red King to protect Ari and follow her wherever she goes. Ari will discover the true plan her evil father has planned for her and she will find out that she is stronger than she thinks. Jai will help her awaken her powers and teach her how to use them in order to protect herself from the war her father has started.
Smokeless Fire is the beginning to an incredible series surely to capture everyone’s hearts. The characters are unique and easy to fall in love with. I hate to say that I am team Jai all the way! I totally recommend reading Smokeless Fire and any book from Samantha Young. She is an incredible author with the gift of creating wonderful stories and memorable character that will be with you always.
Blog: http://www.onceuponatwilight.com/2011...
November 2, 2011
The cover of Smokeless Fire is just gorgeous. Ari is beautiful and exactly the way I pictured her while ready Smokeless Fire. I have been a fan of Samantha Young since she released the Tale of Lunarmorte series and I will say that I will be a fan forever! I have read all of her books and I just can’t get enough of her captivating books. Samantha has a way to bring a new light to old mythology and mix it with today’s modern age.
Ari’s father is always away on business trips and since Ari’s mother dropped her off on her father’s doorsteps when she was just born, 18 year old Ari has been pretty much raising herself since she became a teenager. Soon she will graduate from high school and will have to go to college – something she is seriously having doubts about. Her best friend, Charlie, who she has known since she was a little girl, is going through a rough time with the guilt of his little brother’s death. Then one day she goes to sleep and wakes up in this strange place called Mount Qaf in the house of a man who claims to be her real father. The only thing is that she isn’t dreaming and the man in front of her IS her father and also known as The White King. Ari is lost and confused when she returns back home after telling The White King, her father that she didn’t want anything to do with him. That’s when Jai comes into the picture to protect her from her “father’s plan. Jai is hired, by Ari’s uncle, The Red King to protect Ari and follow her wherever she goes. Ari will discover the true plan her evil father has planned for her and she will find out that she is stronger than she thinks. Jai will help her awaken her powers and teach her how to use them in order to protect herself from the war her father has started.
Smokeless Fire is the beginning to an incredible series surely to capture everyone’s hearts. The characters are unique and easy to fall in love with. I hate to say that I am team Jai all the way! I totally recommend reading Smokeless Fire and any book from Samantha Young. She is an incredible author with the gift of creating wonderful stories and memorable character that will be with you always.
review link: http://www.onceuponatwilight.com/2011...
Ari’s father is always away on business trips and since Ari’s mother dropped her off on her father’s doorsteps when she was just born, 18 year old Ari has been pretty much raising herself since she became a teenager. Soon she will graduate from high school and will have to go to college – something she is seriously having doubts about. Her best friend, Charlie, who she has known since she was a little girl, is going through a rough time with the guilt of his little brother’s death. Then one day she goes to sleep and wakes up in this strange place called Mount Qaf in the house of a man who claims to be her real father. The only thing is that she isn’t dreaming and the man in front of her IS her father and also known as The White King. Ari is lost and confused when she returns back home after telling The White King, her father that she didn’t want anything to do with him. That’s when Jai comes into the picture to protect her from her “father’s plan. Jai is hired, by Ari’s uncle, The Red King to protect Ari and follow her wherever she goes. Ari will discover the true plan her evil father has planned for her and she will find out that she is stronger than she thinks. Jai will help her awaken her powers and teach her how to use them in order to protect herself from the war her father has started.
Smokeless Fire is the beginning to an incredible series surely to capture everyone’s hearts. The characters are unique and easy to fall in love with. I hate to say that I am team Jai all the way! I totally recommend reading Smokeless Fire and any book from Samantha Young. She is an incredible author with the gift of creating wonderful stories and memorable character that will be with you always.
review link: http://www.onceuponatwilight.com/2011...
December 2, 2014
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Smokeless Fire surprised me. I got it as a freebie so my expectations were low. Big mistake. The world building was intricate, the plot was engaging without being convoluted and the characters were full of depth, the kind you can understand even when you don’t agree with their actions.
Ari is apparently a normal girl. She’s having second thoughts about going to college and feels alienated and alone, specially because she’s dealing with her friend Charlie and his substance abuse problems. She’s been in love with him for years but she doesn’t know how to help him overcome his self destructive habits. She’s very loyal so I could understand why she gave Charlie the time of day even when he was an asshat. And let me tell you, the things Charlie does to her tell you right away he’s not the guy for her.
Enter Jai, a Jinn guardian and all around hot stuff. He’s charged to protect Ari once is discovered that she’s very important. The plot centers around the conflicts among the different Jinn Kings and how unbeknownst to her, Ari is at the center of it all. She’s frightened, upset and has no idea who she can trust in a world of mythical beings with special powers. I know next to nothing about Jinn mythology so I liked this world of chaos and balance.
As it’s common in YA, there is a love triangle but it’s somewhat different than the ones I’ve seen before. For once, both guys don’t give her the time of day and she’s the one interested in both (at the beginning she’s after one, at the end she likes the other.) Neither wants a relationship with her for reasons of their own. Yes, they like her but both feel they are not the right for her.
Overall, a great beginning to a series, specially for those who like their Urban Fantasy with a healthy dose of romance.
Smokeless Fire surprised me. I got it as a freebie so my expectations were low. Big mistake. The world building was intricate, the plot was engaging without being convoluted and the characters were full of depth, the kind you can understand even when you don’t agree with their actions.
Ari is apparently a normal girl. She’s having second thoughts about going to college and feels alienated and alone, specially because she’s dealing with her friend Charlie and his substance abuse problems. She’s been in love with him for years but she doesn’t know how to help him overcome his self destructive habits. She’s very loyal so I could understand why she gave Charlie the time of day even when he was an asshat. And let me tell you, the things Charlie does to her tell you right away he’s not the guy for her.
Enter Jai, a Jinn guardian and all around hot stuff. He’s charged to protect Ari once is discovered that she’s very important. The plot centers around the conflicts among the different Jinn Kings and how unbeknownst to her, Ari is at the center of it all. She’s frightened, upset and has no idea who she can trust in a world of mythical beings with special powers. I know next to nothing about Jinn mythology so I liked this world of chaos and balance.
As it’s common in YA, there is a love triangle but it’s somewhat different than the ones I’ve seen before. For once, both guys don’t give her the time of day and she’s the one interested in both (at the beginning she’s after one, at the end she likes the other.) Neither wants a relationship with her for reasons of their own. Yes, they like her but both feel they are not the right for her.
Overall, a great beginning to a series, specially for those who like their Urban Fantasy with a healthy dose of romance.
January 14, 2019
3.5 stars
Review to come at the end of the series.
November 30, 2014
Plot:
Although Ari's life seems like the typical teenage girl's life, she soon gets swept into a whole other world she never believed existed: the world of the Jinn. As she discovers her true heritage, Ari must come to terms with who she really is and what it means for her. But nothing is ever simple and as secrets unfold, she finds herself in the middle of a power struggle that she wants nothing to do with. Unfortunately, she can't avoid her destiny forever and reluctantly begins to delve deeper into the world of the Jinn with the help of her Jinn Guardian, Jai, and her human best friend, Charlie.
Characters:
Ari is eighteen and has just graduated high school. She's scared about her future as she truly doesn't know what she wants to do with herself. But she's afraid to back out of the course that her father has set for her because she doesn't want to disappoint him. She has a lot of insecurities, especially where feeling loved and appreciated are concerned. She is extremely loyal to her best friend, Charlie, even though he constantly pushes her away as he spirals further and further into drugs, alcohol, and depression. When Jai Bitar enters her life, she suddenly finds that she is infuriated, yet intrigued by this handsome yet distant Jinn Guardian.
Jai Bitar is the best Jinn Guardian around and has proved himself time and again when guarding various clients. He has never been fully accepted into his tribe and throws himself mercilessly into his Guardian work to prove himself to others, especially to his father, Luca. When he receives the new assignment from the Red King to guard Ari, he finds that she is not what he was expecting and is surprised by the feelings she elicits in him. But he is determined to keep her at arms length and will stop at nothing to protect her.
World-Building:
The world that the author builds in this book is one of intrigue, danger, magic, and illusion, everything that one might think of where Jinn are concerned. The author portrays Jinn as having very little emotion and a stark sense of decor, although she does provide a few exceptions with regards to the Red King and the Sultan of Jinn. The method of travel (flying and Peripatos) are intriguing concepts and the fact that the Jinn can conjure anything they desire gives new meaning to "money is no object". And I found the creation of various races of Jinn to be a great addition, allowing for various scenes to unfold in unique settings.
Overall Impression:
Overall, this was an amazing book to escape into. I loved how the author wrote from both Ari's and Jai's perspectives, so it gave the reader more to chew on and understand. The interactions between Ari and Jai were classic and left me wanting more. And I loved how the author taught us, as the reader, what Jinn are and their history while teaching Ari at the same time. It made me feel even more connected with Ari and I can't wait to see how she will handle the destiny that has been designed for her. The ending left me anxious and desperate for the next book, so I could continue my exploration of the world of Jinn. So, definitely check this book out...it is well worth the read!
Although Ari's life seems like the typical teenage girl's life, she soon gets swept into a whole other world she never believed existed: the world of the Jinn. As she discovers her true heritage, Ari must come to terms with who she really is and what it means for her. But nothing is ever simple and as secrets unfold, she finds herself in the middle of a power struggle that she wants nothing to do with. Unfortunately, she can't avoid her destiny forever and reluctantly begins to delve deeper into the world of the Jinn with the help of her Jinn Guardian, Jai, and her human best friend, Charlie.
Characters:
Ari is eighteen and has just graduated high school. She's scared about her future as she truly doesn't know what she wants to do with herself. But she's afraid to back out of the course that her father has set for her because she doesn't want to disappoint him. She has a lot of insecurities, especially where feeling loved and appreciated are concerned. She is extremely loyal to her best friend, Charlie, even though he constantly pushes her away as he spirals further and further into drugs, alcohol, and depression. When Jai Bitar enters her life, she suddenly finds that she is infuriated, yet intrigued by this handsome yet distant Jinn Guardian.
Jai Bitar is the best Jinn Guardian around and has proved himself time and again when guarding various clients. He has never been fully accepted into his tribe and throws himself mercilessly into his Guardian work to prove himself to others, especially to his father, Luca. When he receives the new assignment from the Red King to guard Ari, he finds that she is not what he was expecting and is surprised by the feelings she elicits in him. But he is determined to keep her at arms length and will stop at nothing to protect her.
World-Building:
The world that the author builds in this book is one of intrigue, danger, magic, and illusion, everything that one might think of where Jinn are concerned. The author portrays Jinn as having very little emotion and a stark sense of decor, although she does provide a few exceptions with regards to the Red King and the Sultan of Jinn. The method of travel (flying and Peripatos) are intriguing concepts and the fact that the Jinn can conjure anything they desire gives new meaning to "money is no object". And I found the creation of various races of Jinn to be a great addition, allowing for various scenes to unfold in unique settings.
Overall Impression:
Overall, this was an amazing book to escape into. I loved how the author wrote from both Ari's and Jai's perspectives, so it gave the reader more to chew on and understand. The interactions between Ari and Jai were classic and left me wanting more. And I loved how the author taught us, as the reader, what Jinn are and their history while teaching Ari at the same time. It made me feel even more connected with Ari and I can't wait to see how she will handle the destiny that has been designed for her. The ending left me anxious and desperate for the next book, so I could continue my exploration of the world of Jinn. So, definitely check this book out...it is well worth the read!
April 4, 2022
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Smokeless Fire is the first book in the Fire Spirits series by Samantha Young and kept me riveted from the first to the very last page.
Eighteen year old Ari Johnson is a little lost, she has no idea what she wants to do with her life now that she has graduated, she is heart-broken over the demise of her long-time friendship with Charlie who has been on a downward spiral since the death of his younger brother, she is living with a poltergeist, has an absent father and has never known her mother.
But things get a lot worse when she is transported to the realm of Mount Qaf, home to the terrifying Jinn (Genies) and her biological father The White King – it is here she finds out she too is half-jinn and caught in the middle of a terrifying war where she will be used as a pawn.
Jai Bitar in an outsider in his tribe but the best guardian there is; he has been hired by The Red King to protect Ari, staying with her 24/7 to ensure her safety. He is gorgeous, strong and sarcastic but he keeps his emotions hidden, I liked that we are given Jai’s POV in this story as well.
As a main protagonist, I really liked Ari’s sass and wit, despite what she was finding out she stood strong and determined which I enjoyed. I also loved the banter between her and Jai. Seeing her find out more about her heritage and destiny kept me wanting to know more, I enjoyed learning about the Jinn as Ari was.
We have what looks to be the beginning of a love triangle but I was Team Jai from the very beginning, I just hope Ari can dissolve her emotional attachment to Charlie sooner than later – he let her down one too many times and his actions and behavior were terrible, he made some serious decisions without seeming to understand the consequences to what he had done, his sole motivation is revenge.
We are given a lot of information in the first part of the book which is not surprising for the first in a series but I never felt it was too much. The magical world Ms Young has created was certainly fascinating; I have never read about the Jinn before and had no idea what they even were so I was riveted by the concept.
I liked each of the secondary characters, The Red King had me giggling at times but I never saw him as a character of supposed power due to his dialogue and sarcasm, Charlie drove me batty but mainly because of his treatment of Ari at the beginning of the book. The few minor characters were also written well, I enjoyed the mystery that was Ms. Maggie.
Ms Young has written a compelling story with likeable characters and an engrossing plot; it is a great first book in what promises to be an entertaining series.
The ending was quite abrupt so I’ll definitely be picking up the next book, Scorched Skies.
Overall, Smokeless Fire is an action-packed, magical and intriguing start to the Fire Spirits series.
Smokeless Fire is the first book in the Fire Spirits series by Samantha Young and kept me riveted from the first to the very last page.
Eighteen year old Ari Johnson is a little lost, she has no idea what she wants to do with her life now that she has graduated, she is heart-broken over the demise of her long-time friendship with Charlie who has been on a downward spiral since the death of his younger brother, she is living with a poltergeist, has an absent father and has never known her mother.
But things get a lot worse when she is transported to the realm of Mount Qaf, home to the terrifying Jinn (Genies) and her biological father The White King – it is here she finds out she too is half-jinn and caught in the middle of a terrifying war where she will be used as a pawn.
Jai Bitar in an outsider in his tribe but the best guardian there is; he has been hired by The Red King to protect Ari, staying with her 24/7 to ensure her safety. He is gorgeous, strong and sarcastic but he keeps his emotions hidden, I liked that we are given Jai’s POV in this story as well.
As a main protagonist, I really liked Ari’s sass and wit, despite what she was finding out she stood strong and determined which I enjoyed. I also loved the banter between her and Jai. Seeing her find out more about her heritage and destiny kept me wanting to know more, I enjoyed learning about the Jinn as Ari was.
We have what looks to be the beginning of a love triangle but I was Team Jai from the very beginning, I just hope Ari can dissolve her emotional attachment to Charlie sooner than later – he let her down one too many times and his actions and behavior were terrible, he made some serious decisions without seeming to understand the consequences to what he had done, his sole motivation is revenge.
We are given a lot of information in the first part of the book which is not surprising for the first in a series but I never felt it was too much. The magical world Ms Young has created was certainly fascinating; I have never read about the Jinn before and had no idea what they even were so I was riveted by the concept.
I liked each of the secondary characters, The Red King had me giggling at times but I never saw him as a character of supposed power due to his dialogue and sarcasm, Charlie drove me batty but mainly because of his treatment of Ari at the beginning of the book. The few minor characters were also written well, I enjoyed the mystery that was Ms. Maggie.
Ms Young has written a compelling story with likeable characters and an engrossing plot; it is a great first book in what promises to be an entertaining series.
The ending was quite abrupt so I’ll definitely be picking up the next book, Scorched Skies.
Overall, Smokeless Fire is an action-packed, magical and intriguing start to the Fire Spirits series.
February 14, 2015
Erste Sätze
Ihre Augen versuchten, ihn zu bezwingen. Ganz gleich, wohin er auch sah, diese Augen spiegelten sich auf dem kalten Glas und Marmor in seinem Haus.
Klappentext
Bislang war Aris größtes Problem die zerbrochene Beziehung zu Charlie, ihrem bestem Freund und ihrer heimlichen Liebe. Doch in der Nacht ihres 18. Geburtstags findet sie sich unvermutet in Mount Qaf wieder, dem Reich der Dschinn. Und nach dem, was sie dort über ihre wahre Herkunft erfährt, hat sie ganz andere Sorgen. Denn plötzlich steckt sie mitten im Machtkampf der Feuergeister. Bodyguard Jai soll sie beschützen. Aber vor wem? Und für wen? Kann Ari dem arroganten jungen Dschinn mit den faszinierenden grünen Augen wirklich trauen? Und warum ist Charlie auf einmal wieder so interessiert an ihr – und ihren neuen Kräften?
Meine Meinung
Das Buch ist aus der Perspektive eines auktorialen Erzählers geschrieben und zwar hauptsächlich aus der Sicht von Ari Johnson. Ab und an gibt es Abschnitte, die aus der Sicht von Jai erzählt werden.
Ari lebt zwar im Hause ihres Vaters, aber in Wahrheit ist sie dort oft alleine, da er oft als Pharmavertreter auf Geschäftsreisen ist. Sie ist extrem unschlüssig, was ihre Zukunft betrifft und hat die Angst, die Wahrheit zu erzählen, da ein Studium von ihr erwartet wird – sowohl von ihren Freundinnen als auch ihrem Vater. Dabei will sie nichts mehr als ihrer heimlichen Liebe Charlie aus seinem Loch helfen, in das er sich hereinmanövriert hat. Sie ist noch recht unsicher, hat aber ein gutes Herz, vor allem steht sie für die Menschen ein, die sie liebt, was vielleicht ihr größtes Verhängnis ist.
Jai ist ein Halbdschinn und wird deshalb von seiner Familie gemieden, da er das Produkt einer Verführung eines Sukkubus und eines Wächters ist. Er ist sehr selbstständig und stark, was ihm sein Vater Luca übelnimmt. Er möchte unbedingt einen Fehler in seinen unehelichen Sohn finden, nutzt aber dessen Fähigkeiten für sein Unternehmen.
Beide Charaktere mag ich sehr gerne und habe sie ins Herz geschlossen. Ihre Handlungen waren nachvollziehbar und sie entwickeln sich während des Buches ein wenig weiter.
Die Geschichte beginnt eher untypisch und ruhig, bevor es immer wieder viele überraschende Wendungen und Entwicklungen gibt, die Aris Leben komplett durcheinander wirft. Das Buch ist spannend, dramatisch und emotional.
Die Idee, das Fantasyelement der Dschinns in eine Geschichte hineinzubringen, mag ich sehr gerne, da sie bisher noch nicht so extrem abgegriffen ist. Die Welt, die die Autorin geschaffen hat, ist interessant.
Ihr Schreibstil ist wie immer sehr angenehm zu lesen und er hat mir gut gefallen. Er ist zwar nicht sehr außergewöhnlich, aber trotzdem mag ich ihn.
Bewertung
Da mir die plötzliche Entwicklung eines Charakters nicht so gut gefallen hat, gebe ich dem Buch
4 von 5 Würmchen
Ihre Augen versuchten, ihn zu bezwingen. Ganz gleich, wohin er auch sah, diese Augen spiegelten sich auf dem kalten Glas und Marmor in seinem Haus.
Klappentext
Bislang war Aris größtes Problem die zerbrochene Beziehung zu Charlie, ihrem bestem Freund und ihrer heimlichen Liebe. Doch in der Nacht ihres 18. Geburtstags findet sie sich unvermutet in Mount Qaf wieder, dem Reich der Dschinn. Und nach dem, was sie dort über ihre wahre Herkunft erfährt, hat sie ganz andere Sorgen. Denn plötzlich steckt sie mitten im Machtkampf der Feuergeister. Bodyguard Jai soll sie beschützen. Aber vor wem? Und für wen? Kann Ari dem arroganten jungen Dschinn mit den faszinierenden grünen Augen wirklich trauen? Und warum ist Charlie auf einmal wieder so interessiert an ihr – und ihren neuen Kräften?
Meine Meinung
Das Buch ist aus der Perspektive eines auktorialen Erzählers geschrieben und zwar hauptsächlich aus der Sicht von Ari Johnson. Ab und an gibt es Abschnitte, die aus der Sicht von Jai erzählt werden.
Ari lebt zwar im Hause ihres Vaters, aber in Wahrheit ist sie dort oft alleine, da er oft als Pharmavertreter auf Geschäftsreisen ist. Sie ist extrem unschlüssig, was ihre Zukunft betrifft und hat die Angst, die Wahrheit zu erzählen, da ein Studium von ihr erwartet wird – sowohl von ihren Freundinnen als auch ihrem Vater. Dabei will sie nichts mehr als ihrer heimlichen Liebe Charlie aus seinem Loch helfen, in das er sich hereinmanövriert hat. Sie ist noch recht unsicher, hat aber ein gutes Herz, vor allem steht sie für die Menschen ein, die sie liebt, was vielleicht ihr größtes Verhängnis ist.
Jai ist ein Halbdschinn und wird deshalb von seiner Familie gemieden, da er das Produkt einer Verführung eines Sukkubus und eines Wächters ist. Er ist sehr selbstständig und stark, was ihm sein Vater Luca übelnimmt. Er möchte unbedingt einen Fehler in seinen unehelichen Sohn finden, nutzt aber dessen Fähigkeiten für sein Unternehmen.
Beide Charaktere mag ich sehr gerne und habe sie ins Herz geschlossen. Ihre Handlungen waren nachvollziehbar und sie entwickeln sich während des Buches ein wenig weiter.
Die Geschichte beginnt eher untypisch und ruhig, bevor es immer wieder viele überraschende Wendungen und Entwicklungen gibt, die Aris Leben komplett durcheinander wirft. Das Buch ist spannend, dramatisch und emotional.
Die Idee, das Fantasyelement der Dschinns in eine Geschichte hineinzubringen, mag ich sehr gerne, da sie bisher noch nicht so extrem abgegriffen ist. Die Welt, die die Autorin geschaffen hat, ist interessant.
Ihr Schreibstil ist wie immer sehr angenehm zu lesen und er hat mir gut gefallen. Er ist zwar nicht sehr außergewöhnlich, aber trotzdem mag ich ihn.
Bewertung
Da mir die plötzliche Entwicklung eines Charakters nicht so gut gefallen hat, gebe ich dem Buch
4 von 5 Würmchen
July 13, 2012
This is one of those books where I'm finding it difficult to write a review. Not because I didn't like it but because I liked it so much. I will try my best to write a meaningful review. When all I want to write is: This novel is amazing go out and get it quickly. The main character Ari is about to turn 18 and has no idea what she wants to do with her life. I found it easy to identify with her since I felt the same way right after high school. Eventually the choice is made for Ari when she finds out she is Jinn. The drastic changes in her life freak her out but she's strong enough to deal with the changes and move forward. She learns how to use her Jinn abilities and is eager to protect the people she loves. One thing I didn't like about Ari was the way that she dealt with Charlie. He has changed drastically and is really into drugs. He hurts her time and time again and yet she keeps forgiving him and trying to get the old Charlie back. It was annoying, I wanted to yell at her and tell her to move on, but it also shows that she is unwilling to abandon someone that she cares about so deeply.
Along with learning she is Jinn, Ari gets a new bodyguard named Jai. What can I say about him, he's tall very hot with olive skin and bright green eyes. Jai can also be sarcastic, arrogant, and tries to keep everyone at a distance. I enjoyed the the few chapters that were from Jai's POV. It allowed me to not only see how he really felt about guarding Ari but about Ari herself. Jai has a rare ability thanks to his mixed blood that makes him very good at what he does.
I loved the originality of this novel. I have never read about Jinn before, have you? Samantha Young is able to create worlds that suck you in and make you want more. There is plenty of action and just enough romance to keep the reader turning pages as quickly as possible to see what is going to happen next. This isn't the first novel of hers that I completely devoured. The idea of the 7 Kings of the Jinn and their father Azazil was new and it was easy to follow along as things were explained. Plus there were tons of new creatures in Smokeless Fire and I loved learning about all of them. What fun would it be if there was not some kind of trouble. The Kings are at war and Ari is right in the middle of all the danger.
Along with learning she is Jinn, Ari gets a new bodyguard named Jai. What can I say about him, he's tall very hot with olive skin and bright green eyes. Jai can also be sarcastic, arrogant, and tries to keep everyone at a distance. I enjoyed the the few chapters that were from Jai's POV. It allowed me to not only see how he really felt about guarding Ari but about Ari herself. Jai has a rare ability thanks to his mixed blood that makes him very good at what he does.
I loved the originality of this novel. I have never read about Jinn before, have you? Samantha Young is able to create worlds that suck you in and make you want more. There is plenty of action and just enough romance to keep the reader turning pages as quickly as possible to see what is going to happen next. This isn't the first novel of hers that I completely devoured. The idea of the 7 Kings of the Jinn and their father Azazil was new and it was easy to follow along as things were explained. Plus there were tons of new creatures in Smokeless Fire and I loved learning about all of them. What fun would it be if there was not some kind of trouble. The Kings are at war and Ari is right in the middle of all the danger.
October 24, 2011
Samantha Young seriously has an amazing gift with writing. Her ability to mix real mythology with her own creativity is fantastic. She hasn't written a book that I haven't loved and Smokeless Fire did not disappoint.
Where to begin, oh where to begin....
First off, let me start with that the world of Jinn (aka Genies) is freaking awesome. Her ability to describe the kings and their world with such extravagant minutiae is astounding. I literally re-read several parts of the description to make sure my mind was grasping the detail and envisioning things the way Samantha had when she wrote the book.
Secondly, the main characters are freaking addictive. Ari is this dramatic, understated beauty, that is completely and utterly alone. She is basically starving for love and attention. Charlie who used to be the one and only light in Ari's life is now the foundation of her loneliness and despair. And then you have Jai. Jai is also aboard the lonely train, but he chooses to make the most of things by being a bad-ass guardian, full of confidence, poise and sarcasm. When you put all three of them together you get a fantastic love-triangle and personally I am pulling for Jai. Not that I wasn't all over Charlie for the first 60 pages, but I lost interest once Ari caught him doing the unspeakable with someone who was as inconsequential as a speck of dust.
Needless to say this book offers a lot of possibilities and is completely unpredictable* which I love. Its simply fantastic. And when Jai turns into a Great Dane that Ari so aptly names Hamlet you can't help but appreciate Samantha's humor, even in the small things.
I think the part that intrigues me most is basically what is revealed about Ari and her background/powers. You know that saying "With great power comes great responsibility" I can't help but think how true this statement is especially regarding Ari. I am curious to see what trials she faces and what mistakes she may or not make when being faced with having to use said power.
Oh Samantha.... I am so glad I found your books. You seriously are one of favorite authors!
*unpredictable - seriously thought that I was gonna get some Jai/Ari action. Now I am just impatiently intrigued with how that might unfold in book 2 and 3.
Where to begin, oh where to begin....
First off, let me start with that the world of Jinn (aka Genies) is freaking awesome. Her ability to describe the kings and their world with such extravagant minutiae is astounding. I literally re-read several parts of the description to make sure my mind was grasping the detail and envisioning things the way Samantha had when she wrote the book.
Secondly, the main characters are freaking addictive. Ari is this dramatic, understated beauty, that is completely and utterly alone. She is basically starving for love and attention. Charlie who used to be the one and only light in Ari's life is now the foundation of her loneliness and despair. And then you have Jai. Jai is also aboard the lonely train, but he chooses to make the most of things by being a bad-ass guardian, full of confidence, poise and sarcasm. When you put all three of them together you get a fantastic love-triangle and personally I am pulling for Jai. Not that I wasn't all over Charlie for the first 60 pages, but I lost interest once Ari caught him doing the unspeakable with someone who was as inconsequential as a speck of dust.
Needless to say this book offers a lot of possibilities and is completely unpredictable* which I love. Its simply fantastic. And when Jai turns into a Great Dane that Ari so aptly names Hamlet you can't help but appreciate Samantha's humor, even in the small things.
I think the part that intrigues me most is basically what is revealed about Ari and her background/powers. You know that saying "With great power comes great responsibility" I can't help but think how true this statement is especially regarding Ari. I am curious to see what trials she faces and what mistakes she may or not make when being faced with having to use said power.
Oh Samantha.... I am so glad I found your books. You seriously are one of favorite authors!
*unpredictable - seriously thought that I was gonna get some Jai/Ari action. Now I am just impatiently intrigued with how that might unfold in book 2 and 3.
December 17, 2015
That was an unexpectedly good read.
I'm usually not a big fan of Samantha Young's work since I tend to dislike her main characters. So I'm quite surprised I really did like both Ari and Jai (Charlie, well...).
I guess the premise isn't anything new in the YA paranormal genre:
Pretty but ordinary girl learns on her 18th birthday that she isn't so ordinary after all. Hot but overbearing guy is hired to protect girl. Girl learns she isn't just not ordinary but some kind of key figure in a war that could ultimately destroy everything. With the help of hot guy, girl gradually accepts her heritage and starts tapping into her power. Girl and hot guy develop feelings for each other but can't be together due to... circumstances.
There are even more cliches, like loved ones are being targeted to get to the girl, second love interest noone will root for , loneliness despite a bunch of friends, etc. You get the gist.
But know what? None of all the above bothered me. Because as stereotypical as all of this was, the background story was anything but. I mean, come on, we're talking about freaking Jinn here! Samantha Young did a fantastic job of developing an intriguing world, introducing us to different kinds of fire spirits and their history.
This first book in the series isn't really action-packed, but I didn't get bored (after the first few chapters, that is). I like to think of it more as sort of an introduction to what is to come in the following books, which is good because there is really a lot to tell about the world Ari is thrown into.
That said, there were two things that kept me from giving this book a 5 star rating.
I think Ari was too accepting of her new life. She hardly needed any persuasion to agree to her role . If I were her, I would have freaked out big time. Her only reaction was something like "This is a dream, let me wake up!". I didn't buy it.
Also, I would've liked to read some more from Jai's POV. His thoughts were pretty insightful but too scarce!
Still, I really enjoyed Smokeless Fire. On to part two!
I'm usually not a big fan of Samantha Young's work since I tend to dislike her main characters. So I'm quite surprised I really did like both Ari and Jai (Charlie, well...).
I guess the premise isn't anything new in the YA paranormal genre:
Pretty but ordinary girl learns on her 18th birthday that she isn't so ordinary after all. Hot but overbearing guy is hired to protect girl. Girl learns she isn't just not ordinary but some kind of key figure in a war that could ultimately destroy everything. With the help of hot guy, girl gradually accepts her heritage and starts tapping into her power. Girl and hot guy develop feelings for each other but can't be together due to... circumstances.
There are even more cliches, like loved ones are being targeted to get to the girl, second love interest noone will root for , loneliness despite a bunch of friends, etc. You get the gist.
But know what? None of all the above bothered me. Because as stereotypical as all of this was, the background story was anything but. I mean, come on, we're talking about freaking Jinn here! Samantha Young did a fantastic job of developing an intriguing world, introducing us to different kinds of fire spirits and their history.
This first book in the series isn't really action-packed, but I didn't get bored (after the first few chapters, that is). I like to think of it more as sort of an introduction to what is to come in the following books, which is good because there is really a lot to tell about the world Ari is thrown into.
That said, there were two things that kept me from giving this book a 5 star rating.
I think Ari was too accepting of her new life. She hardly needed any persuasion to agree to her role . If I were her, I would have freaked out big time. Her only reaction was something like "This is a dream, let me wake up!". I didn't buy it.
Also, I would've liked to read some more from Jai's POV. His thoughts were pretty insightful but too scarce!
Still, I really enjoyed Smokeless Fire. On to part two!
October 18, 2012
While I wanted to like this, because the whole plot is an interesting concept, when I actually read it I was pretty underwhelmed. The problem was the author's portrayal of the main character. I simply did not like Ari. It started when Ari described herself as 'knowing she was pretty' and 'knew she could look good no matter what'. It's that sort of thing that just peeves me off. Charlie was a character who I felt sympathy for but he just kind of lacked personality. Then his behaviour at the end - despicable. What an idiot. On the bright side, I did like Jai. He was interesting and funny and just quite sweet.
Also, the Red King talked like a 15 year old boy. It was an effort to be funny and hip but failed miserably. The White King and all other big important people were written cliche and I just didn't believe it.
Other than that, the romance was pretty good. It didn't come on too quickly. It wasn't written fantastically. It was just too obvious. But I did end up getting a little smile when Ari and Jai almost kissed.
I won't read the next book because even reading the summary annoys me. I might later. We'll see.
Also, the Red King talked like a 15 year old boy. It was an effort to be funny and hip but failed miserably. The White King and all other big important people were written cliche and I just didn't believe it.
Other than that, the romance was pretty good. It didn't come on too quickly. It wasn't written fantastically. It was just too obvious. But I did end up getting a little smile when Ari and Jai almost kissed.
I won't read the next book because even reading the summary annoys me. I might later. We'll see.
May 14, 2019
The story of Ari, a normal teenager with more or less ordinary problems, discovers she is the opposite of ordinary.
Ari has been struggling with the decisions regarding university and her future, as well as her best friend's self-destructive behavior. She is in love with him and seeing this way hurts her, so she is determined to help him get back on track whether he likes it or not.
Unfortunately, her problems multiply exponentially when she finds herself transported in the world of Jinn and discovers the truth about her parentage and her life.
She now has a Jinn guardian who never leaves her side, problems with all her relationships and a destiny she does not want to fulfill.
Interesting story that felt a bit drawn out in parts. It didn't help that Ari and Charlie are very much teenagers and I don't have a lot of patience for teenage drama anymore.
The series continues with Scorched Skies, where I'm hoping we'll see some character growth.
Ari has been struggling with the decisions regarding university and her future, as well as her best friend's self-destructive behavior. She is in love with him and seeing this way hurts her, so she is determined to help him get back on track whether he likes it or not.
Unfortunately, her problems multiply exponentially when she finds herself transported in the world of Jinn and discovers the truth about her parentage and her life.
She now has a Jinn guardian who never leaves her side, problems with all her relationships and a destiny she does not want to fulfill.
Interesting story that felt a bit drawn out in parts. It didn't help that Ari and Charlie are very much teenagers and I don't have a lot of patience for teenage drama anymore.
The series continues with Scorched Skies, where I'm hoping we'll see some character growth.
March 30, 2012
Really liked it. This is the first book I've read that have jinn (genies) and so it's really original. Samantha Young's website has pictures of the actors she'd like to see play the parts of the main characters and they are just how I pictured them. I'm absolutely on Team Jai. Samantha's good at keeping the reader guessing. I'm not sure how I feel about Charlie. Is he good or bad? Does he have Ari's best interests are heart or is another agenda more important? I can't tell! I have to buy book 2! Cool powers, cool characters, great set up for a next book. I will read it and I recommend this one.
May 23, 2012
I hated it. If my rating doesn't speak for itself.
The worst aspect of the book was the protagonist. I can understand that some people might like the masochistic pain of waiting for a boy who sleeps around, does drugs and drinks, while she herself remains a virgin, good girl and what not, but I for one am so sick and tired of this recurring plot.
This book has completely turned me off YA novels. I am going to lay off the YA angst until I find a book's whose description completely awes me, like the Hunger Games...
The worst aspect of the book was the protagonist. I can understand that some people might like the masochistic pain of waiting for a boy who sleeps around, does drugs and drinks, while she herself remains a virgin, good girl and what not, but I for one am so sick and tired of this recurring plot.
This book has completely turned me off YA novels. I am going to lay off the YA angst until I find a book's whose description completely awes me, like the Hunger Games...
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 19, 2012
It has been a long time I read a book this good.
The writing is amazing, just amazing. Never read a book whit jinn mythology and I really like it. The characters were really likeable except Charlie, that guy is going on my nerves from the start of the book. Ari and Jai all the way :D
love the humor in the book, oh my dear sarcasm, life is so much funnier with you :)
The mythology was a little bit confusing, but after a few times going back to the start of the book to reread who was who, it was much easier.
The writing is amazing, just amazing. Never read a book whit jinn mythology and I really like it. The characters were really likeable except Charlie, that guy is going on my nerves from the start of the book. Ari and Jai all the way :D
love the humor in the book, oh my dear sarcasm, life is so much funnier with you :)
The mythology was a little bit confusing, but after a few times going back to the start of the book to reread who was who, it was much easier.
January 2, 2013
So... I'm probably the one soul alive who hasn't read On Dublin Street, and I don't read YA or paranormal, and somehow the first SY book I read it this one... I don't know how that happened - but I am now OBSESSED with Samantha Young - I loved this book and it hooked me on the series - I am now reading Fire Spirits #3.
Creative concept, intriguing characters, speedy reading, and a great storyline. Highly recommended!
Creative concept, intriguing characters, speedy reading, and a great storyline. Highly recommended!
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