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The Initiation #1
Open Your Legs for Me
Shy freshman Gina Wesley wants desperately to get into the greatest club her college has ever known. Standing in her way is the gorgeous Max Devlin.
But Max has an interesting 'initiation' method . . . involving metal clamps, a hard shaft, some mysterious nozzles, and the most creative double penetration Gina will ever scream to. That is . . . until she progresses to Level Two.
WARNING: Not to be read at work!
But Max has an interesting 'initiation' method . . . involving metal clamps, a hard shaft, some mysterious nozzles, and the most creative double penetration Gina will ever scream to. That is . . . until she progresses to Level Two.
WARNING: Not to be read at work!
25 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 7, 2011
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About the author
Aphrodite Hunt
104 books94 followersAphrodite Hunt is a New York Times and USA Today bestselling author. Her stories have been in the Top 5 of the Amazon overall bestselling charts, the 10 of the Barnes and Nobles overall charts and the No. 1 spot in Amazon's Movers and Shakers. She is a Top 50 Amazon Most Popular author.
She has had no less than 28 stories hit Amazon's Top 100 Erotica/New Adult/Paranormal Romance charts and two which have hit the Top 2. 14 of them have hit the Top 100 Barnes and Nobles bestseller charts.
She also writes under Dawn Steele for New Adult & Paranormal romances and Artemis Hunt for romances.
She has had no less than 28 stories hit Amazon's Top 100 Erotica/New Adult/Paranormal Romance charts and two which have hit the Top 2. 14 of them have hit the Top 100 Barnes and Nobles bestseller charts.
She also writes under Dawn Steele for New Adult & Paranormal romances and Artemis Hunt for romances.
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May 25, 2017
2 Cringe worthy Stars
This last week I have been super busy and haven't been able to just sit down and read the novel I started days ago, so while out and about I have been pulling out my kindle app on my phone and reading little short stories when bored. I know these little books that are normally less than 50 pages don't really have a plot and are mainly smut so my expectations are low going in. This 17 page gem had me cringing and wanting to use bleach on my brain.
Open Your Legs For Me was a total smut book about a college freshman willing to fuck her way into a really popular college club. You know as Initiation and all that. The problem is that the descriptive wording in this book was cringe worthy, and the sex was boring when it was meant to be shocking and over the top kinky. I just found it lame and gross. Here is a few quotes to give you an idea of the flowery words use in this book:
my crotch-which is now leaking like a creamy sundae fountain onto that little cotton scrap. I ease my panties off slowly, taking care not to let the hem of my skirt ride up again. They fall around my ankles in a minuscule string. My nether lips are throbbing around the little moist kernel of my clit, and copious juices are flooding my entire pussy in a warm, wet tide.
Or how about this lovely quote
The moist hole of my vulva gapes above the deep basin of the bidet, and just behind it, separated by only a thin sliver of flesh, my anus puckers wide open.
Or
He scrutinizes my very open and burning pussy lips. My juices are beginning to flow again in a never-ending stream, trickling from the trembling and oh-so-soft opening of my vagina down the fragile skin to the rim of my anus.
This book had double penetration, bidet masturbation/sex, male pissing on female, voyeurism sex and clamps and I was so bored. I rolled my eyes the whole 17 pages. Many times I was thinking that the female MC must have an std and need medical care the way her vagina leaks. Sorry this was just not good!
This last week I have been super busy and haven't been able to just sit down and read the novel I started days ago, so while out and about I have been pulling out my kindle app on my phone and reading little short stories when bored. I know these little books that are normally less than 50 pages don't really have a plot and are mainly smut so my expectations are low going in. This 17 page gem had me cringing and wanting to use bleach on my brain.
Open Your Legs For Me was a total smut book about a college freshman willing to fuck her way into a really popular college club. You know as Initiation and all that. The problem is that the descriptive wording in this book was cringe worthy, and the sex was boring when it was meant to be shocking and over the top kinky. I just found it lame and gross. Here is a few quotes to give you an idea of the flowery words use in this book:
my crotch-which is now leaking like a creamy sundae fountain onto that little cotton scrap. I ease my panties off slowly, taking care not to let the hem of my skirt ride up again. They fall around my ankles in a minuscule string. My nether lips are throbbing around the little moist kernel of my clit, and copious juices are flooding my entire pussy in a warm, wet tide.
Or how about this lovely quote
The moist hole of my vulva gapes above the deep basin of the bidet, and just behind it, separated by only a thin sliver of flesh, my anus puckers wide open.
Or
He scrutinizes my very open and burning pussy lips. My juices are beginning to flow again in a never-ending stream, trickling from the trembling and oh-so-soft opening of my vagina down the fragile skin to the rim of my anus.
This book had double penetration, bidet masturbation/sex, male pissing on female, voyeurism sex and clamps and I was so bored. I rolled my eyes the whole 17 pages. Many times I was thinking that the female MC must have an std and need medical care the way her vagina leaks. Sorry this was just not good!
December 28, 2011
In spite of the cute cover this one is kind of more hard core. I liked it (quite well) but then I'm bent so, you know...VERY different -- 1 star is for pure originality. The concept (sort of a frat or sorority/private club) initiation has been done but not quite like this. I think there are more of these and the only reason I hesitated is because this one is very short - and at $1 an o.k. price. The cost of the other parts of this tale are $3 - and that's too steep if they are this short as well. This would have been far better, IMHO, as a novella with all the parts together. I'm not really into serial stuff. I do need to note that this is self contained - but will certainly leave you hanging.
Not tame - definitely with a dub con feel. Hot and sexy. $1. Need I say more?
Not tame - definitely with a dub con feel. Hot and sexy. $1. Need I say more?
February 9, 2023
Can I unread this book? Please? I know that it was going to be bad, why I'm keep doing that to myself?
Max pees on Gia, Ria not sure about her name... Whatever...
Max pees on Gia, Ria not sure about her name... Whatever...
December 5, 2018
Short story of initiation ambition to elite college group. Domination and submission control with plenty of humiliation, private and public. One or two typo errors not too many. Considered for 2/3 stars...borderline so just 3 given. However, it does leave you wanting to see how far Gina will allow Max Devlin to go or take her in her initiation rites, has she got it as she claims, to go all the way? This continues to Level 2.
March 12, 2017
Fraternity and sorority life in college has long been coveted as one of the most endearing, enduring, and memorable college experiences. Friends and fellowships formed in these subdivisions of the university often continue long after formal schooling ends and ex-students go out in the world to make their fortunes, build their futures, and change the world. Initiations to enter these groups have often come into controversy as extreme, demeaning, and even dangerous. Nevertheless, many students are more than happy to comply and perform to any obstacle or demand made of them.
Gina Wesley is willing to do ANYTHING to be accepted into Phi Kappa Omega. As a mere freshman at Gilford, to be even considered for membership is almost unheard of. Max Devlin has plans for this upstart freshman. The sight isn’t a pretty one. Degradation and humiliation take on a new meaning. I don’t think the initiation ritual of Phi Kappa Omega is sanctioned by the university.
This is a story of domination and control; pure and simple. Emotionless and cold, the degradation and humiliation know no bounds. If asked if I liked this story, the answer would be no. The exploitations of one person of another should never be allowed or encouraged. Does this story have any redeeming factors? I would have to answer that question in the affirmative; it is blissfully short and free.
Gina Wesley is willing to do ANYTHING to be accepted into Phi Kappa Omega. As a mere freshman at Gilford, to be even considered for membership is almost unheard of. Max Devlin has plans for this upstart freshman. The sight isn’t a pretty one. Degradation and humiliation take on a new meaning. I don’t think the initiation ritual of Phi Kappa Omega is sanctioned by the university.
This is a story of domination and control; pure and simple. Emotionless and cold, the degradation and humiliation know no bounds. If asked if I liked this story, the answer would be no. The exploitations of one person of another should never be allowed or encouraged. Does this story have any redeeming factors? I would have to answer that question in the affirmative; it is blissfully short and free.
June 2, 2014
I started reading this book and by the half of it i just couldn't continue. I'm shocked and i can't believe there are girls out there willing to humiliate themselves in order to be accepted in some stupid fraternity. And i say this because deep down i'm sure this book is based on some real info. This kind of things happen in real life too. Women humiliated and mocked ... And for what? Not for all the money in the world i could put myself through something like this. It's degrading. And just horrible. I can't believe someone can write a book like this. I can't even think about the other books from this series. I suppose it's the same horrible story line. I have no word for this. The most horrible book ever read!
May 28, 2014
Okay, I found this one while trying to find another obscure ebook through Chapters and now I can't even remember what I was looking for in the first place! Also, how can I resist such an outrageously awesome author name and very revealing book title?!
Unlike Anna Bayes, Aphrodite Hunt spends more time on the build-up that climaxes (pun most certainly intended) on the final page. Where Bayes was vague and shy Hunt is vicious and explicit. Both women are excellent in their craft, but this time around Hunt had the more "wank-worthy" story. My right hand thanks you, Hunt.
Book #17 of the 2014 Reading Challenge.
Unlike Anna Bayes, Aphrodite Hunt spends more time on the build-up that climaxes (pun most certainly intended) on the final page. Where Bayes was vague and shy Hunt is vicious and explicit. Both women are excellent in their craft, but this time around Hunt had the more "wank-worthy" story. My right hand thanks you, Hunt.
Book #17 of the 2014 Reading Challenge.
August 30, 2015
This is a hot and sexy little short, definite dub-con. The thousands of pussy clamps didn't really do anything for me, but I didn't mind it. I liked that last line for a fun and flirty little pull to get you to read the next one, Blindfolded and Spread-eagled.
February 7, 2017
Hidden because it's too awful to leave in plain view.
May 19, 2012
I suppose this is what it is, a sex scene but some are better than others. This is of the negative variety. I didn't care for the structure of writing and humiliation and golden showers are not my thing. Didn't like the ending either.
August 6, 2014
I'm not even going to speak about this.. wow.
August 20, 2018
Exciting great book can't wait to read more books by this author
January 7, 2018
This was label as erotic but to me was sick porn. The idea of a girl goint throu all that (sex exploitation) just to belong to a exclusive club/ sorority is plain dumb. There was sex scene after sex scene with no plot. It was just because the sorority demanded it.
Nah doesn't do it for me.
Nah doesn't do it for me.
December 28, 2011
I agree that this book is rather short for the buck your paying. But on the other hand, it is one of those ones which you can go back and back again. It was really erotic, but there is only that one big scene. I happened to only get this one since I wanted to read the 2nd one (only bought the two) and wanted to understand the plot.
(I enjoyed the 2nd book more, got hooked from the sample and happened to like it more than the book itself! The author is not conventional and that one was at times a bit too much - and I'm avid bdsm reader.)
If the price point was cheaper, I would definitely read it all. The author is good, and I liked the scene though I wished it was a bit longer as it felt as though it culminated and then just stopped.
Can only give it 3 stars as I only found it mildly interesting - not much verbal interaction and no character development that I can really see. Motives and desires from both hero and heroine are not really delved into.
But, it was highly erotic and if you enjoy a bit of humiliation and forced voyeurism among other things you'll probably like this.
(I enjoyed the 2nd book more, got hooked from the sample and happened to like it more than the book itself! The author is not conventional and that one was at times a bit too much - and I'm avid bdsm reader.)
If the price point was cheaper, I would definitely read it all. The author is good, and I liked the scene though I wished it was a bit longer as it felt as though it culminated and then just stopped.
Can only give it 3 stars as I only found it mildly interesting - not much verbal interaction and no character development that I can really see. Motives and desires from both hero and heroine are not really delved into.
But, it was highly erotic and if you enjoy a bit of humiliation and forced voyeurism among other things you'll probably like this.
November 25, 2013
Full Series Review:
This series have a little bit of everything: BDSM, rough sex, menage, multiple partners, humiliation, a couple scenes with M/M and F/F and more, much more. I lost the count all the men (and cocks) walked in Gina's life.
If you like or least you don't dislike this topic you'll enjoy this series.
About Gina just I'll say If she did all the things she did only for join a fraternity.. boy, what she will do for a job?
Horny moment: Was there steamy and good moments? Hell yeah!
This series have a little bit of everything: BDSM, rough sex, menage, multiple partners, humiliation, a couple scenes with M/M and F/F and more, much more. I lost the count all the men (and cocks) walked in Gina's life.
If you like or least you don't dislike this topic you'll enjoy this series.
About Gina just I'll say If she did all the things she did only for join a fraternity.. boy, what she will do for a job?
Horny moment: Was there steamy and good moments? Hell yeah!
April 13, 2013
Quick thoughts: Creative, stimulating and warning: Water sports.
If you like a little domination and submission and to dabble in humiliation you will probably enjoy this short erotic initiation delight from Aphrodite Hunt. I really enjoyed her attention to detail and interesting language. The story was short, but had substance and while it wasn’t the best short I have ever read it was stimulating and exciting enough for me to ask- what’s next. Will I read the next piece in this series, maybe if it was cheaper, but I did enjoy it for what it was worth and damn what a creative way to use water.
December 24, 2015
Wow, sometimes you are in for a surprise when you find a new writer.
I am not sure why this book was such a hot read for me.
She is willing so badly to join the club she does anything to get in.
He is just an asshole and a dominant, playing with her in a very uncomfortable way, trying to find her limits so to let her say stop.
But she doesn't, she even likes what he does to do.
She is getting extremely wet despite of the pain and all the metal on her.
Looking forward to read more in this series.
I am not sure why this book was such a hot read for me.
She is willing so badly to join the club she does anything to get in.
He is just an asshole and a dominant, playing with her in a very uncomfortable way, trying to find her limits so to let her say stop.
But she doesn't, she even likes what he does to do.
She is getting extremely wet despite of the pain and all the metal on her.
Looking forward to read more in this series.
September 8, 2016
One of my writer acquaintances has been doing booming business with these erotic stories, so I wanted to see what the commotion was about. I was pleasantly surprised. This was a skillfully written, extremely filthy short that made me wince in more than a few places. It's perfect for what it's meant to be. If you like your erotica to be pornographic, humiliating, and painful (in the sexy way), you'll love this short.
December 15, 2011
This is the first part of the Initiation series. It's a very short story, hardly more than one scene. That said, the writing is strong and the scenes are creative. Overall, the price of the individual parts of the series is too high -- it'd be worth waiting to see if a collection is published at a more reasonable total price since the parts are really just parts of the same story.
December 16, 2011
IDK.. it was ok but I wasnt really into it. Maybe because it was SO short or whatever but I dont think I want to be a part of something where I have to be tried like a piece of shit.. no matter how much this girl may have liked it... I just didnt.. and thats a lot comming from me because I usually like most anything.
August 26, 2012
well.. so she wants to be initiated into the best house on college campus huh?? She gets Initiation thru some humiliation but seems to like it.. a short read.. I prefer to read longer books and the short sex novels are not really on my to read list I do like the author and She does have some longer gooks that are great.....
November 7, 2016
Ok...but...
I'm not sure what to think about this story. Yes it's short and it only gives you a glimpse of what the full story would be like. It's kinda hot, a little weird. I didn't like some of the descriptive words that were used. They threw me off a bit. All in all its an ok read if you need something quick.
I'm not sure what to think about this story. Yes it's short and it only gives you a glimpse of what the full story would be like. It's kinda hot, a little weird. I didn't like some of the descriptive words that were used. They threw me off a bit. All in all its an ok read if you need something quick.
August 26, 2017
Precise!
The story is quick to start and keeps moving swiftly. There is no guessing of what the storyline is about. There are a few errors that can be easily corrected with proofreading. It ended abruptly and left me hanging. However, I will follow the story to see what happens.
The story is quick to start and keeps moving swiftly. There is no guessing of what the storyline is about. There are a few errors that can be easily corrected with proofreading. It ended abruptly and left me hanging. However, I will follow the story to see what happens.
December 9, 2012
3.5 stars
Hot smexifuncation of the het type. Gina Wesley wants into her sorority but she has to pass Max Devlin's very special and carefully thought out initiation rites first. Lots of domm-ing and humiliation if that's your thing. This is one episode in her hazing. Short and sweet.
Hot smexifuncation of the het type. Gina Wesley wants into her sorority but she has to pass Max Devlin's very special and carefully thought out initiation rites first. Lots of domm-ing and humiliation if that's your thing. This is one episode in her hazing. Short and sweet.
April 20, 2014
Wow!
I've read erotica before, but not like that. It's very tantalizing and my body was feeling what she felt. How this was written, very deliberate and detailed, down to the placement of chains and clamps. All I can say is, "can I be initiated." Sounds like fun!
I've read erotica before, but not like that. It's very tantalizing and my body was feeling what she felt. How this was written, very deliberate and detailed, down to the placement of chains and clamps. All I can say is, "can I be initiated." Sounds like fun!
August 8, 2014
Interesting and...
Interesting and...
sexy but short and missing something. I'm going to try to get more by this author and see if things are better in another story.
Interesting and...
sexy but short and missing something. I'm going to try to get more by this author and see if things are better in another story.
January 4, 2013
Wow... Initiations are hot stuff.... don't know if I would ever be so brave, but that was HOT... Looking forward to reading part 2... can only imagine it being so much more hotter than book one.
June 9, 2013
This is the book that you read when you want something hot and want a fast read.
January 15, 2014
Hot quick short that will have you panting for more. No cliffhanger that will spoil the story but it does continues on...
February 20, 2014
It's the first in the series but it seems to be OK. It's a novella which appears to be the entire series.
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