It's the same pattern used over and over, again and again.
Stage 1:
New girl meets hot boy. Or new boy meets hot girl. (Of course the girl doesn't think she's pretty, she's too damn insecure)
Stage 2:
INSTANT LOVE! They look at each other for the first time and in two seconds, BOOM, love at first fucking sight.
Stage 3:
I wanna know more about you, let's talk.
Stage 4:
Now let's go on an adventure to defeat the bad guy!
Stage 5:
Okay adventure's over, let's make out and spend the rest of our boring teenage lives in each other's arms.
Stage 6:
You thought it was over? MWAHAHAHA ...UNTIL NEXT TIME! Get ready for book number 2!
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Okay, fine. If authors want to use this pattern, whatever, go for it. I triple dog dare you, actually, but at least create some sort of original storyline and plot.
Our main character, Heven (lol @ her name. Heaven/Heven..get it? Ms. Hebert should have just named her Nevaeh for God's sake, to make the connection less noticeable.) was a combination of the girl from North of Beautiful and Ever from The Immortals series. Now, I read the first two pages of North of Beautiful a while ago in the bookstore and never picked it back up again, but to my recollection, the female girl had some sort of injury that marred her face too. And Ever, from The Immortals series, used to be this super popular cheerleader but is not anymore because of some car accident that killed her parents. Ever is now labeled a freak, and every day, she hides her face and body with baggy clothes to avoid everyone in the world. Sounds familiar? Now put these two girls together and bam, HEVEN MONTGOMERY.
Oh, Heven, I really don't like you.
It's not because she's insecure (Well, well, well... should I even be surprised that she's so unconfident? Why couldn't the author make her kind of similar to Kristy from The Truth About Forever by Sarah Dessen? Kristy has scars all over her face because of a car accident, but do you think she hides herself? NO, she flaunts her hot body because she knows she is the shit, and she has this thing called confidence! And she doesn't give a fuck about other people's opinions towards her because she is a true, strong character. She is brave. Go get some bravery, Heven, and then I'll talk to you. And she isn't the only character I know who has an "ugly" scar. Have you forgotten about Zuko from Avatar: The Last Airbender? Zuko's scar defines Zuko, and I find his scar pretty hot, actually. But then again, I love Zuko so much. Okay, fine. I'll admit that I don't really know what Heven's scars look like, but I'm sure all scars look more or less the same), but because she is a selfish bitch.
Yeah, I went there.
Sam is hot remember? So girls will flirt with him. And when Heven's best friend starts playfully flirting with Sam, Heven over the fuck reacts.
"I said loyal to my friend even while I asked myself why I should since she was with Sam. Clearly her loyalty to me wasn't as strong as I thought." (10%. Sorry, I'm using my kindle- no page numbers)
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Are you shitting me, Heven?
Obviously Kimber wouldn't even had flirted with your crush if you told her you ZOMG
liked him IN THE FIRST PLACE.
And just because you guys shared a two second moment, you just assume he's all yours?
Who the fuck do you think you are?
God.
Whatever.
The beginning of this book was really decent, I liked it. There were some really exciting high school moments going on, and I really like Cole, but as soon as I was 10% into the book, I knew Masquerade wasn't for me.
And do you know what also bothered me?
There was no romance development.
And Sam is so sketchy it's actually creepy. And again, with The Immortals series reference, he is like a carbon copy of Damen. Damen is also super super mysterious and is emancipated from his parents and shit.
I don't understand how Heven can like Sam.
Sure he's gorgeous, but that's really the only reason.
Oh right, she feels "safe" with him.
So what kind of supernatural creature is Sam?
I don't fucking know, and quite frankly, I don't care.
I'm just not interested.
Sorry that this is the first 1-star review you received for this book, Ms. Hebert. Wait, why am I even apologizing? I was given this social network to express my thoughts and opinions, and those were my thoughts and opinions.
I'll finish this book in the near? future. Maybe?
Nahhhh.
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(New theme for my all reviews: corny pick up lines:)
My love for you is like diarrhea, I just can't hold it in!