This book is a touchstone for me, setting the standard for what lyric poetry can achieve. Each poem is in Grennan's invented form, a 10 line meditation. But the lines, as well as the heart, of the poems are capacious. In each he weaves a fine music, phrases I love to repeat, often whispering them aloud to feel their texture when voiced. He also offers observation of the natural world that make me alert to my own surroundings, attention renewed, senses retuned. And the philosophical insights make me muse and wonder. When describing bees he says, "Back they sputter like the fires of love." This poem is a great example of what I admire in this book and Grennan's poems more generally. Later in that poem he writes,
All day their brisk shadows zigzag and flicker
Along a whitewashed gable, trafficking in and out of a hair-crack
Under wooden eaves, where they make a life for themselves that knows
No let-up through hours of exploration and return, their thighs golden
With pollen, their multitudinous eyes stapled to a single purpose:
To make winter safe for their likes, stack-packing the queen's chambers
With sweetness. Later, listen: one warm humming note, their night music.