I had a lot of fun reading the first book in this trilogy "The Golden Queen". I thought it was pulpy and fun Sci-Fi/Fantasy storytelling, feeling like a Sci-Fi version of Willow. This book keeps up the same feeling, but doesn't have the excellent level of storytelling, action, or worldbuilding of book 1.
First of all, this book starts out with the premise that Maggie's relative, Thomas, is unhappy with her decision to marry Gallen and he tries to prevent the marriage. He ends up following them on the beginning of their quest. I was so excited, because Thomas brought just the right energy and entertainment that the group needed. He was like a more chaotic "Thom Merrilin" from Wheel of Time. Unfortunately, Wolverton writes him out almost as soon as the adventure starts, never to be seen again. (He might show up in book three, but he should have been in this whole book).
I followed the pacing and storytelling at the beginning. Unfortunately, the journey wasn't clearly enough defined and the objectives were also not clearly enough defined, mostly that our characters were just running away from danger. I think that Farland knew where he wanted book 1 to go, and was able to turn it into a trilogy based off of sales and an idea for book 3, but I wouldn't be surprised if this was a filler book because he wanted to make it a whole trilogy. This really suffers from "middle-book syndrome".
On another hand, the character stuff with Gallen and Maggie is really great here, and some of the other characters like Ceravanne and the Bock were really interesting, its just that the plot itself wasn't interesting. This is unfortunately the same problem that Farland's (Wolverton's) book "Sons of the Oak" suffered from.
Overall, this is an ok book, but I didn't enjoy it nearly as much as I loved book 1. Hopefully, Farland sticks the landing with book 3 and I end up loving the trilogy overall. But this book gets a 6.0 out of 10 for me.