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Simply Breathtaking #1
Plentiful Package
A sexually deprived boss and her HOT sexy heart pounding, Australian kite surf instructor - Andy Zuco.
Andy is saucy, delicious, astonishingly beautiful and drives Jenna mad with her sexual cravings. Set on a beautiful island in The Great Barrier Reef. His hard six pack abs never go unnoticed.
Jenna catches him having sex while on duty, revealing more of Andy then she has ever seen before. Her nerve endings are zapping, endorphins pumping just like Andy pumps Suzie. The thrill of being caught excites her. Until their gazes collide.
Jenna is torn between being his boss, or personal play toy. Find out how Jenna deals with Andy, and his remarkable hard sculptured body. Will she succumb to satisfying her wildest of dreams with the ultimate ladies man.
Andy is saucy, delicious, astonishingly beautiful and drives Jenna mad with her sexual cravings. Set on a beautiful island in The Great Barrier Reef. His hard six pack abs never go unnoticed.
Jenna catches him having sex while on duty, revealing more of Andy then she has ever seen before. Her nerve endings are zapping, endorphins pumping just like Andy pumps Suzie. The thrill of being caught excites her. Until their gazes collide.
Jenna is torn between being his boss, or personal play toy. Find out how Jenna deals with Andy, and his remarkable hard sculptured body. Will she succumb to satisfying her wildest of dreams with the ultimate ladies man.
58 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 23, 2011
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About the author
Melissa Craig
24 books71 followersI awake every morning to have my nespresso. It helps me function for the rest of the day.
I need to function so I can write EROTICA. writing about men's hard bodies is a hard job. But someone has to do it. It's like going to the gym. My heart is always pumping at double speed. Blood rushes to every nerve in my body. I am parched constantly, making me swallow hard and lick my lips. I feel little trickles of sweat in places I didn't know possible.
See writing EROTICA is like doing a cardio work out. OK! Now I am breathless. I need to get back to writing more stories for you.
Enjoy my reads any way you can. And I mean it ANYWAY!
I need to function so I can write EROTICA. writing about men's hard bodies is a hard job. But someone has to do it. It's like going to the gym. My heart is always pumping at double speed. Blood rushes to every nerve in my body. I am parched constantly, making me swallow hard and lick my lips. I feel little trickles of sweat in places I didn't know possible.
See writing EROTICA is like doing a cardio work out. OK! Now I am breathless. I need to get back to writing more stories for you.
Enjoy my reads any way you can. And I mean it ANYWAY!
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November 27, 2011
Plentiful package is a short hot read that will leave you fanning yourself and wanting more. Jenna has a crush on a hot Kite surfer instructor and after catching him “in the act” with one of their fellow co-workers, she can’t shake his image from her mind. If you are in the mood for a light sexy read Plentiful package is a great choice.
November 10, 2011
Well I think I want a Plentiful Package. ** waggles eyebrows *
If you after something that will titillate your taste buds and loins and have your panties bunching - then this quickie read is for you. It will send your pulse racing and toes curling!!
Filled with an exotic setting, The great Barrier Reef, sexy men with Abs we would all love to roll our hands down, and well sex on the beach if you may call it !!! ** Aka in the shed - shower ** then Plentiful package is for you.
Lots of goodies for all the readers who love there reads hot and erotic. Debut Novella for Melissa Craig and I must say I look forward to more in her series. I’ve yet to find out where my Ducati man went and I’m sure she has more in store for Ryan!!!
A quickie in the shower - or in the shed..... This tantalizing read will have your spine tingling and heart a pumpin and maybe even your knees a knocking loll!!!
If you’re after a quickie read filled with erotic encounters then this is for you!
If you after something that will titillate your taste buds and loins and have your panties bunching - then this quickie read is for you. It will send your pulse racing and toes curling!!
Filled with an exotic setting, The great Barrier Reef, sexy men with Abs we would all love to roll our hands down, and well sex on the beach if you may call it !!! ** Aka in the shed - shower ** then Plentiful package is for you.
Lots of goodies for all the readers who love there reads hot and erotic. Debut Novella for Melissa Craig and I must say I look forward to more in her series. I’ve yet to find out where my Ducati man went and I’m sure she has more in store for Ryan!!!
A quickie in the shower - or in the shed..... This tantalizing read will have your spine tingling and heart a pumpin and maybe even your knees a knocking loll!!!
If you’re after a quickie read filled with erotic encounters then this is for you!
December 29, 2011
Pure Ecstasy! Va-Jay-Jay loves Mr. Shlong!
LOL, this is such a cute and hot story, it literally had me smiling throughout the whole story while rubbing my chest to keep my buds from perking up along with keeping my legs crossed. Wow!
The connection between the characters sparked with intense desire for each other even under the control of keeping the employee/boss interference at bay. The erotic scenes were steaming hot and after one description of Andy’s SHLONG how could anyone especially Jenna resists the sexy Australian kite surf instructor. What you will find in this hot number is rough pounding, sucking, blowing, eating, anal, and one on one in the shower that will leave you wanting to seek your own release.
The story captivated me immediately with the authors descriptive words of the surroundings and as I learned of the character’s job duties working on the beach, I felt as if I was in Australia myself and walking on the sand and could of swore I even heard the ocean’s tide coming in.
The ending left me smiling and satisfied but wanting more of the story. It also left me wondering about the other characters introduced such as Jenna’s best friends Emily and Lilly, the BONDS Ducati guy with the hot bike, and Ryan. Since this is a series I know I am already addicted-ly waiting for the next book to come out and am now a new fan.
Great Writing and Fantastic Read!
LOL, this is such a cute and hot story, it literally had me smiling throughout the whole story while rubbing my chest to keep my buds from perking up along with keeping my legs crossed. Wow!
The connection between the characters sparked with intense desire for each other even under the control of keeping the employee/boss interference at bay. The erotic scenes were steaming hot and after one description of Andy’s SHLONG how could anyone especially Jenna resists the sexy Australian kite surf instructor. What you will find in this hot number is rough pounding, sucking, blowing, eating, anal, and one on one in the shower that will leave you wanting to seek your own release.
The story captivated me immediately with the authors descriptive words of the surroundings and as I learned of the character’s job duties working on the beach, I felt as if I was in Australia myself and walking on the sand and could of swore I even heard the ocean’s tide coming in.
The ending left me smiling and satisfied but wanting more of the story. It also left me wondering about the other characters introduced such as Jenna’s best friends Emily and Lilly, the BONDS Ducati guy with the hot bike, and Ryan. Since this is a series I know I am already addicted-ly waiting for the next book to come out and am now a new fan.
Great Writing and Fantastic Read!
November 25, 2011
This book is a hot and steamy book that I'm sure all of you will love. Its Melissa Craig's first book and may I add a wonderful one at that.
Jenna had Known Andy for a short time but with spending all most every day with him she has grown to have a bond with him.both only children both felt as if they had a lot in common. Andy had problems with his dad and that made him have little confidence in him self so Jenna made it her mission to help him build his confidence and go for the future he wants. but as things go on, there relationship develops and so does the heat that becomes between the two of them.
This book is not for the under aged or the faint hearted, I think this book is one hot read, so erotic it makes ya panties wet and dripping. If this is the kind of reaction you like getting out of a book then I really think you should give this one a try. I promise you it will make your pulse race and heart quickening and leave every nerve ending wishing hey belonged to Jenna.
Well done Melissa an amazing read and I cant wait for the next in the series to see how you make me react next time.
Jenna had Known Andy for a short time but with spending all most every day with him she has grown to have a bond with him.both only children both felt as if they had a lot in common. Andy had problems with his dad and that made him have little confidence in him self so Jenna made it her mission to help him build his confidence and go for the future he wants. but as things go on, there relationship develops and so does the heat that becomes between the two of them.
This book is not for the under aged or the faint hearted, I think this book is one hot read, so erotic it makes ya panties wet and dripping. If this is the kind of reaction you like getting out of a book then I really think you should give this one a try. I promise you it will make your pulse race and heart quickening and leave every nerve ending wishing hey belonged to Jenna.
Well done Melissa an amazing read and I cant wait for the next in the series to see how you make me react next time.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 4, 2011
I won this one on Satin's Bookish Corner and am sooo glad I did! This is a very steamy debut by Melissa Craig.
Jenna has always had the hots for her best friend Andy. But since Winning the State Championship and becoming a local celebrity, its gotten to his head and he's become a man whore and a bit of a jerk. Now that she's his boss she's been covering for him! Although she still has hopes of him changing and once again becoming the man she fell for and no matter what she does she just can't stop craving him. Will she finally cave? Or will she get sick of his shite and finally fire his beautiful ass??
I thought it was great and I was totally sucked in, Bravo....to Melssa Craig for delivering such a tantalizing, hot and steamy novella! I can't wait to see what else she has in store for Andy and Jenna.
Jenna has always had the hots for her best friend Andy. But since Winning the State Championship and becoming a local celebrity, its gotten to his head and he's become a man whore and a bit of a jerk. Now that she's his boss she's been covering for him! Although she still has hopes of him changing and once again becoming the man she fell for and no matter what she does she just can't stop craving him. Will she finally cave? Or will she get sick of his shite and finally fire his beautiful ass??
I thought it was great and I was totally sucked in, Bravo....to Melssa Craig for delivering such a tantalizing, hot and steamy novella! I can't wait to see what else she has in store for Andy and Jenna.
August 24, 2014
Oh, anyone after an easy read that will set your heart rate pacing fast? This short read is full of hunky yummy men and one extremely horny lady. lol. For me this story was easy to follow because I could picture all the descriptions as I live in the area it is based on.
It has it all. A good basic storyline, with a love interest that stretches in and out throughout the story.
But I must warn, some of the scenes can be rather hot and horny. Woot woot. Hehehe. Not for the faint hearted.
It has it all. A good basic storyline, with a love interest that stretches in and out throughout the story.
But I must warn, some of the scenes can be rather hot and horny. Woot woot. Hehehe. Not for the faint hearted.
October 31, 2012
Author: Melissa Craig
FYI… DO NOT READ IT AT WORK!!! (as I have done)
You will not get any work done
You’ll sit with your legs crossed the entire time (as I have done) BAD FOR BLOOD CIRCULATION!
You’ll be WET the entire time (as I was)
You will most probably lock your office door, just so you can get yourself off (as I have done)
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FYI… DO NOT READ IT AT WORK!!! (as I have done)
You will not get any work done
You’ll sit with your legs crossed the entire time (as I have done) BAD FOR BLOOD CIRCULATION!
You’ll be WET the entire time (as I was)
You will most probably lock your office door, just so you can get yourself off (as I have done)
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December 18, 2011
O god is this hot. HOO BOY! Ends on a crazy high note--can't wait for the next in the series!
March 16, 2012
Melissa has a way with words that bring the people in Plentiful Package come alive. It's full of hot men, sexy woman and lots of passion.
October 1, 2012
The people were well written and the sex was hot!
January 26, 2015
Author Summary
This Novella is the first in the Simply Breathtaking Series. It involves Jenna Trilby and the stupendous men in her life. She is surrounded by hot beautiful men everyday. Poor thing!
A sexually deprived boss, and her HOT, sexy, heart pounding Australian kite surf instructor – Andy Zuco. Andy is saucy, delicious and astonishingly beautiful. He knows how to have a good time and it drives Jenna crazy. Set on a beautiful island in The Great Barrier Reef, Australia. His hard six pack abs never go unnoticed.
Jenna catches him having sex while on duty. Revealing more of Andy than she has ever seen before. Her nerve endings are zapping, endorphins pumping. Just like Andy pumps Suzie. Jenna is hungry for him. The thrill of being caught watching them excites her. Until their gazes collide.
Jenna is torn between being his boss, or personal play toy. Find out how Jenna deals with Andy, and his remarkable hard sculptured body. Will she succumb to satisfying her wildest of dreams with the ultimate ladies man?
My Thoughts
Hot Australian athlete, a young woman who hasn’t had sex in a while, a plentiful package, and there you have it. A great read!
In 58 pages, Craig establishes a fiery connection between the main characters, a deeply-rooted desire that simmers over time and realistic obstacles to them finding happiness together. The author has developed the characters, both main and supporting, so that you really care about them and fret when things aren’t going as planned. That takes a lot of talent to achieve all this in so few pages!
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About the story…
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When they met, the attraction and lust between Jenna and Andy was instant and intense. However, things didn’t happen right away. Their desire simmered for 5 years and a lot can happen in that span of time. Obstacles emerged for both of them. Some external while others internal. Jenna is now Andy’s boss and trying to carve out a role for herself in the company promoting tourism for the Great Barrier Reef in Australia. Andy, while having ambitions of his own, has lost his focus on what’s important in life. Unexpressed infatuations of friends also hinder Jenna and Andy taking their relationship to another level.
There is quite a build up to the main characters working through their obstacles, however, don’t fret. There’s lots of sexual tension and interactions while they work things out.
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About the Characters…
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Again to point out that in very few pages, the author has developed a realistic and compelling relationship for her characters.
Jenna is a likeable person who’s realistic in knowing that you need to work hard to achieve the things in life you want. She has been Andy’s support system for many years.
Andy is self-centered and egotistical. However given the attention given to his plentiful package, its understandable. Deep down he is a good guy and Jenna is a good match for him.
Andy’s best friend Ryan is an absolute doll and I hope to hear lots more about him in the future.
Also, there’s unfinished business with a mysterious Ducati-driving biker that should make things interesting.
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A few awesome quotes…
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When Jenna catches Andy in all his glory…
“Opening her eyes to see Andy had turned his sculpted body around. Breathe, just breath. Oh My God, his cock is looking at me.”
This is the first time I heard this word and I love it:
“Thinking of both men made it worse, as Jenna’s body and Va-jay-jay were talking.”
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Bottom Line
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This novella is a great introduction to a (hopefully) long running series. A little on the lighter side of Erotica, Plentiful Package is a well written and enjoyable read. The author has created an interesting mix of characters and I am really looking forward to the next release, Ample Attraction, in June.
Happy Reading!!
4 Bad Boys – Really Enjoyed It!!!!
This Novella is the first in the Simply Breathtaking Series. It involves Jenna Trilby and the stupendous men in her life. She is surrounded by hot beautiful men everyday. Poor thing!
A sexually deprived boss, and her HOT, sexy, heart pounding Australian kite surf instructor – Andy Zuco. Andy is saucy, delicious and astonishingly beautiful. He knows how to have a good time and it drives Jenna crazy. Set on a beautiful island in The Great Barrier Reef, Australia. His hard six pack abs never go unnoticed.
Jenna catches him having sex while on duty. Revealing more of Andy than she has ever seen before. Her nerve endings are zapping, endorphins pumping. Just like Andy pumps Suzie. Jenna is hungry for him. The thrill of being caught watching them excites her. Until their gazes collide.
Jenna is torn between being his boss, or personal play toy. Find out how Jenna deals with Andy, and his remarkable hard sculptured body. Will she succumb to satisfying her wildest of dreams with the ultimate ladies man?
My Thoughts
Hot Australian athlete, a young woman who hasn’t had sex in a while, a plentiful package, and there you have it. A great read!
In 58 pages, Craig establishes a fiery connection between the main characters, a deeply-rooted desire that simmers over time and realistic obstacles to them finding happiness together. The author has developed the characters, both main and supporting, so that you really care about them and fret when things aren’t going as planned. That takes a lot of talent to achieve all this in so few pages!
________________________________________
About the story…
________________________________________
When they met, the attraction and lust between Jenna and Andy was instant and intense. However, things didn’t happen right away. Their desire simmered for 5 years and a lot can happen in that span of time. Obstacles emerged for both of them. Some external while others internal. Jenna is now Andy’s boss and trying to carve out a role for herself in the company promoting tourism for the Great Barrier Reef in Australia. Andy, while having ambitions of his own, has lost his focus on what’s important in life. Unexpressed infatuations of friends also hinder Jenna and Andy taking their relationship to another level.
There is quite a build up to the main characters working through their obstacles, however, don’t fret. There’s lots of sexual tension and interactions while they work things out.
________________________________________
About the Characters…
________________________________________
Again to point out that in very few pages, the author has developed a realistic and compelling relationship for her characters.
Jenna is a likeable person who’s realistic in knowing that you need to work hard to achieve the things in life you want. She has been Andy’s support system for many years.
Andy is self-centered and egotistical. However given the attention given to his plentiful package, its understandable. Deep down he is a good guy and Jenna is a good match for him.
Andy’s best friend Ryan is an absolute doll and I hope to hear lots more about him in the future.
Also, there’s unfinished business with a mysterious Ducati-driving biker that should make things interesting.
________________________________________
A few awesome quotes…
________________________________________
When Jenna catches Andy in all his glory…
“Opening her eyes to see Andy had turned his sculpted body around. Breathe, just breath. Oh My God, his cock is looking at me.”
This is the first time I heard this word and I love it:
“Thinking of both men made it worse, as Jenna’s body and Va-jay-jay were talking.”
________________________________________
Bottom Line
________________________________________
This novella is a great introduction to a (hopefully) long running series. A little on the lighter side of Erotica, Plentiful Package is a well written and enjoyable read. The author has created an interesting mix of characters and I am really looking forward to the next release, Ample Attraction, in June.
Happy Reading!!
4 Bad Boys – Really Enjoyed It!!!!
January 14, 2012
Jenna, Ryan and Andy all started work for Sunloving Cruises and Green Island Activities on the same day, Jenna as the Scuba Dive Instructor, Ryan as the Water Sports Recreational Guide and Andy as a Kite Surfer Instructor. For three months Jenna and Ryan encouraged Andy to enter the Kite Surfing Championship. Would their friendship change if he won? Would it change if he didn’t?
Five years after Andy won the Queensland State Title he still hadn’t won the National Title. He continued to work as a Kite Instructor while Jenna and Ryan moved up in the company. Jenna becomes Andy’s boss and Ryan is her right-hand man.
Unfortunately, Andy becomes a real horse’s ass after he wins the QST. So even though five years ago he seemed on the verge of starting something meaningful with Jenna, he doesn’t look back when women start throwing themselves at him. He gets to the point where he’s having sex at work and Jenna is tired of covering for him even though she’s secretly lusting after his hot body.
I have to say I loved the writing and the story was sound, but Andy is a prick and Jenna is a moron for letting him disrespect her just because she’s hot to jump his bones. I’m hoping, from the way this story ended, that the next in the series will show Andy respecting Jenna and acting like a grown up while Jenna doesn’t let him walk all over her. I hope Ryan gets in on the action as well. Hubba hubba! Bring on the next story!
*The author provided a copy of this book for my review. Disclaimer on my blog.
Five years after Andy won the Queensland State Title he still hadn’t won the National Title. He continued to work as a Kite Instructor while Jenna and Ryan moved up in the company. Jenna becomes Andy’s boss and Ryan is her right-hand man.
Unfortunately, Andy becomes a real horse’s ass after he wins the QST. So even though five years ago he seemed on the verge of starting something meaningful with Jenna, he doesn’t look back when women start throwing themselves at him. He gets to the point where he’s having sex at work and Jenna is tired of covering for him even though she’s secretly lusting after his hot body.
I have to say I loved the writing and the story was sound, but Andy is a prick and Jenna is a moron for letting him disrespect her just because she’s hot to jump his bones. I’m hoping, from the way this story ended, that the next in the series will show Andy respecting Jenna and acting like a grown up while Jenna doesn’t let him walk all over her. I hope Ryan gets in on the action as well. Hubba hubba! Bring on the next story!
*The author provided a copy of this book for my review. Disclaimer on my blog.
January 24, 2013
The Simply Breathtaking Series begins with a kiss five years prior to the start of this sexy, fast-moving saga. Handsome and long-time friend Ryan watched the young and beautiful scuba dive instructor Jenna kiss hulky Andy Zucco just moments before he successfully completed a preliminary heat and eventually won the Green Island Kite Surfing State Championship.
The beauty of the Great Barrier Reef is the only constant as this story opens, years later, with Jenna, now managing Sunloving Cruises, working hard to balance her career, the same two hotties now her employees, and her “singles” life. All at once, a mysterious man on a Ducati, Jenna’s girlfriend Emily, and a young employee named Suzie enter the reader's world like a metaphorical tropical storm hits the beach.
Two tests of a Goodread: (1) you immediately buy the sequel book and (2) you take time to write a review! This novella scores on both. Read my Ample Attraction review coming soon; it’s the sequel to Plentiful Package in the Simply Breathtaking series.
The beauty of the Great Barrier Reef is the only constant as this story opens, years later, with Jenna, now managing Sunloving Cruises, working hard to balance her career, the same two hotties now her employees, and her “singles” life. All at once, a mysterious man on a Ducati, Jenna’s girlfriend Emily, and a young employee named Suzie enter the reader's world like a metaphorical tropical storm hits the beach.
Two tests of a Goodread: (1) you immediately buy the sequel book and (2) you take time to write a review! This novella scores on both. Read my Ample Attraction review coming soon; it’s the sequel to Plentiful Package in the Simply Breathtaking series.
May 1, 2012
Wasn't sure whether to give this a 2 or 3 stars. It wasn't bad but it wasn't good either. All the slang and different references to male and female parts was kinda annoying. Don't get me wrong, I always find myself giggling when someone says va-jay-jay but what kind of woman calls her girl parts "coochie"? And as a grown a** woman I don't think I've ever refered to a mans "schlong". LMAO. As for the male lead, OK I get he's hot but I didn't find myself swooning over the man whore and he was a prick Jenna. Sorry but the steamy sex couldn't salvage this story for me.
January 18, 2012
This is a shorter read. I am going to start by saying the name says it all…
This is one smoking hot read. I won this one from a contest. I am so glad I did.
There are sexy séance everywhere you turn. There is even spanking.
I do have to wonder where Hot ducati went or what happened to him…
But then again I think it might be Andy. I kinda thought that in the first place.
Cannot wait to read more of this series.
((For 18 and older))
Happy Reading Everyone!
This is one smoking hot read. I won this one from a contest. I am so glad I did.
There are sexy séance everywhere you turn. There is even spanking.
I do have to wonder where Hot ducati went or what happened to him…
But then again I think it might be Andy. I kinda thought that in the first place.
Cannot wait to read more of this series.
((For 18 and older))
Happy Reading Everyone!
May 18, 2012
If you want an enticing quick read that gets you hot under the collar this is the book for you! With sexy characters set in a sultry paradise, Plentiful Package, the first in a series of Novellas from this author, will leave you panting for more!
December 27, 2012
I usually don't read erotic literature , but for this storyline, it was really cute and sweet. Melissa Craig did a good job on creating this story. :) I am not good either giving reviews. They are always short and sweet.
March 10, 2013
Jenna has been friends with Andy and Ryan for over five years. She watched as Andy rose to local fame in the regional kite surfing contests, even qualifying time and time again at the national level. Five years ago it seemed they were on the verge of taking their friendship one step further, but the opportunity passed and each of them went on their ways. Now Jenna is a manager at a watersport company with both Ryan and Andy as employees. She’s never quite lost the intense desire she feels for Andy, and she’s struggling to keep things professional between them. Andy has become a cocky playboy with a stream of conquests. He pushes Jenna’s every button. He’s a no-show for clients, has sex with co-workers during work hours on company property. Still, Jenna remembers a different Andy, one from five years ago, and longs to bring him back.
We've all wanted to tame the player sometime or another in our lives, to be the one that curbs his cheatin ways. Andy is so darned hot, so irresistible, so naughty in his little-boy way that, personally, I’d be tempted to ignore all the red flags and jump that thang. Plus there is that whole forbidden manager/employee angle. Should Jenna go for it? Will she ever notice that her friend Ryan is more than half in love with her? What about the mysterious guy on the motorcycle? Jenna has been nose to the grindstone at work for too long, and it’s clear from page one she needs a relationship. Not just sex, but a relationship. But can Andy ever give that to her, given his bed-hopping?
The imagery of Green Island and the Great Barrier Reef in Australia really set the scene for this erotic story. I could feel the heat, the sand and the surf. It made me long to grab my passport and hop on a plane. The sex scenes are smoking hot, graphic, with enough slang to make them modern and edgy. I read the whole book with the author’s Aussie accent running through my head, which probably added considerably to the appeal. If you’re in the mood for a gorgeous kite surfer in paradise, this is the book for you. Voyeurism, self-pleasure, and intercourse, with lots of build-up and tension.
We've all wanted to tame the player sometime or another in our lives, to be the one that curbs his cheatin ways. Andy is so darned hot, so irresistible, so naughty in his little-boy way that, personally, I’d be tempted to ignore all the red flags and jump that thang. Plus there is that whole forbidden manager/employee angle. Should Jenna go for it? Will she ever notice that her friend Ryan is more than half in love with her? What about the mysterious guy on the motorcycle? Jenna has been nose to the grindstone at work for too long, and it’s clear from page one she needs a relationship. Not just sex, but a relationship. But can Andy ever give that to her, given his bed-hopping?
The imagery of Green Island and the Great Barrier Reef in Australia really set the scene for this erotic story. I could feel the heat, the sand and the surf. It made me long to grab my passport and hop on a plane. The sex scenes are smoking hot, graphic, with enough slang to make them modern and edgy. I read the whole book with the author’s Aussie accent running through my head, which probably added considerably to the appeal. If you’re in the mood for a gorgeous kite surfer in paradise, this is the book for you. Voyeurism, self-pleasure, and intercourse, with lots of build-up and tension.
November 24, 2012
A beautiful setting, a beautiful female main character, and…for those who like it…a beautiful male love interest. What more could be asked for? Plentiful Package had a strong delivery in these aspects of the story. I really enjoyed the experience of being in the beautiful scenery the Great Barrier Reef islands hold, as Craig has recreated in her writing. It seems like such piece of paradise.
I also thought that Plentiful Package started out great. The prologue got me thinking one thing, then it jumps to a few years later and I see I was all wrong. This only made me want what I expected to happen even more. I won’t say what that was,exactly, just that it’s a relationship that I wanted to see pan out.
I think that the way the main character, Jenna, was written is another thing I really enjoyed. She’s beautiful, smart, and very dedicated to her job…sometimes too dedicated. These characters provided believable conflict between her, her goals, and other characters (mainly the male ones). I couldn’t predict what the actual outcome of this story was going to be. Would it be the “predictable” one? Was another man going to come into her life and sweep her off her feet? Was her career always going to get in the way of her heart (and libido)?
I know the answer…but you’ll have to read Plentiful Package to find out.
If you’re looking for some great, hot sex scenes…I mean it, they were very well written….you’ve come to the right place. This story is a “plentiful package” of everything that makes for an entertaining erotic read.
I also thought that Plentiful Package started out great. The prologue got me thinking one thing, then it jumps to a few years later and I see I was all wrong. This only made me want what I expected to happen even more. I won’t say what that was,exactly, just that it’s a relationship that I wanted to see pan out.
I think that the way the main character, Jenna, was written is another thing I really enjoyed. She’s beautiful, smart, and very dedicated to her job…sometimes too dedicated. These characters provided believable conflict between her, her goals, and other characters (mainly the male ones). I couldn’t predict what the actual outcome of this story was going to be. Would it be the “predictable” one? Was another man going to come into her life and sweep her off her feet? Was her career always going to get in the way of her heart (and libido)?
I know the answer…but you’ll have to read Plentiful Package to find out.
If you’re looking for some great, hot sex scenes…I mean it, they were very well written….you’ve come to the right place. This story is a “plentiful package” of everything that makes for an entertaining erotic read.
June 13, 2012
As an Australian who enjoys well written erotica this book appealed to me immensely. It was set in the kind of ambiance I know well, and deals with the frustrations in life when old friends grow apart, and old lovers / potential lovers, take new directions in life.
Sexual frustrations abound, but I also felt there was plenty of scope for the characters to grow further and become more detailed and outlined, and I am definitely lined up for the second in the series! I am looking forward to seeing the action continue and the characters grow. Not all were appealing, but in many ways this was a strength of the book, lifting it above the pulp of the genre.
One thing the reader needs to bear in mind is that this book was written by an Australian, and uses Australian terminology. So if you don't know what something is, just use your imagination - it probably is what you think it is!
Sexual frustrations abound, but I also felt there was plenty of scope for the characters to grow further and become more detailed and outlined, and I am definitely lined up for the second in the series! I am looking forward to seeing the action continue and the characters grow. Not all were appealing, but in many ways this was a strength of the book, lifting it above the pulp of the genre.
One thing the reader needs to bear in mind is that this book was written by an Australian, and uses Australian terminology. So if you don't know what something is, just use your imagination - it probably is what you think it is!
August 17, 2012
I've read the other reviews and I don't think many of them capture the deeper statements of this book. This is an erotica, yes, but also the author brings forth profound lessons of adulthood. Sex is not the focus so much as the desire for something more and lasting. Two characters in this book contrast each other perfectly in this. Andy pursues carnal pleasure most of the book while Jenna searches for meaning. It becomes apparent that neither of these extremes will satisfy both of them indefinitely. Andy clearly needs to look inside himself, while Jenna needs to look outside. Apart from that, Melissa Craig presents a grippingly sexy, character driven and at many times humerous tale you won't want to miss!
December 10, 2012
Jenna is hot for Andy, a kite surfer that she is good friends with and is on his way to flying for the championship. Ryan their other friend has a crush on Jenna. Jenna has never let on how she feels about Andy. She has always been there for him cheering him on but really wanting him. All three work for the same place. Things change and Jenna isn't so sure what way is up. For a steamy good read go buy this book and see what Plentiful Package is all about. You won't be sorry. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
January 12, 2012
2 stars - has potential to get better. Way to many slang words and I felt like they just gave in at the end then bam happily ever after. Really hard to believe.
March 27, 2012
Andy is so hot and such a bad boy. If you love hot erotica then you will love this book
June 10, 2012
Wow! Sexy & hot. Grab a cold shower fast, ladies!
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